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Task2课程安排总体介绍（题型分类&考题频率）评分标准框架结构论据扩展方法高频考题范例评分标准－TaskAchievement

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完成问题－1.观点明确2.论据扣题3.展开论证不跑题评分标准－CoherenceandCohesion

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连接词评分标准－LexicalResource

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拼写正确评分标准－GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy

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句式多样题型一：辩论型（Argumentation)...(Towhatextent)doyouagreeordisagree?...Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion....Dotheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages?...Whatisyouropinion?...Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegativetrend?...Isthisablessingoracurse?ExamplesSomepeoplebelievethatunpaidcommunityserviceshouldbeacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms(forexampleworkingforacharity,improvingtheneighborhoodorteachingsportstoyoungerchildren.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(剑9P54)结构二（5段式）1.

介绍背景＋给出观点2.

正方论据1＋扩展3.

正方论据2＋扩展5.

给出观点＋总结论据OR提出建议4.

反方论据1个＋扩展折中式难度:一个论据一段，论据扩展难！首段-三要素1.大背景－与话题相关

2.小背景－本题争议

3.你的观点Example因果关系！Sample:Duetothefactthatunpaidcommunityservicehasbeenincreasinglypopularinsomeschools,somepeopleholdthatitshouldbeinvolvedasacompulsorycourseofhighschooleducation.

Personally,Iaminfavorofthisview.Somepeoplebelievethatunpaidcommunityserviceshouldbeacompulsorypartofhighschoolprograms(forexampleworkingforacharity,improvingtheneighborhoodorteachingsportstoyoungerchildren.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(剑9P54)题目：Somepeoplethinkthatalllawbreakersshouldbetakenintoprison,whileothersbelievethattherearebetteralternatives.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.ExampleSample:Despitethefactthatthereareotheralternativessuchasre-educationandrehabilitationapartfromsendingcriminalstoprisoninthewesterncountries,manypeoplestillconsiderthatimprisonmentshouldbetheonlywaytopunishlaw-breakers.Personally,Ibelieveimprisonmentcanbedefectiveandtherearebetteroptions.让步关系！1.大背景因果关系-Inviewof/Inconsiderationof/Duetothefactthat+句子,小背景.-As/Since+句子,小背景.让步关系-Despite/Inspiteofthefactthat+句子,小背景.-Although+句子,小背景.2.小背景

同意与否-some/manypeopleargue/contend/holdthat+句子-thereare/existsomepeoplewhoarguethat+句子双边讨论-thequestionofwhether...ornothastriggeredanintensecontroversy/isamatterofmuchcontention-ithasbeenwidelydiscussedwhether...ornot优缺点-社会现象3.个人观点同意与否Personally,Iagree/disagreewiththeview.Frommyperspective,Iam(not)infavoroftheview.优缺点Personally,themeritsovershadowitsdemerits.Frommyperspective,therearemoreadvantagesthanitsdisadvantages.双边讨论Personally,IsupporttheformermorethanthelatterFrommyperspective,Iagreewiththeformer2014.3.8Somepeoplethinkyoungpeopleshouldberequiredtohavefulltimeeducationuntiltheyareatleast18yearsold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Duetothefactthateducationplaysanessentialroleinbothpersonaldevelopmentandsocialadvance,somepeoplearguethatstudentshavethedutytoreceivefulltimeeducationbeforetheyeadults.Personally,Iaminfavoroftheview.2014.3.13Somethinkthatprintedbooksarenotnecessaryindigitalera,becauseallwritingcanbestoredelectronically.Othersthinkprintedbookswillplayanimportantrole.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.Duetothefactthattechnologicaladvancesinelectronicdeviceshavelargelyfacilitatedreading,itiswidelydiscussed

whetherprintedbookscanbereplacedbyelectronicbooksornot.

Frommyperspective,Isupportthelattermorethantheformer.2014.4.26WithcomputersandInternet,peoplecanstudyandworkwithouttravelingtoschoolorcompany.Dotheadvantagesoutweighitsdisadvantages?DuetothefactthattechnologicaladvancesinthecomputersandInternethavebroughthugeconveniencetopeople’sdailylife,

manypeoplenowadaysstudyandworkwithcomputersandInternetathome.Personally,themeritsovershadowitsdemerits.2.正方论据3个(即支持该观点的3个原因)主体段1－三要素3.对论据的扩展(每个1句)1.主题句(如Itisobviousthat...hasseveraladvantages.Thereareseveralreasonswhy......)Sample：Itisobviousthatengaginginunpaidcommunityservicehasseveraladvantages.Firstofall,itispossibleforstudentstoenjoyahealthylifestyle.Itisbecausetheywouldnothavemuchsparetimeindulgingincomputergamesorotherunhealthyactivities.Secondly,studentscangainworkingexperiencethatcannotbeacquiredthroughclassroomlearning.

Asaresult,theyarebetterpreparedfortheirfuturecareerthanthosewhoonlyfocusonstudy.Anotherpositiveaspectmightbeitsrecreationalvalue.Forexample,byteachingsportstoyoungchildren,studentscouldgetrelaxedandentertainedafterawholeday'sstudyinschool.2.反方论据2个

(即反对该观点的2个原因)主体段

2－三要素3.对论据的扩展(每个1句)1.主题句(如However/Admittedly,...hassomedisadvantagestoo.)Sample：Participatinginunpaidcommunityservice,however,hassomedisadvantagestoo.

Tostartwith,theinvolvementincommunityservicewouldinevitablytakeuptheirstudytime.

Aswasrevealedfromarecentreport,around40%ofthestudentsfromahighschoolsaythattheyspendlesstimeduetocommunityservice.Furthermore,studentsmayhavelimitedtimetodeveloptheirowninterest.Conversely,iftheydonothavetoengageinsuchservice,theywillbeabletochoosevariousextra-curriculumactivitiesthattheyareinterestedin.1.重申观点尾段－两要素2.总结论据OR提出建议Sample：Tosumup,despitethenegativeaspectsofunpaidcommunityservice,Iamstillconvincedthatitshouldbeacompulsorypartofhighschooleducationbecauseitprovidesworkingexperience,healthylifestyleaswellasrecreation.

(状语从句)Toconclude/Inconclusion,inspiteofthenegativeaspectsofunpaidcommunityservice,Istillholdtheopinionthatitshouldbeacompulsorypartofhighschooleducation.

Itissuggestedthatstudentstakepartinvariousservicesonthebasisofguaranteeingtheirstudytime.

(主语从句，虚拟语气)题型二：报告型（Report)...Pleasediscussthecausesandpossiblesolutions....Pleasediscussthecausesandthepossibleeffects....Pleasegivereasonsandyoursuggestions.原因＋措施/影响Examples2013/5/11Thequalityoflifeinbigcitieseworse.Talkaboutcausesofthisproblemandhowtosolvethisproblem.2013/2/23Notenoughstudentschoosesciencesubjectsinuniversityinmanycountries.Whatarethereasons?Whataretheeffectsonthesociety?框架结构－

4段式1.

介绍背景＋提前概括原因

2.

原因段（2-3个原因）3.

措施/影响段（主题句＋2-3个措施/影响）4.

概括措施/影响Introduction-两要素1.背景(1-2句)

2.提出原因(如Itseemstomethat...,...and...arethethreecausesthatmaycontributetotheproblem.)

Sample：Despitethefactthateconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancehasbroughtmanybenefitstopeople’sdailylives,thequalityoflifeinbigcitieshasnotbeenimproved.

Itseemstomethatrisingpressure,deterioratingenvironmentandexplodingpopulationarethethreemajorculprits.题目：Thequalityoflifeinbigcitieseworse.Talkaboutcausesofthisproblemandhowtosolvethisproblem.BodyParagraph1－两要素1.原因3个2.对原因的扩展Sample：Thefirstcauseoflowerlifequalitymightbetherisingpressurefacingpeople,bywhichImeanTherapiddevelopmentofeconomyinbigcitieshasacceleratedofpeople’sworkandlife,whichbringsgrowingpressureandanxietytopeople.

Besides,thedeterioratingenvironmentmightbeasecondfactoroftheaggravatinglifequality.

Theflourishingindustrializationinbigcitiesproducesvariouscontaminantsthatseverelypollutesair,waterandpeople’ssurroundings.Anothercausethatleadstotheproblemmightbetheexplodingpopulation.Thehigherlevelofdevelopmentinbigcitiesattractsincreasingnumberofpeople,whichaddstotheburdenonlimitedpublicfacilitiesandinfrastructureincities.BodyParagraph2－三要素1.主题句(如Severalactionsmustbetakeninordertopreventthedeteriorationoftheproblem.)2.措施2-3个Sample：Severalmeasurescouldbeimplementedinordertopreventthedeteriorationoftheproblem.Firstofall,companiesaresuggestedtorelievetheworkingpressureoftheiremployees.Andpeopleshouldbeencouragedtotakepartinvariousactivitiesafterworktorelaxthemselves.

Secondly,itistheresponsibilityofgovernmentstoenactrigidlawsandregulationsforfactoriestoreducetheemissionofindustrialcontaminantsandforpeopletoprotecttheenvironment.

Finally,moreeffectiveuseandconstructionofpublicfacilitiesandinfrastructurecouldsurelyreducethepressureonbigcitiesbroughtbyenormouspopulation.总结措施Conclusion－一要素(Report类也可以没有conclusion)Sample：Tosummarize,topromotethequalityoflifeinbigcities,relievingpressure,issuinglawsandutilizingpublicfacilitiesmoreeffectivelyarethreepossiblesolutions.（276）题型三：混合型（Mixed)...Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?What

measuresdoyouthinkcanbetaken?...Whatarethereasons?Doyouthinkitisapositive

ornegativedevelopment?辩论报告Examples2013/11/30Moreandmorepeoplewanttobuyfamousbrandswithclothes,carsandotheritems.Whatarethereasons?Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegativedevelopment?2013/12/14Youngpeopleareleavingtheirhomesfromruralareastostudyorworkinthecities.Whatarethereasons?Doadvantagesofthisdevelopmentoutweighitsdisadvantage?框架结构－

4段式1.

介绍背景＋(如果题目问原因，则提出原因2-3个)

＋给出观点2.

正方论据3个4.

重申观点＋总结论据＋(如题目问措施，则给出措施2-3个)3.

反方论据2个Introduction-三要素1.背景(1-2句)

2.提出问题原因（如Itseemstomethat...,...and...arethethreemainreasonswhy...)3.给出自己观点题目：Youngpeopleareleavingtheirhomesfromruralareastostudyorworkinthecities.Whatarethereasons?Doadvantagesofthisdevelopmentoutweighitsdisadvantage?SampleDespitethefactthatruralareashaveexperiencedrapiddevelopment,therearestillanincreasingnumberofyoungpeoplewhomovefromthecountrytothecities.

Itseemstomethatmoreadvancededucation,betterjobopportunitiesandhigherstandardoflivingarethethreemajorfactorsthatattractpeopletothecities.Personally,Ibelievethattherearemorebenefitsthandrawbacksofthismigration.1.正方论据3(即支持该观点的原因)BodyParagraph1－两要素2.对论据的扩展(每个1句)SampleItisobviousthatyoungpeoplemigratingtocitieshassomeadvantages.

Firstofall,migratingpeopleprovidescitieswithcheaperlaborforce,whichcontributestothedevelopmentofcities.Aswasrevealedfromarecentreport,around55%oftheShanghaiworkersoriginallycamefromtheruralareas.

Secondly,migratedstudentsfromthecountrysidecouldenjoybetter-qualityeducationintheurbanareas.

Asaresult,thisprovidesthesocietywithtalentsandmaypromotehealthycompetitionbetweencountryandurbanstudents.

Anotherpositiveaspectisthatruralareaswillbenefitfrommigratedpeople,bywhichImeantheymightbringadvancedtechnologyandinnovativeideasbacktotheirhometown.1.反方论据2个(即支持该观点的原因)BodyParagraph2－两要素2.对论据的扩展(每个1句)Sample：Admittedly,migrationtocitiesmayexertunfavorableinfluenceonthesociety.Tostartwith,theincreasingnumberofmigratedpeopleaddstotheburdenoninfrastructuresincities.Consequently,governmentswillhavetospendmoneyonconstructingandmaintaingvariousinfrastructures,whichmaybringfinancialpressuretogovernments.Besides,themigrationmightbeaculpritofthedeterioratingenvironmentincities.Itisbecausepeoplefromruralareasmaynotbewelleducatedandthuslacktheawarenessofprotectingtheenvironment.1.重申观点Conclusion－两要素2.总结2个论据＋(如题目问措施，则给出可行的措施2-3个)Sample：Ashasbeenmentionedabove,Ipersonallybelievethatthemeritsofthismovementovershadowitsdemeritsmainlybecausemigratedpeoplecanprovidecheaplaborforceforcities,enjoybettereducationandpromotethedevelopmentofruralareas.(298)论据扩展方法一、解释法二、究果法三、举例子五、反面假设四、列数据六、过去现在对比一、解释法(原因)连接词：,because.../Thisismainlybecause.../Itisbecause.../Theapparentreasonisthat.../Onesimplereasonisthat...题目：免费社区服务是否应当纳入高中必修课？论据：应当-学生可以拥有更健康的生活方式扩展：,becausetheywouldnothavemuchsparetimeindulgingthemselvesincomputergamesorotherunhealthyactivities.Itisprobablethatstudentswouldenjoyahealthierlifestyle.连接词：,bywhichImean.../Toputitanotherway,.../Asamatteroffact,.../Infact,...Firstofall,engaginginunpaidcommunityserviceisaneffectivewayofgainingworkingexperiencewhichcannotbeacquiredthroughclassroomlearning.扩展：Infact,communityservicelikeworkingforacharityorimprovingtheneighborhoodcanequipstudentswithpracticalabilitiessuchascommunicationandorganizationalskills.题目：免费社区服务是否应当纳入高中必修课？论据：应当-学生可以获取工作经验解释法(单纯解释)二、究果法连接词:Asaresult,.../Asaconsequence,.../Consequently,.../Therefore,.../Thus,.../,asaresultofwhich..题目：免费社区服务是否应当纳入高中必修课？论据：应当-学生可以获取工作经验扩展：Asaconsequence,studentswouldbebetterpreparedfortheirfuturecareerandlifethanthosewhoonlyfocusonstudy.Firstofall,engaginginunpaidcommunityserviceisaneffectivewayofgainingworkingexperiencewhichcannotbeacquiredthroughclassroomlearning.三、举例子连接词：Forexample,.../Forinstance,.../Acaseinpointisthat...题目：免费社区服务是否应当纳入高中必修课？论据：应当-有娱乐价值扩展：Byteachingsportstoyoungchildren,forexample,studentscouldgetrelaxedandentertainedafterawholeday'sstudyinschool,whichmaycontributetotheenhancementofstudyefficiency.Thesecondreasonofencouragingunpaidcommunityservicemightbeitsrecreationalvalue.四、列数据题目：免费社区服务是否应当纳入高中必修课？论据：不应当-占用学习时间扩展：

Aswasrevealedfromarecentreport,around40%ofthestudentsfromahighschoolsaythattheyspendlesstimeonstudyaftertheyarerequiredtotakepartincommunityservice.Admittedly,theinvolvementincommunityservicewouldinevitablytakeupcertaintimethatcouldhavebeenusedinstudying.

连接词：Aswasrevealedfromarecentreport,.../Accordingtothestatisticsprovidedbyaresearchgroup,...五、假设法题目：免费社区服务是否应当纳入高中必修课？论据：不应当-占用发展兴趣的课余时间扩展：

Conversely,iftheydidnothavetoengageinsuchservice,theywouldbeabletochoosevariousextra-curricularactivitiesthattheyareinterestedin.Furthermore,studentsmayhavelimitedtimetodeveloptheirowninterest.连接词：Conversely,if...(可用虚拟语气：If+主语＋动词过去式，主语＋would/wouldnot＋动词原形)六、过去现在对比(连接词:Inthepast,...,butnow...)题目：高科技带来的好处多还是坏处多？论据：科技极大地便利了人与人之间的交流扩展：Inthepast,peopleusedtowriteletterswhichusuallytookseveralmonthstoarriveatsomedistantdestinations,butnowinstantcommunicationhasbeenrealizedthroughvariouskindsofcommunicationtools,suchasphones,video-chattingandsocialnetworkingwebsites,whichhavesubstantiallyfacilitatedourdailylives.Firstofall,technologicaladvanceshaveconsiderablycontributedtotheexchangesofideasandinformationamongpeople.(看电视的坏处）Firstofall,watchingtoomuchTVtendstoexertanunfavorableinfluenceonthefamilyrelationship.Itisbecauseifweindulgeourselvesinwatchingtelevision,wewillnothavesufficienttimetocommunicatewithourfamilymembers，whichobviouslymaygiverisetothealienationamongfamilymembers.(大学生不应当自费全部学费)Thesecondreasonofnotpayingthefullcostisthathighereducationisforpublicgood.Toputitanotherway,highereducationcultivatesnumeroustalentswhowilleventuallydevotethemselvestothenationaldevelopment,soensuringstudents’accesstohighereducationiscrucialforsocialadvances,notonlyforpersonaldevelopment.论据扩展练习(不应该免费提供公共交通)Firstofall,itwould,togreatextent,increasethefinancialpressureongovernments.Consequently,governmentsmaylacksufficientmoneytospendonmoreurgentprojectsthatalsoneedfinancialsupport,suchaseducationandmedicalcare.(不应该免费提供公共交通)Mostimportantly,therearebettermeasuresthatcouldbeimplementedtosolvethetrafficcongestion.Forexample,improvingroadconditionsandenlargingroadnetworkstoreducetrafficbottleneckscaneffectivelylessenthetrafficjam.(环境污染的原因)Thefirstculpritofdegradingenvironmentmightbetheincreasingamountofcarexhaustofvehicles.Aswasrevealedfromarecentreport,30%oftheairpollutioninShanghaiwascausedbycarexhaustlastyear,whichranksthesecondamongallthereasons.(大学生应该学电脑)Firstofall,theInternetprovidesstudentswithdiversifiedtypesofinformationwhichiscrucialtosurvivalinthisworld.Conversely,ifcollegestudentswerenotequippedwithcomputerskills,theywouldnotgainup-to-dateinformationandthuswouldprobablylagbehindthetimesorevenbeinthedangerofbeingacompleteoutsider.社会生活类：16次教育类：11次政府职能类：7次科技类：5次抽象类：4次旅游文化类：3次犯罪类：2次2013年大作文话题分布动笔前三步走1.审题！找出题目中的关键词，即争议焦点2.确定立场！支持OR反对？3.列出提纲！支持那方的3个论据＋不支持那方的2个论据Introduction1)大背景－跟话题相关

2)小背景－引入本题争议

3)你的观点2)支持论据1+扩展BodyParagraph11)主题句(如Itisobviousthat...hasseveraladvantages.)3)支持论据2+扩展4)支持论据3+扩展2)不支持论据1

＋扩展BodyParagraph21)主题句(如However,...hassomeadvantagestoo.)3)不支持论据2

＋扩展1)重申观点Conclusion2)总结论据OR提出建议审题E.g.Universitystudentsshouldpaythefullcostoftheireducationbecauseuniversityeducationbenefitsindividualsmorethanitbenefitssocietyasawhole.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?1.题目中的各个部分－同等重要！2.结尾的提问方式－决定结构注意：E.g.Thebestwayforgovernmenttosolvethetrafficcongestionproblemsincitiesistoprovidefreetransport24hoursaday,7daysaweek.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?(2014.1.9)2014.2.22Children’seducationisexpensiveandthegovernmentofsomecountriespayssomeoforallofthecosts.Dotheadvantagesofthegovernmentpaysforthecostoutweighthedisadvantages?2014.3.8Somepeoplethinkyoungpeopleshouldberequiredtohavefulltimeeducationuntiltheyareatleast18yearsold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?教育类Itisrightthatcollegegraduatesearnhighersalariesthanthelesswell-educatedinthecommunity.Sotheyshouldalsopaythefullcostoftheirstudy.Doyouagreeordisagreewiththisstatement?关键词：paythefullcost不应该：1.

穷人付不起2.

政府有义务3.学生的义务是学习应该：1.减少政府压力2.

学生会珍惜学习机会

“Itisrightthatcollegegraduates

earnhighersalariesthanthelesswell-educatedinthecommunity.Sotheyshouldalsopaythefullcostoftheirstudy.”Duetothefactthatpeoplewhohavereceivedcollegeeducationmakemoremoneythanthosewhoarenotwelleducated,somepeoplearguethatstudentsshouldbearallthetuitionfeebythemselves.Personallyspeaking,Idonotagreewiththis.（同位语从句，宾语从句，定语从句）

首段(争议的原因或其他背景＋改写争议焦点＋个人观点)句式与词汇变换穷人-financiallychallenged-facefinancialchallengesefamilies付不起学费-cannotafford/bearthetuitionfee/costs-...bebeyondthemeansofsb接受高等教育-receivehighereducation-haveaccessto...人才损失lossofpotentialtalents政府有责任-governmentshavetheresponsibilityto...-itistheresponsibilityofgovernmentsto...-theresponsibilityfor...restswithgovernments提供经济支持offer/providefinancialsupport保证学生接受教育-ensure/guaranteestudents’accesstohighereducation-ensurethathighereducationisaccessibletostudents受过良好教育-cultivated/well-educatedstudents-studentswhoarecultivated扮演重要的角色-playanindispensablerole/part-crucial/critical/essential/减轻经济负担ease/alleviate/relieve/lessenfinancialburdenon花钱在紧迫的项目上-spend/expendmoneyonmorepressing/urgentissues-devotemoney/financialresourceto...珍惜学习机会value/cherishtheopportunityoflearning投入学习-bedevotedtostudy-concentrateonstudy充分利用makefulluseof努力-makegreateffortsto-endeavorto-strivehardto取得好成绩achievesatisfactoryacademicperformance一、穷人付不起学费Firstofall,itmaybedifficultforstudentswhoarefromefamiliestoaffordthehightuitionfee.（形式主语）Firstofall,studentswhoarefromefamiliesmayfounditdifficulttoaffordthehightuitionfee.（形式宾语）结果：无法接受教育，人才损失Consequently,theywouldlosetheopportunitytoreceivebettereducation,anditmaybeahugelossofpotentialtalentsforthesociety.（并列句）Consequently,theywouldhavenoaccesstobettereducation,whichmaybeahugelossofpotentialtalentsforthesociety.（定语从句）二、政府有义务原因：教育培养的人才为社会发展作贡献Secondly,governmentshavetheresponsibilitytoofferfinancialsupporttoensurestudents’accesstohighereducation.Secondly,governmentshavetheresponsibilitytoofferfinancialsupportsothatstudents’accesstohighereducationcanbeensured.(目的状语从句）,becausecultivatedcitizensplayandispensableroleinthedevelopmentofacountry.(原因状语从句）Itisbecausecultivatedcitizensplayandispensableroleinthedevelopmentofacountry.（表语从句）一、减轻政府经济负担Tostartwith,thefinancialburdenofthegovernmentwouldberelieved.（被动句）Tostartwith,students’payingthefullcostwouldrelievethefinancialburdenofthegovernment.结果：政府可以花钱在更紧急的地方Asaresult,

morefundcouldbeexpendedonsomeurgentprojects,likemedicalcare,toimprovethequalityoflifeforpeople.,asaresultofwhich,

thegovernmentcouldspendmorefundonurgentprojectsthatneedmorefinancialsupport,likemedicalcare,toimprovethequalityoflifeforpeople.（定语从句）二、学生会珍惜学习机会，取得好成绩Furthermore,studentswouldvaluetheiropportunitiesofstudyandstrivehardtoachieveasatisfactoryperformance.Furthermore,studentswouldvaluetheiropportunitiesofstudyandstrivehardinthehopeofachievingasatisfyingperformance.Conversely,ifstudentspaynothing,itisprobablethattheywouldnotbedevotedtothestudyormakegreateffortstoimprovethemselves.（主语从句）Conversely,ifstudentspaynothing,thereispossibilitythattheywouldnotbedevotedtothestudyormakegreateffortstoimprovethemselves.（同位语从句）

假设：不付钱学生可能不会努力Toconclude,Iamstronglyconvincedthatstudentsshouldnotpaythefullcostoftheircollegestudiesmainlybecauseofthedifficultiesitmaybringtothefinanciallychallengedstudentsaswellasthedifferentresponsibilitiesofgovernmentsandstudents.（宾语从句，名词短语）尾段（重申观点＋总结论据）Toconclude,Iamstronglyconvincedthatstudentsshouldnotpaythefullcostoftheircollegestudiesmainlybecauseitmaybringdifficultiestothefinanciallychallengedstudentsandtheresponsibilitiesofgovernmentsandstudentsaredifferent.

(宾语从句，状语从句）Duetothefactthatpeoplewhohavereceivedcollegeeducationearnhighersalariesthanthosewhoarenotwelleducated,somepeoplearguethatstudentsshouldbearallthetuitionfeebythemselves.

Personally,Idonotagreewiththis.Thereareseveralreasonswhystudentsshouldnotpayallthecostoftheirstudy.Firstofall,itmaybedifficultforstudentswhoarefromefamiliestoaffordthehightuitionfee.Consequently,theywouldlosetheopportunitytoreceivebettereducation,whichmaybeahugelossofpotentialtalentsforthesociety.Secondly,governmentshavetheresponsibilitytoofferfinancialsupporttoensurestudents’accesstohighereducation,becausewell-cultivatedcitizensplayandispensableroleinthedevelopmentofacountry.Anotherimportantfactoristhatthedutyofstudentsistostudyratherthanmakemoney,bywhichImeantheyhavenoabilitytoearnmoneyandthusshouldnotbearthehugecostofstudies.Admittedly,itisalsojustifiedforstudentstopaythefullcost.

Tostartwith,thefinancialburdenofthegovernmentwouldberelieved,asaresultofwhichmorefundcouldbeexpendedonsomeurgentprojects,likemedicalcare,toimprovethequalityoflifeforpeople.Furthermore,studentswouldvaluetheiropportunitiesofstudyandstrivehardtoachieveasatisfyingperformance.Conversely,ifstudentspaynothing,itisprobablethattheywouldnotbedevotedtothestudyormakegreateffortstoimprovethemselves.Toconclude,Iamstronglyconvincedthatstudentsshouldnotpaythefullcostoftheircollegestudiesmainlybecauseofthedifficultiesitmaybringtothefinanciallychallengedstudentsaswellasthedifferentresponsibilitiesofgovernmentsandstudents.科技类正面影响负面影响1.

工作效率提高improveworkefficiency2.

便利，足不出户只需鼠标一点，节省成本convenience,withtheclickofamouse,cost-effective3.轻松获得大量信息，丰富知识obtaininformationeasily,enrichone’sknowledge1.工作和家庭时间模糊，压力增大lessfamilytime,increasingworkpressure2.身体健康问题，电子产品辐射，视力下降，锻炼时间减少physicalproblems,radiation,weakeneyesight,lessoutdoorexercise3.

心理问题，沉迷于虚拟世界，减弱人际关系psychologicalproblem,beindulgedinvirtualworld,weakentherelationshipswithfamilymembersandfriends4.安全问题，网络犯罪，侵犯隐私

securityissue,cybercrimes,invadeprivacy2014.4.26WithcomputersandInternet,peoplecanstudyandworkwithouttravelingtoschoolorcompany.Dotheadvantagesoutweighitsdisadvantages?2014.3.13Somethinkthatprintedbooksarenotnecessaryindigitalera,becauseallwritingcanbestoredelectronically.Othersthinkprintedbookswillplayimportantrole.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2013.3.2UniversitiesandcollegesareofferingqualificationsthroughdistancelearningfromtheInternetratherthanteachersintheclassroom.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthisoutweighthedisadvantages?关键词：distancelearningVSteachersintheclassroomdistance好：1.

自主方便2.

信息量大容易获取teachers

好：1.灵活度高2.

面对面交流3.精神指导”UniversitiesandcollegesareofferingqualificationsthroughdistancelearningfromtheInternetratherthanteachersintheclassroom.Doyouthinktheadvantagesofthisoutweighthedisadvantages?“Duetothefactthattheformofeducationhasundergonehugechangeswiththeadventofonlineeducation,somepeoplearguethat

teachersintheclassroomcouldbesubstitutedbydistancelearningofferedbymanyuniversitiesandcolleges.Personallyspeaking,Ibelievehuman