特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第13练

特训巧训主观题｜主观题增分第13练练中自评——在强化训练中发展自己一、语法填空(2023·河南联考)MixingtraditionalChineseteawithcoffeehas__1__(recent)becomeanewtrendforbothsuppliersofbothdrinks.Theyaremakingeveryeffort__2__(open)themarket.Mixingteaandcoffeeisnotanewthingasyuenyeungoryuanyang,whichgenerallyconsists__3__brewedcoffeeandblackteawithsugarandmilk.Yuenyeung__4__(be)apopularrefreshmentoptioninHongKongoverthepastfewyears.Yuenyeungreferstoapairofmandarinducks,onemaleandonefemale.Thedrinkusuallycombinesaharmoniousmixofequalpartsofcoffeeandmilktea.AsChina'scoffeeandteamarketsarebothdevelopingquickly,thenewdrinkshavebecomeawindowthrough__5__youngcustomerscanunderstandandlearnabouttraditionalteaculture,__6__(break)thestereotype(成见)thatonlythemiddle-agedandelderlydrinktea.Domesticandinternationalcoffeebrandshaveexpandedinthepastcoupleofyears,withnewproductscontinuouslybeing__7__(launch)thatfeatureChineseteaorotherChinesecultural__8__(element)．LuYongchen,CEOofTimHortonsChina,says,“WehaveseentheriseofChina'scoffeeconsumptionmarket__9__personallyexperiencedthecontinuousimprovementofthebusinessenvironmentandthe__10__(strength)supportfromthegovernmentforbusinessdevelopment.”锁定最难的那一个——一个都不能错第9题为无提示词填空，根据空格后面的experienced可知，该词与前面的seen是并列关系，也就是说experienced前省略了助动词have。由此，可以判断出该空的上文与下文是并列谓语，故填and。如果考生无法理解experienced与前文seen之间的关系，本题可能会填错。微点：对于连词类题目应该分析其上下文的成分或句子之间是什么关系，这类填空题的句子往往较为复杂，所以一定要先找出句子的主谓宾结构，然后再做具体分析。二、短文改错Ifinditinterestedthatmanygreatorsuccesspeoplecomefromapoorfamily.Thisprovesthatbeingpoornotalwaysabadthing.Insomeway,itmaybeveryprecioustoyou,becauseofdifficultsituationswillmakeyouapersonofstrongcharacter,uponwhatyoucandependforsuccess.Sodon'tfeelsorryifyouwereastudentfromapoorfamily.Workhardandtheywillhaveagreatfuturealthoughotherhaverichparents.Inaword,itisn'tmatterwhereyoucomefromifyouhaveapositiveattitudetolife.So,whenlifegivesyou100reasonstocry,showinglifethatyouhave1,000reasonstosmile.查找最隐蔽的那一个——一个都不能少固定短语或常用搭配中的介词误用有时很难被发现，因为有时一个核心词可以有多种搭配。思考时，要注意句子逻辑意义和语法原则。细读短文第三句，尝试找出常用搭配错误。三、书面表达eq\a\vs4\al(体裁：道歉信)假定你是李华，你和你的朋友Mike约好了本周六去博物馆，但是由于你临时要参加“美丽市容，从我做起”的志愿者活动而不能与其同行。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。内容包括：1．表达歉意；2.简介志愿者活动；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMike，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua评中赋能——在细节打磨中完善自己推荐最美的那一篇—一分都不能丢eq\a\vs4\al(与其理论说教不如现身说法)悟范文·背范文/在诵读中提升DearMike，IamwritingtoapologizefornotbeingabletoaccompanyyoutothemuseumthisSaturdayaswehadplanned①.Ihaveunexpectedlybeencalledtoparticipateinavolunteeractivitycalled“BeautifytheCity,StartwithMe”②.Iamtrulysorryforanyinconveniencecausedbythischange.Thevolunteeractivityaimstocleanupandimprovetheappearanceofourcity.ItisanimportanteventthatIfeelcompelledtotakepartinandcontributetoourcommunity.Iwouldliketosuggestthatwerescheduleourvisittothemuseumforanotherdaythatisconvenientforbothofus③.Iameagertospendqualitytimewithyouandexploretheexhibitstogether.ThankyouforyourunderstandingandIlookforwardtoournextoutingtogether.Yours，LiHua学结构·学语言/在仿效中增分(一)学结构布局之妙本习作属于道歉信，体现了和谐健康的人际关系。文章层次清晰，段落划分合理，段落之间、句与句之间的衔接自然顺畅。第一段表达歉意并说明原因；第二段给出不能守约的理由；第三段使用了道歉信的常用结尾句：期望对方理解。(二)学语言表达之美1．文中时态以一般现在时为主。2．本文恰当地使用了一些高级词汇，如accompany,unexpectedly,participatein,inconvenience,cleanup,appearance,compelled,takepartin,contributeto,reschedule,convenient,quality,explore等。3．本文使用了一些高级句式结构，体现了作者较高的语言驾驭能力，如方式状语从句(如①句)，过去分词短语作定语(如②句)，宾语从句和定语从句(如③句)等。客串阅卷老师评一番—一题两用把分添eq\a\vs4\al(同一篇习作的改错与升格)DearMike，[Ihavesignedupforavoluntaryactivity,soI'msorryfornotbeingabletogotothemuseumwithyouthisSaturday.①]Therefore,I'mwritingtoapologizefortheinconvenience.Whichyouknow,I'vebeenwaitingforachancetodevotemyselftoraisepublicawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.[Inthatday,allthevolunteerswillputuppostersabouthowtoleadalow-carbonlifestyleandpickupthetrashalongtheroads.②][Itwilltakeawholeday.③]Consideringthat，I'mafraidthatIwon'tkeepmyword.[Tofixanotherdatewhenyouarefreeispossibleforus.④]Ihopethatyoucanacceptmyheartfeltandtrueapology.Yours，LiHua(一)3个错误要避免1．关系代词错误：第三句中Which→As2．非谓词形式错误：第三句中raise→raising3．介词错误：第四句中In→On(二)3个词汇抓住眼(将文中加黑词汇升级)1．goto→tour2.free→available3．true→genuine(三)3个句式点亮篇1．用现在分词短语作状语改写①句Having_signed_up_for_a_voluntary_activity，I'm_sorry_for_not_being_able_to_tour_the_museum_with_you_this_Saturday.2．用定语从句合并②③句On_that_day,_all_the_volunteers_will_put_up_posters_about_how_to_lead_a_low-carbon_lifestyle_and_pick_up_the_trash_along_the_roads,_which_will_take_a_whole_day.3．用it作形式主语改写④句It_is_possible_for_us_to_fix_another_date_when_you_are_available.语法填空答案：语篇解读：本文是一篇新闻报道。文章主要介绍了一种将中国传统茶与咖啡混合的新趋势。1．recently考查副词。应用副词修饰动词become，故填recently。2．toopen考查非谓语动词。makeeveryefforttodosth.是固定短语，意为“尽一切努力做某事”，故填toopen。3．of考查介词。consistof是固定短语，意为“由……组成”，故填of。4．has