读后续写助人类+一辆自行车的故事 讲义 高三英语一轮复习

读后续写

一辆自行车的故事阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheBicycleWhenIwasnineIneededtoearnsomemoney,soIaskedMr.Miceli,thenewspaperpublisherinmyChicagoneighbourhood,aboutanafter-schoolpaperroute.HeagreedonlyifI

hadabicycle.当我九岁的时候，我需要挣点钱，所以我向芝加哥附近的报纸出版商米塞利先生询问了一条课后报纸路线。只有我有自行车，他才会同意。Mydadboughtmeausedbike,butrightafterthathefellillandcouldn’tteachmetoride.Mr.Miceli,however,merelyaskedtoseethebike.SoIwalkedtohisgarage,showedittohimandgotthejob.我爸爸给我买了一辆二手自行车，但就在那之后，他生病了，不能教我骑。然而，米切利先生只是要求看一下自行车。所以我走到他的车库，把它给他看，然后得到了这份工作。Atfirst,Ifilledmydeliverybagwithrolledpapersoverthehandlebarsandwalkedmybikedownthesidewalks.Butpushingabikewithaloadofpaperswasawkward;afterafewdaysIborrowedMom’stwo-wheeledshoppingcart.起初，我把卷好的纸放在车把上，然后把自行车沿着人行道走去。但推着一辆自行车和一大堆文件是很尴尬的；几天后，我借了妈妈的两轮购物车。Ittookmelongertomakemydeliveriesbycart,butIdidn’tmind.Isenteachpapertoitsproperdestination.Inrainorsnow,IputDad’soldraincoatoverthecarttokeepthepapersdry.Igottomeeteveryoneintheneighborhood—working-classpeopleofItalian,GermanorPolishoriginswhowereinvariablykindtome.我用手推车送货花了更长的时间，但我并不介意。我把每一篇论文都送到了正确的目的地。下雨或下雪时，我把爸爸的旧雨衣放在手推车上，以保持纸张干燥。我见到了附近的每一个人——意大利、德国或波兰出身的工人阶级，他们总是对我很好。WhenDadreturnedfromthehospital,hewastooweaktoresumehisoriginaljob.Nowweneededeverypennywecouldraisetopaybills,sowesoldthebike.Mr.MicelimusthaveknownIwasn’tusingabike,buthesaidnothingaboutittome.当爸爸从医院回来时，他太虚弱了，无法恢复原来的工作。现在我们需要筹集到的每一分钱来支付账单，所以我们卖掉了自行车。米切利先生一定知道我没有骑自行车，但他什么也没对我说。OntheThursdayeveningbeforeChristmas,1951,Irangmyfirstcustomer’sdoorbell.Eventhoughthelightswereon,nobodyanswered,soIwentontothenexthouse.Noanswer,nordidanyonerespondatthenextfamilyonmyroute,ortheoneafter.1951年圣诞节前的一个星期四晚上，我按了第一位顾客的门铃。尽管灯亮着，但没有人接，所以我继续去了隔壁的房子。没有人回答，我路上的下一个家庭或后面的一个家庭也没有人回应。Iwasveryworried;IhadtopayformypaperseveryFriday.AndwhileitwasalmostChristmas,Ineverthoughtthateveryonewouldbeoutshopping.SoIwasveryhappywhen,goingupthewalkwaytoMr.Gordon’shouse,Iheardmusicandvoices.Irangthebell.我很担心；我每周五都得付论文费。虽然快到圣诞节了，但我从没想过每个人都会出去购物。所以，当我走上通往戈登先生家的走道，听到音乐和声音时，我非常高兴。我按了门铃。注意：1.

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请在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thedoorflewopen,andMr.Gordondraggedmeinside.

Afterwalkingthebicyclehome,Iopenedthoseenvelopes.

写作分析

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了作者儿时通过送报纸来挣钱补贴家用，但由于父亲突发疾病，不得不卖掉了作者送报纸用的自行车，后来邻居们自发为他买了一辆自行车作为圣诞节的礼物来感谢作者每日送报纸的辛劳，歌颂了作者踏实认真的品质，赞扬了邻居们热心善意的举动。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“门突然开了，戈登先生把我拖了进去。”可知，第一段可描写作者进去之后看到的景象（邻居们自发为他买了一辆自行车作为圣诞节的礼物）及感想。②由第二段首句内容“推着自行车回家后，我打开了那些信封。”可知，第二段可描写信件的具体内容及作者的感悟。2.续写线索：被戈登先生拖进去——邻居们送自行车——感动——回家看信——邻居的善意继续——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①看见，发现：see/spot②充满：bepackedwith/befullof/befilledwith③到达：getto/arriveat/reach情绪类①感谢：gratitude/appreciation②感动：touched/moved【点睛】[高分句型1]Jammedinhislivingroomwereallmysubscribers!(运用了完全倒装句)[高分句型2]WhenIfeltcomfortableonabike,Mr.Miceliaskedmetodeliverasecondroute.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)参考范文：

Thedoorflewopen,andMr.Gordondraggedmeinside.

Jammedinhislivingroomwereallmysubscribers!Inthecenteroftheroom,Isawanewbicycle,acanvasbagpackedwithcolorfulenvelopesonitshandlebar.“AChristmaspresentourbestpaperboy!”Mr.Gordonsaid.Sensingmyconfusion,hecontinued,“We’veallseenyouintherainandsnowwiththatlittleshoppingcart,sowesupposeyououghttohaveabicycle.”Deeplytouched,Ifelttearsofgratitudefillingmyeyes.Afterwalkingthebicyclehome,Iopenedthoseenvelopes.

TheyheldChristmascardsfromeverysubscriber,alongwiththeirsubscriptionfeesandtips.Kindnessdidnotendthere,though.Thenextday,whenIgottoMr.Miceli’sgarage,hewaswaitingoutside.“Bringyourbiketomorrowmorning,andI’llteachyoutoride,”heoffered.WhenIfeltcomfortableonabike,Mr.Miceliaskedmetodeliverasecondroute.Deliveringbothroutesonmynewbike,IreallyappreciatedthekindChicagoans’loveandsupport.默写版：Thedoorflewopen,andMr.Gordondraggedmeinside.__________________________我所有的订阅杂志都挤在他的客厅里!Inthecenteroftheroom,Isawanewbicycle,______________________________________车把上装有彩色信封的帆布包.“AChristmaspresentourbestpaperboy!”Mr.Gordonsaid._______________________________________他感觉到我的困惑，继续说道,“We’veallseenyouintherainandsnowwiththatlittleshoppingcart,sowesupposeyououghttohaveabicycle.”___________________________________我深深地感动了，感激的泪水充满了我的眼睛.Afterwalkingthebicyclehome,Iopenedthoseenvelopes.

TheyheldChristmascardsfromeverysubscriber,alongwiththeirsubscriptionfeesandtips.__________________________然而，善良并没有就此结束.Thenextday,whenIgottoMr.Miceli’sgarage,hewaswaitingoutsi