读写结合增分写作 第十一组

eq\a\vs4\al(读写结合·增分写作\b\lc\|\rc\(\a\vs4\al\co1(,,,))第十一组)自主练评——试试自己能力如何(先自主构思并写作)一、应用文写作(常考体裁：新闻报道)假定你是李华，上周末你校举办了为期两天的美食节。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1．节日的准备；2.节日现场概述；3.活动反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．请按如下格式作答。ATwo­dayFoodFestival二、读后续写(常考话题：历险故事)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AholidayinPenangisanannualaffairformyfamily.MyparentsgrewupinPenangandareveryfondofPenangfood.InDecembereveryyear,wewoulddrivetotheislandtospendthreedaysvisitingourfavoritefoodhaunts(常去的地方)．Thisyear,westartedourjourneyupnorthonaFridaymorning.Ittookussixhourstoreachourdestination.WealwaysstayedatoneofthehotelsinBatuFerringhi.Thebeachwasjustashortwalkfromthehotelentranceandourroomshadalovelyviewofthesea.Wespentourfirsteveningplayingonthebeach.Afterdinner,wereturnedtoourroomstoplaygames.Myparentshadaruleforourholidayswhichwasthatweweretospendtimedoingthingstogether.TherewastobenoTVandnoInternet.Thenextmorning,wewenttoBukitBenderaandthenspenttherestoftheafternoonintownvisitingourfavoritehawkerstalls(小贩货摊).Aswewerehavingteaatacoffeeshop,weoverheardpeopletalkingaboutanearthquakenearSumatera,anislandinIndonesia.Weheadedbacktothehotelandthenwenttothebeach.Wetookawalkalongthebeach,pickingupseashellsalongtheway.Lookingup,IsawthesunshiningbrighterthanI'veeverseenbefore.Isawatreetremblinginthedistanceasitreflectedthesun'srays.Itneveroccurredtousthatsomethingawfulwouldtakeplace.Suddenly,Inoticedastrangething.Theseaseemedtobeleavingfromtheshore.Icalledmyfathertolookatthecuriousoccurrence.Myfathertookonelookandsuddenlywentpale.Wesawagreylineinthedistancemovingtowardstheshore.Itseemedtogrowtallerbythesecond.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Myfathershoutedtoustorunbacktothehotel.Wewaitedalongtimebeforegoingdownstairs.自悟赋能——看看他人高在何处(再晨读背诵学亮点)一、背“应用文”范文——学范式、学亮点ATwo­dayFoodFestivalAfoodfestivalintendedtoenrichourschoollifewasheldsuccessfullylastweekendinourschool.(第一段：简要报道事件)There'snothingbetter(“否定词＋比较级”表示最高级)thanthesensesweexperiencedatthefoodfestival(定语从句)—therowsoffoodtrucksandtentsasfarastheeyecouldsee...therhythmicsoundweheardfromcooking...thesmellsofdozensofdeliciousfoodbeingpreparedaroundus...andofcoursethetasteofeverythingwecouldstomach.However，whatimpressedmemost(主语从句)wasinfacttheculturesbehindthefoodvividlyintroducedbythecooks.Also,wonderfulbackgroundmusicandcolorfulflagsaddedtothegaietyoftheoccasion.(第二段：具体报道活动内容。本段叙述活动内容，应使用一般过去时态，有些考生容易用错时态)Itwaseveryone'scombinedeffortsthatmadetheactivitysuchabigsuccess(强调句型)anditwastheculturesbehindthefoodthatmadethefestivalspecial(强调句型).Everyoneofussanghighpraisefortheevent.(第三段：活动反响)二、悟“读后续写”范文——学构思、学表达[范文一]Myfathershoutedtoustorunbacktothehotel.Hegrabbedmyhandandpulledmewithhim.Whenwereachedthehotelgate(时间状语从句),weheardaroaringsoundbehindus.Quickly,myfatherpushedustowardsthestairs.Wehadjustreachedthefirstfloorwithfearwhen(haddonesth.when...结构)weheardtheroarofrushingwaterandglassbreaking.Myfatheryelledatustokeepclimbing.Westoppedonthefourthfloorandlookeddownatthewaterbelowus,whichhadstoppedrising.Severalminuteslater,thewaterbegantodrop.Wewaitedalongtimebeforegoingdownstairs.Hardlyhadwegottothefirstfloorwhenwesawtheunrecognizablehotelgate(Hardly...when“一……就……”).Therewasdirtandbrokenfurnitureeverywhere.Somepeoplewhowerecaughtinthewatereitherwereunconsciousorburstintotearswithpain.Whatwesawbrokeourheartsandwedecidedtohelpthevictimsafteranarrowescape.NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetrewardingvacationbefore(never位于句首的倒装句).ThespecialtriptoPenangdeeplyimpressedme.[范文二]Myfathershoutedtoustorunbacktothehotel.Heracedforward,grabbingmymotherandmebythehand.Themomentwereachedthegateofthehotel(时间状语从句),weheardaroaringsoundbehindus.Welookedbackandsawgreatwavesstrikingagainstthewall(see＋宾语＋宾语补足语).Werushedtothesecondfloorinahurrywiththepaleface.Feargrippeduswhenweheardwindowsbrokenbytheviolentwaves.Westoppedonthefourthfloor,look