2024届高考作文复习：读后续写姐弟矛盾-弟弟Kamil不小心打碎了姐姐心爱的玻璃灯笼 讲义 素材

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theraysofthesettingsunglowedorangeandgold.

Itlookedlikeahugetraditionallantern(灯笼)litintheskyforthewholeworldtosee,asRamadan(斋月),the

Muslim(穆斯林)holymonth,

cametoanend.透过餐厅的窗户，落日的光芒闪耀着橙色和金色。它看起来像一个巨大的传统灯笼(灯笼)照亮天空，让全世界都能看到，就像斋月一样(斋月),穆斯林(穆斯林)神圣的月份，结束了。DuringRamadan,Muslimchildren

danceinthestreets,swingingtraditionallanternsofallsizes.Thisyear,Ayasha'sgrandparentsinEgypthadsentalanterntoKamil,Ayasha'syoungerbrother.Kamil's

lantern

was

bright

blue,with

abattery-powered

flashing

light

instead

of

a

candle.

Ever

sinceKamil

hadopened

the

package,he

had

been

joyouslyswinging(

旋转)

hisflashinglantern.斋月期间，穆斯林儿童在街上跳舞，挥动各种大小的传统灯笼。今年，Ayasha在埃及的祖父母给Ayasha的弟弟Kamil送了一盏灯笼。卡米尔的灯笼是亮蓝色的，用电池供电的闪光灯代替了蜡烛。自从卡米尔打开包裹后，他就高兴地摆动着（旋转)他闪烁的灯笼。“Hislanternis

reallyjustaholidaytoy,"Ayashasaidtoherselfasshewatchedhim,"Mylanternis

special,somethingIwanttokeepforever".Herlantern,madeofbeautifulshinyglass,was

alovingtouchofhome.Hergrandparentshadsentittoherwhenher

familymovedtoAmericaforherdad'snewengineeringjob.Ayashasmiledproudlyasshelit

thecandle

insideher

lantern.“他的灯笼真的只是一个节日玩具，”Ayasha看着他对自己说，“我的灯笼很特别，我想永远保存下去。”她的灯笼是由美丽闪亮的玻璃制成的，是一种充满爱的家的感觉。当她的家人搬到美国为她父亲的新工程工作时，她的祖父母把它寄给了她。Ayasha骄傲地笑着点燃灯笼里的蜡烛。Tomorrowwouldbeadayforcelebration—forwearingnewclothestomorningprayers(祷告)forsharinggiftsandsweettreatsandforshowinglovetofamilyandfriends.

Ayashacouldn'twait.明天将是庆祝的日子——穿着新衣服去做晨祷(祷告)分享礼物和甜食，向家人和朋友表达爱意。Ayasha等不及了。“Timefor

dinner!The

food

smells

delicious!”Dad

announced.“My

favoritecake!”Kamilcriedexcitedly,swinginghislanternincircles.“Becareful,Kamil!”Mom

cried

and

carefullyavoidedtheswinginglanternasshecarriedalargebowlofsouptothetable.ButKamilwastooexcitedtocalmdown.Thebluelightkeptswinginguntilunfortunately,heknockedintoMom.Hislanternfellontothesofaandwasintact(完好无损的),butthebowlMomwasholdingfell

tothefloor,spilling(洒)thesoupandsendingbrokenpieceseverywhere!“晚饭时间到了！食物闻起来很香！”爸爸宣布。卡米尔兴奋地喊道：“我最喜欢的蛋糕！”他把灯笼转了一圈。“小心点，卡米尔！”妈妈一边哭一边小心翼翼地避开摆动的灯笼，一边端着一大碗汤端到桌子上。但卡米尔太激动了，无法平静下来。蓝光一直在闪烁，直到不幸的是，他撞到了妈妈。他的灯笼掉在沙发上，完好无损(完好无损的),但是妈妈拿着的碗掉到了地板上，洒了出来(洒)汤和发送碎片到处！注意：1.

续写词数应为150左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Tomake

things

worse,Kamil

stumbled(绊倒)against

the

table,knockingoverAyasha’glasslantern.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.故事梗概：

这是穆斯林斋月前一天，弟弟Kamil收到了爷爷奶奶的一份礼物——一个漂亮的电池蓝灯笼。当Kamil拿着灯笼开心得转圈炫耀时，姐姐Ayasha虽然有点羡慕，但是看到前两年爷爷奶奶送给自己的玻璃灯笼，感到也很自豪。

很明显Kamil有点兴奋过头了。当妈妈端着一大碗汤过来、并且提醒他不要再转圈、以防止碰到时，Kamil根本听不进去。突然，他碰到了妈妈，他的灯笼掉到沙发上。而妈妈的汤碗掉到地上碎了，汤撒了一地。Para1:更加糟糕的是，Kamil绊到了桌子，然后碰上Ayasha的玻璃灯笼。Para2:

Ayasha打开门，看见Kamil手里提着他最珍爱的灯笼站在门口。续写情节发展：第一段1.theconsequenceofKamil’sstumble乐极生悲Ayasha’sfeelingsandreactions悲痛欲绝Kamil’sfeelingsandreactions后悔不迭（注意衔接）第二段：1.Kamil’sapology赔礼道歉Ayasha’sreactions接纳迎接Theme揭示主题【初步构思】Tomakethingsworse,Kamilstumbledagainstthetable,

knockingover

Ayasha'sglasslantern.Thebeautifulshinyglass

shattered

intopieces,scatteringalloverthefloor.Ayashafelther

heartsink

asshelookedatthebrokenpiecesofherspeciallantern.Shecouldn'thelpbut

feelupsetandangry

atKamilforbeingsocareless.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.Hiseyeswere

filledwithremorse,andhe

heldoutthelanterntoher."I'msosorry,Ayasha.Ididn'tmeantobreakyourlantern,"Kamilsaid,hisvoicefilledwithgenuineregret.【衔接+升华】Tomakethingsworse,Kamilstumbled(绊倒)againstthetable,knockingoverAyasha’sglasslantern.Itsbreakingglasssoundedlikeawarningbell,andthecandleinsideblewoutimmediately.

The

roomwas

very

quiet

for

a

moment.

“Accidents

happen,”

Mom

broke

thesilencewithasighasshewipedupthespills.Inafitofanger,

Ayashastormedintoherbedroom

withherbrokenlantern,

slammingthedoorbehindher.

ThebrightRamadansunsetfadedtodarkness,andherexcitementfadedwithit.

Forher,thecelebrationwasspoiledbeforeitevenstarted.Ayashacriedherselftosleep.

Suddenly,shewaswakenupbyaknockonthedoor.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.Withhisheaddrooping,hesaidsoftly,“YoucanhavemylanternsinceIbrokeyours.”Knowing

howmuchhisfirstlanternmeanttohim,Ayashawastouchedbyhisoffer.

Ramadanwasatime

forfamilyandforgiveness,andlanternswereonlysymbols.

Thereallightandwarmthcame

fromactsofkindness.Ayashaembracedherbrotherandanswered,“Thankyou,Kamil,butkeep

yourlantern.Gotobedearlytonight.

Wedon’twanttobelateformorningprayerstomorrow.”

Ayashasmiled,determinedtogivethanksforstrength,health,andalltheblessingsinlife.（参考答案）【下水作文】Tomakethingsworse,Kamilstumbledagainstthetable,knockingoverAyasha'sglasslantern.Thebeautifulshinyglassshatteredintocountlesspieces,scatteringacrossthefloor.Ayashagaspedinshock,hereyeswellingupwithtearsasshelookedatthebrokenremnantsofher

cherished

lantern.Theroomfellsilent,theexcitementandjoythathadfilledtheairjustmomentsagonowreplacedbyaheavyatmosphereofdisappointment.

Ayasha'sparentsrushedtocleanupthemess,carefullypickingupthebrokenglassandwipingawaythespilledsoup.Kamilstoodinthecorner,hisfacefilledwithregretandsadness.Heknewhehadcausedagreatdealoftroubleandhadruinedhissister's

precious

lantern.

Unabletocontainheremotionsanylonger,

Ayasharantoherroomandclosedthedoorbehindher.

Shesatonherbed,feelingamixofangerandsadness.Butasshewipedawayhertears,athoughtoccurredtoher.Perhapsthis

accident

wasareminderofwhattrulymatteredduringthisspecialtimeofcelebration.AyashaopenedthedoorandsawKamilstandingtherewithhismost-treasuredlantern.Itsbrightbluelightstillflashed,illuminatingthehallway.Inthatmoment,Ayasha

realizedthatmaterialpossessionscouldbereplaced,buttheloveandbondbetweenfamilymemberswereirreplaceable.

Withagenuinesmileonherface,Ay