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老学员老学员福写作简单极致美用自己的逻辑对抗世界的逻辑钟钟平微信公众号：有道逻辑英助理QQ钟平老师微博：有道钟写写作简单极致美美美简单复杂简单复杂YouwillalwaysbeinmyheartYouYouwere,areandwillbeinmyWeare,Weare,andalwayswillbe,theUnitedStatesofOurOurlivesareInInthisway,ourdreamwillnotbeaquestionof“if“but“when.•要求：1•要求：1，切题（）2思路清•3•4••••2，思路清晰BB、原因段（论述原因+逻辑严谨•S1：理论，数据，伦理三选S1：理论，数据，伦理三选1、数据类InaccordancewiththemostupdatedstatisticsconductedbyNewsweek（报纸、大学、著名杂志）,afamousnewspaperconernedwithpublichealthinAmericasmokingisthebiggestkillertodayforus（废话插入语）,claimingover3millionlivesayear.22、理论类BasedonthemostwidelyacceptedtheoryconcerningpublichealthandsmokingbyprofessorAlexsandraCoffman(名字必须牛逼),aleadingexpertintheresearchofhealth,smokingiscausinghugedisasterforhumanbeingstoday.3、伦理类Respecting3、伦理类Respectingtheoldwas,isandwillbeacherishedvalueforchinese（过去现在和将来oldoryoung,richor•GayorFindingagoodjobwas,isandwillbeatargetforeverygraduatingMaleorfemale,or2in•加长版：respectingthe2in•加长版：respectingtheoldwasisandwillbeacherishedforeverychineseoldoryoungrichorpoor.(•Missgao,ateacherwhotaughtmeenglishwheniwasinafriendwhohelpedmealotwheniwasintrouble;aladywhoalwaysnicetoherstudentsdiednow.（下下策：MissGaoN,n1+从句1；n2+从句2；n3+从句=someone,或物原句，其中n1=n2=n3,或is•Eg：Teamworking,is•Eg：Teamworking,aspiritthatmakesthetaskperfectlydone;apersonalitythatgainyousenceofresponsbility;aqualitythatwinyoucherishedfriendship.Eg：Teamworking,amodelnecessaryforsuccess;amethodthatisusefulforourcareer;abeliefwhichishelpfulforustobeabetterperson,canbeagreatspirit•S2S2：实践中，好处和坏处[*]目标词：environment；physicalandmentalhealth；economicdevelopment；publichealth；education；culturalheritage；socialharmony；careerdevelopment.Eg：SmokingEg：SmokingisaPandorabox,causingharmforeveryone,oldoryoung,richorpoor,menorwoman.It Eg： Eg：Smokingwillbringsomanyharms(benefits)inwhichhurtingyourhealth目标词isonlyatipofaniceberg.Eg：Eg：killingsmokingmayseemhardyetitisnothingbutablessinginEgEgSmokingisthelastthingayoungpersonshouldEgEg：Thenegative(positiveeffectthatsmokingmaybringisneverflashinpanbutlong-lastingandfar-reaching.ithelps(hurtsyour目EgEg：Ifayoungpersongetaddictedtosmoking,hewillbetrappedintheshellofhisownmaking.Eg：IfEg：Ifayoungpersonfallsintosmoking,itwillbecometheWaterlooofhislife.Eg：Ifsmokingcannotbecontrolled,abettertomorrowwillbenothingbutUtopia.EgEgWithyearsofsmokingyourphysicalhealthwillbedamaged(被动),andwithityourabilitytofocusinstudyAisved,andwithitIfAisved,andwithitIfyoucanfindagoodjob,youreconomicstatuswillbeimproved,andwithityourlivingstandard.••Not,anymore后面一定是肯定••Eg：[否定比喻：a不是b就像c不是d一样Acollectionoffactscannotbecalledscience,anymorethanapileofbrickscanbecalledahouse.••(2)Moneyisnotimportanttotheyoung,anymorethancombisimportanttothemonk.我无法理解作者的观点 (3)Icannotunderstandyourwords,any (3)Icannotunderstandyourwords,anymorethanthedaycanunderstandthenight.Eg：[肯定比喻：肯定lessthan+肯定•Timeisimportanttotheyoung,nolessthansunshineTeamworkingisnecessarytosuccess,nolessthanpetrolisnecessarytoacar.••S3：举例：国家例、名人例、名人例（自编）；尽量使用简单句S4：对例子的虚拟反述（增S4：对例子的虚拟反述（增加文章丰富性）Eg：[if+过去完成时•iftheyhadn'tsmokedthatmuch,theywouldn'thavegonetosuchanearlytomb.•Iftheyhadnotpaidattentiontotheenvironmentprotection,thecitywouldnothavebeensoniceS5：启Eg：somethingneedstobedoneanditisnowornever.+ved，would+现在完成时Eg：Facingthechallenge（opportunity）of(主题词）Eg：Facingthechallenge（opportunity）of(主题词）,itisnotthetimetoaskwhatcanbedoneforyou，butwhatcanbedonebyyou.Agovernmentofpeople,forpeopleandbyEg：[人人为我，我为人人Abettertomorrowissharedbyyetmadebyeach,anditistimetodosomethingButonlyunderstandingthereasonisnottheend,noteventhebeginningoftheend,butpossiblytheendofthebeginning.•第•第一段,描述引出段：描述（=引出+描述）+观点。（2~3句S1：引出[奥巴马版]Ifthereisanyonewhostilldoubtsthevalueharm)of(*主题词);whostillquestionsthepower(damage)of(*),the(picture\topic\table)aboveisyouranswer!•[莎士比亚版[莎士比亚版]To(*)ornotto,thatisaEg：[]To,ornotto,thatisaquestion,aquestionraisedinthepictureandaquestiontobeansweredbyallofusoldoryoungrichorpoor.(加入描述话题细节）Myanswertothatquestionissimpleanddefinite:+加观点句.[专业版]Basedonthe[专业版]Basedonthetheoryofbutterflyeffect（蝴蝶效应）,atinydefecttodaymayendupwithhugedisasterinfuture,andthisisexactlywhatthepicture（table)isshowingus:(加入描述细节).•Itissaidthetheonly4、[网络版:最远的距离..]Thebiggestdistanceintheworldisbetweentruthandfalse,butwhentruthisbeforeyou,asclearcanseeinthepicture,yetsomefailto[文艺版:顾城]Adarknightgivesusdarkeyes,yetweusethemtosearchforlightasimplepictureshowsasimplestoryyetweuseittosearchfortruthS2：描述S2：描述：用简单句，三句以内，现在时态1•S3：观点（简化）：suchastory(phenomenonpictureistellingus•(3第三段第三段方法（=态度+方法S1：态Butitishardlyinevitablethat--•Eg:[大势所趋]Althoughthewaytobanningsmokingisfilledwithupsanddowns（充满困难）thetideisunabletoreturn.（或：thedominoesarestartingtofall）.•Eg:[要有行动]Theonlywayforthetriumphofmisledcauseisgoodpeopledonothing.•Eg:[从小事做起]Sometimesinlifewearecalledtodogreatthings,buteverydaywearecalledtodosmallthings,withgreatlove.Eg:[人人为我，我为人人]Abettertomorrowissharedbyall,yetmadebyIfIfyouarelookingforsomeonetoprovidesolutions,lookintotheEg：[言必行，行必果Eg：[言必行，行必果]Itistimetoputthoughtsintowordsandwordsintoaction.•理专家教育公众、个人（前面加入人人为我句型）Abettertomorrowissharedbyall,yetrealizedbyeach,soeachperson,oldoryoung,richorpoor,hasthedutytotakepartinto(help,科技管Everyonethinksofchangingtheworld,butfewthinksofchanginghimself,yetanewnationsbeginswithanewneighbor.Eg:[Eg:[政府Thegovernmentisduetoplayapositiverole•Apositiveroleofthegovernmentislongoverdue,to---v-• 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