【课件】Unit+4+Using+language+Reading+for+writing+课件人教版(2019)+选择性必修第二册

ReadingforWriting:

Writeanemailaboutyourtrip

UNIT4JOURNEYACROSSTHEVASTLANDWhat’stherelationshipbetweenthesetwopassages?ABPassageBisthenextlegofLiandLiu’strip路程（或赛程）BParagraph

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LiDaiyuandhercousinarrivedinToronto,thelargestandwealthiestcityinCanada,theyonlyhadafewhoursto1.

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theyhadtoproceedtothenextlegoftheirtriptoMontreal,③

theywentonatourofthecity.They2.____________

(登上)theCNTowerand3.

(眺望)theshoresofLakeOntario.Standinginthedistance,theywereastonishedtosee4.____________

(水雾)risingfromthegreatNiagaraFalls,whichisonthesouthsideofthelake.WaterfromthelakeflowsintotheNiagaraRiverandoverthefallsonitswaytothesea.

SEEINGTHETRUENORTHVIARAIL:TORONTOANDMONTREALAfterbeforesokillwentuplookedacrossmistycloudsclimbedup

overlookedmistydescriptivewordidiom:killtime同位语Readfordetailedinformation【记牢】本句中的thelargestandwealthiestcityinCanada是Toronto的同位语。对句中某一成分作进一步解释和说明，与前面名词在语法上处于同等地位的句子成分叫作同位语。具体用法如下：(1)名词、代词、数词作同位语；(2)动词不定式、动词-ing形式作同位语；(3)从句作同位语。同位语从句通常跟在某些抽象名词(fact,plan,view,idea,belief,opinion,possibility,thought,aim等)后，用来说明所修饰词的内容。【佳句】

Shanghai,oneofthebiggestcitiesinChina,hasdevelopedrapidlyinrecentyears.上海——中国最大的城市之一，近年来发展迅速。【练透】补全句子①Theyoungmantriedtoachievehisaim—

______________________．这个年轻人努力实现他的目标——进入重点大学。②Thefact_______________________________isknowntoall.人类已经登上月球的事实是众所周知的。enteringthekeyuniversitythatmanhaslandedonthemoon【写美】翻译句子③我是李华，一名来自中国的学生。________________________________I'mLiHua,astudentfromChina.SEEINGTHETRUENORTHVIARAIL:TORONTOANDMONTREALThegirlssawhundredsof5.

(钢铁和水泥建造的摩天大楼),and6.

(老式汽车)rollingby.Astheywalkednorthfromtheharbourarea,LiDaiyusaid,“LinFei,oneofmymother’soldschoolmates,liveshere.Ishouldphoneherandseeifshe’savailablefordinner.”TheymetLinFeiaroundduskoverdinneratarestaurantin7.

(市中心唐人街).ThecousinschattedwithLinFei,whohadmovedtoCanadamanyyearsearlier.skyscrapersofglassandsteelold-fashionedcarsdowntownChinatowndescriptivewordold-fashionedcarsChinatowninthedeadcenterofTorontoidiom在…的正中心beavailableforsth.有空做某事rollby驶过,流逝chatwith与…聊天“ThisisthelargestChinatowninToronto.WehaveafewmoreintheGreaterTorontoArea,soyoucanguessthattherearealotofChinesepeopleinCanada!Chinesepeoplehavebeencominghereformorethanahundredyears.④_______________,wecangetallkindsofgreatfoodherefromalloverChina,”LinFeitoldthem.ThereforeSEEINGTHETRUENORTHVIARAIL:TORONTOANDMONTREALWhatdidthegirlsseeordoinToronto?thelargestandwealthiestcityinCanada;wentuptheCNTower;sawmistycloudsrisingfromtheNiagaraFalls;

skyscrapersofglassandsteel;

old-fashionedcars;metLinFeiinChinatownCanyoufindwhathasbeenmentionedaboutToronto?ThetrainleftlatethatnightandarrivedinMontrealearlythenextmorning.Atthestation,⑤____________________Toronto,theyheardpeopletalkinginFrench.TheyweresurprisedtoseethatallthesignsandadvertisementswereinFrenchandmanypeoplespokeEnglishwithanaccent.“Wedon’tleaveuntilthisevening,”saidLiuQian.“Let'sgodowntown.OldMontrealisclosetothewater.”incontrasttotheyheardpeopletalkinginFrenchSEEINGTHETRUENORTHVIARAIL:TORONTOANDMONTREAL与……相反/相比withanaccent带有口音strong/broadaccent口音重notuntil直到…才becloseto离…很近Theyspenttheafternoonin8.__________________(可爱的小店)andvisitingartistsintheirworkplacesalongStPaulStreet.⑥______theysatinarestaurantalongsidethebroadStLawrenceRiver,ayoungmansatdownwiththem.“Hello,mynameisJean-Philippe.I'maphotographer,”hesaid,“andIwaswonderingwhereyouarefrom.”AslovelyshopscharmingSEEINGTHETRUENORTHVIARAIL:TORONTOANDMONTREALThegirlstoldhimtheywerefromChinaandwereonatraintripacrossCanada.WhentheytoldhimtheyhadonlyonedayinMontreal,hesaid,“That'stoobad.You9._________________(应该)tostaylonger.⑦__________________,Montrealisacity10.______________________________(声色俱佳的).MostofusspeakbothEnglishandFrench,andthecityhasuniqueQuebeccultureandtraditions.Thereare11.__________________(很棒的餐馆)andclubsaround,too.⑧______________,welovegoodcoffee,toast,andcheese.Andgoodmusic,ofcourse!”oweittoyourselfOverallwithwonderfulsightsandsoundsfantasticrestaurantsHereidiomdescriptivewordsSEEINGTHETRUENORTHVIARAIL:TORONTOANDMONTREALoweittoyourselftodosth.自己应该做某事adv.一般来说，总体上独特的魁北克文化和传统WhatdidthegirlsseeordoinMontreal?signsandadsinFrench;peoplespeakEnglishwithanaccent;visitedlovelyshops;visitedartistsintheirworkplacesalongStPaulStreet;metJeanPhilippeinarestaurantalongsidetheStLawrenceRiver;uniqueQuebeccultureandtraditionsCanyoufindwhathasbeenmentionedaboutMontreal?

Thatnightthetrainwas12.______________(沿……飞驰)theStLawrenceRivertowardstheGulfofStLawrenceanddowntothedistanteastcoasttowardstheprovinceofNovaScotiaanditslargestcity,Halifax.Thecousinsdreamthappilyofthebeautifulcobblestonestreets,oldbrickbuildings,andtheredmapleleavesofMontreal.speedingalongSEEINGTHETRUENORTHVIARAIL:TORONTOANDMONTREALdreamof梦想，梦见Findoutanothertwoverbstoexpress“thetrainistravelling…”onP39FromEdmonton,thetrainheadedsoutheast…Thetrainthunderedon,throughtherollinghills.砖铺有鹅卵石的ExplorethestructureandfeatureoftraveljournalTravelJournalIntroduction:BodyEnding:WhatyousawwhatyoudidHowyoufelt:finalthoughtsAClearGoalCarefully-chosenstops/attractions(featuresofeachplace)PersonalemotionsandthoughtsImpressiveactivities(Intheorderoftime)UseofdiscoursemarkersDescriptivelanguageSequence

Imagine

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Li

Daiyu.

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trip.How

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parents?What

impressed

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most

in

Li

Daiyu

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journey?Writinganemail假定你是李黛予，请根据下面的提示给你的父母写一封电子邮件告诉他们你的加拿大之旅：1．温哥华：购物，徒步旅行；2．坐火车去加拿大落基山脉的路易斯湖；3．坐长途汽车穿过落基山脉去贾斯珀(森林、山脉、湖泊、动物)；4．乘长途火车去多伦多。一、审题谋篇，段落分明二、要点陈述，语言规范1．根据下面的地点变换完成句子。(1)我们从温哥华开始，在那里我们购买礼物，然后去徒步旅行。We_________

inVancouver,andtherewe______________forgiftsandthen____________．句式升级：用定语从句改写句子________________________________________________________________________startedwentshoppingwenthikingWestartedinVancouver,wherewewentshoppingforgiftsandthenwenthiking.(2)我们坐火车去加拿大落基山脉的路易斯湖。We_____________toLakeLouiseintheCanadianRockies.(3)我们坐长途汽车穿过落基山脉去贾斯珀。We_____________________theCanadianRockies___Jasper.句式升级：用省略句连接句(2)和句(3)________________________________________________________________________________________(4)我们乘坐长途火车去多伦多。We___________________________toToronto.tookacoachthroughtoWetookatraintoLakeLouiseintheCanadianRockies,andacoachthroughtheRockiestoJasper.tookalong-distancetraintookatrain

2．根据提示词完成描述山脉、湖泊及动物的语段(scenery,spectacular,massive,beautifulblue,allkindsof)。Thescenerywasspectacular—

massiveforestsandmountains,beautifulbluelakes,andallkindsofanimals.那里的景色非常壮观——大片的森林和山脉，美丽的蓝色湖泊，还有各种各样的动物。_____________________________________________________________________________________________三、句间衔接，过渡自然使用时空变化的词汇连接要点1的相关部分(thenextday,then,fromthere等)。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WestartedinVancouver,wherewewentshoppingforgiftsandthenwenthiking.Thenextday,wetookatraintoLakeLouiseintheCanadianRockies,andthenacoachthroughtheRockiestoJasper.Fromthere,wetookalong-distancetraintoToronto.参考范文：DearMomandDad，Thankyousomuchforallowingmetogoonthisjourney!Ithasbeenawonderfultripsofar.WestartedinVancouver,wherewewentshoppingforgiftsandthenwenthiking.Thenextday,wetookatraintoLakeLouiseintheCanadianRockies,andthenacoachthroughtheRockiestoJasper.Thescenerywasspectacular—massiveforestsandmountains,beautifulbluelakes,andallkindsofanimals.Fromthere,wetookalong-distancetraintoToronto.Ithasbeenagreattrip,fillinguswithsomanyhappymemories.Love，Daiyu

写一封关于旅行的邮件，也就是对一次出行、游览、参观等的记录。

在介绍游览经历时，一般按游览的先后顺序，依次记述游览过程中所见到的景物；另外，要选取印象最深刻的或最有特色的景物，进行较为详细的描写；最后可以加上游玩的感受，做到既有所见所闻，又有所思所感，深化写作主题。写作指导Activities：Usefulexpressions:1.seeoff送行2.takeselfies/ˈselfi/自拍3.arrangeaccommodation安排住宿luxuryhotel豪华酒店;budgetaccommodation经济型住宿;family-runhotel民宿4.makeareservation5.book/reserveasingle/doubleroom预定一个单人/双人的房间6.takeapleasanthikeinaforest在森林里愉快地远足7.seespectacularmountainpeaksandmassiveforests看到壮观的山峰和大片的森林

toweringmountains高耸入云的山脉;steepslopes

陡峭的斜坡;fast-flowingriver水流湍急的河流

secluded/sɪˈkluːdɪd/beach僻静的沙滩;peaceful/tranquil[tranquil]countryside宁静的村庄

roaringwaterfallsandrockycliffs

咆哮的瀑布和嶙峋的悬崖8.enjoy/admire/appreciateanuninterruptedview欣赏一览无余的景色breathtaking/spectacularscenery壮观的惊人的风是9.feast(one'seyes)onthebeautifulscenery饱览美景10.bestruck/fascinatedby...被.迷住(主题语境读写)11.haveagoodviewof...一览无余12.takeavacationinruralareas/spendone'sholidaysinthecountryside在农村度假13.payavisitto

placesofinterests/touristattractions

参观旅游名胜/景点15.Thetrainthunderedon,throughtherollinghills.16.Besidesindulginginproductsoftime-honoredcraftsmanshipandexperiencingfolkcustoms,touristscanalsodigthroughgoodiesat...除了沉迷于悠久的手工艺品和体验民俗外，游客还可以在...发掘美食。1.unforgettableadj.难忘的/

enjoyableadj.令人愉快/享受的/incredibleadj不可思议的2.makesb.feelathome

使某人宾至如归/感到舒服自在3.thebluewatertakesone’sbreathaway

withitsexceptionalbeauty

湛蓝的湖水以其非凡的美丽让人惊叹4.Thetourof...gluttedmyeyes.......之行使我大饱眼福.5.TheblackbricksandwhitewallsandpeoplelivingalongsideriversgiveitthetypicalappearanceofatraditionalChineseinkdrawing.Wanderingalongtheriverorstrollinginthelanes,

oneisdeeplyimpressedby

thepicturesquesceneryandpaceoflifeinWuzhen.黑色的砖和白色的墙以及生活在河边的人们使它具有典型的中国传统水墨画的外观。在河边漫步或在巷子里漫步，乌镇如画的风景和生活节奏都会给人留下深刻的印象。6.Peoplewhoareenchanted/ɪnˈtʃɑːntɪd///intoxicated/ɪnˈtɒksɪkeɪtɪd/bythenightscenedoesnotwanttogohome.人们着迷于醉于夜景，流连忘返。Inspirationandfeelings:Briefintroduction(oftouristattractions):1.behometomanyshoppingmalls是许多购物中心的所在地2.nestle/ˈnes(ə)l/inthelush/lʌʃ/mountainvalleys依偎在郁郁葱葱的山谷中3.appealtovisitorsfromallovertheworld吸引了全世界的游客4.catchone'seyes吸引某人的眼球5.bee