新教材适用2023-2024学年高中英语Unit4NaturalDisastersSectionⅣ写作指导学案新人教版必修第一册

SectionⅣ写作指导概要写作写作储备阅读教材P55Summary，提炼概要写作的写作方法。Ⅰ.文体特点概要写作具备说明重点和简短这两个特点。要求考生能够抓住原文的关键信息，抓住文章的主旨大意，并用简短凝练的语言将其概括表达出来。Ⅱ.写作四部曲1．确定体裁，明确主题及结构体裁结构记叙文人物＋时间＋地点＋事件(起因＋发展＋结果)说明文事物的性质功能：对象＋性质功能＋利好问题的解决方法或措施：问题＋解决方法现象类：现象＋原因＋结果议论文主题＋补充论据＋(结论)2.确定主题句，找关键信息划出每一段的主题句，抓住关键信息，忽略次要信息。3．改写关键信息，得出要点使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式，或使用不同的句子结构表达同一意思，如改变语态、肯定变否定等，避免抄袭原文句子。4．添加连接词，使行文连贯要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词去连贯全文。常用的关联词有：however,besides,inaddition,therefore,instead等。典例剖析阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。It'sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.There'snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon'tbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsaren'tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou'dliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon'tlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldn'tknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.It'sachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofficers,students,andcollegecounselors(顾问),anditwon'tcostyouapenny!YoucanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairatCollegeWeekLive.com.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan'ttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyou'dliketoattend.审题谋篇Ⅰ.定框架→好的开始，成功的一半体裁议论文主题探访申请大学框架主题＋补充论据1、2、3Ⅱ.划主题句，找关键信息→打造一篇要点全面、用词准确的极优作文Para1.主题句：It'sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.关键信息：areallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplyPara2.主题句：There'snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.关键信息：visittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Para3.主题句：Ifcampusvisitsaren'tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou'dliketoattend.关键信息：attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou'dliketoattend.Para4.主题句：Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.关键信息：checkouttheonlinecollegefairsⅢ.词汇、句式升级→创造极优作文的倩词靓句Para1.1．写出下列词语的同义词①goodidea→worthwhile②visit→payavisitto2．改写关键信息：It'sreallyworthwhiletopayavisittoyourdesiredcollegespersonallybeforeapplying.Para2.1．将后置定语改为前置定语theschoolsinyourlocalarea→yourlocalcolleges2．改写关键信息：Undoubtedly,youshouldvisityourlocalcolleges.Para3.1．写出下列词语的同义表达①attheveryleast→atleast②wouldliketoattend→wanttogo2．改写关键信息：Atleast,youshouldvisittheschoolyouwanttogoto.Para4.1．同义转换①iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible...→ifyouareshortoftimeandmoney②checkouttheonlinecollegefairs→visittheonlinecollegefairs2．改写关键信息：Ifyouareshortoftimeandmoney,visitingtheonlinecollegefairsisagoodalternativetohelpyoubetterunderstandschools.Ⅳ.添加连接词，组建极优作文→水到渠成的成就感：动力的源泉参考范文：It'sreallyworthwhiletopayavisittoyourdesiredcollegespersonallybeforeapplying.Undoubtedly,youshouldvisityourlocalcolleges.Atleast,youshouldvisittheschoolyouwanttogotoandknowitsrealconditionsinadvance.Ifyouareshortoftimeandmoney,visitingtheonlinecollegefairsisagoodalternativetohelpyoubetterunderstandschools.J即学即练阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Manyyoungpeoplebelievesharedbicycleshavemanyadvantages.Theyarenotexpensivetorent,theydonothavetobeprotectedfromthieves,andthereisnoneedtorepairthem.Youjusthavetochangethemforanotherone.Theyarealsoenvironmentfriendlyandlowertheuseofcars,whichalsohelpstorelievetraffic.Infact,itisconsideredanawesome(可怕的)combinationoftechnologyandtradition.Sincetheyappeared,sharedbicycleshaveraisedalotofdust.Thereisnodoubtaboutthebenefitsbutthedisadvantagescannotbeignored.Manyproblemsrelatedtosharedbicycleshaveappeared.Itisnotonlyduetobadbehaviorfromsomeuserswhoalwayswanttoseizethebicycles,butalsobecauseofthemessthathasbeencreatedsinceonecanleavethebicycleanywhere,whichisagainstpublicurbanordermanagement.Therearesomanypoorlyparkedbikesthatsometimestheyendupblockingstreets.InXiLuoyuan,Beijing,the“CivilizedUseofBicycles”campaign(运动)hasbeenlaunched.Inadditiontohaving40officiallypermittedstops,therearealsoclearsignals(信号)toleaduserstothesestops.Ateamofsupervisorskeeporderinthearea.Thisisthefirstareathatispartofanofficialsystemtomanagebicycles.Thepurposeofthiscampaignistosolvethe