北京市部分区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语解析版试题分类汇编：书面表达（含解析）

北京市部分区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语解析版试题分类汇编书面表达北京东城区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题第三节书面表达(20分)47.假设你是红星中学的李华。请根据你的英国笔友Jim的邮件给他回信。DearLiHua,Ihavereadalotofstoriesaboutpeopleofachievementrecently.Iamreallyimpressedbythem.Speakingofpeopleofachievement,whoisthepersonyouadmiremost?Iwanttoknowwhyyouadmirehim/hermost?Howdoeshe/sheinfluenceyou?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,Jim注意：1.词数100字左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua北京市大兴区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试卷第二节(共20分)44.假如你是红星中学学生李华，你的学校准备以“选秀类节目是否对公众有益”为题举行一场英文辩论赛。作为一名参赛选手，请你表达自己的主张，并对自己的主张进行论证。内容应包括：1.你是否支持选秀类节目；2.你支持或者反对的原因及依据。参考词汇：talentshow注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________北京市丰台区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题（A卷）44.假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你在学校英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖，请用英文写一封邮件感谢外教Jim对你的帮助，内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.回顾Jim对你的帮助；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右。2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJim，_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua北京市丰台区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题（B卷）49.书面表达假设你是高二(1)班学生李华。英语课上，老师请你们以“MyDreamJob”为题，简要介绍自己理想的职业。请你按照以下要点准备发言稿：WhatjobyouwanttodoWhyyouwanttodothejobWhatqualitiesyoushouldhaveforthejobHowyoushouldprepareyourselfforthejob注意：1.发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好；2.词数不少于60。MyDreamJobGoodafternoon,everyone.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!北京市房山区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试卷18．（20分）假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校下周将要举办秋游活动，请给你校的交换生Jim写一封信，邀请他参加此次活动（1）时间、地点、参加者；（2）活动安排；（3）询问意愿。注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：autumnoutgoingDearJim，______Yours，LiHua参考答案北京东城区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题【答案】DearJim，Iamgladtoreceiveyoure-mailandtalkaboutthegreatestpersonthatIadmiremost.IadmireMadamCuriethemost,thegreatestwomanchemistintheworld,whonotonlydiscoveredradium,butalsodevotedherdiscoverytosavinglotsofinjuredsoldiersduringtheFirstWorldWar.Besides,MadamCuriewasnotinterestedinfameorwealthatall,althoughshewontheNobelPrizetwice.Inmyopinion,greatpersonsshouldbeselfless,generousandactive,forwhichtheycanreallyinfluenceus.Whatqualitiesdoyouthinkagreatpersonshouldhave?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】这是一篇书面表达类应用文。要求考生向笔友Jim回一封邮件。谈论自己最崇拜的伟人、崇拜的原因及伟人是如何影响自己的。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：pleased→glad钦佩；尊重：respect→admire对……感兴趣：haveaninterestin/showinterestin→beinterestedin在我看来：asfarasIamconcerned→inmyopinion2.句式拓展同义句原句：IadmireMadamCuriethemost,thegreatestwomanchemistintheworld,whonotonlydiscoveredradium,butalsodevotedherdiscoverytosavinglotsofinjuredsoldiersduringtheFirstWorldWar.拓展句：IadmireMadamCuriethemost,thegreatestwomanchemistintheworld,becausenotonlydidshediscoverradium,butalsodevotedherdiscoverytosavinglotsofinjuredsoldiersduringtheFirstWorldWar.【点睛】[高分句型1]IadmireMadamCuriethemost,thegreatestwomanchemistintheworld,whonotonlydiscoveredradium,butalsodevotedherdiscoverytosavinglotsofinjuredsoldiersduringtheFirstWorldWar.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Inmyopinion,greatpersonsshouldbeselfless,generousandactive,forwhichtheycanreallyinfluenceus.(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句)北京市大兴区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试卷【答案】Onepossibleversion:TalentshowshavebeenpopularinChinaformanyyears.However,recentlypeoplestarttalkingaboutwhethertalentshowsarebeneficialingeneral.Iampersonallyagainsttalentshows.Ontheonehand,theygivepeoplefalsemotivationsandmakethembelievetheycanbecomefamousandmakemoneyeasilybyattendingtheshows.Infact,onlyfewcanreallysucceed,andmostpeoplesimplywastetheirtimeandenergyintheprocess.Ontheotherhand,talentshowsarenotfairtoalltheparticipants.Bestperformersareoftenkickedout,andthewinnersareoftenlesstalented.Theaudiencefeelssadandfrustratedaboutitwhenseeingthathappens.Tosumup,IamagainsttalentshowsintheircurrentformandIthinktheyneedtobechanged.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“选秀类节目是否对公众有益”为题写一篇文章，表达自己的主张，并讲述自己支持或反对的原因及依据。【详解】1.词汇积累有益的：beneficial→helpful/advantageous使人相信：makesb.believe→convincesb.of…参加/参与：attend→takepartin/goinfor事实上：infact→actually总而言之：tosumup→allinall/inaword/inshort2.句式拓展同义句改写原句：Ontheonehand,theygivepeoplefalsemotivationsandmakethembelievetheycanbecomefamousandmakemoneyeasilybyattendingtheshows.拓展句：Ontheonehand,theygivepeoplefalsemotivations,whichmakethembelievetheycanbecomefamousandmakemoneyeasilybyattendingtheshows.【点睛】【高分句型1】However,recentlypeoplestarttalkingaboutwhethertalentshowsarebeneficialingeneral.（运用了whether引导宾语从句）【高分句型2】Theaudiencefeelssadandfrustratedaboutitwhenseeingthathappens.（“whenseeingthathappens”为when引导时间状语从句的省略句）北京市丰台区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题（A卷）【答案】DearJim,Howiseverythinggoing?IamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltthankstoyoubecauseI’vewonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContestofourschool.Yourkindhelphasmeantmorethananything.Iremembervividlyhowyouguidedandencouragedme.Duringthepreparationofthecontest,youhelpedpolishmydraftmanytimesandbettermypronunciationwithgreatpatience.Thepublicspeakingskillsyousharedturnedoutreallyeffective.Moreimportantly,wheneverIfelthesitantandunsureaboutmyself,youwerealwaystheretobackmeupandboostmyconfidence.Withoutyou,Icouldn’thavemadesuchanachievement.Thankyouforeverythingyouhavedoneformeandwishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的感谢信。要求考生给外教写封信感谢其在英语学习中给自己的帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累衷心的：heartfelt→sincere/genuine耐心地：withpatience→patiently重要地：importantly→significantly支持：backup→support2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Withoutyou,Icouldn’thavemadesuchanachievement.拓展句：Ifithadnotbeenforyou,Icouldn’thavemadesuchanachievement.【点睛】【高分句型1】IamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltthankstoyoubecauseI’vewonthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContestofourschool.（运用了because引导的状语从句）【高分句型2】Iremembervividlyhowyouguidedandencouragedme.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）北京市丰台区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试题（B卷）【答案】Goodafternoon,everyone.WhenIgrowup,Iwanttobeajournalist.Ithinkworkingforanewspaperandreportingnewsfromallovertheworldwouldbereallyexciting.Journalistshavetobeveryenthusiastic,independentandgoodatcommunicatingwithpeople.Iknowthere’salongwaytogotobecomeajournalist.Togetmyselfuptodatewithwhat’shappeningaroundtheworld,Ireadpapers,andwatchthenewsonTV.Iamtryingtoimprovemyspeakingandwritingskills.Andofcourse,absorbingasmuchknowledgeaspossibleatthisstageinmylifeiswhatImustdo.Iknowdreamsarehardtofollow,butIwillworkhardonmydream.Thankyou!【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“MyDreamJob”为题，简要介绍自己理想的职业。【详解】1.词汇积累全世界：allovertheworld→thewholeworld擅长：begoodat→beexpertin提高：improve→strengthen困难的：hard→difficult2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Journalistshavetobeveryenthusiastic,independentandgoodatcommunicatingwithpeople.拓展句：Journalists,whomustbegoodatcommunicatingwithpeople,havetobeveryenthusiasticandindependent,【点睛】【高分句型1】Ithinkworkingforanewspaperandreportingnewsfromallovertheworldwouldbereallyexciting.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Andofcourse,absorbingasmuchknowledgeaspossibleatthisstageinmylifeiswhatImustdo.（运用了动名词作主语，what引导的表语从句）北京市房山区2023-2024学年高二上学期期中英语试卷第二节18．【分析】高分句型一：TheFragrantHillisconsideredastheperfectdestination，sinceitisfa