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Howwasyourschooltrip?SectionB3a-3cUnit11
学习目标1.Sscanwritealettertodescribetheirschooltrip,with“how/what/who/where...”questions.2.Ssknowthestructureandcontentofadiaryaboutschooltrip.3.Sscanseethingsinanoptimisticwayandlearnsomethingfromthetrip.Bobwantstosharetheschooltriptothezoowithus.Howkindheis!Whatkindofwaydoyouwanttoshareyourexperiences?Iwanttowriteadiary.Bobshowedussomebeautifulpictures.Lookatthepicturesandanswerthequestions.
1.WheredidBobgo?2.Howdidhegothere?3.Whatdidhesee?4.Whatdidhedothere?Hesawmanyanimals.Bobwenttoazoo.Hetookabustogothere.Hetooksomephotosandboughtsomegifts.3aLookatthepicturesofBob’sschooltrip.Completehisdiaryentry.June23rdYesterdaymyschoolvisitedthezoo.Itwasreally____________.Wewenttherebybus.Atthezoo,Isawalotof____________andItooksomephotos.MyclassmatesandIalsowenttothe____________andboughtsome____________.Itwasagreatday.interestinggiftshopanimalsgiftsJune23rdYesterdaymyschoolvisitedthezoo.Itwasreallyinteresting.Wewenttherebybus.Atthezoo,Isawalotofanimals.andItooksomephotos.MyclassmatesandIalsowenttothegiftshopandboughtsomegifts.Itwasagreatday.Doyouknowhowtowriteadiarywell?Step1.Analyzetheformat(分析格式)日期日期星期天气September20thSundaySunnyToday,IwenttotheparkwithmyfriendYangLing.Itwassunnyinthemorning.Weplayedfootballthere.Thentheweatherbecamewindyandcloudy.Weflewkiteshighinthesky.It'stimeforlunch.Wehadsomebreadandsomedrinks.Intheafternoon,therewereblackcloudsinthesky.Itrained.Wewerewet.Whatagreatday!Step2.Analyzethestructure(分析结构)Howmanypartscanyoudividethecontent(内容)into?Three.Beginning点明主题Body具体活动Ending表达感受作文写法①引入话题Iwentonaschooltripwith...last...②具体活动Itwassunny.Wewentto...by...Wehadfun.③表达感受Allinall,itwasaninterestingtrip.Wearetiredbuthappy.总分总Step3.Analyzethecontent(分析内容)June23rdYesterdaymyschoolvisitedthezoo.Itwasreallyinteresting.Itwasafinedayandwefeltsohappy.Wewenttherebybus.Ienjoyedtalkingandlaughingwithmyclassmates.Atthezoo,assoonasIsawalotofanimals,Itooksomephotos.MyclassmatesandIalsowenttothegiftshopbecauseIwantedtobuysomegiftsformyfamily.Itwasagreatday.
时间地点方式活动人物PresentationBrainstormWhatelements(要素)shouldbeincludedinthetripdiary?tripPlaceWeatherFoodActivitiesfeelingsWheredidyougo?Whendidyougo?Whatdidyoudo?Whodidyougowith?Howwastheweather?Howwasthefood?How
didyoufeel?Howdidyougo?DateWhat
wasthedate?While-writingASchoolTripWhoWhereHowWhat(did&saw)FeelingsYoucanadd(添加):Weather,peopleandsoonWhenStep4.Polish(润色)yourarticle1.加细节原句:Wewenttherebybus.改:Wewenttherebybus.Ienjoyedtalkingandlaughingwithmyclassmates.Step4.Polish(润色)yourarticle
2.改句式改1:Atthezoo,whenIsawalotofanimals,Itooksomephotos.原句:Atthezoo,IsawalotofanimalsandItooksomephotos.改2:Atthezoo,assoonasIsawalotofanimals,Itooksomephotos.更高级Step4.Polish(润色)yourarticle改:Afterthat,myclassmatesandIalsowenttothegiftshopbecauseIwantedtobuysomegiftsformyfamily.原句:MyclassmatesandIalsowenttothegiftshopandboughtsomegifts.3.加逻辑更流畅(morefluent)June23rdYesterdaymyschoolvisitedthezoo.Itwasreallyinteresting.Itwasafinedayandwefeltsohappy.Wewenttherebybus.Ienjoyedtalkingandlaughingwithmyclassmates.Atthezoo,assoonasIsawalotofanimals,Itooksomephotos.Afterthat,myclassmatesandIalsowenttothegiftshopbecauseIwantedtobuysomegiftsformyfamily.Itwasagreatday.Wow!YouworkedtogethertomakeBob’sdiarybetter.Bob’sDiaryJune23rdMyschoolwenttothezooyesterday.Thetripwas____________.Atthezoo,I________________butIdidn’tlikethem.Ialsowentto____________withmyclassmates,butIdidn’tbuyanythingbecause____________________.Itwasaboringday.boringthegiftshopsawmanyanimalstheyweresoexpensiveLindaisBob’sclassmate.Shealsosentadiarytous.Let’scompleteherdiaryentry.Linda’sDiaryWhydidBobandLindahavedifferentopinionsaboutthesametrip?.DeepthinkingDifferentpeoplehavedifferentfeelings.1.differentpersonalities.2.differentinterests.3.seethingsdifferently.Lifeisatrip!Enjoyyourtrip!Enjoyyourlife!remember
Writingtask1.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确。2.书写规范,80词左右。3.文中不得出现涉及真实的人名、地名或校名等。春天是万物复苏、生机勃勃的季节,你们学校举行了一次郊游,请你以日记的形式,记录下你在旅游过程中的趣事及感受。内容提示:
1.郊游的时间、地点、出行方式等;2.在旅途中做了什么事情(不少于2件);
3.你对这次旅行的感受。以日记形式用一般过去时对发生的事情进行叙述。写作目标It’syourturntowriteadiarytotalkaboutyourtrip.写作任务写作要求Doyouthinktheadisattractive(有吸引力的)?
审人称:一般过去时审文体:日记第一人称I审时态:Let’smakeanoutline(提纲)人物时间地点活动方式天气TopicsentenceBeginningBodyEnding点明主题Diary表达感受具体活动
Let’sdraft(拟稿)BeginningBodyEnding人物时间地点活动方式点明主题具体活动表达感受天气Lastweekend,IwenttoNanchangwithmyfriends.Wehadaveryinterestingtrip.Wefelttiredbutreallyhappy.Allinall,itwasanexcitingday.lastweekendwewenttothezooarrivedatashopwentbackhomebytravelbussawpandasatedeliciousfoodtookphotosboughtsomegiftswithmyfriendsTheweatherwassofine.Checkyourarticleaccordingtothechecklistbyyourselves.(根据标准清单自查。)OnepossibleversionMay27thLastweekend,
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