2024届高考英语二轮专题复习与测试专题五应用文写作第三课写作模板与实战展示Ⅲ

第三课写作模板与实战展示（Ⅲ）（建议信、申请信、告知信、求助信与询问信）（一）万能内化模板1.建议信2.申请信Dear（对象），Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto（需要提建议的具体事项），andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion，youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions：（建议的具体内容）.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful，andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouforfurtherdetails.（祝愿）.Yourssincerely，LiHuaDearSirorMadam，I'm（简单的自我介绍）.I'mwritingtoapplyfortheposition（申请的具体职位）.Ireallywanttoobtainthispreciousopportunitybecause（说明为什么想得到这次宝贵的机会）.Ｗ.Besides，（分层次说明自己的优势）.IamsurethatIcanperfectlyliveuptoyourexpectations.Iwillbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeakindconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours，LiHua3.告知信4.求助信5.询问信Dear（对象），Gladthatyou'veheardofthegoodnewsaboutthecoming（告知的具体内容）.I'mwritingtoinformyouofthedetails.Asscheduled，the（活动或项目）willtakeplaceat（地点）on（时间）.Youareexpectedto（具体要求或期望）.Besides，attentionsshouldbepaidto（进一步的要求或期望）.Hopefullyyouwillbewellpreparedforitandenjoyyourself/haveagoodtime.Ifyouhaveanyfurtherquestions，pleasedon'thesitatetoaskme.Yours，LiHuaDear（对象），Iamwritingtoformallyrequestto（求助的内容）.Thereasonisthat（给出原因）.I，soI（给出细节）.Iwouldalsoliketorequest（提出进一步的求助）.IamsorryforanyinconvenienceIhavecaused.Thankyouforyourattentiontotheserequests.Iamlookingforwardtoafavourablereply.Yourssincerely，LiHuaDear（对象），I'mthepresidentoftheStudents'Unionofourschool.Delightedthatyourgroupwillcomeforavisit，I'dliketo（询问的内容）.Tobeginwith，Iwouldappreciateitifyoucould（告知行程），inwhichcasewecouldgetpreparedforitaccordingly.What'smore，wewouldliketo（进一步询问具体的事情）.Lastbutnotleast，（我还想知道您是否有其他特殊要求）.Yourearlyreplytotheletterwillbehighlyappreciated.Yours，LiHua（二）四步解题示范[典例]你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条路线可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给出一些建议。请你给他回一封信，内容包括：1.你建议的路线；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。DearJim，I'mpleasedtohearthatyouwanttoaskformysuggestionson________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua[写作示范]第一步：三审定题，列纲谋篇定题谋篇体裁建议信第一段建议的路线人称以第一、第二人称为主第二段给出你的理由时态一般现在时第三段表达祝愿第二步：斟词酌句，锁住要点单词route，civilization，suggest/recommend，scenery，sure/convinced，surprising/amazing短语haveabetterunderstandingof，beeagertodo，enjoyoneself，inconclusion句型名词性从句，非限制性定语从句，非谓语动词（短语）第三步：词句升级，升华助篇词汇提升方法：普通→高级示例：sure→suggest→surprising→knowwellabout→haveagoodtime→句子整合方法：简单→复杂，主动→被动示例：1.Asweknow，YangtzeRiver，themotherriverofChinesecivilization，isthelongestriverinChinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworld.（用主语从句，notonly...butalso...句型改写）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Istronglyadviseyoutochoosethisone.Fromit，youcanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.（用词汇升级＋定语从句改写）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：convincedrecommendamazinghaveabetterunderstandingofenjoyoneself1.WhatiswellknowntousisthatYangtzeRiverisnotonlythelongestriverinChinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworldbutalsothemotherriverofChinesecivilization.2.Istronglyrecommendthatyouchoose“TriptotheYangtzeRiver”，fromwhichyoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.第四步：衔接润色，完美成篇DearJim，I'mpleasedtohearthatyouwanttoaskformysuggestionson________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua【参考答案】DearJim，I'mpleasedtohearthatyouwanttoaskformysuggestionsonhowtochooseabetteronefromthetworoutes“TriptotheYangtzeRiver”and“TriptoMountTai”.Herearemyopinions.WhatiswellknowntousisthatYangtzeRiverisnotonlythelongestriverinChinaandthethirdlongestriverintheworldbutalsothemotherriverofChinesecivilization.Therefore，Istronglyrecommendthatyouchoose“TriptotheYangtzeRiver”，fromwhichyoucanhaveabetterunderstandingofChinaandChinesehistory.Inaddition，thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing.Thus，I'msureyouareeagertocomeheretomakeasecondtrip.Inconclusion，IamconvincedthatthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice.Ihopeyouwillenjoyyourself！Yours，LiHuaWriting1假定你是李华，暑假将要去伦敦学习，请给你在当地的笔友Mary写一封邮件，请她帮你找一间合适的公寓居住。内容包括：1.期望的住宿条件；2.房租预算；3.租用时间。注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】DearMary，IamgoingtostudyinLondonthissummervacation.Excitingnews，isn'tit？ButI'mstillworryingabouttheaccommodation.SoI'mwritingtoseeifyoucouldhelpmelookforanapartment.IwillstudyinLondonforabouttwomonths，sotheideallocationisaroundmyuniversity.IfIremembercorrectly，youlivenearthatarea，right？Ipreferaone­bedroomapartmentwithbathroom，laundry，kitchen，andWi­Fi.Mybudgetfortherentis￡350amonth.MystudywilllastfromJuly1sttoAugust31st，sotheapartmentshouldbeavailableduringthesetwomonths.ManythanksforyourhelpandI'mlookingforwardtoourreunion.Yours，LiHuaWriting2假定你是李华，正在ColumbiaUniversity求学，想利用暑假时间在肯德基（KFC）当一名服务生。请你给店长Steven写一封申请信，内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.申请的理由；3.联系方式。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】DearSteven，IamLiHua，astudentfromColumbiaUniversity.IamwritingtoapplytobeawaiterinyourKFCtoearnsomepocketmoneyduringthissummervacation.Iamoutgoingandcangetalongwellwithmycolleaguesandcustomers.Iworkedinarestaurantlastsummerandearnedmuchrelatedexperience.Aboveall，Iamaquicklearner，whichcanenablemetoadapttomyjobassoonaspossible.Iwillhighlyappreciateitifmyapplicationistakenintoaccount.Pleasecontactmeby123456@.Yoursfaithfully，LiHuaWriting3假定你是李华，正在新西兰读书。你的好友Fred将负责学校文化节期间中国传统文化的演出策划。他想听听你的建议，请给他回封邮件，内容包括：1.表示赞赏；2.关于演出内容的建议；3.约定时间进一步讨论。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】DearFred，GladtohearthatyouareresponsiblefortheperformanceofChinesetraditionalcultureduringourSchoolCultureFestival.Herearemysuggestions.Chineseshadowplayshouldbeincludedintheperformancebecauseitissomagic.Besides，theshowofHanfuisagoodchoicebecausemoreandmorepeoplehaveshowninterestinit.Toensuretheperformancegoeswell，you'dbetterchooseperformersinadvanceandhavesomepractice.Ifnecessary，Icanhaveadetaileddiscussionwithyouatyourconvenience.I'mlookingforwardtotheperformance.Yours，LiHuaWriting4假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack打算暑假期间来中国体验生活，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1.表示欢迎；2.推荐内容；3.你的祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJack，KnowingthatyouarecomingtoChinaforthesummervacation，__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________