2021通用版高考英语二轮复习短文改错专项训练03高考真题模拟题

A组短文改错高考真题Correction1(2019课标全国Ⅰ)Ibecameinterestinginplayingfootballthankstoasmallaccident.OneafternoonwhereIwasinprimaryschool,Iwaswalkingbytheschoolplayground.Suddenlyfootballfelljustinfrontofmebutalmosthitme.Istoppedtheballandkickedithardlybacktotheplayground.Toeveryone’ssurprising,theballwentintothenet.Allthefootballplayerontheplaygroundcheeredloudly,saythatIhadatalentforfootball.Fromnowon,Istartedtoplaymyfootballwithclassmatesafterschool.Iamagoodplayernow.Correction2(2019课标全国Ⅱ)SinceIwasakid,I’veconsidereddifferentjobIwouldliketodo.First,Iwantedtobeafireman,whoseuniformlookedsocoolly.Then,whenIwasinthefivegrade,IwantedtobeateacherbecauseIlikedmyEnglishteachertoomuch.WhenIstudiedchemistryhighschool,Ireconsideredmygoalordecidedtobeadoctor.Theyweretworeasonsforthedecision.OnewasthatIwasamazingatthefactthatasickpersoncouldfeelmuchmorebetterafterseeingadoctor.AndtheotheristhatIwantedtohelppeopleinneed.Correction3(2019课标全国Ⅲ)I’vehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamistoopensacafe.Thoughitmayappearsimple,itrequiredalotofideasandefforts.WhatIwantisnotjustanordinarilycafebutaveryspecialone.Iwantmycafehaveaspecialthemesuchaslike“TangDynasty”.Inthecafe,customerswillenjoyyourselvesinthehistoricalenvironmentwhatiscreatedforthem.IfIsucceedinmanageone,Iwillopenmore.Iwishtohaveachainofcafesinmanydifferentcity.Eachofmycafeswillhaveadifferentthemeandanuniquestyle.Correction4(2018课标全国Ⅰ)Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfathertovisitmygrandparents.Ifindabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywerelivinginasmallhousewithdogs,ducks,andanotheranimals.LastwinterwhenIwenthereagain,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensofchicken.Theyalsohadasmallpondwhichtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotbysellthefish.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendofourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears,butheagreed.Correction5(2018课标全国Ⅱ)WhenIwaslittle,Friday’snightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplaycardgamesofallsortinthesittingroom.Asthekid,Ilovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesIaskedtowatchingthem,myparentswouldnottoletme.Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.StillIunwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.Ididn’trealizehowrightmyparentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.ThegamesmyparentstaughtmewhereIwasachildturnedouttobeveryusefullaterinmylife.Correction6(2018课标全国Ⅲ)ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilent,waittoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someofuswereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclassactivity;otherswerenervousandanxious.Ihaddonemyselfhomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraidthattospeakinfrontofalargergroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmyfatheroncesaid,“Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludelearningfromtextbooks,andmistakeaswell.”Immediate,Iraisedmyhand.Correction7(2017课标全国Ⅰ)Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor’sorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,“Speedup!”“Slowdown!”“Turningleft!”IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.Correction8(2017课标全国Ⅱ)Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables!Correction9(2017课标全国Ⅲ)WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbeeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.Correction10(2016课标全国Ⅰ)MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbeingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.Correction11(2016课标全国Ⅱ)Thesummerholidayising.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itisfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.Correction12(2016课标全国Ⅲ)Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn’tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn’tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.Correction13(2015课标全国Ⅰ)WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybeeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we’lllivetoregretit.Correction14(2015课标全国Ⅱ)Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.Correction15(2014课标全国Ⅰ)Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!Correction16(2014课标全国Ⅱ)Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafterschoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.Correction17(2016四川)ItisMother’sDaytoday.Thoughit’sawesternfestival,it’spopularinChinanow.Momhasafulltimejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother’sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom’sfavoritest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMother’sDay!”Momwasgratefulandmoving.Correction18(2016浙江)WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we’dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.Correction19(2015浙江)Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Onthelefthandsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.Correction20(2015陕西)Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,“Imighthavetoretireagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits.”Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!Correction21(2015四川)Hi,Janice,It’sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We’vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It’sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatimewastingactivity!Infact,Idon’tliketogoanymore,soI’mafraidI’lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.GraceCorrection22(2014浙江)IwastakingatraintoLondon’sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong,atraininspectorestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn’tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticketownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.Correction23(2014辽宁)DearJeremyandAlice,Althoughwe’vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,we’rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword,yourdog—Cleo.We’vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo’searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe’soutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingevenbefore5o’clock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowcloselythehousesare.Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.Sincerely,JackandRoseCorrection24(2014四川)Hello,boysandgirls!Today,Iamgoingtotalkwithwhatyoushoulddowhenafirealarmgooff.Ifyouhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherandclassmate.Don’tpanicorgetoutofline,andtryingtoremainquietandcalmly.Soonthefirefighterswilleandputoutafire.Ifit’safalsealarmandthereisnofire,yourteacherwillleadusbacktotheclassroom.Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingandhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.B组模拟精选Correction1(2019届福建泉港一中、南安国光中学期中联考)Ofmyteachers,Mr.Mooreistheonewhomakesanimpressionofme.Thoughheis50,butheappearsveryyoung.Undoubtedly,he’soneofthemostpopularteacherinourschool.paringwithotherteachers,Mr.Moorepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching.Hetriesvariouswaystomakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Inhispointofview,weshouldnotonlyknow“what”,butalsounderstand“why”.Consequently,insteadofgivingusimmediatelyanswers,heisalwaysencouragedustothinkbyhimselfwheneverheputsforwardquestions.Withhishelp,we’vemaderapidprogresses,learninghowtoanalyzeandsettledproblems.Whatwonderfulworldof“why”heleadsusto!Correction2(2019届湖北孝感一中、应城一中等五校期中联考)Oneofmyfriendshavesentmeashortmessage,saythattruefriendsareonesoulintwobodies,whichmovesmeverymuchandmakesmethinkhowtruefriendshipis.Nowadays,thewordfriendshiphasbeenusedveryoftenthatithaslostitsmeaning.Somejokinglyputitthatfriendsaremadetobetakenadvantage.Inmyopinion,truefriendshipdoesn’tmeanthatwhenyouneedyourfriendshelp,you’lltreatthemtodinner.Truefriendshipisthemunicationoftheheartsandunderstandofthesouls.Truefriendskeepyouinthemind,nomatterwheretheyare.Onceyouhavefoundsuchtruefriends,dotreasurehim.Withfriendship,lifeproveshappilyandharmonious.Correction3(2019届湖北宜昌示范高中协作体期中)Swimmingismyfavoritesport.IusuallyswimsinaswimmingpoolclosetothatIlive.Yesterday,myfriendTonyandIdecidetogoswimminginthesea.ItturnedouttobeoneofthemostexcitingexperiencesIhadeverhad.Atfirst,seenthewavesingoneafteranother,Iwasafraid.ThoughIwasnotabadswimmerintheswimmingpool,butswimmingintheseawasdifferent.IwasjustabouttogiveitupwhileIsuddenlynoticedalittleboywalkingtowardstheseacalm.Weakasheseemed,hewentstraightintotheseawithanyhesitation.Encouragedbyher,Iovercamemyfearandfinallymadesuccessfulattempt.Correction4(2019届湖南浏阳六校期中联考)OneMondayafternoon,wewereplayingbasketballinplaygroundwhileIsuddenlyslippedandfellover.Onseeingthat,allmyclassmatesrushedtome.Underthehelpofseveralotherstudents,LiXiang,oneofmybestfriendputmeonhisbackandheadtofortheclinicimmediately.ItturnedoutthatmyrightanklegotinjuredbutIhadtobesenttohospital.Hedidnotleaveuntilanambulancearrived.Thefollowingday,hecametoseeme.Tomygreatlyrelief,hebroughttextbookstothemandhelpedmewithmylessons.Itwasagreatpleasuretohavesuchadevotingfriend.Correction5(2019届福建长汀一中等六校联考)Recentlymanyschoolshavetakenuptoughmeasurestoforbidstudentstobringtheirsmartphonestoschool.Therefore,somestudentsbreakthisruleandsomeevenplaywiththeirsmartphonesinclassandthatmakestheteachersdiscouraging.Thedisadvantagesofstudentsbringingsmartphonestoschoolisobvious.Ontheonehand,smartphonescandistractstudents’attentions.Onotherhand,somestudentsmaygetaccessforsomeunhealthywebsites,whichdoesharmtotheirdevelopment.What’sbad,somestudentsarelikelytoparethebrandsoftheirsmartphoneswiththeirclassmates’.Inmyopinion,Istrongsupportbanningsmartphonesinschools.Onlybythismeanscanyoudevotemoreenergiestoourstudyandachieveourgoals.Correction6(2018福建漳州二次调研)IamsogladyoucanvisitmeinLondon.Knowingthatyou’venevertraveloutsideofAsia,I’dtellyouabitaboutyoucanexpecttofind.WhenIfirstarrived,IfoundthatLondonissuchainternationalcity.TherearemanyChineserestaurants,soBritishpeoplehardlyeatChinesefoodforbreakfast.Mostofthemgetusedtobaconoreggwithafewslicesoftoast.Tippingalwayspuzzlesme.Ifyouwanttoavoidtogettingconfused,youshouldalwaysleave10%ofthebilltotheservice.Besides,it’sverydifficultforourChinesetounderstandBritishhumour.Sodon’tbesurprisedwhenyoudon’tthinkanythingisfunny.ThemajorityofBritishpeopleisfriendly.Anyway,Iamsolookingforwardtoyourvisitthere.Correction7(2018安徽合肥二次质检)LastSaturdayourclasswenthikinginacountryside.Wemeetatourschoolgateandsetoffat8:00am.Ontheway,weweresingingandlaughinghappilywhileagirlsuddenlyfellintoadeephole.Shefeltsofrighteningandevenburstintotears.Oneofmyclassmatefoundalongropeandwefinallygothimout.Fortunately,shedidn’tsufferseriouslyinjuries,butitseemedthatherankleslightlytwisted.Wemanagedtosendinghertothenearesthospital.Itisanexperiencewe’llneverforgetit,thoughwedidn’tenjoyourselvesverymuchthatday.Correction8(2018河南新乡二模)MyfriendandIalwaysplayedoutdoorwhenwewereyoung.Duringspringrains,weclimbeduptoourforttreehouseandplayedcards.Thenintheamusedautumn,werolledaroundintheorangeleaf.Thisallendoneday,whenmyfriendreceivedvideogameplayerforhisbirthday.Inthebegin,hesometimesinvitedmeovertoplaywithhim.Butthisbegantohappenlessandless,becauseofhishousewassmall,andhismotherdidn’tlikevisitors.Nowweneverseeeachanother,asheisalwaysplayedhisvideogames.Imissmyfriend.Correction9(2017四川宜宾二诊)DearEditor,I’maseniorhighschoolstudent,namedLiHua.Nowadays,itwasfashionableforusstudentstohaveiPads.UsinganiPad,youcanlistentomusic,downloadlearningmaterials,andsoon.Obvious,itgreatlyhelpsusatourstudies.Somestudents,however,bringtheiriPadstotheclassroomandlistentomusicwithoutearphones,thatmakesteachersandotherstudentsannoying.Someofthemevenwastetimeplayvideogamesinclass.Inmyopinions,theclassroomisaplacetostudyin.Therefore,weshouldmakeagooduseofiPadstoimproveourstudies.Meanwhile,schoolsshouldmakesomerulesinstructthestudentstouseiPadsproperly.Correction10(2017山东枣庄一模)Itismygrandfather’seightybirthdaytoday.Asusual,allmyfamilygottogethertocelebratehim.Weboughthimalotofpresent,andmyfatherpreparedabigbirthdaycake.Atthedinnerparty,wesingtheHappyBirthdaysong.Hemadeawishhappybeforeheblewthecandlesout.Withasurprisegift,Icookedadishforhim!AsIhadnevercookedbefore,hewassosurprisedthatthedishwasserved.Mygrandfathersaidthatitwasthebetterbirthdaygifthehadreceived.Actually,mymotherhelpedmecookeditandIhadbeenpracticedforseveraldays.C组提升训练Correction1(2019届湖南三湘名校教育联盟一次联考)LastSunday,myfamilywentforwalkinanearbypark.Wewantedtobreathethefreshairandhavingfunthere.However,whengoingout,wefinditwascloudyandsmoggy.Onlyafewpeoplewerewalkingquickonthestreetswearingtheirmasks.Iwaswonderingwhywasthematterwhenmylittlebrotherbegantocoughloudly.SuddenlyIrealizedthatitwasairpollution.Sowehadtogotohomethatday.Smokefromcars,buses,andfactoriesmaketheairdirty,thatisharmfultoourhealth.Ithinktheyshouldalldosomethingtokeeptheairclean.Correction2(2019届安徽皖南八校一次联考)Manyachildtakewhattheirparentsdoforthemforgranted.Theyhaven’trealizedthemeaningofbegrateful.Buttheyalwaysgetangrywiththeirparentsbecausetheydon’tgetwhattheywant.Myfriendoncetoldmethenewsthatalittlegirlwentoutofthehouseandrefusetoreturnhomeasherparentsdidnotgiveherenoughmoney.Iwassoshockingtohearit.IwouldneveraskmuchfrommyparentsbecauseIknewitwasnoteasyforhimtomakealiving.AndIalwaysfeelsothankfultowhattheyhaveofferedtome.IfsomeonewhogivesmeahandwhenIaminneed,IwillrememberhimandifIhaveachance,Iwillpayhimback.Inshort,itisagratefulheartmakesusbeingkindpeopleandcreateaharmoniousenvironment.Correction3(2019届福建安溪一中、养正一中、惠安一中、泉州实验中学期中)Ihaveaoldersister.HernameisMonica.Heisveryprettyandsmart,withlongblackhairandbigeye.Sheisalwaysreadytohelpmeandlookafterme.Butshewasusedtobeeasytogetangry,especiallythatshewaswithfamilymembersonly.OnceItalkedtoherthisproblem.Feelingterriblesorry,sheagreedwithmebutpromisedtomakeachange.Shealsothankedmeformakingherawareofherproblem.Shehadmadehugeprogressonthatbadhabitsofar.NowIlikeherevenmoreandIamgladIhavesoagreatsister.Correction4(2019届吉林省重点中学二次联考)Growingup,Ididn’thavemuchambitionandIwaswastedalotoftimeonvideogames.Oneday,Ipickedupabook,thatwasaboutsevenhabitsofhighlysuccessfulteenagers.Wedon’tremembermuchaboutthestory,andonekeyconceptthattrulyimpressedmewastheideaoftime.Thebookstressedtheimportanceofuseourtimewisely.DuringthattimeIwasaimlessperson.Itsoundedcrazily,butIdeterminedtoreadit.AfterIreadit,Imakeadecisiontospendingasmuchtimeaspossiblejustreading.I’vemadegreatprogressessincethen.Correction5(2019届安徽江淮十校二次联考)MissZhangisoneofmymostfavoriteteachers.Shehasaslimbuildandalwaystieshishairinaponytail.Sheis35,butshelooksquiteyoungatherage.WhichimpressesmemostisMissZhang’swayofteaching.Shedevotesherselftoteachandprepareswellforeveryclass.Notonlydidshehelpustounderstand“what”,butsheexplores“why”.Sheencouragesustothinkindependentandhavediscussionsamongourselveswhenwefacedwithproblems.Sheissuchainspiringpersonwithastrongsenseofresponsibilities,andweallrespectandadmireher.Correction6(2018江西赣州3月模拟)MynameisLiMing,astudentstudiedinGanzhouNo.18MiddleSchool.IameagerbeeavolunteerinyourgroupandIcanworktillmynexttermbegins.Ihavearealtalentonsinging.Igetfirstprizeinthesingingpetitioninourschoollastyear.However,Icanteachchildrenhowtosingsongs.Besides,Iplaythepianoverywell,thatwillhelpalotinmywork.Iamwarmheartedandalwaysbereadytohelp.Helpingotherpeoplemakesmyselfhappy.IbelieveIcanmakefriendwiththechildren.IhopeIamfortunatelyenoughtobeamemberofyourgroup.Correction7(2018安徽江南十校3月联考)Itisnodoubtthatweproducelotsofgarbageeveryday.However,fewpeoplehavethehabitofsortingwaste.Thiswillbringlotsofproblem.First,thevalueofthingsthatcanberecycledorreused,suchasplasticandpaper,arereduced.Besides,dealwithsomewastebyburningitwillcauseseriousenvironmentallypollution.Forthesereasons,thegovernmentshouldtakeeffectivelymeasurestocallforwastesorting.Morepublicitycampaignsandpublicserviceadvertisementsshouldruntoraisepublicaware.Thegovernmentcanalsodesignthecolorfulgarbagecanswithclearwastesortingimagesonittoencouragepeopletosortwaste.Correction8(2018山西二模)Mymumisavolunteerinahospital.ShebroughtdinnereverySundaytothepeopleattendingtheirrelativeswhoareinhospital.OneSunday,Mumaskedmetohelpherwithdinner.Atthefirst,Ididn’twantto,sointheendshepersuadedmetogo.Halfanhourlate,wearrived.Wequicklysetupatableandstartedgivingpeoplefood.Thepeopleservingthereweredeeplymovedandshowedourgratefulness.Itwasamazedtolookatpeople’sface,especiallythoseofchildren.Itmademefeelgladlyforbeingthere.ThatdayIrealizedthatthevalueoflifeisnotonlyaboutreceiving,butgivingaswell.Correction9(2017江西八所重点中学4月联考)LastnightIwasatacoffeeshop.Therewasawonderfullymusicshow.AsIgotuptogetacupofcoffeeandacookie,Inoticeamiddleagedwomannearme.Clearly,shehadcaughtinafireofsomekind.Hisfacewassobadlyburnedthatshelookedverytight.Ithoughtabouthowbraveshewastoeoutbutappearinpublic.WhenIreturnedbacktomyseat,Iturnedtowardsthewomanandsaid,“Isn’theawonderfulperformers?”AndIgaveherthelargestsmileIwasabletogive.Tomypleased,shelookedrightatmeandgavemeahugesmileforreturn.Itwashersmilewhichmadeherwholefacelightuplastnight.Shewasbeautiful.Correction10(2017河北衡水中学下学期期中)Iscreativityanaturalgiftlikegoodlooks,orisitsomethingthatitcanbeacquiredlikeknowledge?Ifweanalyzethecreativeprocesscareful,wemightknowwhatitisandwhatitmightwork.Thecreativeprocesshasalwaysacceptedasthesourceof