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备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点05双减落地见实效一、材料作文1.“双减(DoubleReductionPolicy)”背景下的第一个暑假即将来临,为了让学弟学妹们度过一个有意义的暑假,学校开展了面向九年级学生的征文活动。请你根据所给信息并结合自身想法写一篇短文,至少提出三条建议并说明理由写作要点:1、建议

2、原因

3、提出希望提示词:withthestartof…

help…withhousework

showyourloveto...doingvoluntarywork

helppupilswithschoolwork

teachtheoldhowtogetahealthcode(码)注意:(1)短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名:(3)词数80—100字;标题已给出,不计入总词数。AMeaningfulSummerVacation________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】AMeaningfulSummerVacationWiththestartofDoubleReductionPolicy,herearemysuggestionsforyoutohaveameaningfulsummervacation.Firstly,youcouldhelpwithhousework.It’sagoodwaytoshowyourlovetoparents.Secondly,youmayvolunteertovisitanoldpeople’shome.Ithinktheoldpeoplewillbereallyhappyifyouspendtimetogetherwiththem.What’smore,youcanalsotakeupsomehobbies.Forexample,youcanhaveguitarlessonsifyoulikemusic.Inaword,let’smakegooduseofthesummervacation.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步,引出本文主题,介绍有关度过一个有意义暑假的建议;第二步,提出合理的建议。[亮点词汇]①helpwith帮忙做②spendtimewithsb与某人共度时光③takeup开始从事[高分句型]①herearemysuggestionsforyoutohaveameaningfulsummervacation.(倒装句)②It’sagoodwaytoshowyourlovetoparents.(动词不定式作主语)2.“双减”政策(Doublereductionpolicy)实施以来,学生负担轻了,课余时间也多了。但是对于学生的自主学习和课余时间规划组织能力提出了更高的要求。你校杂志社举办了该主题的征文活动,请你写一篇短文分享如何规划学习和课余生活的建议,并投稿。PlanlifewiselyBegoodlearnersLearnfrommistakesDevelophobbies………要求:1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;3)词数不少于80词;短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数。HowtoPlanOurLifeWiselyNowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethanbeforebut___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HowtoPlanOurLifeWiselyNowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethanbeforebuthowtoplanourlifewisely?Herearemysuggestions.Asforstudy,Ithinktobegoodlearnersisimportantforus.Weshouldn’tbeafraidofmakingamistake.Weshouldlearnfrommistakes.Andgoodlearnersoftenaskquestionsbecauseknowledgecomesfromquestioning.Besides,wearesupposedtodevelophobbiesinoursparetime.Wecanlearntoplaysportstomakeourselvesstrongandhealthy.What’smore,itisalsoagoodchanceforustogetclosetothenatureandrelaxourselves.Howdoyouspendyourlife?Pleasesharewithus.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作开头以及要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步,开门见山,说明写作目的;第二步,分享自己的学习规划和课余生活的建议。[亮点词汇]①beafraidof害怕……②besupposedto应该做某事[高分句型]①Wecanlearntoplaysportstomakeourselvesstrongandhealthy.(不定式表目的)②itisalsoagoodchanceforustogetclosetothenatureandrelaxourselves.(it作形式主语)3.“双减”之后,多样的课外活动为我们的生活增添了许多色彩。请你根据以下图片及文字提示,以“HappyAfter-schoolActivities”为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,为大家介绍你们学校的课外活动并说明理由。提示词:readbooks,climbmountains,pickuprubbish…提示:1.Whatactivitiesdoyouoftendoafterschool?2.Whatdoyouthinkofyourafter-schoolactivities?3.Whatafter-schoolactivitywouldyouliketotakepartin?Why?要求:1.参考提示内容,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4.词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。HappyAfter-schoolActivitiesWecandomanydifferentkindsofafter-schoolactivitiesinourmorefreetime._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HappyAfter-schoolActivitiesWecandomanydifferentkindsofafter-schoolactivitiesinourmorefreetime.Ihavemanyfriends.Theyoftendomanydifferentafter-schoolactivities.Someofmyfriendslikereading.Theythinkreadingbookscanbringthemmoreknowledge.Sotheyoftengototheschoollibrarytoreadbooksafterschool.Someofthemlikeclimbingmountainswhentheyhavetime.Theythinkclimbingmountainscanmakethemstrong.Someofthemoftengototheparktopickuprubbishonweekends.Theywanttomaketheenvironmentclean.Ithinktheseafter-schoolactivitiescanhelpthemdeveloptheirindependenceandteachthemhowtotakecareofthemselves.Ilikeplayingtabletennisbecauseit’sgoodformyeyes.Ifyouhavesomehobbieslikeme,pleasesharethemwithme!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:要求以“HappyAfter-schoolActivities”为题,结合提示问题进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍有更多的课外活动时间;第二步,介绍放学后你经常做什么活动,觉得你的课外活动怎么样;第三步,介绍想参加什么课外活动以及原因。[亮点词汇]①manydifferentkindsof很多不同种类的②pickuprubbish捡垃圾③takecareof照顾[高分句型]①Ifyouhavesomehobbieslikeme,pleasesharethemwithme!(if引导的条件状语从句)②Ithinktheseafter-schoolactivitiescanhelpthemdeveloptheirindependenceandteachthemhowtotakecareofthemselves.(省略that的宾语从句)4.减负之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。请你根据下面提示,以“HowToMakeOurSpareTimeMoreMeaningful?”为题,用英语写一篇短文。1.帮助父母做家务,多和父母交流;2.多做运动,保持身体健康;3.多阅读,更好的了解世界;4.亲近自然,放松自己;5.……(你自己的建议)。注意:(1)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;(2)词数80词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;(3)短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。HowToMakeOurSpareTimeMoreMeaningful?Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethaneverbefore,buthowtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】HowToMakeOurSpareTimeMoreMeaningful?Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethaneverbefore,buthowtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?First,it’sgoodtohelpourparentsdosomehouseworktoshowourloveandwecanhavemoretimetocommunicatewiththem.Second,doingmoresportsisgoodforourhealth.Ilikeplayingbasketball,Icanplayitwithmyclassmatesafterschool.Third,wewillknowmoreabouttheworldbyreading.Fourth,itisagoodchanceforustogetclosetonatureandrelaxourselves.Inmyopinion,wecantakepartinsomesocialactivitiesasvolunteerstohelpthosewhoneedhelp.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作提示题目已经给出,所以要围绕提示进行写作,并可以适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步:开篇点题,并引出下文;第二步:按照写作提示写出应如何利用我们的空闲时间;第三步:写出自己的建议。[亮点词汇]①communicatewithsb和某人沟通②inmyopinion依我看③getcloseto接近④takepartin参加[高分句型]①First…Second…Third…Fourth…(这些顺序词的使用使文章层次鲜明,条理清晰)②Fourth,itisagoodchanceorustogetclosetonatureandrelaxourselves.(句型itis....forsbtodosth)5.自从我国出台了“双减”政策(the“doublereduction”policy),同学们有了更多可自由支配的时间。体育锻炼,开展阅读和文艺活动,做力所能及的家务等丰富多彩的课余生活给大家的生活增添了生机和活力。然而身为中学生,我们也应该知道“双减”不是让我们远离学习,而是让我们合理利用时间,提高学习效率。请你根据以上提示,以Meafterthe“DoubleReduction”Policy为题,写一篇英语短文,讲述一下双减后你学习和生活的变化以及这些变化带给你的影响和感受。要求:1.100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。Meafterthe“DoubleReduction”PolicyRecently,mylifehasbeendifferentsincethe“doublereduction”policywascarriedout(执行).__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Meafterthe“DoubleReduction”PolicyRecently,mylifehasbeendifferentsincethe“doublereduction”policywascarriedout.Thankstothepolicy,wehavelesshomeworkthanbefore.Andwearerequiredtofinishitallatschool,whichmeanstherearenomoreschoolassignmentsathome.ThemostexcitingthingisthatIdon’tneedtotakeoff-campustutoringclassesanymore.SoIcanhaveenoughsleepeveryday.AndIcanspendmoretimeonphysicalexercise.Ithinkit’sbetterforourhealth.Eventhoughparentsareworryingaboutourgrades,westudentsseemtobehappy.Ourschooloffersmanyafter-schoolactivities.Ihavejoinedsomesportsclubs.Ilovetoplaybasketballandfootballwithmyfriends.Iusedtodomyhomeworkafterdinneruntil10:00pm.CanyouimaginethatnowIgetfreetimetoreadnovelsatnight?Ilove“doublereduction”policy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:要求讲述双减后自己的学习和生活的变化及变化带来的影响和感受。注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步,说明自己的学习生活在双减政策施行后有了很大的变化;第二步,具体介绍自己学习生活有哪些变化;第三步,最后表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①carryout施行②thanksto幸亏③usedto过去常常[高分句型]①Andwearerequiredtofinishitallatschool,whichmeanstherearenomoreschoolassignmentsathome.(which引导的非限定性定语从句)②ThemostexcitingthingisthatIdon’tneedtotakeoff-campustutoringclassesanymore.(表语从句)6.“双减”政策实施后,实验中学的学生有了更多的时间参加课外活动。他们参加了哪些课外活动?活动给他们带来了什么收获?假如你是实验中学的一名学生,请就此写一篇英语短文介绍活动开展情况和感受。要求:1.包括图片所给的两个课外活动,并联系实际再补充一个或多个课外活动;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.不少于80词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:“Doublereduction”policy(“双减”政策);after-schoolactivities(课外活动);Artclub;Sportsclub;relaxing;meaningful(有意义的)I’mastudentattheExperimentalMiddleSchool.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

I’mastudentattheExperimentalMiddleSchool.Nowadays,after-schoolactivitiesarebecomingmoreandmorepopular.Therearemanydifferentkindsofactivities.Forexample,artsandsports.Ijoinedavolleyballclublastyear.Iamusedtoplayingvolleyballafterschool.Inthevolleyballclub,I’vemadelotsoffriends.Weoftenplayvolleyballafterschool.Whetheritishotorcold,weneverstopplayingit.Ifeelhappywhileplayingvolleyball.Anditisalsoagoodwaytorelaxmyself.Ialsojoinedtheartclub.Mypaintingskillshavebeengreatlyimproved.Atthesametime,IalsojoinedanEnglishclubtoimprovemyspokenEnglish.Ialsomademanynewfriends.IthinkIwillcontinuetoplayvolleyballafterschoolinthefuture.

Allinall,after-schoolactivitiesmakemylifemorerelaxingandmeaningful.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍自己有很多课外活动;第二步,具体阐述自己的一些课外活动情况;第三步,最后表达自己感受。[亮点词汇]①differentkindsof不同种类的②beusedtodoingsth习惯做某事③atthesametime同时[高分句型]①Ifeelhappywhileplayingvolleyball.(while引导时间状语从句)②IthinkIwillcontinuetoplayvolleyballafterschoolinthefuture.(省略that的宾语从句)7.双减政策(“DoubleReduction”policy)出台后,给我们初中生的生活和学习带来巨大变化,结合该政策和个人经历谈谈它对自己生活带来的变化以及该如何规划好学习与课余生活,并表达你的观点。注意:(1)短文必须包括导图的所有要点,并适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(3)词数80—100;首句已给出,不计入总词数。It’sreallyexcitingnewsformethatthepolicyof“DoubleReduction”hasbeencarriedout.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】It’sreallyexcitingnewsformethatthepolicyof“DoubleReduction”hasbeencarriedout.Inthepast,Ihadlittletimeleftformyhobbiesbecauseoftheheavycourses.Ialsohadtoomuchschoolworkandfeltstressedaboutexams.However,thingshavechangednow.I’mabletomakegooduseoftimeandfinishallofmyhomeworkintimeatschool.SoIhaveenoughtimetodevelopmyinterestsathome.Besides,teachersnowteachmuchmoreslowlysothatwecanunderstandnewknowledgebetter.Inthefuture,Ihopewecanformbetterlearninghabitsandenjoymoreafter-schoolactivities.Allinall,wehavegotalotfromthepolicy.Buteveryoneshouldfindtheirownwaysoflearninginsteadoffollowingothers’.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文写作;②时态:时态为一般过去时和一般现在时;③提示:写作主题已给出,写作时注意包含导图内的所有要点,围绕主题展开叙述,可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步,说明“双减政策”的颁布,点明主题;第二步,具体叙述“双减政策”前后的的生活和学习的对比,以及对未来的期待;第三步,表达自己对“双减政策”的观点。[亮点词汇]①becauseof由于②beableto能够③makegooduseof充分利用④insteadof而不是[高分句型]①Besides,teachersnowteachmuchmoreslowlysothatwecanunderstandnewknowledgebetter(目的状语从句)②Inthefuture,Ihopewecanformbetterlearninghabitsandenjoymoreafter-schoolactivities.(宾语从句)8.国家推出了“双减”政策。“双减”政策落地以来,对学生的作息时间作了严格的规定。学生的课外时间增多了,他们都在做什么?他们的负担减轻了吗?下面是《二十一世纪报》就这些问题对中学生进行问卷调查的结果。请根据该调查结果用英语写一份调查报告,并简单谈谈你的看法。词数:90左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。21thCenturymadeasurveyonwhatmiddleschoolstudentsdointheirfreetime.Hereistheresult._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】:21thcenturymadeasurveyonwhatmiddleschoolstudentsdointheirsparetime.Hereistheresult.Afterschool,60%ofthemstudy,readbooksordohomeworkathome.5%watchTVand15%playcomputergames.20%dosportsorplayoutdoorswithclassmatesorfriends.Thingsaremuchbetterthanbefore,butstillabout60%ofthestudentsarebusywithstudyingintheirsparetime.Studyisnottheonlyimportantthingforchildren.Playingisimportantforthem,too.Byplaying,childrencankeephealthy,andcanlearnthingsthattheycan’tgetfrombooks.Sochildrenneedmoretimetododifferentkindsofactivities.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应根据调查结果详细写一份调查报告,并谈谈自己的看法。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍所做的调查,引出结果;第二步,具体介绍调查结果;第三步,对调查结果进行分析;第四步,谈谈自己的看法。[亮点词汇]①inone’ssparetime在某人的空闲时间②dohomework做家庭作业③differentkindsof不同种类的[高分句型]①Hereistheresult.(Herebe句型)②Thingsaremuchbetterthanbefore,butstillabout60%ofthestudentsarebusywithstudyingintheirsparetime.(but连接表转折关系的并列句)二、看图作文9.有效的课后作业能激发学生的学习兴趣,丰富学习经历,提升综合素养,并在知识与生活之间架起一座桥梁。某校为减轻学生的负担,改进作业布置的方式,针对“你最喜欢的一种英语课后作业类型”,对1267名学生进行了问卷调查,下图是相关的统计结果,Students’FavoriteKindsofEnglishHomework假如你是该校的学生,请你根据以上图表信息,写一篇短文。内容包括:1.简要说明图表内容;2.从图表中选出一种你最喜欢的作业类型,谈谈这种作业的好处。要求:1.词数不少于100词;2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】:Aschooldidasurveyamong1,267studentsabouttheirfavoritekindsofEnglishhomework.Herearetheresults.42%ofthestudentslikelisteningandspeakinghomeworkbest,and29%enjoyreadingandwriting.Thepercentageofthestudentswholikethehands-onprojectis22%and7%chooseotherkindsofhomework.Asforme,Ilikethehands-onprojectbestbecauseitconnectswhatI’velearntwithreallifeinaninterestingway.Threeweeksago,wewereaskedtomakeanEnglishposteraboutDragonBoatFestival.ThenIcollectedlotsofinformationonthefestival.Finally,notonlydidIfinishthetaskperfectly,butalsoIgotadeeperunderstandingofourcolorfulculture.Inmyopinion,it’sthehands-onprojectthatarousesmyinterestinEnglishandenrichesmyexperiencesinlearning.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇议论文写作,为看图作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”为主;③提示:观点已给出,写作时注意结构清晰;适当添加细节,突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,描写调查结果;第二步,详细描述自己的最喜欢的作业方式以及好处。[亮点词汇]①survey调查②thepercentageof……的百分比③asfor至于、关于④connect...with...把……和……联系起来⑤inan...way以……的方式⑥notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……⑦inone’sopinion在某人看来⑧arouse引起⑨enrich使丰富[高分句型]①Thepercentageofthestudentswholikethehands-onprojectis22%and7%chooseotherkindsofhomework.(定语从句:由who引导定语从句修饰先行词students)②Ilikethehands-onprojectbestbecauseitconnectswhatI’velearntwithreallifeinaninterestingway.(状语从句:由because引导原因状语从句;宾语从句:由what引导宾语从句跟在动词connects后作宾语)③Finally,notonlydidIfinishthetaskperfectly,butalsoIgotadeeperunderstandingofourcolorfulculture.(倒装句:notonly位于句首,需用部分倒装)10.为了落实国家“双减”政策,英语老师们设计了词汇大王、故事阅读、情景剧表演等丰富多彩的作业,收到了提质减负的良好效果。你校英语社团将举办以“ColorfulEnglishHomework”为题的征文比赛,请你根据以下图文提示,写一篇参赛短文,谈谈你们的做法和收获。

ColorfulEnglishHomework注意事项:1.请勿在短文中使用真实的人名、校名;2.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;3.词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。ColorfulEnglishHomeworkSinceChinaintroducedthe“doublereduction”policy,ourteachershavedesignedalotofcolorfulEnglish-homework.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allthesehelpusachievebetterresultswithlesseffort.I’dlikemorecolorfulhomeworklikethese.【参考范文】:ColorfulEnglishHomeworkSinceChinaintroducedthe“doublereduction”policy,ourteachershavedesignedalotofcolorfulEnglish-homework,whichcanhelpusimproveourEnglishalot.KingofwordswillhelpusrememberEnglishwordseasily.StoryreadingcanimproveourEnglishabilityandraisesourinterestgreatly.Welikeplayshow,becauseitcanpracticeourSpokenEnglishandmakeusconfident.What’smore,wehavesometeachinghomework,suchasteachingourfamilymembersEnglish.Allthesehelpusachievebetterresultswithlesseffort.I’dlikemorecolorfulhomeworklikethese.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇看图作文②时态:时态为“一般现在时”③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏图文提示中的英语作业类型,可适当添加细节。[写作步骤]第一步,引出“丰富多彩的英语作业”这一话题;第二步,介绍英语作业的类型及其优点;第三步,总结并对这些英语作业形式作出评价。[亮点词汇]①helpsb.dosth.帮助某人做某事②makesbconfident使某人自信③What’smore此外[高分句型]OurteachershavedesignedalotofcolorfulEnglish-homework,whichcanhelpusimproveEnglishalot.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)三、书信作文11.“双减政策”下,你发生了哪些变化?请根据以下提示,给你的外国友人Tom写封信,介绍“双减”以来你的变化,并谈谈你对这些变化的看法。要点提示:1、你的学习生活都发生了变化。2、作业量变少了,课外补习变少了,学校文体活动增多了……3、你的感受。要求:1、主旨明确,用词准确,逻辑清晰,行文连贯。2、词数:90词左右。3、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearTom,Sincethe“doublereduction”policywascarriedout,myschoollifehasbeenchangedalot.Firstofall,IhavelesshomeworkthanbeforeandI’mrequiredtofinishmyhomeworkallatschool,whichmeanstherearenomoreschoolassignmentsathome.Secondly,themostexcitingthingformeisthatIdon’tneedtotakeoff-campustutoringclassesanymore.Finally,IhavemoresparetimetodothingsIenjoy.IcanplaybasketballwithmyfriendsafterschoolorIcanjointhemusicclubinourschool.Icansingsongs,playthepianoandplaytheguitarinit.Allinall,the“doublereduction”policyhaschangedmyschoollifeandIlovethe“doublereduction”policy.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:根据提示内容介绍“双减”以来你的变化,可适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步,引出话题,表示自己有很多变化;第二步,根据提示内容详细介绍“双减”以来自己发生的变化;第三步,介绍自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①carryout执行②allinall总的来说[高分句型]①Sincethe“doublereduction”policywascarriedout,myschoollifehasbeenchangedalot.(since引导的时间状语从句)②IhavelesshomeworkthanbeforeandI’mrequiredtofinishmyhomeworkallatschool,whichmeanstherearenomoreschoolassignmentsathome.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)12.假如你是李华,曾在你班学习的美国交换生Tony关注到了中国政府颁布的“双减”政策(DoubleReductionPolicy),特写信向你了解此事。请根据以下提示写一封回信,并谈谈自己的看法。1.什么是双减:减少学生的作业负担,减少学生的课外培训负担。2.为什么要双减:为了学生的身心健康,减少家庭的额外开支。注意:1.词数:80词左右,文章开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。2.应覆盖所有要点;可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。3.文中不得出现任何真实的人名、学校名等信息。参考词汇:burden;n.负担mental;adj.精神、心理上的DearTony,I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youaskedmetotellyousomethingaboutourgovernment’s“DoubleReductionPolicy”.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearTony,I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.Inyourletter,youaskedmetotellyousomethingaboutourgovernment’s“DoubleReductionPolicy”.Firstofall,whatis“DoubleReduction”?“DoubleReduction”meanstoreducetheheavyhomeworkburdenandafter-schooltrainingburdenofstudents.Secondly,whydoesourgovernmenttrytoreducethesetwokindsofburden?Ononehand,becauseoftoomuchhomework,itleadstostudents’fallinglevelsofphysicalhealthandmorementalhealthproblems.Ontheotherhand,becauseoftoomanyafter-schoolclasses,manyfamilieshavetopayhugefamilycosts.Inmyopinion,I’mverypleasedwithit.Withthepolicysuccessfullycarriedout,Iwillenjoyahappierlife.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为书信;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示,写作要点已给出,从“什么是双减以及为什么要双减”两方面写作,注意不要遗漏“谈谈自己的看法”的写作。[写作步骤]第一步,承接开头,介绍“什么是双减”;第二步,谈谈“双减”的原因;第三步,书写结语,表达自己的看法。[亮点词汇]①firstofall首先②ononehand...ontheotherhand一方面……另一方面……③inmyopinion在我看来[高分句型]①Withthepolicysuccessfullycarriedout,Iwillenjoyahappierlife.(with表伴随,形容词比较级的使用)②whydoesourgovernmenttrytoreducethesetwokindsofburden?(why引导的特殊疑问句)13.假如你是某英语报的编辑Linda,收到一位中国母亲的来信,信中她向你反映了“双减”政策(doublereductionpolicy)实行后她所遇到的困惑。请根据信的内容,给她写一封回信,帮她解决困惑。词数:80~100(书信的开头已给出,不计

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