读后续写爱心助人类-好心的墨西哥一家人 讲义 高考英语专题复习

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（绿色备注：学生生词）【1】Duringthispastyear,I'vehadthree

instances

ofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,I

wassickof【厌倦、厌烦】

thewaymostpeoplehadn'tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,Iwasonthesideoftheroadforclose

tothreehourswithmybigJeep.I

put

signsinthe

windows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(千斤顶),and

offeredmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,a

Mexican

familyinasmalltruck

pulledover,

andthe

father

boundedout【2】Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.He

conveyedthroughher

thathehada

jackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneed

somethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw(锯子)

from

truckand

cut

asectionoutofabiglog

onthesideofthe

road.We

rolled

it

over

rand

put

hisjackontop,and

we

wereinbusiness.【3】Istarted

taking

thewheel

off

,andthen,ifyoucan

believeit,Ibrokehis

tireiron.

Noworries:He

handed

itto

hiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuya

new

tireiron.Shewasback

in15minutes.We

finishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.【4】Thetwoofusweredirtyand

sweaty.

Hiswifeprepared

apotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20

billintheman'shand,buthewouldn'ttake

it,so

instead

Il

wentupto

gave

ittohiswife

asquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.Theywerein

Oregon【n.俄勒冈州（美国州名）】

so

MommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenext

fewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.2.

分析过程通读文章了解文章情节和情感发展关键对象+事件+相关信息点：主要对象1：作者——车坏了--》无人帮忙-》请求帮助+付费20美元----》主要对象2：墨西哥一家人爸爸，妈妈，女儿：帮助作者次要对象1：嫌麻烦不愿帮助他人的人+车相关信息点【地点

，食物】：墨西哥

+农场+水果情感变化：作者：失望---》开心---》感激结合两句开头句：第一段：根据1段开头句+2段开头提示句+文章信息点来写询问是否吃饭+包：作者；婉拒---吃---墨西哥一家人：热情---水果农场+墨西哥故事---》包

妻子放作者车内----》作者：妻子把包放在车内【对应文章

asquietlyasicould】墨西哥一家人：妻子-》装包：吃得【农场】：水果+钱20---》包里第二段：2段开头句+结合文章信息点【对象：墨西哥家人帮助+不愿意帮助得人】表达关键对象情感和认知以及行为的升华；开头句信息点

:包作者动作变化：坐上车-》打开包-》发现食物【吃饭】+钱【20美元】情感升华变化：墨西哥：妻子钱+食物【此段表示他们帮助】-----》作者感动+震惊----认知：不帮助与帮助

：感恩+传递->上升行为：帮助他人注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。第一段When

I

wasaboutto

saygoodbye,the

girl

【墨西哥】askedifI'd

hadlunch.作者+墨西哥+吃饭+吃饭过程【聊天+农场+墨西哥】+饭后+【吃+钱】+车第二段After

they

left,IgotintomyJeepandopened

the

paperbag.包：+打开包+发现钱+吃的东西+感激+要成为那样的人】3.

答案第一段WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'd

hadlunch.Abrightsmileflashed

on

her

face

when

I

said

I

hadn’t.【拒绝】

The

family

invited

me

to

enjoy

the

lunch

together.Originally,I

refused

but

watch

their

enthusiastic

faces

I

nodded

with

gratitude.

We

shared

wonderful

meal

over

which

they

shared

interesting

stories

about

their

lives

in

Mexico

and

on

fruit

farms.

After

lunch【与文章信息一致，引出下文得包】.

The

girls’

mother

put

a

paper

bag

in

my

jeep.I

showed

my

gratitude

again

and

we

said

goodbye

to

each

other.第二段：

Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthe

paperbag.Inside

the

bag

were

some

fruits【果园】.I

was

also

surprised

to

find

the

20

bill【给妻子得钱】.I

was

over

come

with

mixture

of

respect

and

gratitude.【情感得正能量升华】

It

was

awesome

to

know

that

while【虽然但是】

many

people

tend

to

ignore【对应文章hadn'tbotherto

do

】

those

in

need,there

are

some

kind-hearted

ones

who

go

out

of

their

way

to

lend

a

hand【墨西哥家人】

.The

good

deed【行为】

the

foreign

family

did

will

never

escape

me.I'm

sure

I

will

pay

it

forward!将爱传递下去4.

文章精细化分析：时态：主要过去+将来【行为】相关词汇+细节描写句式结构：定从、并列简单句、介词短语，关键对象性别：【1】1）Duringthispastyear,I'vehadthree

instances

ofcartrouble.时间短语【状语】，

主语+谓语+宾语【n+of短语】2）Eachtimethesethings

happened,I

wassickof

theway

【mostpeople

hadn'tbothered

tohelp.】时间状语从句+主句Eachtime+句子：时间状语从句主句：主+besickof+宾：+定从【省略连词】知识点：Theway+连词+定从如果连词后定从完整：inwhich、that、省略3）Oneofthosetimes,I

was

onthesideoftheroadforclose

tothreehourswithmybigJeep.Oneof+cn复数，主+系+表【介词短语】+【for+时间段】+with+名词主系表+时间状语+with复合结构4）I

put

signsinthe

windows,bigsignsthat

said

NEEDAJACK(千斤顶),and

offered

money.主谓宾+介词短语，强调名词+定从【两个并列谓语】5）Nothing.6）

RightasIwasabouttogiveup,a

Mexican

familyinasmalltruck

pulledover【把车停在一边】,

andthe

father

boundedoutAs引导时间状语从句【倒装】+主【介词短语】谓and+主谓As：=when时间状语从句=because原因状语从句=evenif、although让步状语从句=正如：方式状语从句=as...as比较状语从句=介词：作为n1asn2=suchas比如+doingsth注意：通过复杂结构看透简单句主+【介词短语/从句】+谓+宾【+介词短语/从句】原句

AsIwas

right

abouttogiveupRightAsIwasabouttogiveupAsIamfree，iwillhelpothers.FreeasIam，iwillhelpothers.【2】1）He

sizedupthesituation【了解情况】

andcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.主+谓+宾+and谓语+宾语，非限定从2）He

conveyedthrough

her

that

【he

had

a

jackbut

that

it

was

toosmallfortheJeep,】

so

we

wouldneed

somethingtosupportit.conveyed【表达】主语+谓语短语+宾语+2个宾从+结果从句3）Then

hegotasaw(锯子)

【from

truck】

and

cut

asectionoutofabiglog

【onthesideofthe

road.

】Log【日志，木头记录】衔接词：

then主谓宾+介词短语作后置定语+and谓语+宾语+介词短语作后置定语4）We

rolled

it

over

and

put

hisjackontop,and

we

wereinbusinessrolled

it

over滚动【3】1）Istarted

taking

thewheel

off

,

andthen,

ifyoucan

believeit,Ibrokehis

tireiron.

tireiron.【拆轮胎棒.】And连词+副词then衔接2）Noworries:He

handed

itto

hiswife,

3）and

shewasgone【

inaflashdowntheroad

】tobuya

new

tireiron.主系表+介词短语+非谓语表示目的【todosth】4）

Shewasback

in15minutes.Back返回主系表+介词短语【时间状语】5）We

finishedthejob,andIwasavery

happy

man.第四段1）Thetwoofusweredirtyand

sweaty【adj.浑身出汗的；汗臭的；吃力的；汗似的】.

2）Hiswifeprepared

apotofwater

forus

towashourhands.主谓宾+todosth表示目的3）Itriedtoputa$20

billintheman'shand,but

hewouldn'ttake

it,

so

instead

Il

wentupto

gave

ittohiswife

asquietlyasIcould.instead

副词:相反地主谓宾+as+advas+sbcan/couldasquietlyasIcould.我尽可能的安静。Iwillrunasquicklyasican.4）

Iaskedthelittlegirl

where

theylived.主语+谓语+宾语+宾语从句Asksbsth5）Mexico,shesaid.6）TheywereinOregon【n.俄勒冈州（美国州名）】

so

MommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenext

fewweeks.7）Then

theywouldgohome.范文第一段1）WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'd

hadlunch.When时间状语从句，主语+谓语+宾从2）Abrightsmileflashed

on

her

face

when

I

said

I

hadn’t.【拒绝】无灵主语[情绪、表情】+flashed+介词短语+时间状语从句Aclearangryflashedinhereyeswhenirefusedher.3）The

family

invited

me

to

enjoy

the

lunch

together.4）Originally,I

refused

but

watching

their

enthusiastic

faces

I

nodded

with

gratitude.

副词【时间】，主谓

+转折连词+非谓语【doingsth】+主谓+with复合结构5）We

shared

wonderful

meal

over

which

they

shared

interesting

stories

about

their

lives

in

Mexico

and

on

fruit

farms.

主谓宾【meal】+介词+which【meal】+定从定从：主谓宾+介词短语6）After

lunch，the

girls’

mother

put

a

paper

bag

in

my

jeep.介词短语【衔接时间状语】+简单句【介词短语】7）I

showed

my

gratitude

again

and

we

said

goodbye

to

each

other.第二段：1）Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthe

paperbag.After+时间状语从句，主语+两个并列谓语【and】2）Inside

the

bag

were

some

fruits.完全倒装some

fruits

were

Inside

the

bag表语或者介词短语、状语放首句