高三英语二轮复习读后续写女儿和爸爸一起努力实现梦想讲义

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中文翻译MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStatecrosscountryraceofmysenioryearofhighschool,whichwouldbetheclimaxofmyexistence.我和我爸爸一直期待着我高中最后一年的州际越野赛，这将是我生活的高光时刻。Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andI

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makeitintothetopfifteen.Wehadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.我在队里是跑得最快的，应该能进入前十五名。我们已经为这场比赛准备了三年。Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerandwaswildwithjoybymysuccessinrunning.这对我来说，对我爸爸来说都是一切。他曾是一名赛跑运动员，他对我在跑步上取得的成功感到无比欣喜。Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun.他参加了每一场比赛，甚至会提前结束差旅回家来看我比赛。Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice,whichrangabovethecrowdtellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.

Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.我总是听着他的声音，那声音响亮地穿透了人群，他告诉我要放松双臂，他会喊出我的成绩。他鞭策我，鼓舞我，相信我。WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairyfarm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.我们在亚利桑那充满沙子运河旁花费了无数个小时训练。吸过沙漠的尘土，闻过橘树的芳香，品过牛奶场的臭气，穿越了整个城市。Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.

Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.我们用脚步丈量着土地，朝着最后的目标坚定地前行着。这是只属于我和父亲的旅程。这是上一代传下来的梦想。Thenthebigdaycame.Itwashotterthannormaltoohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.终于，比赛的日子到了。天气比平时热多了太热了。我感觉我的喉咙像一块因夏日高温而裂开的棉花田，我等着发令枪的声音。Igazedoutatthecrowd;dozensoffamiliarfacesfromchurchandschoolflickeredacrossmyview.Theyhadeforme.Theywerecountingonme.我注视着人群；熟悉面孔闪过我的视线，他们有的是我的同学，有的是在教堂做礼拜认识的朋友。他们是为了我来的。他们都对我抱以厚望。Isawmydadsethiswatch,worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface.Withthesoundofagunshot,theracebegan.我看到我的爸爸按下了手表，他的脸上既有担忧也有隐隐的兴奋。发令枪声响起，比赛开始了。Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.在前两英里半的距离里，我感觉状态很好。我从未为任何事情做过这么充分的准备。在比赛前的几个星期，我进行了艰苦的训练和严格的饮食规划。Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,blindingmewithitsbrilliance.Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.灼热的太阳晒打着我的后背，刺眼的光芒让我看不清前方的路。但是，没有什么能阻止我。续写第一段：However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.然而，不知何时，我的力量开始耗尽。续写第二段：Iwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."我小声说道，“我很抱歉，爸爸，我让你失望了。”文本分析：故事大意我和我爸爸一直期待着我高中最后一年的州际越野赛。我在队里是跑得最快的，也为此准备了三年。爸爸一直非常支持我，陪我训练，观看我的比赛，为我加油。终于，比赛的日子到了。比赛那天，太阳无情地炙烤着大地，不知何时，我的力量开始耗尽。续写情节：第一段：然而我的力量正在耗尽。尽管我知道我的胜利梦想破灭了，但我必须完成比赛。我用尽全身力气，手脚并用，一寸一寸地爬过终点线。第二段：我轻声说：“爸爸，我很抱歉让你失望了。”他温柔地笑了笑说，你永远不会让我失望。有时这些事情就会发生。重要的是你尽了最大的努力。附：官方参考答案范文Howeverwithoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Mylungsfoughttotakeinenoughair,andmyfeettransformedintocementbricks.Neckandneckwithoneofmygreatestrivals.Icouldseethefinishline.Ihadbegunthefinalsprintintoglorywhenmykneesbuckledandmylegsgaveway.NothingIcoulddowouldmakethemholdmyweight.Theywereasweakasjelly.EventhoughIknewmydreamsofvictoryhadbeendestroyed,Ihadtofinishtherace.Withallofthestrengthleftinme,Igotonmyhandsandkneesandcrawled,inchbyinch,acrossthefinishline.ShamepulsedthroughmyveinsasDadsquatteddownandpulledmeintohisarms.Iwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."Hegavemeagentlesmileandsaid."Youcouldneverdisappointme.Sometimesthesethingsjusthappen.Allthatmattersisthatyoudidyourbest."Liftingmyface,Isawmydad'seyes,inwhichIsawthesweat,thetime.andtheworkwehadputintoourdream.Themileswehadruntogether,allforthisrace.flashedacrossmymind."Butweworkedsohard.Whataboutourdream?"Iasked.Inthatsecond,theworldstoodstill.Hereachedoverformyhand,holdingbackhisowntears,andsaid."Don'tyouknowthatyouaremydreametrue?"下水文：Howeverwithoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Theairinmylungsseemedtobeevacuated,andmyfeetturnedintolargestones,asifweighingathousandpounds.Oneofmybiggestopponentshasalreadyrunaheadofme.Icanseethefinishline,butitlooksveryfaraway.Whenmykneesbentandmylegsbent,Ihadalreadystartedthefinalsprint.Mylegsareasweakasjelly.AlthoughIknowmydreamofvictoryhasbeens