技巧11 如何描写景色-高一英语读后续写基础技巧与整体演练

高一英语读后续写基础技巧与整体演练技巧11如何描写景色英语景色描写技巧描写是指对自然景物、社会环境和动植物的描写。描写，是用生动形象的语言，把景物的形体、特征、性质等具体地描绘出来，使人产生如临其境、如睹其物的感受。它是用富有表现力的文字描绘客观事物的一种表现形式。运用描写，可以展现地域、环境、自然景物的画面，可以绘声绘色、有形有神地展示动物、植物的神态。在记叙文中，景物描写可以创造某种气氛，烘托人物性格、展示事件背景等。我们这里选编的主要是单独成文的描写文。一、描写方式所有描写都包含两个要素：一是对象（object），二是观察者（observer）。前者指看到的或听说的客观事物，后者指看或听的人，一般是指描写文的作者。根据二者之中哪一个要素处于支配地位，我们可把描写方式分为两种：1.客观性描写客观性描写独立于观察者的感知和感情，精确记录描写对象的面目。它是一种真实的报道，目的在于告诉不能亲眼看见描写对象的读者景物的真实情况。作者把自己当作是一部照相机，用词语如实摄制真正的照片。从其超然或公正的特点来看，客观性描写文作者很像是科学家，他要从自己的工作中严格排除个人意见和感情。例如，他在描写上楼时，不能写“Iamgoingupstairs”，而只能直接写“onthesecondfloor”；也不能用反映个人意见内涵的词语，例如，要说“大楼”就要用陈述事实的“largebuilding”，而不能用含有感情的表达“amagnificentbuilding”。2.印象性描写印象性描写与客观性描写截然不同。它注视的`是描写对象在观察者或作者心目中引起的情绪或情感，而不是描写对象本身的存在。就是说，它不是向读者传达信息，而是要激发读者的感情。它是让人们去感觉，而不是让人们去看。所以，感情交流是印象性描写的首要目的。交流的过程起始于作者，它必须来源于真诚的感情。作者要想使自己的描写成功，不仅感觉要深，而且要在自己的心目中明确那是什么感情。只有作者了解了自己的心情才能把它交流给读者。二、描写类型描写文有多种分类方法，有从对象上分类的，有从方法上分类的，还有从描写角度分类的。就我们的需要而言描写文可从内容和技法两方面进行分类：从描写内容上分，我们可以把描写文分为地方介绍、自然景物描写、社会环境描写和场面描写，其中每一类又可分为若干小类。从描写技法上分，我们可以把描写分为动态、静态、动静结合、定点观察、移步换景、托物言志、情景交融等描写。例如：①Itwasbeginningtosnow,andsnowflakeswereblindingmyeyes.天开始下雪了，雪花让我看不清了。②Thesunwasbreakingthroughtheblanketofmist.太阳穿过薄雾。③Summerseesthemountainsturnbrightgreenwithgrowingrice.Duringautumn,thesesamemountainsareflashgold,andinwintertheyarecoveredinsheetsofwhitefrost.夏天，水稻生长群山绿意盎然。秋天漫山铺金，冬天银装素裹。④Alittlewayoffwasalittlebrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbanks.不远处有一条小溪，在绿色的两岸之间奔流不息，波光粼粼。三、描写文的要求在描写文的写作过程中要注意以下几点：1.要考虑好描写的视角和次序。视角，就是我们通常所讲的人称，用第一和第三人称都可以，但目的、内容和效果却不同。描写次序是指先写什么后写什么的问题。一般来讲，英语描写短文总是按空间顺序（spatialorder）来安排次序的。比如要描写一个房间时，要从先看到的部位写起，从上到下或从下到上。2.要选择好重点部位或内容来写。无论描写什么都不可能面面俱到，而要选择最能体现事物特征的一两点作细描处理，其他方面用白描手法一代而过。3.要把描写和叙述结合起来写。在实际写作中，描写多半与其他体裁结合起来使用，尤其是常与叙述交织在一起，二者“难分难舍”。一般来说，叙述是概括地显示行文进程，描写是具体细致地描述客观事物。好的描写总是把记事、写人、状物、写景紧密地揉合在一起，使其浑然一体，既突出重点，又有点有面，点面结合，创造出一种和谐的美。英语写景段落欣赏NaturalPhenomena自然现象TheClearSky晴空Whenyoulookattheskyonaclearday,itseemsasiftheearthiscoveredbyabluedome.Ifyoustandataplacewherethesurfaceoftheearthisflat;theskyseemstomeettheearthinanydirectionyoulook.在晴朗的日子,你看到天空就像一个蓝色的大圆盘.如果你极目远眺,无论从那个方向,看到的都是天地相接的地平线.SummerEvenings夏夜SometimesIwillseefallingstarsdrawbrightlinesinthesky.Thereisharmonybetweenthemoonandstarsinthequietskyandtheslowpaceofthevillage.Ireallyenjoythepeacefulsummereveningsinthevillage.有时我得到流星在天空中划出明亮的线条,宁静的夜空中挂着一轮明月和闪烁的星星,与慢节奏的村庄形成一幅和谐的美景.我非常喜欢村庄宁静的夏夜.TheSunrises日出Thenextday,thesunlightwokehimveryearly,hidingthestarsunderapinkblueandbluesky.Butthestarskeptwatchinghimfromabove.第二天,日出的光线很早就将他唤醒.夜晚的星星都被阳光藏在粉蓝色的天空下.但是它们仍然从天上看着他.BeautifulDawn凌晨美景Itwastheperfectmorningforourdailywalk:Abriskwindsweepingoceanairacrossourfaces,freshmoundsofkelplaughinginclumpsalongthebeach,andthesuncomingupfromitsflatbedoffog,redandnewandfullofpromises.对我们每日的散步来说,这是一个宜人的清晨.清冽的微风夹着海洋的气息扑面而来.一簇簇新鲜的海藻在海滩随处可见.旭日从雾霭中冉冉升起,东升红彤彤,新鲜而充满生机.TheMoon月亮Itisabeautifulandquietnight.Themoonislikeadischangingonthedarksky,whichcastsitslightoneverything.一个美丽而宁静的夜晚,月亮像一个圆盘挂在黑暗的夜空中,淡淡的月光普照万物.SummerRain夏雨Thefirstdropsofrainarehuge;theysplitintothedustontheground,andplunkontheroof.Therainnowbecomesatorrent,flungbyarisingwind.Togethertheybatterthetreesandlevelthegrasses.Waterstreamsoffroofs.Thereisonlywater.开始雨点很大,溅起地上的灰尘,打在屋顶上丁当作响.接着大更大的风助威下,瓢泼大雨倾盆而下,雨水砸向树木,踏平草地.立即,雨水像溪流一样从屋顶奔流而下.到处都是水的世界.Rainbow彩虹Iamdrawnoutsidewhiletherainstillfalls.Allaround,thereiscoolandwelcomefeeling.Ibreathedeeplyandwatchthesun’sraysstreakthroughbreakingclouds.Oneraycatchesthedropsthatfromontheedgeoftheroof,andIamtreatedtoarowoftiny,quiveringcolors—myprivaterainbow.Theyarered,orange,yellow,green,blue,indigo,andviolet,whichmakesawonderland.雨一直在下，我跑出去，享受周围那一丝丝清凉的感觉。我深深地吸了一口气，看着阳光明媚穿过残云。一缕阳光正好照在屋檐边的雨滴上，形成了只有我才看见的一条细细的，忽隐忽现的彩虹。五颜六色-----赤橙黄绿青蓝紫，简直就像仙境一般。9．AThunderStorm雷雨Theskyisfullofblackclouds.Flashesoflightninglitupthecourts,oldhouses,andramshackleporches,andthunderbeginstoroaroverhead.Nobirdssinganylonger,buttheleavesofthetreesrustleandawindblowsagainstourfaces.Adropofwaterfalls,thenanother,andthentherainfallsontheleavesofthetreesandtheironroofswithanoiseremindingusofthebeatingofdrums.Abrilliantstripeoflightfillsthesky.Suddenlytherecomesaterriblethunderclapoverhead,andthentheskyisfullofroarsofthunder.天空乌云密布，雷电闪闪，照亮了天井、老屋，还有那摇摇欲坠的走廊。一声惊雷在头顶上炸响。只有树叶的沙沙声。风吹打在脸上，雨开始一滴一滴地下着，雨滴打在树叶和铁皮屋顶上，就像敲锣打鼓的声音。一道闪电越过天空，紧接着头顶上又是一声惊雷，然后天空中轰鸣的雷声不断。10．SnowPicture雪景WhenIgotupthenextmorning,Isawthatthegroundwascoveredwithavastblanketofwhiteness.Withthewhitegroundunderfoot,andthechimneyshereandtheresendingoutbrownsmokeintotheclearblueskyoverhead,thewholescenemightmatchthemostbeautifulmorningpictureintheworld.当我第二天早晨起床时，我看到大地被厚厚的白色毯子覆盖着。在脚下白色的大地上，缕缕炊烟升入头顶蔚蓝的天空，犹如世界上最美的动人画卷。11．AutumnDusk秋日黄昏Themostbeautifulthingduringtheautumnisdusk.Thesettingsunlookslikeaburningballoffire;itmakestheskylooksocolorful.Aflockofwildgeeseflybackandforthinthesky,asiftheydon’twanttoleave.Themanyinsectsmakingnoiseinthegrassmakefieldsseemmoreinteresting.秋日的黄昏最美的。太阳像一个大火球，把天空染成五颜六色。一群大雁在天空飞来飞去，似乎不想离开。草中的虫鸣使田野显得更有趣。12．WinterNight冬夜Itwascoldandbleakinthelatewinter.Thenightwasdark,notastarwastobeseeninthegloomyanddismalsky.Thenorthwindwashowlingdreadfullyoutsidethehouse,likethescreamsofsomewoundedwildbeasts.阴冷的寒冬，夜里一片漆黑，在阴沉的天空中甚至连一颗星星都看不见。屋外北风呼啸，像受伤的野兽的尖叫声。13．Snow初雪Thefirstsnowcame,Howbeautifulitwas,fallingsosilentlyalldaylong,allnightlong,onthemountains,inthemeadows,ontheroofsofliving.Allwhitesavetheriver,thatmarkeditscoursebyawindingblacklineacrossthelandscape,Whatsilence,too,camewiththesnow,andwhatseclusion!Everysoundwasmuffledeverynoisechangedtosomethingsoftandmusical.Nomoretrumpinghoofs,nomorerattlingwheels!初雪飘零，多么美啊！它整日整夜那么静静地飘着，落在山岭上，落在草地上，落在屋顶上。在一片白茫茫之中，只有河流在美丽的画面上划出一道曲曲弯弯的黑线。初雪飘落时，是何等的宁静、何等的幽静！一切声响都江堰市趋于沉寂，一切噪音都化作柔和的音乐。再没有嘈杂的步行声，再没有滚滚的车轮声。ColorfulWorld五彩世界1．TheSettingSun日落Whenthesunbeginstosetbehindthemountains,itslongrayslightupthegreenfieldsofwheatorrice.Andallthetreesandbusheswithagoldenglow.Thecloudsabovetheskyalsobegintoglowwithagoldenlight,andthemountainsareofalovelypurplecolor.太阳快要下山了，柔和的光照在绿色的田野里和丛林上，金光闪闪，天空的云彩也开始金光闪闪，山也变成美丽的紫色。2．TowardEvening傍晚Thenasthefieryballofthesunisgonealtogetherbehindthemountain,theredcolorofthecloudsbeginstofade,andgraduallyfakesawayuntilallthecloudsaregreyandthemountainsbecomeadeepblackclearcutagainstthepalesky,wheretheeveningstarstaketheplaceofthesunandshinebrightly.火红的太阳隐没到山后，红彤彤的云彩也渐渐地褪色，天空成了灰色，山也变成了深褐色，像一幅版画映衬在苍白的天空中。夜空中明亮的星星开始闪耀。。。。。。3．ColorfulWorld五彩世界Thesunwasalreadyinthewestbutitwasstillshining.ItslightwassobrightthatIcouldn’tevenopenmyeyes.WhenIarrivedatthewestHill,thelightbecameabityellow.Afterashortwhile,itwascompletelygolden,thenred.Thesunnearlyset.Itwaslikeagreatfieryball.Thecloudarounditwasalsopaintedred.Littlebylittlethecloudcoveredmoreandmoreofthesun.Atlastitdisappearedbehindthecloud.Itwasalreadydark.太阳偏西，但还非常明亮，强光刺得我睁不开眼。当我到达西山时，光线泛黄，一会儿，就变成了金黄色，然后又变成红色，太阳快要下山了，就像一个大火球，把周围的云也染红了。太阳慢慢地沉下去，终于躲入云中，天已经黑了。4．BeachHoliday海滩假日Ihadalwayslikedthebeach.Itdidn’tmatterifthesundidn’tshinewhileyouwerehikinginthelakeDistrict—infact,alightrainmadeitallthemoreexhilarating.Iyearnedforthebrightblues,yellowsandredsofabeachholiday.我一向喜欢海滩。当来到湖泊地区远足时，天空没有阳光并不要紧。事实上，一场小雨会更增添其中的情趣罗强烈地向往着海滩假日中明亮的湛蓝色、金黄色。5．NaturalBeauty自然美景Ononeside,beginningattheverylipofthepool,wasatinymeadow,acool,resilientsurfaceofgreenthatextendedtothevaseofthefrowningwall.Beyondthepoolagentleslopeofearthranupanduptomeettheopposingwall.Finegrasscoveredtheslope-grassthatwasspangledwithflowers,withhereandtherepatchesofcolor,orangeandpurpleandgolden.在深潭的一边，有一片小小的草地，凉爽而富有弹性的绿草地从潭的边缘延伸到皱折的峭壁下面。深潭的另、一边，一个缓坡延伸着直上到对面的峭壁。满坡鲜美的草，五颜六色的花朵，桔黄色的、紫色的、金黄色的点缀其间。NaturalWorld山川风貌1．TheMorningDew晨露Onsunshinysummermornings,thegrassisoftenwetwithdew.Theremaybedropsofdewonflowersandbushes,andspiderwebs,too.Thedropsofdewsparklelikejewelswhenthesunshinesonthem.在晴朗的夏天的凌晨，草上常常沾满露珠，花丛中，甚至蜘蛛网上也有。当阳光照耀在露珠上时露珠像珠宝一样闪闪发光。2．LijiangRiver漓江Theriverisrallyverycleanandpure.Werentedaboatandenjoyedthebeautifulscenesalongtheriver.Themountainsaresospecial.I’veseenmanyotherkindsofmountains,butIlikeGuilihn’smountainsbest.I’veseenmanyriversbefore,butIlikeLijiangRiversbest.河水清澈透明，我们租了一条小船，沿江欣赏着美景。山很奇特，我见过许多其他类型的山，但我最喜欢桂林的山，我也见过许多河流，但我最喜欢漓江。3．NightoftheLake湖之夜Aroundthelakearesometrees,theirslenderleavesbellowinginthegentlewind.Theremustbesomefrogsinthemiddleofthelake,whoseendlesssingingcanbeheardclearly.Whatanattractivenight!湖周围有些树，嫩嫩的树叶在微风中飘扬。湖中一定有青蛙，我能清楚地听见它们在不停地歌唱。多美的夜晚啊！4．OceanattheSunset日落时的大海Agustofwindbroughtforththefaintsmelloffish,andthismademefeeljoyous.Slowly,theraysofsunlightfaded,anddimnesssurroundedme.Theentireoceanchangedtoadarkviolethue.Later,theredsunescapedintothesea.一阵海风带来了淡淡的鱼腥味，使我兴奋起来。慢慢地，太阳光消失了，周围一片朦胧，整个海洋变成暗紫色，最后红红的太阳消失在大海里。5．SeaBeauty大海美景Fromasfarasyoucouldseeontheleftandrightwasopenwaterandsand.Thesplashofpiecesofseashellslayscatteredonthebeachandsmallholescoveredthesandwherethecrabshaddugin.Thewindfeltsoftandwarmandthewaternotverychilling.Farinthedistancethesunwaschangingthecolorfromayellowtoanorangeandthentoaredballhangingoverthehorizon.极目远眺，你能看见一望无垠的大海和沙滩。海滩上散落着海贝，还有一些小洞，那是螃蟹挖的。风柔而暖，水也并不太凉。远处的太阳由黄色变成橘红色，一个大红球，悬挂在天边。6．Waterfall瀑布Fromtheskyfellthewaterfall’shighrising,thickmist.Whenincontactwithsunlight,theseven—coloredrainbowhunginthesky,whichwasverystunning.瀑布飞流直下，震荡起浓浓的水雾，在阳光照耀下形成美丽的七色彩虹，挂在空中，令人称奇。7．Canyon峡谷Itwasthegreenheartofthecanyon,wherethewallsswervedbackfromtherigidplanandrelievedtheirharshnessoflinebymakingalittleshelterednookandfillingittothebrimwithsweetnessandroundnessandsoftness.Hereallthingsrested.Eventhenarrowstreamceaseditsturbulentdown—rushlongenoughtoformaquietpool…..这是峡谷葱绿的中心，在这里峭壁改变了它们僵硬的形式和粗糙的线条，形成一个小小的隐蔽处，并使之充满甜美、圆润和安逸。这儿一切都很宁静，甚至连咆哮着直冲而下的瀑布也平静下来，。形成了一个宁静的深潭......8．TheForest森林There’sbeautyinthewoods,too,especiallylateinthefall.Sometimesyouwalkamongthehugetreeswherethesunlightfiltersthrough.It’squietandbig,withtouchesofwhiteandgreenandgold.Andthesilenceislikethatofchurch.森林也是美丽的,特别是晚秋的森林.有时候,你行走在阳光斑驳的高大林木间。森林在这儿那儿涂抹着白色、绿色、和金黄色，深广而且寂静，这寂静就像教堂里的肃穆一样。9．TheSea大海Theseaisverybig.Somepartsoftheseaareveryshallow.Butsomeplaces,thesealisquitedeep.Theseaissalty;Riverscarrysaltfromthelandinthesea.Inthesea,thereareplentyofdishesandplants.Somelivenearthetopofthesea.Otherslivedeepdown.Millionsoftinylivingthingsfloatinthesea.Thesefloatingthingsaresosmallthatitishardtseethem.Manyfisheslivebyeatingtheselivingthings.大海很大。有的地方很浅，有的地方很深。大海是咸的。河流把陆地的盐带到了大海里。在大海里，有许多鱼和植物。有的生活在浅水层，有的生活在深水层。成百上千万的生物漂浮在海里。这些浮游生物太小了，我们大家很难看见它们。很多鱼靠吃这些浮游生物为生。1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onenight,afterreadingoneofthehundredsofparentingbooksI’veread,IwasfeelingalittleguiltybecausethebookhaddescribedsomeparentingstrategiesIhadn’tusedinawhile.Themainstrategywastotalkwithyourchildandusethosethreemagicwords:”Iloveyou.“Ithadstressedoverandoverthatchildrenneedtoknowthatunconditionallyyoureallylovethem.Iwentupstairstomyson’sbedroomandknockedonthedoor.Aslknocked,allIcouldhearwerehisdrums.Iknewhewastherebuthewasn’tanswering.SoIopenedthedoorand,sureenough,therehewassittingwithhisearphoneson,listeningtoatapeandplayinghisdrums.AfterIleanedovertogethisattention,Isaidtohim,“Tim,haveyougotasecond?”Hesaid,“Ohsure,Dad.I’malwaysgoodforone.”Wethensatdownandafterabout15minutesandalotofsmalltalk,Ijustlookedathimandsaid,“Tim,Ireallylovethewayyouplaydrums.”Hesaid,”Oh,thanks,Dad,Iappreciateit.“Iwalkedoutofthedoorandsaid,”Seeyoulater!"AsIwaswalkingdownstairs,itoccurredtomethatIwentuptherewithacertainmessageandhadnotdeliveredit.Ifeltitwasreallyimportanttogetbackupthereandhaveanotherchancetosaythosethreemagicwords.注意：1.续写词数应为100左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AgainIclimbedthestairs,knockedonthedoorandopenedit.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Isitontheedgeofmybed,faintsmilesslidingacrossmyface,asIsortthrougholdphotographs.Iholdeachmemorybrieflyinmyhandsbeforedroppingthemontothepileinmylapandsearchingforthenexthappymomenttoremember.Eachpicturebringsupfeelingsdeepwithinme.AsIrelivethememories,Ican'thelpbutnoticeonephotoinparticularburieddeepinthebox.Thepictureatfirstglanceislovely.Thesunwasshiningwithnotacloudtobeseen.Iwasstingwithmyarmaroundahappy-lookinggirl,herarmrestedcasuallyonmyshoulders.AsIfocusonthehappygirl,thesmilethatcoversmyfacebecomesafrown.ItisAmySoule,mynowex-bestfriend.Aterriblepang(一阵剧痛)ofregretflashesthroughme,andIfeeltightnessinmythroat.Ourdeclineinfriendshipbeganwithdifferentinterests.Shewantedtogotothemallandshop,whileIpreferredtowatcholdmoviesinmysparetime.SoontheonlytimeIsawherwaswhenweexchangedahurriedhellointhebusyschoolhallsbetweenclasses.Nomorenoteswerepassedbehindtheteacher'sback,andmyparent'sphonebillbecamemuchcheaper.Shefoundanewgroupoffriends,andsodidI.BeforeIhadachancetorepairthefriendship,shemovedaway,causingthecracktobecomeanuncrossablerift.Imadeexcusesfornotkeepingintouch.Itwastoofartovisit,toolongofadrive.Iknewthatwasnotthetruth,butIwastoonervoustopickupthephoneandcall.Eventually,theriftgrewtoolargetobridge.Amyhadleftandshehadtakenahugechunkofmyheartwithher.Istandupandpullmyselfbackintothenow.Glancingupatmycalendar,IrememberthatAmy'sbirthdayisaroundthecorner.Infact,wewereborninthesameroom,twodaysapart.Westartedsocloseandendedupsofar.Thisbittersweetmemorycausesmetosmiledespitemyfeelingsofregret.要求:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:SuddenlyIhaveanidea.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:IstickthenoteundertheedgeofthephotoframeandsearchforAmy'saddress.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。TheDogWhoSavedOurFamilyWemetMaxatthepickupareaofAlaskaAirlinesfiveyearsago.Hewasastandardpoodle(狮子狗)bornonValentine’sDayin2017，andcametousinasmallbluebox.Wehadadoptedhimfromanout-of-stateraiserwhopostedthenewsonthesocialnetwork.Ouronlyrequestwasthathehaveacalmbehavior,abletobearthepushingandhuggingofoureight-year-olddaughterandsix-year-oldson.Wewereasweetlittlefamily:me,myhusband,andourchildren,SophieandJake.ButforyearsI’dfeltasifwewouldn’treallybecompleteuntilwehadadog.Also,myhusbandworkedinabusinesscompanyandhadtotravelsome200daysayearforhisjob,andIknewI’dfeelsaferwithalargeanimalsleepingbythedoor.Whenweopenedthebox,thelastpieceofourpuzzlefellintoplace.Withhisblackhairandintelligenteyes,Maxwasbeautiful.Hewassosmallthathefitintothepalmofmyhand,hisbigpawslappingoverthesides.Hewasalsoalittlebitscared.AsIpulledhimclose,Ifelthisheartpoundandwonderedifwe’ddonetherightthing,takinghimfromhismother.Butitwastoolate.SophieandJakewerealreadyfightingoverwhowouldholdhimnextandwhoshouldhavetherighttotakeabathforhim.Overthefollowingmonths,wespentendlesshourswatchingMaxplaywithhisKongtoyorrollaroundthelivingroomfloor.Likemostpoodles,hewassmart.Hemasteredhouse-trainingquicklyandneverchewedonourfurnitureorshoes.Heconsideredhimselfoneofus.注意1.续写词数应为150左右2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。OnenightweweresleepinginthebedroomwhenIheardsomestrangenoise.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atthattime,Maxrantowardsme.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Lifeneverreallyturnsoutthewayweexpectitto.Wehavedreamsandexpectations.Anddream-come-truestoriesareeverywhere—except,itmayseem,inourownlives.Asachild,Barbaraneverquitefoundthebondwithherparentsthatallchildrenneed.Herfatherleftthefamilyearly,andhermotherdidmenialjobs.“Icouldn’tletmylifekeepmefromcaringaboutotherpeople,”shesays.“Maybeit’sunfairorjustthewayitturnsoutforpeople,butIstillhaveason.”Barbararaisedhersonthebestsheknewhowand“heturnedoutprettywell,”shesays,smiling.Andafterthehardyearsofmakingendsmeetandgivinghimagoodstart,shemadeacareerchange.“IneverthoughtIwassupposedtofeelsorryformyself,”shesays.“AndIlikepeople.”Barbaraworksasanin-homecaregiverforelderlypeopleintheirlastyearoflife.Shespends10-hourdays,sixdaysaweek,withpeoplewhohaveAlzheimer’sdiseaseanddementia,sometimessleepingontheirsofawhentheyareafraidtospendanightalone.Mostdon’thavefamiliescloseby,andBarbarabecomesthepersontheyrelyonforeverything:meals,bathing,bathroomduties,dailywalksiftheycan,mentalexerciseslikecrosswordpuzzlesandre-learningfamilyfaces.Sheonlychargeswhatthefamilycanaffordandonlyworkswithoneclientatatime.“TheybecomethefamilyIneverhad,overandoveragain,”shesays,laughing.ThespacesleftemptyinBarbra’schildhoodarefilledwithmemoriessharedwithherfromlivesfadingawayinthedusk.For30years,shehasbeenmakingpeoplefeelgoodatatimewhenmostwouldjustbewaitingtodie,aloneandunnoticed.WhenseeingtheirfaceswhentheyarewithBarbara,you’dthinkthelastyearswerethebest.“I’vefoundsomethingIneverhad,”Barbarasays.“Wemakeeachotherhappy.SoItrytogivethemwhattheywantmost.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。She’slearnedfromherexperiencesthatoldpeoplewanttheirlovedonestovisitthem.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IpostedBarbara’sstoryonlinetocallonchildrentovisittheirparents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Asthistermbegan,IfoundanewstudentinmyclassnamedIanBonus,16yearsold.Hewassilent,alwaysdoingbusinessalone.Fromhisfile,IlearnedthatIanwasborninKorea,andspentallhischildhoodthereuntilhisfamilymovedtoEngland.Itwasn’tassmoothandeasyasheimagined.Hehadtolearnandspeakanewlanguagesoastocommunicatewithothers.Whenatschool,hetendedtoavoidcrowds.Heusuallytriedeverypossiblemeanstokeephismouthshutup,eveninclass.Besides,afterclass,hedidn’tjoinanyclubsoractivitieseventhougheveryonearoundhiminvitedhimtohaveatry.Atthebeginning,IthoughtIanwasjustalittleshyathisageespeciallyinanewplace.However,laterhestilldidn’tsayasinglew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SuddenlyIhaveanidea.Withouttheslightesthesitation,Idroptomykneesandbegintowildlysearchthroughmydeskdrawers.Atlast,IlaymyhandsonanoldpictureframeIhavehadforever.IpickupthefallenphotoofAmyandme,snappingitintotheframe.Prayingthatthisframedphotographwillprompthertotakeasuddentripbacktoourhappymoment,Iwriteasimplenote,saying“Happybirthday,Amy!”

IstickthenoteundertheedgeofthephotoframeandsearchforAmy’saddress.ThankfullyImakeit.Iholdtheframetightlyinmyarms,determinednottoletthisgoldenchanceslipthroughmyfingers.“It’snotmuch,butit’sastart,”Isaidtomyself,“andthespacebetweenusisalreadysmaller.”ThistimeIwillnothesitatetobetheonetoreachoutandbuildabridge.Itmaybehardbutfixingabrokenfriendshipwillleaveitstronger