2024届高三英语二轮复习读后续写情绪描写课件

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情绪描写读后续写作为记叙文，其核心只有一个，那就是“人”。因此一切的笔墨，都是为了塑造人物形象，使人物更加饱满。Howtomakeyourwritingvividandattractive?最为重要的描写有五类：环境、动作、心理、情绪、语言人物有互动。人物A与人物B穿插着写，有来有往，故事才会生动。情节分步骤。主线情节简明清晰，将情节细化，把情节写的充实。情绪分层次。人物的情绪不是单一的，而应该是多变的，有层次的。描写分类型。从“动作”、“心理”、“对话”三个角度描写人物。前后有对比。续写出情节的发展和人物的转变。细节有呼应。细节上的呼应能加强原文部分与续写部分的整体性。读后续写能力情绪分层次情绪词汇总情绪名词n.形容词adj.副词adv.喜悦delight,joy,happiness,pleasuredelighted,overjoyed,happy,pleased,pleasant,glad,enjoyablejoyfully,happily,gladly,cheerfully,merrily兴奋excitement,thrillexcited,thrilledexcitedly害怕fear,scare,fright,terrorfearful,scared,frightened,terrified,afraid情绪分层次情绪词汇总情绪名词n.形容词adj.副词adv.焦虑，担忧anxiety,worry,

concern,

anxious,worried,concernedanxiously后悔，内疚，羞愧regret,guilt,shameregretful,guilty,ashamedguiltily悲伤，沮丧，孤独sorrow,sadness,depression,despair,hopelessness,helplessnesslonelinesssorrowful,sad,depressed,hopeless,helpless,lonely,upset,frustratedsorrowfully,sadly情绪分层次情绪词汇总情绪名词n.形容词adj.副词adv.宽慰reliefrelieved感谢gratitude,thank,appreciationgrateful,thankfulgratefully,thankfully吃惊shock,astonishment,amazement,surprise,shocked,astonished,amazed,surprisedamazingly,surprisingly情绪分层次情绪描写通用模板形容词作状语情绪adj.,主句。Exercise:__________,Ericburstintotears._____________,Janewastrappedintheforest,withtearsrollingdownhercheeks.“Sorry,”apologizedLucy,___________.Afterknowingtheresult,Ifeltlikesittingonpinsandneedles,_______________.___________,Iopenedtheboxsoftly,asifitwasmyprecioustreasure.情绪分层次情绪描写通用模板2.无灵主语WavesofAsenseofAburstofAsparkofAmixtureoftookholdofwelledupinfloodedoversettledoversweptoverseizedsb.情绪n.Exercise:Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,___________.ThemomentDadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,_____.____________,whenthepolarbearapproachedus.Theirscoresweresignificantlyhigherthanbefore.__________.情绪分层次情绪描写通用模板3.Toone’s情绪n,主句。Exercise:___________,shewontheprize.___________,wewouldgocampingnextweek.___________,thepolarbearapproachedus.情绪分层次情绪描写通用模板4.夸张修辞Sb.feltsb.wasfloatinginanoceanof情绪n.Exercise:Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,___________.ThemomentDadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,_____.Whenthepolarbearapproachedus,______________.Theirscoresweresignificantlyhigherthanbefore.__________.情绪分层次情绪描写通用模板5.非谓语情绪n.camefloodingoversb.Exercise:Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,___________.ThemomentDadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,_____.Whenthepolarbearapproachedus,______________.Theirscoresweresignificantlyhigherthanbefore.__________.形容词作状语情绪adj.,主句。2.无灵主语WavesofAsenseofAburstofAsparkofAmixtureoftookholdofwelledupinfloodedoversettledoversweptover