2023-2024学年外研版（2019）必修第三册 Unit5 What an adventure!解透单元写作学案（有答案）

Unit5解透单元写作主题与作——探险旅行1.写作任务假定你是李华，你校外教约翰准备周末去附近的云雾山探险旅行，发来电子邮件向你询问注意事项。请你根据下列提示，给他回一封电子邮件。（1）准备一张云雾山的当地地图（2）查询当地实时天气，带上必要的衣服、食品、药品及手电筒（ashlight）；（3）必要的话，找一位向导。注意：（1）词数80左右（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。DearJohn,I’mgladtoknowthatyouwilltraveltoandexploreYunwuMountain.Andit’sagreatpleasureformetoofferyousomeadvice._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2.写作思路（1）读题，确定写作体裁和主题通过读题我们知道，这是一篇应用文，要求写一封电子邮件，向外教提出建议。（2）明确写作要求①内容要求准备当地地图（preparealocalmap）查询天气（theweather），带上物品（clothes，food，medicines，aflashlight必要的话，找一位向导（aguide）②词数80左右。3.素材整理（1）关键词语adventure，travel，journey，trip，tour，guide，explore，tent，camp，hotel，touristattraction（旅游景点），placesofinterest，scenicspots（景点），interesting，exciting，attractivefantastic，boring/dull，tiring，comfortable，funny，well-organised（2）翻译句子①首先，你要准备一张云雾山的当地地图。（firstofall）_____________________________________________________________________②出发前，你应该上网查询那里周末的天气信息，以便带足够的衣服和食品。（lookforsomeinformation）_____________________________________________________________________③同时，带一个手电筒和一些药很有必要。（it’snecessaryto）_____________________________________________________________________④如果有当地向导为你服务，那就更好了。（evenbetter）_____________________________________________________________________⑤祝你玩得开心！（wish）_____________________________________________________________________答案：①Firstofall,youshouldpreparealocalmapofYunwuMountain.②Beforestarting,youshouldsurftheInternettolookforsomeinformationabouttheweatherontheweekendtheresoastotakeenoughclothesandfood.③Meanwhile,it’snecessarytotakeaflashlightandsomemedicines.④Ifalocalguideservesyou,itwillbeevenbetter.⑤Iwishyouagoodtime!4.满分作文（连句成篇）请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的文章。DearJohn,I’mgladtoknowthatyouwilltraveltoandexploreYunwuMountain.AndIt’sagreatpleasureformetoofferyousomeadvice.Firstofall,youshouldpreparealocalmapofYunwuMountain.Beforestarting,youshouldsurftheInternettolookforsomeinformationabouttheweatherontheweekendtheresoastotakeenoughclothesandfood.Meanwhileit’snecessarytotakeaflashlightandsomemedicines.Becausetherearefewpeoplelivinginthemountain,it’sgoodforyoutofindseveralfriendstomakethisexcitingjourneywithyoutogether.Ifalocalguideservesyou,itwillbevenbetter.Specialcareshouldbetakenwhileyoutravelinthemountain.Iwishyouagoodtime!Yours,LiHua5.佳作背诵（1）佳作一假定你是李华，你打算和几位朋友在暑假进行一次探险旅行。请根据所给信息，给住在澳大利亚的朋友戴维发一封电子邮件介绍这次旅行计划，并邀请他一起旅行。地点：海南岛时间：8月15日-8月21日主要活动：远足、爬山、游泳、篝火晚会、潜水等注意事项：请带好游泳衣和护照注意：①词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：篝火晚会campfireparty；游泳衣bathingsuitDearDavid,Howiseverythinggoing?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:DearDavid,Howiseverythinggoing?MyfriendsandIhavedecidedtogoonanadventuretriptoHainanislandduringthesummerholiday.Iamwritingtotellyouaboutourtravelplan.WewillbetravelingaroundHainanislandfromAugust15to21.Wewillgohiking,climbthemountains,swimandhaveacampfirepartythere.Wealsoplantogodivingifweatherpermits.I'dlikeyoutojoinusifpossible.Iamsurewewillhavealotoffunbeingtogether.Pleaseremembertopackyourbathingsuitandtakeyourpassport.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua（2）佳作二假定你是李华，你的美国朋友露西在当地一所孔子学院（ConfuciusInstitute）学习，你刚获悉她在学校举办的中文书法比赛中获得了一等奖。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件表示祝贺，并邀请她暑假来参加“游北京，登长城”活动。注意：①词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearLucy,I’mpleasedtolearnthatyou’vejustwonfirstprizeintheChinesehandwritingcompetitionheldinyourlocalConfuciusInstitute.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:DearLucy,I’mpleasedtolearnthatyou’vejustwonfirstprizeintheChinesehandwritingcompetitionheldinyourlocalConfuciusInstitute.I’mwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationstoyou.TheprizecameasnosurprisetomebecauseIknowyouloveChineseculture,especiallytheChineselanguage.I’msoproud