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目Chapter1[基目Chapter1[基本]关于高考写作的8个问 高考写作是如何评分的 高考写作的考察要点是 我是先写大作文好还是小作文好 考试前狂背范文有效果吗 我的笔迹对我的分数有影响吗 作文字数如何掌握 作文里是不是我的词汇越高大上；句式越复杂，就越容易得高分 怎样合理使用高考写作真题 Chapter2[思路]如何打开你的脑洞 ——∽高考写作真题∽— ——∽脑洞怎么开∽— ——∽头脑风暴训练∽— Chapter3[词汇]还记得那似曾相识的高考词汇吗 ——∽高考需要多少词汇量∽— ——∽广东高考历年核心名词∽— ——∽广东高考历年核心形容（副）词∽— ——∽广东高考历年核心动词∽— ——∽常见但不会写的表达∽— Chapter4观点Chapter5段落Chapter6语法Chapter7句式段落开头，一语中 段落构建入门指 那些年，我们犯的语法错 缤纷多彩，给你的句子一点颜色瞧 ——∽抽象名词的使用∽— ——∽状语提前求关注∽— ——∽插入语的小插曲∽— ——∽倒装句∽— ——∽强调句∽— ——∽双重否定∽— Chapter8[体裁]我手述我心，记叙文指 ——∽乔布斯的情书∽— ——∽NarrativeEssayExamples∽— ——∽TipsonWritingaNarrative ——∽TipsonDictions∽— ——∽DearGrace∽— 1Chapter1基本Chapter1基本]关于高考写作10个问高考写作是如何评分高考写作的考察要点我是先写大作文好还是小作文好考试前狂背范文有效果吗我的笔迹对我的分数有影响吗作文字数如何掌握作文里是不是我的词汇越高大上；句式越复杂，就越容易得高分怎样合理使用高考写作真题2My 高考写作是如何评分的基础写【评分说明】基础写作的评分建议按照语言、内容和连贯三项指标分别给分，最后累计作为该My 高考写作是如何评分的基础写【评分说明】基础写作的评分建议按照语言、内容和连贯三项指标分别给分，最后累计作为该题的总得分广东省高考英语作文写作评分标总结：语言为王！内容为王读写任【评分说明】读写任务的评分建议采用综合法,即根据总体情况给分。概要和文章的分值分别为5分和分读写任务的评分标3赋 54320- 语言7-5-3-1-0语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解5包括了所有信息内容4包括了大部分信息内容3包括了基本信息内容2包括了小部分信息内容1包括了少许信息内容0没有包括所提供的信息内容连贯2内容连贯，而且结构紧凑内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧奏1内容连贯性较差，而且结构不够紧凑0内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散 总结内容要求：别离题了总结内容要求：别离题了篇章结构：段落之间是否有关高考写作的考察要点是广东高考历年大作文话题418-14-11-7-词汇有限，有较多的用词错误。语言结构出现较多的语法错误。篇章连贯性4-1-0完全抄袭原文（或其它文章文不对只写一些零散的单词，完全没有表达完整的内容高考8大常见话题总结教家高考8大常见话题总结教家金工环健语娱我是先写大作文好还是小作文好考试前狂背范文有效果吗背范文，到底背的是什么我的笔迹对我的分数有影响吗有！而且影响很大作文字数如何掌握大作文里，Summary的字数35-40为佳，超过该字数则显得拖沓了；而120字的篇幅里根据题目要求，可以分为2-3段，也即是说平均每段40-50词为佳作文里是不是我的词汇越高大上；句式越复杂，就越容易得高分Iadoremycorporealchamberbecauseitis怎样合理使用高考写作真题②总结每类文体的结构，行文思③多修改自己写过的句子。千锤百炼方成才5Chapter2思路如何打开你的脑洞——∽高Chapter2思路如何打开你的脑洞——∽高考写作真题6然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法你的父母(或其他亲人)是如何鼓励你学习的你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习时间、地点和起因想家给学习和生活带来的影响你（或你朋友）是如何应对的上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响你怎样看待老师对学生的影响2.以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法容包括描述清洁工工作的艰辛假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何你对平凡的工作的看2.用约120个词就MissMcCarty的捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括你如何看待她的捐助行为你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由——∽脑洞怎么开分类需求——∽脑洞怎么开分类需求 分类分类法AC...)。比如分成两大类，那么素材就比原来增加了一倍，如果分3素材就是原来3出现逻辑上的问题具体说明如下E.g.E.g.7练习Somehigh-schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebefore练习Somehigh-schoolgraduatesgototravelorworkforaperiodoftimebeforetheygotostudyinuniversities.Discussadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthispracticetotheirstudiesin类别1：类别类别练习类别类别类别练习类别类别类别需求马斯洛需求层次理899——∽头脑风暴训练请运用以上两种方法——∽头脑风暴训练请运用以上两种方法（分类法和需求法）写出以下话题的提Talkaboutabookyouhavereadthatwasimportanttoyouforsomereason.whythebookwasimportanttoyou.GivespecificdetailsandexamplestoexplainyourChooseaplaceyougotooftenthatisimportanttoyouandexplainwhyitisPleaseincludespecificdetailsinyourWhatcharacteristicsdoyouthinkmakesomeoneagoodparent?ExplainwhycharacteristicsareimportanttoWhatdoyoumissmostaboutyourhomewhenyouareaway?UsespecificdetailsyourTalkaboutaplaceyouenjoyedgoingtoorvisitingwhenyouwereachild.Describeplace.ExplainwhyyouenjoyedTalkaboutaphotographorpaintingyouhaveseenthatwasmemorable.ExplainyoulikedordislikedaboutIffriendsfromanothercountryweregoingtospendtimeinyourcountry,whatcityplacewouldyousuggesttheyvisit?Usingdetailsandexamples,explainDescribeaboutatimeorafriendorDescribeaboutatimeorafriendorafamilymemberhelpedyouinthepast.howthepersonhelpedyouandthenexplainwhythiswasimportanttoTalkaboutanimportantexperiencethatyourecentlyhad.DescribewhathappenedexplainwhyitwasimportanttoTalkaboutatimewhenyouaccomplishedsomethingyoudidnotthinkyoucouldWhatdidyouaccomplish?WhydidyouthinkyoucouldnotdoTalkaboutaninterestingbookyouhaveread.Explainwhyyouthoughtthebookinteresting.GivespecificdetailsandexamplestoexplainyourWhatisthemostefficienttypeoftransportationinyourcountry?Explainwhythinkitisefficient.IncludespecificreasonsorTalkaboutagame,sport,orothergroupactivitythatisplayedinyourcountry.whyyouthinktheactivityisPeopleenjoyreadingmanydifferenttypesofbookssuchasmystery,romance,etc.Ofallthedifferenttypesofbooksthatthereare,whattypedoyoumostenjoy?Explainwhy.Peoplemakefriendsinmanydifferentways.WhatPeoplemakefriendsinmanydifferentways.Whatdoyouthinkisagoodwaytonewfriends?UsespecificdetailsandexamplesinyourIfyoucouldhaveanyjoborcareeryouwanted,whichwouldyouchooseandGivespecificdetailstoexplainyourTalkaboutaspecialopportunitythatwasgiventoyou.ExplainwhythewasImagineyourlifetenyearsinthefuture.Talkaboutonewayyouthinkyourlifewilldifferentintenyearsthanitisnow.UsedetailstoexplainyourTalkaboutaskillorabilitythatyouconsiderasespeciallyimportantforastudenthave.UsedetailsandexamplestoexplainyourChooseaqualityyouthinkmakessomeoneavaluablememberofateam.ExplainyouthinkitisanimportantqualityforateamorgroupmembertotheeventandexplainwhyitwasTalkaboutonewayyourpersonalityhaschangedTalkaboutonewayyourpersonalityhaschangedsinceyouwereachild.UseanddetailstoexplainyourTherecanbeseveraladvantagestospendtimelivinginanothercountry.Talkaboutadvantageandexplainhowlivinginanothercountryprovidesthatadvantage.Usedetailsandexamplesinyourresponse.Talkaboutapopulargatheringplaceinyourtownwherepeopleliketogo.DescribeplaceandexplainwhypeopleenjoygoingStudentsoftenwanttogetbettergradesintheirclasses,explainwhatstudentsdoinordertoimprovetheirperformanceintheThinkofabookthatyouhavenotreadbutareinterestedinreading.ExplainwhyareinterestedinreadingthisTalkaboutapopularactor,musician,orartistwhoseworkyoudonotadmire.whyyoudonotlikethisperson’swork.UsespecificdetailsandreasonsinyourStudentshavetocompletevarioustypesofacademicassignmentsinschool.oneoftheassignmentsbelowandexplainwhyyouthinkitisbeneficialforstudents.ResearchpaperClasspresentationGroupproject.WhichofthefollowingjobsorWhichofthefollowingjobsorcareersdoyouthinkwouldbemostUniversityprofessor;Environmentalscientist;NewspaperChooseonecareerandexplainwhyyouthinkitwouldbemostrewarding.Usedetailsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.Afriendofyoursislookingforanewplacetoliveandhasaskedforyouradvice.doyouthinkisthemostimportantcharacteristicofagoodneighborhood?Usedetailsandexamplestoexplainyouranswer.Parentsneedtomakesuretheirchildrenleadhealthylives.WhatcanparentsdototheirchildrenhavehealthyStudentsoftenliketostudywithothersinagroup.Whatdoyouthinkaretheofgroupstudy?Giveatleastonebenefit.ExplainyourAfriendofyourswantstogotouniversitynextyearbutcannotdecideonamajorofstudy.WhatadvicewouldyougiveyourfriendtohelpmakethisChapter3词汇]还记得那似曾相识Chapter3词汇]还记得那似曾相识的高考词汇吗高考需要多少词汇量高考写作需要多少词汇量词汇“量”与词汇“质常见但不会写的表——∽高考需要多少词汇量一、考纲词汇＝课标二、命题词汇＝考纲三、课本词汇≠四、课本并不是——∽高考写作需要多少词阅读高频词数量 写作高频词数量 ——∽广东高考历年核心名词 ——∽广东高考历年核心名词 ——∽广东高考历年核心形容（副）词 ——∽广东高考历年核心形容（副）词 ——∽广东高考历——∽广东高考历年核心动词ABBCCDDEEFFGGHHII——∽常见但不会写的表达 原 ② ③ ④ 大多 ② ③ ④ 不仅而 ② ③ ④ 举 ②——∽常见但不会写的表达 原 ② ③ ④ 大多 ② ③ ④ 不仅而 ② ③ ④ 举 ② ③ ④ 越来 ② ③ ④ 而不 ② ③ ④ 影 ② ③ ④ 与……有 ② ③ ④ 比…… ② ③ ④ 10.发生；出 ② ③ ④ 11.强调；重12.得到；赢 ② ③ ④ 13.失去；给 ② ③ ④ 14.致力；努力；采取措 ② ③ ④ 15.减轻；12.得到；赢 ② ③ ④ 13.失去；给 ② ③ ④ 14.致力；努力；采取措 ② ③ ④ 15.减轻；努 ② ③ ④ 16.造成；带 ② ③ ④ 17.提 ② ③ ④ 18.加速；促 ② ③ ④ 19.机会；可 ② ③ ④ 20.适应；要 ② ③ ④ 21.面 ② ③ ④ 22.关注；关23.不管；尽 ② ③ ④ 24.努力；进 ② ③ ④ 25.学习；竞 ② ③ ④ 26.意见不 ② ③ 23.不管；尽 ② ③ ④ 24.努力；进 ② ③ ④ 25.学习；竞 ② ③ ④ 26.意见不 ② ③ ④ 27.人们认 ② ③ ④ 28.考虑 ② ③ ④ 29.举例解 ② ③ ④ 30.教会；灌 ② ③ ④ 31.毫无疑问；有道 ② ③ ④ 32.对……重 ② ③ ④ 33.意识 ② ③ ④ 34.思考；考 ② ③ ④ 35. ② 34.思考；考 ② ③ ④ 35. ② ③ ④ 36.利用；使 ② ③ ④ 37.改变；经 ② ③ ④ Chapter4观点段落开头，一Chapter4观点段落开头，一语中东方vs西方e.g.1翻yesore.g.2歌WillyoustilllovemewhenI'mnolongeryoungandbeautifulWillyoustilllovemewhenIgotnothingbutmyachinge.g.3做东方人特点总结西方人特点总结西方议论文写Claims+西方议论文写Claims+Reasons+Evidences+如果把西方人的一个论证过程（Argument)比喻为一棵树的话，那么Claims相当于树根，整个论证都为这个树根服务；Reasons则相当于树干；Evidences便是枝叶了。一个强大的——范亚练习Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Cellphonescanimproveourlivesgreatly.Usespecificreasonstosupportyouranswer.第一步：点出树根第二步：拉出树干第三步：给出枝叶第四步：结尾范例第一步范例第一步：点出树根Manypeoplefirmlybelievethatcellphonesbringgreatimprovementtotheirlives.However,Icompletelydisagreewiththisview.(不同意)第二步：拉出树干Thereasonisthatwithacellphone,anyonecanfindyouatanyplaceandyourdoesn'tbelongto第三步：给出枝叶Forexample,ithappensalmosteverytimethatphonecallsdrawmebacktoworkwhenfinallygetmyselfsomeleisuretimeforreading,orhavingteawithfamily,orhavingashorttripordoingyoga.第四步：结尾So,obviouslyitisnotanimprovementoflifeManypeoplefirmlybelievethatcellphonesbringgreatimprovementtotheirHowever,Icompletelydisagreewiththisview.Thereasonisthatwithacellphone,anyonecanfindyouatanyplaceandyourtimedoesn’tbelongtoyou.Forexample,ithappensalmosteverytimethatphonecallsdrawmebacktoworkwhenIfinallygetmyselfsomeleisuretimeforreading,orhavingteawithfamily,orhavingashorttripordoingyoga.So,obviouslyitisnotanimprovementoflifequality.大家来纠Idisagreewiththestatementthatcellphonescanimproveourlivesgreatly.Althoughcellphoneshavealreadybroughtgreatchangestoourlife,buttheymakeusfeeltiredbecausewithcellphones,wehavetotakecallsfromworkfromtimetotime.Toimprovelifequalitymeansmakingpeoplehappier.Butcancellphonesmakepeoplehappier?Ifnopeoplehavecellphones,thentheywillnotbeinterruptedbysomeonetheydon’tlike，andit’ssomekindofimprovementoflifequality.如何表达你的观点开门见山I如何表达你的观点开门见山I介宾短语FormypartFromwhereIstandFrommypointofviewFrommyTherebeThereisanelementoftruthin…Thereisnodenying(thefact)修辞手法Uponreadingthepassage,anotionracedthrough(crossed)mymindthat…Afterreadingthepassage,aconcepttakesitsrootinmymindthat…Afterreadingthepassage,aconceptstartstocrystalizeinmyheadthat…Uponseeingthecomposition,anideahasbeenbrandedinmymindthatAfterviewingthearticle,athoughthaswelledupfrommybosomthatIamnevertryingtoholdbackthetruththatIdofeelinthebonesIhavethetotalrespectforthefactthat…Iamafirmbelieverinthetruththat…练习第一步：点出树根第二步：拉出树干第三步：给出枝叶第四步：结尾上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响你怎样看待老师对学生的影响Chapter5段落]段落构建入门指雅思/Chapter5段落]段落构建入门指雅思/托福议论文的结构么在前面的Chapter4中已经提及，西方argumentation单段的议论结构为：而典型的雅思/托福写作段间结构也十分清晰，大体分2类①一边倒；②折中雅思写作经典例题之一Somepeoplethinkwomenshouldbeallowedtojointhearmy,thenavyandtheairjustlikemen.TowhatextentdoyouagreeorSomearguethatthestatusquoshouldbechangedandladiesshouldbeenabledtojointhearmedforces.Speakingformyself,Ifundamentallyagreewiththeirassertionforthree主体段Historyhasrepeatedlyshownthatwomenarefullycapableofperformingwellinmilitary.Historically,therewereahostofvaliantwomensoldierswhoseachievementsputtheirmalecounterpartstoshame.Oneneedonlylookattheworld-renownedJoanofArcandMulantoseehowexceptionallyladiescouldperformonthebattlefield.Inmyobservation,theirdetermination,courageanddignityhavebeenandarestillbeingadmiredbymalesoldiersandciviliansalikethroughouttheworldtoday.主体段Further,fromanenlightenedstandpoint,femalepatriotsshouldbegrantedtherighttogotothefrontlinewhentheirmotherlandisinvolvedinawar.Admittedly,genderinequalitywasahighlycontroversialissueinthetwentiethcentury.However,nowfifteenyearsintothenewmillennium,womencanlearnandteach,workandsupervise,voteandbevotedinmostcountriesjustlikemen.Giventhissweepingprogressingenderequality,thereisreallynosenseindenyingthemtherighttostandupfortheirhomecountrywhenwarbreaksout.Claims+Reasons+Evidences+主体段Lastly,commonsenseandourexperiencesashumansinformus主体段Lastly,commonsenseandourexperiencesashumansinformusthatlargelypossessthecapacitytooperatemodernweapons.Indeed,present-dayweaponsarebestcharacterizedbyextensiveautomationanddigitization.Granted,physicallywomenareonaveragenotasstrongasmen.Nevertheless,itisanindisputablefactthatmostofthemhavethementalabilityandthepsychologicalsoundnesstooperatethehighly-automatedarmsthatdonotreallyrequirebigmuscles.结Insum,keepingmilitaryservicesoff-limitstowomenintheinformationageunwarranted.AndIamconvincedthatitisinthebestinterestsofanationifladiesarealsograntedequalrightsinthisarena.问题1：该范文的段落之间的关系 （多选因果（Causeandeffect）对比（ComparisonandContrast）让步一边倒的结构分段 句 结开 2-4 （描写背景主体段 1句+2-4 Claim主体段 1句+2-4 Claim主体段 1句+2-4 Claim结 2 重申观建托福写作经典例题之一Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itisimportantforeveryonetoknow托福写作经典例题之一Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Itisimportantforeveryonetoknowaboutwhatishappeningaroundtheworldeventhoughtheeventshavenotaffectedourdailylife.Thankstotheprogressofmedia,modernpeoplehavethecapacitytolearnaboutwhatishappeningaroundtheworldimmediately.Somepeopleclaimthatitmakesnosensetobeconcernedabouteventsthatdonothaveadirectimpactonourlifewhileothersarekeenonallkindsofinformationregardlessofwhetheritaffectsusornot.Asforme,Ibelongtothelattertypeofperson.Iamgoingtoelaboratemyopinioninthefollowingcases.主题段Forstudents,knowingwhatishappeningaroundtheworldisbeneficialforAlthoughworldwideeventsdonotdirectlyaffectstudents’study,theycanfacilitatetheirwaysofthinking,whichiseventuallyconducivetotheiracademicperformance.Mycousinisagoodcaseinpoint.Sheissoluckytohaveopen-mindedparentswhoinstalledasatelliteTVthatallowshertowatchoverseasnewsonchannelslikeBBCorCNN.Benefittingfromthis,mycousin’sscopeofknowledgeisobviouslylargerthananyotherstudentinherclass.Plus,heressaysonglobalissuesarealwaysspokenhighlyofbyteachers.(102words)主题段Foradults,theknowledgeofworldwideeventscontributestobetterdecisions.Itbecauseaseeminglyirrelevanteventthathappenedinothercountrycanhaveanimpactonourlifeinaroundaboutway.Awisedecisionshouldbemadebasedonanyusefulinformation.Forexample,myuncleisabusinessmanwhoownsagasstation.In2003,whenheheardthattheUSmightuseforceagainstIraq,hepredictedthatthepriceofoilwouldrocketinashortperiodoftime.Thus,hedecidedtostockagreatdealofoilinareasonablepricebeforethesoaroccurred.Thisprecisepredicationturnedhimintoamillionaire主题段Admittedly,Iamnotsayingthat主题段Admittedly,Iamnotsayingthatweshouldbemindfulofeverythingthatishappeningtheworldbecausewedonothavesomuchenergyandtime.Spendingtimeonaseaofinformationwoulddistractusfromdoingourownjobswell.However,theimportanceofinformationcannotbeoverestimated.Therefore,weareadvisedtousetimefragmentstolearnaboutwhatishappeningaroundusviamediaortheInternet.Also,weneedtounderstandhowtoselectinformationthatisvaluable.(85words)结Tosumup,itisessentialforeveryoneofustoknowwhatishappeningworldwideeventhoughitdoesnothaveaffectedus.Owingtothelimitationofroom,IamunabletogivemoreexamplesbutIbelievethatthecasesofyoungstudentsandadultshavealreadyproventhevalidityofmyviewpoint.(57words)问题2：该范文的段落之间的关系 （多选因果（Causeand并列转折让步折中法的结构分段 句 结开 2-4 （描写背景主体段 1句+2-4 Claim主体段 1句+2-4 Claim主体段3（让步段 1句+2-4 Claim结 2 重申观建一边倒vs折中轻松掌握因果（Causeand举例并列让步一边倒vs折中轻松掌握因果（Causeand举例并列让步假设修饰限定下定义其他练习：Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement:Peopleoftenbuyproductsnotbecausetheyreallyneedthembutbecauseothershavethem.一边折中排山倒海较为主语言要求较观点容易模高考的段落构高考的段落构之间的逻辑不清晰。关于高考段落与段落之间的设臵，其实可以按照题目给的顺序来安排e.g.Paragraph你如何看待她的捐助第一步：点出树根第二步：拉出树干第三步：给出枝叶段句结主体段1句2-3（简略提及背景Reasons+主体段1句2-3Reasons+主体段1句2-3Reasons+2.用约120个词就MissMcCarty的捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括你如何看待她的捐助行为你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由Paragraph2:你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响第一步：点出树根第二步：拉出树干第三步：给出枝叶Paragraph2:你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响第一步：点出树根第二步：拉出树干第三步：给出枝叶Paragraph3:如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由第一步：点出树根第二步：拉出树干第三步：给出枝叶第四步：结尾如何撰写你的Summary三步1.判断文如何撰写你的Summary三步1.判断文斟酌词句：topic3.去粗取注意事1.人时3.词28-38间4.文记叙文/议论文/夹叙夹议/说明Thepassagetellsus介宾短语Accordingtothepassage,InaccordancewiththeOnthebasisofthe修辞手法Suchisthecase/idea/story练习Title:2014-Reading练习练习练习Title: Title:2014-ReadingTitle:2014-Reading练习练习练习Title: 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Becausetheyareintelligentandrefusetoconformto用人称代词加抽象名词短语改造下面句子 Becausetheyareintelligentandrefusetoconformtosocietyandintellectualvalues,manyaredeprivedofachancetolearnadequatesocialskills.改句Becauseoftheirintelligenceandrefusaltoconformtosociety’sandintellectualvalues,manyaredeprivedofachancetolearnadequatesocialskills.1.Heisconcernedaboutthelackofunderstandingandcomprehensionofculturesasbeingoneofthebreedingforcesforwar.Butthisconcernmightwellbeovercomenow.Wefailtocreatearoleinpubliclifeforformerpresidents,andthispartlyreflectsAmericanpreoccupationwithAshefeltwearyandincreasinglyheat,hewasdeterminedtositdownintheconvenientAmericahasbeenobsessedwithequality,whichhasbeenconstantthroughout——∽状语提前求关注——∽状语提前求关注Historically,inAmericaworkershavebeenmercilesslyexploited(剥削)bybigcorporations(公司Forexample,garmentindustryworkers,farmlaborers,railwayworkersandfruitpickerssufferedmanyhardshipsandwerepaidverylittle.Typicallyaircraft飞行器areconstructedofaluminum,usedforitsstrength,lightweightandlowcost.Clearly,thisisapositivealternativeformotivatedparentsandtheirInreality,there'snoconclusiveevidencethathumanactivityhasanyeffectonEarth'ssurfaceUndoubtedly,themostbasicelementsofwritingaretobefoundinWithoutdoubt,computershavechangedthewayindividualsinteractwitheachBysendingoperationsoffshore,AmericancompaniesaresecuringtheirfinancialfutureandthatoftheAmericanByassigning(分配householdchorestotheirkids,parentsrecognizechildren'sabilitytocontributetotherunningofthehome.Recently,severalnationshavebegunseriouslydiscussingamannedmissiontoInthisway,freshgraduatescangetastrongsenseoftherealitiesthatawait(waitEventually,allthesedifferentelementscombinedintoapeopleuniqueintheInAmerica,manysecond-generationimmigrantchildrencan'tspeaktheirtongue.Luckily,nowtheInternationalLanguageProgramandmanycommunityschoolshavestartedtoprovideinstructioninthesechildren'snativelanguage.Parents'concernsaboutriskandsafetyoftheirchildrenonthestreetsandoutsidedrivenagenerationofchildrenindoorsIronically(有讽刺意味的是itcanbearguedthatnowchildrenarebeingexposedtoawholenewsetofrisks.Ingeneral,it'smotivatingforstudentstoreceivefeedbackfromtheirTimeandtimeagain,peoplewhomakeinternalchangesthatallowthemtoloveworkfindthattheystillfeelfrustratednomatterhowhardtheytrytolovetheirSimplyput,people'sproductivityandenjoymenthavesufferedSimplystated,theAmericaneconomyislivingonborrowedWeallhavestress;it'spartoflife.Infact,weneedsomestressinourlivestokeepbodiespreparedtorespondtoGiventhechoice(如果可以选择的话)，hewouldsacrificehishigh-payingGiventhechoice(如果可以选择的话)，hewouldsacrificehishigh-payingjobinexchangeformoreleisuretime.Inviewof(鉴于thecongressman'sproposal,theyreconsideredtheircourseofInlightof(考虑到therecentincidents,somecitiescancelledIndependenceDayfireworksdisplays.Apartfrombeingusedasaschool,thebuildingisusedforweddings,partiesInadditionto/Besidesthefinancialbenefits,thejobbringsintellectualInanidealworldeatingahealthydietshouldprovideallthenutrients营养物质)ourbodiesneed.Unfortunately,intherealworld,mealtimeoftenmeansgrabbingaquickbiteandthefoodweeatdon'tprovidewhatourbodiesneedtomaintaingoodhealth.Interestingly,theeducationalphilosophiesofJohnDeweyandConfuciushavealotincommon,suchasthebeliefinmoderationandtheoptimismaboutindividuals'potentialtochangethemselves.Ideally,alltheweaponsofmassdestructionshouldbeeliminated.Butinreality,eliminationofsuchweaponswouldcauseseriousnationalsecurityNotsurprisingly,adolescentswhoareunderconstantstressintheirstudiestendOverall(总体来看)，thefunctionofabuildingismoreimportantthanitsexterior外Toalleviate减轻trafficcongestionthemunicipal城市的)governmentshouldencouragepeopletotakethepublictransit.Livinginsheerpoverty,thesepeopledonotevenhavemoneytobuyenough其他经常用于状语前臵的副词或词组还有Basically,RealisticallyEvidentlyApparently/Traditionally,SpecificallyEssentially可争辩Onthewhole,Asarule,（通常来说等——∽插入语的小插曲在作文的句中也——∽插入语的小插曲在作文的句中也经常可以引入小短语，它会让句子显得更加灵活多变Shoppinganecessarypartofdailylifeisincreasinglytime-consuming消耗时间的)inNorthAmerica.We'llalldieintheend,andbecauseofthis,weshouldcherisheverymomentofTheInternetis,simply,acollectionofscreensofinformation(knownasthatresideonthousan