Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforwriting课件高中英语人教

Unit1TeenagersLifeReadingforwriting--WritealetterofadviceLead-in:Teenagersmaymeetthefollowingproblems...ProblemsofteenagersInternetaddictionGenerationgapLonelinessPuppyloveLead-in:HaveyoueverhadsuchproblemsWhatdidyoudoOrwhatwillyoudoAreyoucuriousabouttheletterWhensomeonefacedsuchchallenges,hewrotetoSusanLuo.SusanLuo,anadviserforteenagers,hasreceivedaletteraskingforsomeadvice.Observetheletter.DateGreetingBodyCloseSignatureWhile-reading:NowreadherreplyanddiscussthefollowingquestionsWhatis WorriedFriend’sproblemWhatsuggestionsdoesSusanLuogiveBesidessuggestions,whatelsedoesSusanLuosayinherlettersCirclethekeywordsHeisworriedabouthisfriendwhoisaddictedtocomputergames.1)Talktohisfriendabouthisbehaviour2)Encouragehisfriendtotrynewhobbies1)SheunderstandsWorriedFriend’sproblemsandfeelings2)ShealsotalksaboutthenegativeeffectsofcomputeraddictionsReadtheletteragainHowdidSusanorganisethecontentBackground

Iunderstandhowyoufeel

IknowwhattheproblemisThisismyadviceandreasonsIthinkmyadvicewillhelpInordertomakesomechangesabouttheschoolcanteen,LiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudent,wrotealetterforadvicetoprincipal,tooLet’sreadhisletter!Dearprincipal,I’mLiHua.Manystudentsinourschoolarenotsatisfiedwiththecanteen.SoI’mwritingtoadviseyoutomakesomechangesaboutit.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Firstofall,Iwouldliketosuggestthatthepricesshouldbemoreresonableandthechoicesofdishesshouldbemorevarious.Becausesomestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthechoicesaretoolimited.What’smore,mysecondsuggestionisthatyou’dbetteropenmoreservicewindowstoreducingwaitingtime.Sowecanhavemoretimetohavearest.Mostimportantly,it’snecessaryforschoolcanteentoemploysomenewchefwhoaregoodatcooking.Idohopeyoucantakemyadviceintoseriousaccount.AndIhopetheywillbehelpful.Goodluckwithyou.YoursLiHuaObservetheformatoftheletter!Background&Purpose

SuggestionsFirstofall,What’smoreMostimportantlyExpectations&HopesHowdidLiHuamakehissuggestionspersuasive.Now,ifyouwereanadviser,howwillyouwritealetterofadvice获悉情况+写作目的提出建议+具体原因表达期望Usefulexpressions:Situation/Background:Knowingthat.....得知....I’mmorethandelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高兴收到你的信件，询问我关于...的建议I'msorryyouhavetroublein...很遗憾你在...(方面)遇到了困难Writingpurpose:I’mwritingto....我写信....I’mwritingtoyouto...我写信给你是为了...I’mwritingtoyouinthehopethat....我写信给你希望....Usefulexpressions:Suggestions&details:Iwouldliketosuggestthat.....,whichishelpfulforyourproblem.我建议你....,这对你这的问题很有帮助Myfirst/secondadviceisthatyoushould....,because...我的第一/第二条建议是你应该...,因为....Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucan...我觉得这将是更有益的，如果你能....Ithinkitwouldbeagoodideato…我认为....将是个好主意UsesomelinkingwordstomakethemclearUsefulexpressions:Linkingwords:Firstofall/tobeginwith/Inthefirstplace首先，What’smore/Inaddition/Besidethat/Moreover此外，

Mostimportantly最重要的是Atthesametime同时Andthen然后Lastbutnotleast最后但同样很重要Usefulexpressions:Hope/Wish/Expect:Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.

我希望我的建议对你有用2.Intheend,Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmyadvicehelpful.

最后，如果你觉得我的建议有帮助我将十分高兴3.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

期待你的回信4.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真心希望我的建议对你有所帮助。如果还有什么我能帮上忙，务必告知我。注意：书写差，给分降档MinHoWritingPracticee7d195523061f1c03a90ee8e42cb24248e56383cd534985688F9F494128731F165EE95AB4B0C0A38076AAEA07667B1565C446FC45FF01DFB0E885BCDBDF3A284F3DB14DA61DD97F0BAB2E6C668FB4931DED5FAA0CB712CCE3A8