Dteqwg新东方考研英语FLASH课堂作文笔记

新东方考研英语FLASH课堂作文笔记

新东方考研英语FLASH课堂作文笔记

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2001年英语平均分52.79分。作文平均11分作文在40-70分之间

写作课的学习方法：

Dt八字方针：背诵一一杰出词汇；杰出句型；文章里杰出的句子；万能的框架;

经典范文

eqwg默写、互译、描红

新东方一种文章只用一种写法

三个时期：牢记、效仿、持之以恒

考研英

一、考生写作的逆境及其计策

语1、滔滔不绝意识流

FLAS中文：情感分段；观点由读者领会

英文：逻辑分段；观点由作者交待

H课堂''猴子原那么"：themonkeyprinciple——提纲原那么，注重命题

作文笔的提纲

量化：200个字，12—15句话

记2、无话可说真难受

91—96年：社会性的问题联系生活实际

3、真情显露没必要只需要''相关"

无名考作文是制造一个机会展现书面表达英语的能力，应该把构思的时刻

降低到最低限度

4、英语表达憋得慌

达到12分：安全第一：句子结构，语法简单原那么：词汇

达到17分以上：词汇多变：多使用同义词、近义词

句子结构多变：一定要有复杂的句子结构

树干：谓语部分、核心部分

耀眼的错误：1主谓一致；2动词时态；3定冠词和不定冠词

4名词单复数；5介词、副词的搭配；6拼写错误

树枝：状语从局、定语从局、非谓语从局等

绿叶：各种修饰对每一个句子，从写作的角度，从这三个层次上用心体会每

一个句子

5、处于被动危害大：写作应是主动的，幸免不利于自己的词和句

从错误中提高自己。写2001年作文题

二、透视91年到2001年真题,提炼重点题型，归纳总结经典段落

1、历届真题

从91年开始一一第一次考研作文命题，差不多上和托福作文命题差不多

''Wheretolive,inthecityorthecountry?”

title开头有一句话：Somepeoplethinkthatpeoplelivinginthecountry

enjoymoreadvantagesthanthosewholiveinthecity.

outline

1.convenoencesofthecity

2.attractionsofthecountry

3.disadvantagesofboth

4.mypreference

PrivateCar

Nowadays,anyChinesecanenjoytheluxuryofowningaprivatecarif

hecanaffordit.

Outline：

1.advantagesofowningaprivatecar

2.disadvantagesofowningaprivatecar

3.shoulditbenecessarytoenlargetheprivatecarmarket?Whyorwhy

not?

假如认为不应该进展小汽车，最后一段就写不应该进展小汽车的几个理由。

假如最后一段表示支持，调整结构：

第1段写小汽车的好处

第2段写小汽车的坏处

第3段写什么缘故要进展小汽车

92年----标题

Forabetterunderstandingbetweenparentandchild

1.Presentsituation:lackofcommunicationbetweenparentandchild

2.possiblereasons:adifferentlikesanddislikes

b.misunderstanding

c.others

3.suggestions:a.forparentsb.forchildren

第二段不管是单数依旧复数，都应该写几个理由

第三段不管是单数依旧复数，至少要写到两点

详细记录92年提纲一一经典题型之一

93年----AdvertisementonTV

1.Presentstate2.Reasons3.Mycomments

94年----Onmakingfriends

1.theneedforfriendshipi什么缘故要交朋友）

2.truefriendship（说明性段落--卜大经典段落之一）-----参看97年1月

四、六级考试写掉这三个段落《大学英语考试高分作文》

3.myprincipleinmakingfriends

95年----Theprojecthope

1.presentsituation2.necessityoftheproject3.mysuggestion

96年（不成功）----Goodhealth

1.importanceofgoodhealth2.waystokeepfit3.myownpractice

97年依旧不成功

1.interpretthepictures

2.predictthetendencyoftobaccoconsumptionandgiveyourreasons

98年图画作文

一只母鸡拿着一张纸，上面写着''如此承诺〃一一本母鸡承诺下的鸡蛋有蛋清、

蛋黄、蛋壳……，旁边有一首打油诗

1.writeoutthemessageconveyedbythecartoon

2.giveyourcomments

99年

Directions:

1.youressayshouldcoverthesethreepoints:

2.possiblereasonfortheeffect

3.yoursuggestionforwildlifeprotection

essay:论文----introduction,body,conclusion

历史留给我们的是

1、几个经典段落2、outline（思路）

图画作文比较公平客观

92年是第一个经典题型，99年是第二个经典题型

2000年是第3大经典题型

1.Describethepicture（描述图表--卜大经典段落之一）

2.Deducethepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures（画家的意图---十

大经典段落之一）

3.Suggestyourcountermeasures

98年命题不成功一一没有想到现实生活中人是如何观赏漫画的

2000年1、看画2、画家想干嘛3＞看了画以后会要采取什么行动

Abriefhistoryofworldcommercialfishing

漫画不需要动专门多脑筋看漫画时不需要想太多

2000年

Asisshowninthepictures,wecanseeclearlythatwiththeincrease

ofcommercialfishing,thenumberoffishessharply/dramatical1y

decreased.Inonepicture,therewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyone

fishing-boatin1900.Onthecontrary,in1995therewasonlyonefish,

with（but的重心在后面，with的重心在前面）manyfishing-boats.

Thepurposeofthispictureistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobe

paidtothedecreased.Ifweletthissituationcontinue/goasitis,

wewon'tknowwherefishisinthefuture.Bythattime,ourenvironment

willsufferagreatdestruction.

Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakeeffectivemeasures.Forone

thing,weshouldappealtoourauthoritiestomakestrictlawstocontrol

commercialfishing.Foranother,weshouldenhancetheawarenessof

peoplethattheoceanresourcesareveryvitaltous.Onlyinthisway

canweprotectouroceanresources.AlsoIbelievethatwehumanscan

overcomethisdifficulty,andwewillhaveabrightfuture.

1、本文185个词2、12个句子第1段3句话，53个单词第2段

4句话，60个单词

第3段5句话，72个单词

提纲第一点里面要你干什么你就干什么

1«代表一种方向（问题有，又有解决问题的方案，构成整体的漫画）

Today,theearth'sdesertsarespreadingandgettinglargerand

desertificationisaseriousproblemfacingtheworld.Themajorreason

forthisisirresponsiblecuttingdownoftrees.Asisshowninthefirst

cartoon,whenpeoplecutdowntreesdesertforcesonandbecomes

irrepressible.第一段就在分析缘故

作文在判卷的时候注重两个方面：语言、内容

1、句子的主语和谓语是否一致2、时态3、名次的单复数

4、定冠词和不定冠词5、搭配6、单词的拼写

套用句型时要对句型部分句法结构功能专门清晰

词汇两个方面：1词汇面的宽度2词汇的难度

语法的两个原那么：1语法的精确性2语法的复杂性

thecaption=thewordsread漫画中的说明文字

具体的东西抽象化，抽象的东西具体化。

Asisshowninthepictures,wecanseeclearlytherelationshipbetween

peopleandthedeserts.Inthefirstpicture,peoplearefleeingfrom

greedysandhillsbecausetheyhavecutdownallthetrees.Thecaption

reads:Asthesandadvantages,weretreatinthesecondpicture,the

peoplehavereturnedcarryingtools,waterandyoungtreestoplantthe

landagain.Thecaptionreads:Asweadvance,thesandretreats.描述

图片

2001年（经典题型）

1场景2提纲3图画

第1段描述图画、画家意图

第2段具体例证

第3段具体做法

2001年大纲样题

Widespreadtobaccoconsumptionhasledtograveconsequences,yetthe

tobaccocompaniesstillclaimthattheymaleavaluablecontributionto

theworldeconomy.Thereisadiscussioninanewspaperontheabovetwo

viewpoints.

Writeanessaytothenewspaper

1）criticizing（评论）theirviewand

2）justifyyourstand.

Inyouressay,makefulluseoftheinformationprovidedinthepictures

printedbelow.Youshouldwriteabout200wordsonanswersheet2.

（picture:theyear1997）

原先的经典图表题：提纲+图表

1、描述图片

2、几个可能的理由

3、建议措施

经典题型之五：

现在的图表题：场景+提纲+图表

十大经典段落

1现状2说明性段落3描述性段落（图表图画）开头段落

4缘故列举（alistofreason）-----主体段落

5举例（2001年考研题，参看97年1月四六级考题）

6意图分析7利和弊（自己总结）一一中间段落

8结尾（自己总结）9建议措施10推测以后

学术性英语的功能段落不是survival而是academic

范文三

在写一些文章时，不可幸免的会有一些核心概念。幸免重复。

人口增长、野生动物、灭绝、构成危险

突出写作的语言意识。

Thetwocharts....

increaseintheU.S.populationhasbeenaccompanied...

corresponding

decline

Fartoomany太多的

specieshavebeenlostalready被动语态----说明立场

Thisposesadangerto被...构成危险

Asthehumanpopulationexpands,moreandmorewildanimalsarehunted

forfood...

orbecause...

theyarethoughtto...

presentathreatto...

butstudiesshowthatoneoftheprimarycauses...

disappearance

thismakesuswonder...

otherlifeforms与其他生命方式

inharmony和谐相处

sharethisplanet共享那个星球

Inmyopinion,

itisimperativeto迫切的

Inmyopinion,itisimperativetotakesteptoreversethedisturbing

trendillustratedinthecharts.Onemeasurewouldbetoforbidthe

buildingofcitiesinareaswherewildlifeisthreatenedwithextinction.

But,moreimportantly,manmustlearntostoppollutingtheenvironment,

orhehimselfwillbecomeextinct,

reverse(a.)相反的(v.)逆转过来

disturbing令人困惑的

illustratedinthecharts

Onemeasurewouldbeto...

But,moreimportantly,

forbid

extinction

stoppollutingtheenvironment

or表示否那么

1、人口增长了几次？

...theincreaseintheU.S.population

Asthehumanpopulationexpands...

…populationgrowth...

2、野生动物。

...wildlifespecies...

...species...

...wildanimals...

...wildlife...

...otherlifeforms...

...wildlife....

3、野生动物的消亡、灭绝

…havebeenlostalready...

...disappearanceofwildlife...

…extinction.

...becomeextinct.

4、构成危险。

...posesadangerto...

…presentathreadto...

...isthreatenedwith...

范文-1■•一

Statisticsinpeople'sDailyExpensesinXi'an

19951996199719981999

Food66%61%48%41%36%

Clothing9%10%12%15%18%

Recreation4%5%8%9%11%

Others21%24%32%35%35%

Total100%100%100%100%100%

经典的十大段落是排列组合，产生新的段落的。

好的东西，最后一段可能要推测。

现状一一缘故一一推测以后（好的东西）

——建议、措施（不行的东西）

语言句式专门清晰。

Whatisshowninthetableaboveindicatesthatdramaticchangeshave

takenplacein...

...from...to.

Theexpensesonfoodhavedeclinedby30%whilethoseonclothingand

recreationhaveincreasedrespectivelyby9%and7%.Thestatisticsof

riseandfallseemtoexistinisolationbutcloselyrelatedtoone

another.

...declinedby...

...while...（表对比）

…increasedrespectivelyby...

Thestatisticsofriseandfallseemtoexistinisolationbutclosely

relatedtooneanother.

Therearetwofactorsaccountingfor

...resultingfrom...由于...而产生的,形成的resultingin表结果

..playsanimportantpartin...

Anotheroneis...

Asaresultofsuchashift...

…increasesyearafteryear.

Formtheanalysesmadeabove,wemaycometoconclusionthat...

...thetendencyindicatedinthetablewillcontinueinthebetter

direction.

经典图表作文

一、描述图表：注意粗线条的描述，写出趋势、结论性的东西

二、分析背后的缘故：什么缘故是图表上的这种趋势。且没讲一点应该拓展一

下。这三点是透过现象看本质

三、建议、措施

图表作文的变体（要求对图画进行描述）

1、信息

2、对信息的看法必须具体的描述

第一段依旧是粗线条的描述

第二段进行深入细致的描述信息*图表语言*

第三段发表个人看法

写法：1、分析背后缘故。

2、对图表的进展趋势，发表个人看法。

3、一样性的评论（缘故、趋势）

情形+提纲+图表

Themajorityofpeoplewouldagreethat...

bypayingtaxestothegovernmentandemployinghundredsofworks.

当它的情形部分是两个观点，而图表本身又暗示了一个观点，在第一段要点击

对方的观点。然而绝对不展开。

Personally,Ibelievethat...

...threatenstodomoreharmthangood

Firstly,

isresponsiblefor...是造成...的缘故

Accordingtothesurvey(/diagram),

accountfor占几分之几

andamongthem

Thefact...alsosuggeststhat...

isreducedfrom...to...

havecometorealize...

thenegativeeffectsofsmoking

Asisindicatedinthepicture(Accordingtothesurvey)

substantiallyexceeds大大超过thegainintheindustry

*观点全部来自于数据*

表层结构写出来，摸索就生成观点。

数据就变成论证。

专门要求：图表语言

Inconclusion

thenotionof...isnotjustifiable那个观点是站不住脚的

Itishightimethat正是...的时候

范文二十五：

Directions:

A.Writeanessaydiscussingthetwooppositeopinionsgivenbelow,give

bothsomereasons,andmakeyourcommentsorsuggestions.

Therearetwomainopinionsconcerningthedevelopmentofprivatecars

inChina:Onemaintainsthattheirfreedevelopmentshouldbeencouraged,

whiletheotherarguesthatitmustbesternlyrestricted.

Shouldthedevelopmentofprivatecarsbeencouragedorrestrictedin

China?

Firstofall,theprivatecarisasymboloffreedom....However,too

manyprivatecarscanleadtotrafficjams,

ItseemstomethatChina,atitspresentstageofdevelopment,should

restrictthenumberofprivatescars.…

范文二十五

HowToImproveOrReformOurCurrentCollegeEntranceExaminationSystem.

看成三点：1、现状2、缘故3、建议、措施

范文二十六

图表作文的变体

情形+提纲+图表

应用文：即书信

写作语言

原那么：1、将句型对比中文翻译，是否能够看明白

2、看明白后是否明白句法功能

学习方法：有时刻看两三页

不管用任何一种句型，同一类型的句子不需要把握太多；要选择最有把

握、最能消化的。

重视语言的表达（实质性的涨分数）

Thereisagrowingconcernoverthestudentswhodon'tputtoomuch

emphasisonstudy.Somestudentsalwaysidleawaytheirtime,playing

cards,drinking,gambling.Theseproblemsarereallyserious.Takinginto

accountallthesefactors,wecansafelycometotheconclusionthatthe

studentswillwastemoretimeiftheydon'tmakegooduseofit.

Thereisagrowingconcernover....

puttoomuchemphasison...

idleawaytheirtime...

Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wecansafelycometothe

conclusionthat....

Asastudent,busyasIamwithmystudy,Ialsodomanyinterestingthings

suchasreadingnovels,writingarticlesatthetwo-dayweekend.Al1work

noplaymakesJackadullboy.It'sreallytrue!

...busyasIamwithmystudy...

AllworknoplaymakesJackadullboy.

这些词句就向沙漠中的金子闪闪发光，不能不是阅卷人感到惊喜。

实际上，所谓的金子无非是语言的variety,即用词的变化，用句的变化,

就语言而论不存在那个词好，那个词不行，那个句子好，那个句子不行的说法。

所谓语言漂亮是指语言的变化。

词汇：1、词汇的宽度；2、词汇的难度

基础差的同学得分：词汇的宽度能够贯彻写作意识。

第一档：没有词汇概念

第二档：有意识的换掉重复的词

第三档：挑战词汇的难度

句子结构：1、句子结构的精确性；2、句子结构的复杂性a.句型的开端多变

化b.包含从句

第一档：没有语法概念

第二档：句子结构没有什么错误

第三档：努力做复杂句子结构

1、词的变化

如要表示''使"不要仅靠make;

a)Thissocietystillmakeswomenunabletoenjoyequalrights.

b)Womenarestilldeniedequalrights.

a)Theincidentmademerecalloneofmypastexperiences.

b)Theincidentremainedmeofoneofmypastexperiences.

如要表达''越来越"，不要只使用moreandmore：

a)MoreandmorestudentsfindlearningEnglishhasbecomemoreandmore

difficult.

b)Studentsingrowingnumbersfindlearninghasbecomeincreasingly

difficult.

a)Moreandmoreteenagerssmokecigarettesinrecentyears.

b)Teenagesmokingisontheriseinrecentyears.

a)Moreandmoreteachersaredemandedwiththedevelopmentofeconomy.

b)Thereisanincreasingdemandforteacherswiththedevelopmentof

economy.

如要表达''大多数〃。不要一味用most：

a)Moststudenttakeapart-timejobafterclass.

b)Thevastmajorityofstudentstakeapart-timejobafterclass.

a)Mostpeopletakepartinsportsofdifferentkinds.

b)Theconsiderableproportionofpeopletakepartinsportsofdifferent

kinds.

a)Mostcollegestudentstakeanegativeattitudetowardssmoking.

b)Thelargepercentageofcollegepopulationtakeanegativeattitude

towardssmoking.

如要用''不仅...而且....〃不要只用notonly...butalso：

a)Thefactorsforariseinteenagesmokingisnotonlysocialbutalso

psychological.

b)Thefactorsforariseinteenagesmokingispsychologicalaswellas

social.

a)Takingapart-timejobcannotearnalittlemoney,butalsohavean

opportunitytocontactwithsociety.

b)Takingapart-timejobmeansalittlemoneyyoucanearn.Italsomeans

anopportunitytocontactwithsociety.

a)Oldpeoplegotoparknotonlytodoexercisebutalsotomakefriends.

b)Oldpeoplegotoparkasmuchforcompanionshipasforexercise.

aplusoraminus利于弊strengthensandweakness

drawback缺点

TV:ABlessingoracurse一篇作文的主体段如下

Asisoftenpointedout,televisionkeepsonebetterinformedaboutthe

currentevents,allowonetofollowthelatestdevelopmentsinpolitics

andscience,andoffersendlessseriesofprogrammerswhichareboth

instructiveandscience,andoffersendlessseriesofprogrammerswhich

arebothinstructiveandstimulating.Themostdistantcountries,the

strangestcustomsandattractivescenesofnaturearebroughtrightinto

one'sroom.Yethereagain,thereisdanger.ThemainproblemwithTV

hasbeenitsnegativeeffectonpeopleingeneral.Forexample,rubbishy

commercialsandharmfulprogramscontributingtotheriseinviolence

andcrimeinthestreets.

好学生：brilliantstudents,topstudents,outstandingboyandgirls,

studentsofhighability

makeefforts二make(exert/devote/direct)

untiring(painstaking/concerted/consistent/tremendous

/persistent/sustained)efforts

WatchingtoomuchTVisharmfultooureyesight二HeavyexposuretoTVwill

produceharmfuleffectoneyesight.

TheprogressIhavemadesurpriseme.

Thisleadsmetotheconclusionthatmoneydoesn,tmeaneverything.

2、句型的变化

ThecareerIpursue

Avarietyofreasonshaveledmetochoosethisoccupationoverother

morelucrativeones.First,teachingislearning.Tomakemylectures

moreinteresting,Ihavetoreadingmorebooks,explorenewknowledge

andgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld-theverythingIliketo

doinmylife.Second,teachingmeansfreedom.Asateacher,Icanfreely

expressmyopinionsandexplaintheminmyownwaysincenobodywill

interferewithme.Finally,Iliketeachingbecauseitoffersacertain

peaceofmind.Nomorerushingtocatchingamorningbus,nomoreanxiety

topleaseaboss,andnomoreworriesaboutbeinglaidoffbecauseyou

aregettingold.

文中有4个词的短句First,teachingislearning.也有27个词的长句Tomake

mylecturesmoreinteresting,Ihavetoreadmorebooks,explorenew

knowledgeandgainabetterunderstandingoftheworld一theverything

Iliketodoinmylife.有简单句，也有复杂句Asateacher,Icanfreely

expressmyopinionsandexplaintheminmyownwaysincenobodywi11

interferewithme;还有同位语句，断裂句，排比句，比较句等，因而文章读起

来节奏感强。所谓句子变化，要紧是指句子的开头要有变化，句子的结构要有

变化，句子的长度要有变化。不要连续使用几个简单句，要学会使用复杂句。

所谓句子变化，要紧是指句子开头要有变化，句子结构要有变化，句子的长度

要有变化。

1、不要连续使用几个简单句，要学会使用复杂句

a)Teenagersarepressuredbyschoolwork.Theyarealsoencouragedby

theirpeers.Undersuchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.But

sometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.

b)Pressuredbyschoolworkandencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersoften

resorttosmoking,thoughttheyfeelalittleguiltysometimes.

Arecentstudyreportsthatcollegestudentsnowareprimaryinterested

ingradesandeconomicsuccess,thattheyareexpectedtocheatonexams

morefrequentlythanthosewhograduated10yearsago,andthattheyare

moreconcernedwiththeirownpersonalfuturethanwithproblemsof

society.

2、不要总是以有生命的名词和人称代词开头

a)ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.

b)Itiswidely(commonly)thought/believed/held/accepted)thatbirth

controlisquitenecessaryinChina.

a)Moreandmorepeopleagree(realize/areaware)thatwomenshouldenjoy

fullequalitywithmen.

b)Thereisagrowingagreement(realization/awareness)thatwomenshould

enjoyfullequalitywithmen.

a)ManyChinesepeoplehavegonetotheU.S.inthepast15years,

b)Thepast15yearshavebroughtmanyChinesepeopletotheU.S..

a)Wealmostforgetthisevent.

b)thiseventisnowalmostfadingfromourmemory.

a)Studentsshouldcertainlymakecontinuousefforts.

b)Continuouseffortsonthepartofstudentsarecertainlyrequired,

onthepartof=of

a)Weeasilydrewtheconclusionthroughtheinvestigation.

b)Theinvestigationeasilyledustotheconclusion.

3、不要千篇一律的使用主动态

a)Wemaythinkmoreoftheelderlywholiveapartfromtheirchildren.

b)Morethoughtsmaybegiventotheelderlywholiveapartfromtheir

children.

4、不要总是用if\because\then,要注意使用书面英语。

a)Ifyoucomparebicycleswithcarscarefully,youwillfindbicycles

aresuperiortocars.

b)Carefulcomparisonofbicycleswithcarswillshowthesuperiorityof

theformeroverthelatter.

a)Ifweonlyapplybookknowledge,wewillnotgetgoodresults.

b)Theapplicationofbookknowledgealonewon,tbringyougoodresults.

a)Ifwecanbetterunderstandthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowth,

wewillhaveacorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.

b)Abetterunderstandingofthegreaterpressureofpopulationgrowth

isessentialtoacorrectattitudetowardsfamilyplanning.

a)Whenawomanseesthatsheisgoingtobelaidoff,shebeginstoworry

alldayandnight.

b)Themereprospectoflay-offwouldsetawomantoworryalldayand

night.

5、不要对动词过分依靠，要学会用名词结构来表达意思。

a)Thestyleoflivinghasbecomemoreandmorepopularandacceptedby

moreandmoreandmoreyoungpeople.

b)Thestyleoflivinggasfounditsgrowingpopularityandacceptance

amongyoungpeople.

a)Itistimeforustoreviseeducationalsystemandthenprovideitto

oursociety.

b)Itistimeforustoprovideoursocietyarevisededucationalsystem.

a)IfwearewatchingtoomuchTV,ourreadingabilitywillbeseriously

affected.

b)HeavyexposuretoTVwillexertannegativeeffectonoutreading

ability.

a)Ifwedon,trecognizetheseriousproblemofgrowingpopulation,we

willmakeabigmistake.

b)Failuretorecognizetheseriousnessofgrowingpopulationwilllead

toabigmistake.

6、不要总是用确信句来表达，要学会用否定句来表达确信的意思。

a)Everyyoungboyandgirlwantstoearnalittlemoneytohelpcover

highercollegecost.

b)Thereishardlyayoungboyandgirlwhodoesn,twanttoearnalittle

moneytohelpcoverhighercollegecost.

a)Wheneveryoupickupanewspaper,youwillalwaysfindadvertisements,

b)Itisimpossibletopickupanewspaperwithoutfindingadvertisements.

a)Gatheringaroundandlisteningtomotherorfatherreadagoodstory

isthebestpastimestobringafamilyclosertogether.

b)Fewpastimesbringafamilyclosertogetherthangatheringaroundand

listeningtomotherorfatherreadagoodstory.

a)Foodisthemostbasicissuetoindividualandnationalsurvival.

b)Noissueisasbasictoindividualandnationalsurvivalasfood.

7、恰当使用排比、平行句

a)Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen.Ithinkwomenshouldespecially

havetherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequalterms.Theyshould

getthesamepayasmenforthesamejob.Theyshouldalsohaveequal

opportunitiesforpromotion.

b)Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen,especiallytherighttocompete

withmenforjobsonequalterms,therighttogetthesamepayasmen

forthesamejob,andtherighttoequalopportunitiesforpromotion.

a)Thenationwidecontroversyoverthecurrentreformswilltestthe

courageofourpeople.Thoughthecontroversywecanalsoseethe

determinationofourgovernment.

b)Thenationwidecontroversyoverthecurrentreformswilltestthe

courageofourpeopleandthedeterminationofourgovernment.

范文：

PerhapsthemostinterestingpersonIhaveevermetisan(interesting)

Italianprofessorofphilosophywhoteaches(courses)attheUniversity

ofPisa(inItaly).AlthoughIlastmetthismaneightyearsago,Ihave

notforgotten(overthelongyears)hisspecialqualities.

Firstofall,Iwasimpressedfromthebeginningbyhiscompletedevotion

toteaching(hisstudents).Becausehislectureswerealways

well-preparedand(invariably)clearlydelivered,(agreatmany)

studentsalwaysswarmedintohisclassroom,(fillingtheclassroomto

capacity).His(many)followersalsoappreciatedthefactthathe

(thoroughly)believedinwhathetaught(tostudents)andthathewas

always(intellectually)stimulating(tohear).Furthermorehecouldbe

countedonineveryclasssessiontoexplainhisideasinanimaginative

way,introducingsuch(various)aidstostudentunderstandingasoi1

paintings,phonographrecords,piecesofsculpture,andguestlecturers

(whowereinvitedtospeaktotheclass).Onceheevensangasongin

class(beforethestudentseyes)inordertoillustratea

(philosophical)point.

Second,Iadmiredthefactthathewouldconferwithstudents(atalmost

anytime)outsideoftheclassroomortalkwiththemonthetelephone.

Drinkingcoffeeinthesnackbar(afterhavingtaughtaclass),hewould

easilymakefriendswithstudents(withgreatease).Sometimeshewould

(issuea)challenge(to)astudenttojoinwithhiminagameofchess.

Atothertimes,hewouldquitereadilyjoingroups(ofstudents)to

discusssubjectsranging(broadly)fromastronomytoscubadiving.Many

youngpeoplevisitedhim(atonetimeoranother)inhisofficefor

academicadvice;otherscametohishomeforthe(purposeof)social

evenings.

Finally,Iwas(favorably)impressedandattractedbyhislivelywit.

Hebelievesthatnoclasshourisasuccessunless(duringit),the

studentsandtheprofessor(haveareasontojointogetherto)share

severalchucklesandatleastoneloudlaugh.Throughhis(inimitable

andcaptivating)senseofhumor,hemadelearning(muchmore)lasting.

Ifitistrue,(asitseemstobe),thatlifemakesawisemansmileand

afoolishmancry,thenmyfriendis(withoutquestion)trulyawiseman.

Probablythebestexample(hecouldpossiblyhavegiventous)ofhis

witisthis(interesting)ideawithwhichheonceendedalecture:It

isasdangerousformantomodelhimselfuponhisinvention,themachine,

asitwouldbeforGodtomodelhimselfuponhisinvention,themachine,

asitwouldbeforGodtomodelhimselfuponHisinvention.

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二、十个经典段落

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A.Title:Privatecar

B.Wordlimit:about200words(notincludingthegivenopeningsentence)

C.Yourcompositionshouldbebasedontheoutlinebelowandshouldstart

withthegivenopeningsentence:''NowadaysanyChinesecanenjoythe

luxuryofowningaprivatecar-ifhecanaffordit.〃

D.YourcompositionshouldbewrittenneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.

Outline:

1)Advantagesofowningaprivatecar.

2)Disadvantagesofowningaprivatecar.

3)Shoulditbenecessarytoenlargetheprivatecarmarket?Whyorwhy

not?

Nowadays,anyChinesecanenjoytheluxuryofowningaprivatecar-

ifheorshecanaffordit.Havingacarofyourownmeansnomoretraveling

toworkoncrowdedbusesorsubwaytrains,andyoucandropoffthe

childrenatschoolontheway.Moreover,italsomeansthatyoucanenjoy

theweekendsandholidaysbetter,becausewithacaryoucangotoplaces

wheretheregularbusesandtrainsdonotgo,andsoyoucanfindaquiet

scenicspotwithnocrowds.

However,therearedrawbackstoowningacar.Foronething,withthe

increaseincarownershipinrecentyears,theroadsarebecomingmore

andmorecrowded,oftenmakingthejourneytoworkmoreofanightmare

thanadream.Foranother,itisnotcheaptorunacar,astheprices

ofgasolineandrepairsareconstantlyrising,nottomentiontheprices

youhavetopayforalicenseandinsurancecoverage.

Havingconsideredbothsidesoftheargument,Ihavecometothe

conclusionthattheadvantagesofowningacaroutweighthe

disadvantages.Therefore,itseemstomethatChi