Unit+2+Sports+and+Fitness+Period+6+Writing+Workshop-高一英语北师版（2019）必修第一册

北师大版必修一Unit2Period6WritingWorkshopATrueStory教学目

Lead-inYouaregoingtowriteatruestorytosharewiththeclass.Discussthequestionswithyourpartner·Whoisyourstoryabout?·Whydoyouwanttowritethisstory?12Togettheinformationaboutthestory“TheFinalSprint”andanalyseitsstructureandlanguageTowriteastoryyouknowaboutsport目标一:Togettheinformationaboutthestory“TheFinalSprint”andanalyseitsstructureandlanguageActivity1:LookthroughP40,findoutthenewwordsandphrase(s)inthisperiod.Thenreadtogetherasawhole.sight,cyclist,overtake,amazed,sportsmanship,bronze,medal,response,gesture,takeadvantageofsth.Activity2:Readthestoryandputthepicturesintherightorder.puncture123Activity3:Readthestory“TheFinalSprint”.Answerthequestions.1.Whowerethemaincharacters?2.Whereandwhendidithappen?3.Howdidthestorydevelop?4.Whatwastheresult?1.IsmaelEstebanandAgustinNavarro.2.TheSantaBarbaraXVGrandPrixcyclo-crossraceinSpain,300metresfromthefinishingline.3.4.EstebanwonthebronzemedalandtriedtogivehismedaltoNavarro.ButNavarrorefused.Estebanwasinthirdplacewithonly300metrestothefinishingline.Estebangotapuncture,threwhisbikeoverhisshoulderandracedtowardsthefinishingline.Navarrocaughtupwithhim.NavarrosloweddownandletEstebanrunaheadofhim.climaxtimeorderActivity4:Readthestoryagain.Takenotesinthefirstcolumn.TheFinalSprintMystorysettingthefinalsprintoftheSantaBarbaraXVGrandPrixcyclo-crossraceinSpain

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IsmaelEsteban,AgustinNavarroEsteban’sbikegotapuncture.Estebanthrewhisbikeoverhisshouldersandracedtowardsthefinishingline.Climax

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NavarrosloweddownandletEstebanrunaheadofhim.ThetwocyclistsreachedthefinishinglinewithEstebanaheadonfoot,Navarrojustbehindhim.NavarroletEstebanfinishinthirdplace,whilehecamefourth.Activity5:Analysethesentencesandwrite2~3sentences.1.ItwasthefinalsprintoftheSantaBarbaraXVGrandPrixcyclo-crossraceinSpain.2.Justafewsecondslater,fourth-placedNavarrocaughtupwithhim.3.Navarrolet

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runaheadofhim.AttributeAdverbial(time)VerbObjectObjectComplementAttributeAdverbial(time,place,way,reason...)Verb+Object+ObjectComplementProvidemoredetailsMysentences:Itwasthefinalpartofthe2016WorldTriathlonSeriesinMexico.Alistairpushedhimselftowardsthefinishinglineintheburningheat,butashecameroundthecorner,hesawhisbrotherabouttofallontothetrack.AlistairrantowardsJonny,caughthimandstartedpullinghimtowardsthefinishline.目标二：TowriteastoryyouknowaboutsportActivity1:OutliningComplete“MyStory”column.Mystorysetting

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Afinalpartofthe2016WorldTriathlonSeries(铁人三项)inMexico.Jonny,inlead,withhisbrotherAlistairinthethirdplace.Brownleebrothers:AlistairandJonny.Aroundthecorner,AlistairsawJonnywasabouttofall.Shouldhehelphisbrotherorwinalone?AlistairpushedJonny,whichputJonnythesecondplace.Activity2:DraftingUseyouroutlineandtheWritingHelptowriteyourfirstdraft.

WritingaTrueStoryIt’simportantto:◎introducethesettingandcharacters;◎describethedetailsofthestory;◎writethestoryintimeorder;◎includeacommentonthestory.WritingHelpActivity3:EditingEdityourstoryinpairs.Thensharewhatyouhavewritteninclass.◎Doesthewriterintroducethesettingandcharacter(s)atthebeginningofthestory?◎Doesthewriterdescribethedetailsofthestory?◎Doesthewriterwritethestoryintimeorder?◎Doesthewriterincludeacommentofthestory?→Markanyspelling,punctuationorgrammarerrors.→Markanyunclearexpressions.Givesuggestionsifyoucan.→Underlinetheexpressionsyoulike.SampleWriting:Itwasthefinalpartofthe2016WorldTriathlonSeriesinMexico.Withjust700metrestogo,AlistairBrownleewasinthirdplaceandhisyoungerbrother,Jonny,wasinthelead.Alistairpushedhimselftowardsthefinishinglineintheburningheat,butashecameroundthecorner,hesawhisbrotherabouttofallontothetrack.Alistairhadtochoose—brotherlylove,orachancetowintherace?ForAlistair,thechoicewasclear.Hisbrotherwasintrouble.Hehadtohelp.AlistairrantowardsJonny,caughthimandstartedpullinghimtowardsthefinishline.Alistairthenpushedhisbrotherovertheline.ThemoveputJonnyinsecondplaceandAlistairhimselfinthird.Itwasanunexpecteden