2023新课标ⅠⅡ卷读后续写我的写作之路讲义高三英语一轮复习

读后续写原题目：WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.Writingwassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingofthe

Titanic

byactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:“BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou’rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagood

shotatthis.”Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.IchosePaulRevere’shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith

(银匠)inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswereing.Mystorywouldestraightfromthehorse’smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse’schoice.Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere’shorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.IcheckedoutahalfdozenbooksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,

“Great.Now,writeitagain.”

Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtof

winninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn’twin,Iwouldn’tcare.注意：1.

续写词数应为150左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.

Paragraph2:Iwenttomyteacher’sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

【篇章情节——理一理】Iwasaskedbymysocialstudiesteachertoenterawritingcontest.AndIsaidnobecauseIdidn’tlikewritingandwasn’tgoodatEnglish.Encouragedbymysocialstudiesteacher’swords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.Ichosethesubjectandwrote.ThenIpolishedupmyessayandgaveittomyteacher.Aftergettingfeedbackfromtheteacher,Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecame

thenews.I

wenttomyteacher’soffice

afterthe

awardpresentation.【思路延伸——想一想】1.得知比赛结果的心情：短语篇：（1）兴奋，激动beoverwhelmedwithexcitementsb’sjawdrops/fallsjumptoone’sfeetone’sfaceislitupwithexcitementsb’svoiceischokedwithexcitementawildexcitementtakesholdof

...one’seyestwinklewithexcitementhandstremblewitheagerness（2）高兴canhardlyconcealone’sexcitementsatisfiedlookbedelightedatincheerfulspiritsjumpwithjoyfeelamixtureofexcitementandhappinessbrightensb’sheartbecontentwith（3）惊喜，惊讶alookofsurprisespreadsoverone’sfaceone’seyesflashalookofshock/surpriseatsbgaspinastonishmentatbetoostunnedtospeakbelostforwordseyesopenwideinwonderment佳句篇：（1）Shockedandelated,Ihardlybelievedit.（2）ThemomentIsawmynameinthewinner’slist,myheartleapedwithjoy.（3）ThemomentIfoundoutthatIhadwonthewritingpetition,Iwasoverwhelmedbyastrongfeelingofastonishment,mixedwithasenseofexhilaration.（4）NeverinmywildestdreamshadIimaginedthatallthehardworkIputintopolishingmyessaywouldonedaybearsweetfruit.（5）Allthehardwork,thelatenights,thedoubtsandfears,hadpaidoff.2.

获奖时的情景：短语篇：receivetheawardholdanexquisitetrophyaroundofapplauseloud/thunderousapplauseabunchofflowersthecheeringcrowd佳句篇：（1）Thencamethebigday.（2）Shortlyafterwards,Ifoundmyselfonthestageintheschoolhallwheretheawardpresentationwasheld.（3）AsIsteppedontothestage,theapplausefromtheaudiencefilledmyears.（4）Holdingtheawardinmyhand,Ifeltasurgeofprideandgratitude.3.

进入老师办公室时的场景：短语篇：（1）表达感激expressone’sheartfeltgratitudehugsbpatsbontheback/shouldersendabunchofflowersbegratefulforsthgivesba(tender)hugholdsbtightlyinthearmsholdone’shandstightly（2）表达感动betouchedtofindthat

...bemovedwithtearsawarmcurrentmisty/moisteyesbetoucheddeeply/immenselytearswellupintheeyeswithalumpinone’sthroat（3）表达祝贺gavesbathumbsupCongratulations!佳句篇：（1）Sharingthismomentofsuccesswithmyteacher,Ifeltadeepsenseofgratitudeforhisencouragement.（2）AssoonasIsawhim,Itrottedoverandgavehimabighug.（3）Hewarmlyinvitedmetositdown,gavemeathumbsupandsaid,“Congratulations!Iknewyoucoulddoit!”（4）Hiseyeslitupwithpride,andhecongratulatedmewithabroadsmile.4.

结尾升华句：（1）Thisexperiencemademerealizethataslongaswearebraveenoughtotry,wecansurelyachievesuccess.（2）Ilearnedalotfromthiscontest,notonlyimprovingmywritingskillsbutalsoboostingmyconfidence.（3）Iamgratefultomyteacher,whoseencouragementandsupporthelpedmediscovermypotential.（4）Thiscontestchangedthecourseofmylifeandhelpedmefindmydirection.（5）Iwillneverforgetthisexperience,whichwillalwaysbeoneofthemostpreciousmemoriesofmylife.【小试牛刀——写一写】

参考答案Paragraph1:Afewweekslater,

when

Ialmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.

Awaveofastonishmentsweptoverme.

Iwonfirstprize.

Recallingthepaststrugglingdays,Ideeplysensedthatitwasmyteachersencouragement,myfamily’ssupport,

andmywholeheartedmitmentthatmadeitallworthwhile.

Theawardpresentationcameasscheduled.

Withafierymoodinmyheart,Ideliveredmyshortspeech.

Myclassmatesstaredatmewithdelight.EverythingwentsmoothlyandIwassurroundedbyflowersandapplause.

However,thepersonwithwhomIdesiredtosharemyjoywasmyteach