三年级英语Writing【区一等奖】

WritingHowtogaincoherenceinyourwriting如何让作文更有连贯性1.信息完整，覆盖所有要点;2.恰当使用较多的语法结构和词汇;3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。(可适当增加细节)写作评分标准句与句,段与段之间有一定的衔接Previouswritingexamples第二节书面表达〔总分值25分〕

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友David对国内最近很受欢送的节目?中国诗词大会?很感兴趣，写信向你了解该节目并请教学习古诗的方法。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括：

1.节目简介：2021年首播。今年的冠军是来自上海的16岁中学生武亦姝。

2.节目意义。

3.学习古诗的建议，

注意:1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

4.参考词汇：中国诗词大会ChinesePoetryCompetitionComparethefollowingexamplesExampleA(要点一：节目简介)TheTVshowiscalledChinesePoetryCompetition.Theshowwasfirstbroadcastin2021.Thisyear’schampionisWuYishu,sheisa16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai.

ExampleB(要点一：节目简介)TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021.WuYishu,a16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai,becamechampionthisyear.

ComparethefollowingexamplesExampleC(要点一：节目简介)TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021andsoonturnedoutasensation.Itwassoappealingandchallengingthatthousandsofcompetitorsacrossthecountrysignedup.Amongthem,WuYishu,astudentaged16fromShanghai,becamechampionthisyear.

Comparethefollowingexamples

ExampleA:TheTVshowiscalledChinesePoetryCompetition.Theshowwasfirstbroadcastin2021.Thisyear’schampionisWuYishu,sheisa16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai.ExampleB:TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021.WuYishu,a16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai,becamechampionthisyear.ExampleC:TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021andsoonturnedoutasensation.Itwassoappealingandchallengingthatthousandsofcompetitorsacrossthecountrysignedup.Amongthem,WuYishu,astudentaged16fromShanghai,becamechampionthisyear.

ExampleAExampleCExampleB意义连接形式连接增加细节信息合并简单句形连的主要应用〔一〕TheTVshowiscalledChinesePoetryCompetition.Theshowwasfirstbroadcastin2021.TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021.定语连接形连的主要应用〔二〕Thisyear’schampionisWuYishu,sheisa16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai.WuYishu,a16yearsoldstudentfromShanghai,becamechampionthisyear.

同位语连接形连的主要应用〔三〕Hefailedintheexamagain.Thismadehisfatherangry.Hefailedintheexamagain,whichmadehisfatherangry.定语从句连接形连的主要应用〔四〕TheTVshow,knownasChinesePoetryCompetition,wasfirstbroadcastin2021andsoonturnedoutasensation.Itwassoappealingandchallengingthatthousandsofcompetitorsacrossthecountrysignedup.代词连接状语从句连接形连的主要应用〔五〕其它常见连接词〔详见学案〕1、时间顺序2、条件3、层次递进4、转折、让步5、列举、解释6、因果7、观点8、归纳总结

意连——通过增加合理的细节，使各信息要点产生一定关联，建立意义上的连贯。

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假设你是李华，你刚从美国结束半年的英语学习回到国内。请你用英语给美国同学James写一封邮件，感谢他对你学习上的帮助。内容包括：

1.感谢对方帮助；

2.询问老师Mr.Smith的近况和联系方式；

3.邀请对方春节来中国作客。

注意:1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

ExampleA

Bytheway,IalsowouldliketoinviteyoutocometoChinaduringthisSpringFestival.Ifyoucome,Ithinkyouwillhaveagoodtime.Examplesofkeypoint3ExampleB

TheChineseSpringFestivalisapproaching.SinceyouarefondofChineseculture,whynotcomeexperienceitintheflesh?JustcomeandhaveanicetripinChina!

Makerevisionstothefollowingwritingtogaincoherence.假定你是李华，在即将来临的暑假，你父母和你打算去英国旅行。请给你的英国笔友Tony写信，说说你的旅游方案，询问他的个人意见，并希望能够会面。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Makerevisionstothefollowingwritingtogaincoherence.DearTony：

Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?IamwritingtotellyoumyplantotravelinUKwithmyparents.WewillflytoLondon.Thereisfulloftouristattractions.WewillvisitsomeplacesofinteresttoknowmoreaboutthehistoryoftheUK.Andwewilltakesomephotostheretomemorizehowbeautifulthesceneis.Besides,wealsowanttotastethedeliciousfoodinsomefamousrestaurants.Ifitispossible,Iwilltakesomesnackstoyou.SoIhopethatwecanmeeteachotherandhaveatalk.IwouldliketoaskyousomequestionsaboutEngland.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyoupleasegivemesomeniceadvice?Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.DearTony:(Onepossiblerevision)

Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?MyparentsandIareplanningtotravelinUKduringthissummervacation,soIamwritingtotellyoumyplan.Ican’twaittogettoLondon,wheretherearesomeworldfamousplacesofinterest.Amongthesescenicspots,LondonBridgeisthefirstsightIwanttovisit,foritistheplacesunginsomenurseryrhymes.Besides,theBigBen,alandmarkofLondon,isalsoamust-seesiteinourvisitinglist.WhatIwillneveraffordtomissistheCambridgeUniversity,whichisadreampla