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网上购物1.现在流行网上购物2.网上购物的利弊3.我的看法Nowadayswiththeeverrapiddevelopmentandincreasingpopularityoftheinformationtechnology,shoppingontheinternethasbeenafashionespeciallyamongtheyoungsters.Onlineshoppinghasmadeourdailylifemoreconvenientandcomfortable.Forexample,shoppingontheinternetcansavestudentsagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeandstore,sotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademicwork.Theinternethasshortenthedistancebetweenmanufacturersandconsumersandthuswecanevenbuygoodsinothercountries.Ontheotherhand,lackofthefacetofacedealmakesonlineshoppinglessreliableandtrustworthy.What’smorethedeliverywillincreasetheriskofitems’damage.Inmyopinion,shoppingontheinternetisairreversibletrend.Moreandmorepeoplewillbeaccustomedtoit.Itwillbemuchmorepopularinthenearfuture.Andatthesametimeweshouldtakesomemeasurestomakeitperfect.1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡2)分析产生该现象的原因3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。【参考范文】CreditCardsonCampusInrecentyears,creditcardshavegainedmorepopularityamongcollegestudents.Withbanks’morefocusoncollegemarket,anincreasingnumberofcollegestudentshaveappliedforcreditcardsandbeguntoconsumebythem.Thefollowingthreefactorscanaccountforthepopularityofcreditcardsoncampus.Firstly,acreditcardprovidesoverdrawingservice,whichisabigattractionforthosestudentswhohavenotmuchmoneyfortheirdomination.Secondly,acreditcardcanhelpreleasefinancialburdensonthosepoorstudents,andhencereducetheriskoftheirdroppingschoolforlackingmoney.Besides,manybanksmakesomepreferentialpoliciesoncreditcards,likesendingagift,loweringyearcost.Drawnbythesepolicies,manycollegestudentshaveappliedforcreditcards.AsfarasIamconcerned,itisnotabadthingforcollegestudentstoowncreditcards.However,thereismisuseofcreditcardsamongcollegestudents.Manystudentsusecreditcardstobuyluxuriousthingstheydon’tneedreally,andevensomeofthemoweabigcreditcarddebt.Therefore,schoolsandbankshaveresponsibilitytoletcollegestudentslearnhowtousecreditcardsproperly.Onlyinthiswaycancollegestudentsenjoyreallytheadvantagesofcreditcards.1.越来越多的人使用信用卡，信用卡有哪些好处2.信用卡的弊端3.你自己的观点

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PersonalcreditcardsarebecomingmorecommoninChina.Banksandotherfinancialinstitutionsareencouragingtheircustomerstochangethewaytheybuythings.Creditcards,otherwiseknownas“plasticmoney”,arebeingofferedonverygoodtermstoencouragethechange.Consumerswillbeableto“buynow,paylater”,andmanyseethisasanadvantage.Butpeopleneedtobecareful.Therearedangersassociatedwithcreditcards.Somepeoplefinditveryeasytoexceedtheirbudget.Theyaretemptedtopurchasegoodsthattheydonotreallyneed,andcanbecomequicklyoverburdenedbydebt.Thecreditcardsoftenchargeahighrateofinterest,whichexacerbatestheproblemsforthesepeople.However,usedwiselycreditcardscanimprovethequalityofpeople’slives.Theycangivepeopleaccesstomoneytomeetsuddenunplannedexpenses.Properlyhandled,theycanletpeoplecontroltheirexpenditureandthemonthlystatementsprovidearecordofwheretheirmoneyhasgone.1)近年来“博客”越来越流行2)博客流行的原因3)目前的博客中可能存在的问题【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求说明导致该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求分析该现象中可能存在的问题，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：简单介绍什么是“博客”，描述博客的流行情况;说明博客流行的原因;指出目前博客中可能存在的问题。【参考范文】ThePopularityofBlogInrecentyears,bloghasbecomeverypopular.Moreandmorepeoplehavecreatedtheirownblogsandoftenvisitothers’blogs.Whydoesblogbecomesopopularnowadays?Firstly,itisthewidespreadofInternetthatprovidesaplatformfortheappearanceandpopularityofblog.Secondly,anyonecancreatehisownblogashewishes.Bloghasnofixedrulesandneedn’tprofessionalknowledgeandskills.Thirdly,peopleuseblogtorevealtheirinnervoice,orcollectandsharethoughtsandthingstheyfindinteresting.However,bloghassomeproblems.Foronething,plagiarisminblogisnotunusual.Theprotectionofblogcopyrightcannotbeguaranteed.Foranother,manyblogcontentsareinamess,andsomeevenincludeunhealthythings.Therefore,blogstillhasalongwaytogobeforeitbecomesmature.1)根据下图描述某高校近两年毕业生去向分布情况2)分析这样分布的原因3)你的看法毕业去向就业考研出国留学其它所占比例50%30%17%3%【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式图表命题。提纲第1点要求根据所给图表描述一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：根据图表中的数据，描述近两年某高校毕业生去向分布情况;分析导致这样分布的原因;阐述“我”对毕业生去向的看法。【参考范文】ChoicesafterGraduationFromtheabovetable,wecanseethatthestudentsofthisuniversityhavethreemainchoicesaftergraduation.Ofthesechoices,thestudentswhohavefoundajobonlytakeup50%.Incontrast,studentswhopursuefurtherstudybytakingthepostgraduateentranceexamorgoingabroadhaveincreasedgreatlythanbefore,withthetotalpercentageof47%.Indeed,thisphenomenonisalsoquitecommoninotheruniversities.Thefollowingfactorscanaccountforthechoicesofgraduates.Aboveall,withtheenrollmentextensionofuniversities,collegegraduatesarefacingthesevereemploymentsituation,whichforcesthemtofindanotherwayout.Moreover,ininformationage,knowledgeisupdatedveryrapidly.Manycollegestudentsfindtheirknowledgeisnotenoughfortheirfuturecareer.Besides,somecollegestudentswouldnotliketoenterintothecomplicatedsocietyandwanttoescapefromtherealitytemporarilybygoingtofurtherstudy.Frommypointofview,one’schoiceaftergraduationshouldbebasedonhisindividualcondition.Thoughtakingthepostgraduateentranceexamorgoingabroadforfurtherstudyisagoodchoice,itisnotnecessarilytrueofeveryone,becauseitmightinvolvemanyfactors,suchasyourfuturecareerdirection,youreconomiccondition.Therefore,weshouldtakeafullaccountbeforewemakeourdecisions.1)一些人喜欢和人打交道多的工作2)然而也有一些人更愿意和机器打交道3)你更喜欢哪种工作?为什么?【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出人们的一种喜好，提纲第2点要求指出人们的另外一种喜好，提纲第3点要求“我”从中做出选择，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：指出人们对于工作的两种喜好：喜欢和人打交道多的工作，喜欢和机器打交道多的工作;对比阐述两种工作各自的特点;表明“我”更喜欢哪种工作，并说明理由。【参考范文】WorkwithaPersonorWorkwithaMachine?Whenaskedaboutworkpreference,differentpeoplewillgivedifferentanswers.Somepeoplelikeworkingwithpeople.However,otherspreferjobswhichmainlyinvolveobjectsormachines.Thosepeoplewhohavethefirstpreferencebelieveworkingwithpeopleusuallymakesonefeelinterestingandefficient.Inaddition,theymaintainpeoplecanbeinspiredtobringforwardnewideasbycommunicatingorconsultingwiththosearoundthem.However,stillothershavedifferentpreferences.Intheiropinions,workingwithobjectsormachinescanmakeoneenjoymorepeaceandquiet.Besides,theyargue,undersuchpeacefulconditions,onecandomorepracticalwork,improvehisskillandmaketechnicalrenovations.Weighingupthesetwokindsofwork,Ipreferworkingwithpeople.Foronething,Iliketocooperatewithothersandworkinateam.Foranother,althoughtherearecompetitionandrivalry,wecanlearnsomethingfromotherpeople.Consideringthese,Ithink,workingwithpeopleisbeneficialtoourcareerdevelopment.：Shoppingontheinternet1.现在流行网上购物2.网上购物的利弊3.我的看法Nowadayswiththeeverrapiddevelopmentandincreasingpopularityoftheinformationtechnology,shop