2024届新高考英语热点冲刺复习如何进行读后续写情节的构思（收养小狗改变一生）

2024届新高考英语热点冲刺复习

如何进行读后续写情节的构思

(收养小狗

改变人生)学生存在的问题读中：一头雾水，读不懂，不会提取有效信息

不知道如何挖掘原文中的材料为续写所用写中：缺少衔接与连贯，续写与原文疏离，写到哪里算哪里？Teachingobjectives:ToguidetheSshowtodeterminethenewplotsandtheendingofthecontinuationwritingproperly.教学思路一：提取信息要点，摸清主旨内涵二：探求逻辑关系，梳理思维脉络三：关注情感走向，形成合理发展四：力求首尾呼应，确保前后一致第二节(满分25分)

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

IhadorderedmanygiftsonlinefortheupcomingChristmas.Oneday,whenthedoorbellrang,Iwassuresomeofthepackagesarrived.Iopenedthedoor,butonlytofindabeautifullittledogsittingon,thefloor.Itlookedupatmewithherbig,cuteeyes.Ilookedaround,buttherewasnooneinsight.Itwasobviousthatsomeonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandintentionallyleftheroutsidethedoor.

ThelovelydogwasatimelyChristmasgiftforme,indeed.Theyearmarkedaturningpointinmylife.InSeptember,myhusbandwasofferedanewjobinAfrica.Feelingthat?hadhitacareerbottleneckasaphotographerjournalist,Idecidedtorelocatewithhim.Whilemyhusbandwasbusywithhiswork,Ididn'tknowwhattodoanyway.Ifeltisolated,homesickandlackingpurpose.Welivedinahousenearariverthatcutacrossanexpansivegrassland.Withfewpeoplearound,Iwouldtakemycameraandwanderaround,photographingaimlesslyeveryday.

Soweadoptedtheabandoned.dog.Myhusbandcalledher“ourlittleangel”andInameditaccordingly.Angelseemeatobeveryhappywithusandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanionforme.Alwaysbymyside,sheenjoyedexploringtheshadybushesandmysterioustunnelsalloverthegrassland.Encouragedbyhercuriosity,Idecidedtoexplore,too.

TherewasadeepcavenearourhouseandIhadbeeneagertoexploreit.Theonlywayinwasnarrowandslippery.I-hadpromisedmyhusbandthatIwouldn'tdoitunlesshewasaround.Buthewasalwaysbusy.WithAngelasmycompanion.Ifiguredthatitwastimetostretchtherulealittlebit.

Oneday,Iequippedmyselfwithagoodflashlightandcarefullywalkeddownthedarkcave.Suddenly,Angel,whohadbeenfollowingmeclosely,rushedaheadanddisappearedintothedarkness.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.

Duringtherecoveryprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.第二节(满分25分)

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

I

hadorderedmanygiftsonlinefortheupcomingChristmas.Oneday,whenthedoorbellrang,Iwassuresomeofthepackagesarrived.Iopenedthedoor,butonlytofind

abeautifullittledogsittingon,thefloor.Itlookedupatmewithherbig,cuteeyes.Ilookedaround,buttherewasnooneinsight.Itwasobviousthatsomeonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandintentionallyleftheroutsidethedoor.

ThelovelydogwasatimelyChristmasgiftforme,indeed.Theyearmarkedaturningpointinmylife.InSeptember,myhusbandwasofferedanewjobinAfrica.FeelingthatI

hadhitacareerbottleneckasaphotographerjournalist,Idecidedtorelocatewithhim.Whilemyhusbandwasbusywithhiswork,Ididn'tknowwhattodoanyway.Ifeltisolated,homesickandlackingpurpose.Welivedinahousenearariverthatcutacrossanexpansivegrassland.Withfewpeoplearound,Iwouldtakemycameraandwanderaround,photographingaimlesslyeveryday.

Soweadoptedtheabandoned

dog.Myhusbandcalledher“ourlittleangel”andInameditaccordingly.Angelseemedtobeveryhappywithusandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanionforme.Alwaysbymyside,sheenjoyedexploringtheshadybushesandmysterioustunnelsalloverthegrassland.Encouragedbyhercuriosity,Idecidedtoexplore,too.

TherewasadeepcavenearourhouseandIhadbeeneagertoexploreit.Theonlywayinwasnarrowandslippery.I

hadpromisedmyhusbandthatIwouldn'tdoitunlesshewasaround.Buthewasalwaysbusy.WithAngelasmycompanion.Ifiguredthatitwastime

tostretchtherulealittlebit.

Oneday,Iequippedmyselfwithagoodflashlightandcarefullywalkeddownthedarkcave.Suddenly,Angel,whohadbeenfollowingmeclosely,rushedaheadanddisappearedintothedarkness.读材料---找动词ClimaxContinuationpara.1:

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.ConcludingContinuationpara.2:Duringtherecoveryprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.BeginningIfounda______dog.I________theabandoneddoghappy&satisfied分析故事情节DevelopingI________myselfandcarefully____________thedarkcave.ClimaxContinuationpara.1:

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.ConcludingContinuationpara.2:Duringtherecoveryprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.a________pointa________companionBeginningIfounda______dog.I________theabandoneddogI________myselfandcarefully____________thedarkcave.happy&satisfied

分析故事情节Idecidedto________,tooa________ChristmasgiftIfiguredthatitwastimeto____________alittlebit.Developing紧记口诀：两段首句定一框，二框二首正能量。即由续写的第一段首句与第二段首句确定第一段的框架；第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。构思框架两段首句定一框para.1:

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.para.2:Duringtherecoveryprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.鸟怎么了？recoveryteeth；late；wings；

injured；betightlyshut;heartbreaking;immediately;

cautiously/carefully;

place;acardboardbox（纸板盒）;

towels;warm;care;recover;regainenergypara.1参考词汇小试牛刀Onepossibleversion:(para.1)Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.Itriedtofreethebirdfromitsteeth.Butitwastoolate.WhenIgotitout,oneofitswingswasseriouslyinjuredanditseyesweretightlyshut.Thesightwasheartbreaking.Ireturnedhomeimmediatelyandcautiouslyplaceditinacardboardboxwithtowelstokeepitwarm.Withmyconstantcare,thelittlebirdseemedtoberecoveringfastandwasregainingenergy.para.1:

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.para.2:Duringtherecoveryprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.hitacareer________;feltisolated,______andlacking_________2.正能量构思框架(para.2)--------二框二首正能量1.二首?post;online;receive;like;beauty;encourage;tomysurprise;restartmycareer;awildlifephotographer;introduce;thewonderfulanimals;world;findbackmylife;

nolonger;isolated;homesick.para.2参考词汇小试牛刀Onepossibleversion:(para.2)Duringtherecoveringprocess,Itookmanyphotographsofthelittlebird.Ipostedsomeofthebestonesonline.Tomysurprise,Ireceivedmillionsoflikesforitsvividbeautyafewdayslater.Furthermore,Iwasencouragedto

restartmycareerasawildlifephotographerandintroducethewonderfulanimalsonthiswonderfullandtotheworld.Immediately,Ifoundbackmylifeandnolongerfeltisolated,orhomesick.Thankyou,myAngel!成文：

Afewsecondslater,itbroughtbackalittlebird.Itriedtofreethebirdfromitsteeth.Butitwastoolate.WhenIgotitout,oneofitswingswasseriouslyinjured