读后续写详细学案高三英语写作复习专项

从“读”到“写”——读后续写专题训练▌阅读与积累 阅读下面的短文，分析故事情节InstormstrikeSantaClarita,California,lastMarch,MargaritoMartinezapproachedaroadcarefully.Arisingcreekhadfloodedit.Martinez,drivingaToyotaSUV,thoughthe’dbeOK.Bigmistake.Halfwayacross,therushingwaterstookholdofhisvehicle,sweepingitofftheroadandwashingitdownarockystreambed.Itfinallystoppedagood80feetaway,whenthewatersomehowliftedtheSUVandtippeditinthegroundata45degreeangle.Bruised,shaken,andtrappedinsidewiththemuddywaterrisingquickly,Martinezwascertainhewasgoingtodie.OntheroadrightbehindMartinezwereadeliveryworker,JackFoster,andhisniece.Theywatchedthehorrorunfold,andwhenMartinez’sSUVcametorestinthemiddleoftherushingcreek,Fosterjumpedtoact.First,hegrabbedheavyduty(结实的)ropesfromthebackofhisvanandsecuredtheSUVtonearbyposts.ThenheclimbedatopMartinez’svehicleandbangedonarearwindowwithhisfists.Frustrated,heturnedtohisnieceandshouted,“Givemearock!”OverandoverFostersmashedtherockintothewindowbutalltonoavail.“WewerescaredthatsomethingelsewasgoingtoedownandtaketheSUV,takehim,takemyuncle,”Foster’sniecetoldCBSLA.FostershoutedtoMartineztomoveawayfromthewindow.Hesupportedhimself—rightfootonthesparetire,leftinthewheelwell.Heleanedbackandthrewtherock.Finally,theglassbrokeandFosterkickedintheremainingglass.Soon,asoakedMartinezemergedthroughthewindowframe,andthemenescapedtodryland.111 用一句话概括故事情节 Thestorytellsthat_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.112 按情节发展顺序排列下列事件FostertiedMartinez'scarwithropesandsecuredtheSUVtonearbyposts.Adeliveryworker,Foster,andhisniecenoticedandimmediatelystartedtohelp.Martinez'scarwassweptofftheroadandstuckinthemiddleofthecreek.Fosterbrokethewindowwitharockandtheyescapedtodryland.Martinezattemptedtodriveacrossaroadfloodedbyarisingcreek._____→_____→_____→_____→_____ 仔细阅读短文，按要求完成下面的任务221 从文中找出描写溪水的词汇，填入下面的句子Halfwayacross,therushingwaters___________________________________(控制了)hisvehicle,___________________________________(将车冲下道路)andwashingitdownarockystreambed.Itfinallystoppedagood80feetaway,whenthewatersomehow___________________________________(抬起了这辆SUV)andtippeditinthegroundata45degreeangle.Bruised,shaken,andtrappedinside________________________________________(浑浊的水快速上涨),Martinezwascertainhewasgoingtodie.222 从文中找出描写Martinez心理和动作的词汇，填入下面的句子Martinez,drivingaToyotaSUV,___________________________________(以为他会没事)._________________________________________________________(受了擦伤、又惊又怕地困在车里)withthemuddywaterrisingquickly,Martinez___________________________________(确信)hewasgoingtodie.Soon,asoakedMartinez___________________________________(从…中出现)thewindowframe,andthemen___________________________________(逃到了陆地上).223 从文中找出描写Foster动作的词汇，填入下面的句子They__________________________________________________(看着事情发生),andwhenMartinez’sSUVcametorestinthemiddleoftherushingcreek,Foster________________________(立即行动起来).First,he____________________(抓起)heavyduty(结实的)ropesfromthebackofhisvanand____________________(固定)theSUVtonearbyposts.Thenhe______________________________(爬上)Martinez’svehicleandbangedonarearwindowwithhisfists.___________________________________(十分沮丧),heturnedtohisnieceandshouted,“Givemearock!”Overandoverhe____________________(砸)therockintothewindowbut________________________(无济于事).Foster____________________(喊)toMartineztomoveawayfromthewindow.He____________________(支撑住)himself—rightfootonthesparetire,leftinthewheelwell.He___________________________________(向后仰)andthrewtherock.Finally,theglassbrokeandFoster___________________________________(踢进)theremainingglass.▌读后续写实战演练第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事ItwasarainyNovembermorning.OverewithangerIknewifIdidn’tleavethehousesoonIwouldlosemytemperwithmyhusband,

Joe.Asraincamedowninsheets,Joeofferedtotakemetowork.I

struggled

intomyjacket,seizedmybagandteachingplansandignoredhim.Heinsistedandreachedforhisboots.Ilookedatthepilesofnewspapersandthedirtydishesstillonthetable.

“Don’tyouhaveenoughtodo?Icantakecareofmyself!”

Istormedout,notevenkissinghimgoodbye.Joe

shouted

aftermenottotakethe

shortcut(捷径).JoeandIhadbeeneagerlylookingforwardtoourretirementwhenaheartattackthatpastspringforcedhimtoleavehisjobearlierthanwehadplanned.Asthemedicalbillsmounted,we

realized

IwouldhavetocontinueworkingfulltimewhileJoestayedhomeandtookoverthe

housework.Thenewarrangementwasadisaster.Exhaustedafteradayoffullwork,allIwantedwasahothomecooked

meal

andagoodnight’ssleep.However,whatgreetedmeatthetablewasamicrowavepackage.Sometimeshewouldserveoatmeal(燕麦)forseveralnightsinarow.OnenightwhenIdraggedmyselftobed,IwasterrifiedtodiscoverJoehadturnedourwhitesheetsblue.Hetoldmehehadfoundouthowtosaveonwater,soapandelectricity.He

patted

hisbluetrousersandannouncedproudlywashingeverythingtogetherwasjustthesecret.Tenminuteslater,ignoringJoeswarningIturnedoffthemainroute(道路).Ithoughtithadn’t

rainedenoughtofloodtheroad,butasIroundedthecornerwater

rushed

acrossmypath.Afterafewfeet,thecargotstuck.Iopenedthedoorandwaterpouredin.Ihurriedlyclosedthedoor.Icouldn’triskwalkinginthis.Almost20minutespassed,andthecarbegantoshake.Igot

frightened

todeathwhenIheardthreelonghonks(喇叭声).注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofa

truck.

……Paragraph2IscreamedthatIcouldn’tmakeit.…… Step1:读懂故事 按正确的时间顺序排列下列事件TimeEventsThatpastspring()MycargotstuckandIwastrappedinthecar.ThecarbegantoshakewhenIheardthreelonghonks.Iturnedofftheroadtotaketheshortcut,whichJoehadwarnedmenottodo.Ialmostlostmytemperanddecidedtogotoworkbymyself.Joehadaheartattackandwasforcetoleavehisjob.IhadtocontinueworkingfulltimeandJoewouldtakeoverthehousework.IgrewangrywithJoebecauseofhispoorperformanceofhousework.Asthemedicalbillsmounted()Astimewenton()ArainyNovembermorning()Tenminuteslater()Afterafewfeet()Almost20minuteslater() Step2:构思情节221 根据情节发展线索，为续写段落选择合适的事件Paragraph1Event1()Thetruckdidn’tevenslowdownanddroveaway.ThetruckdriverwasJoeandhestartedtosavemefromthecar.Event2()WaterstartedtorisewithinthecarandIcan’topenedthedoor.Waterstartedtorisewithinthecarandquicklyfilledit.Paragraph2Event1()Ifinallyescapedfromthecarandtodryland.Ididn'tmakeitanddrownedafterwaterfilledmycar.Event2()WhenIwassafe,Iapologizedandrealisedhewasagoodhusband.WhenIwassafe,IhadafightwithJoeforhisnotdoingthedishes.222 根据上表的预测，详细构思续写段落Paragraph1Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofa

truck.

……Paragraph2IscreamedthatIcouldn’tmakeit.…… Step3:完成草稿Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofa

truck.

Iblaredmyhorn,tryingtocatchattentionsincewaterstartedtorisewithinthecar.___________________________________(又惊又怕),I_________________________

______________(我确信)Iwasgoingtodie.ThetruckstoppedanditwasJoe!He______________________________(立即行动起来).First,he______________________________________________________(抓起绳子)fromhistruckand___________________________________(固定我的车)tohisvehicle.Thenhewadedtowardsmycarandshoutedtome,“Openthedoor!”IscreamedthatIcouldn’tmakeit.Thewatermusthavedisabledthedoorlock.Iwassopanickedthatmybrainnearlystoppedworking.Joe_______________________________________(爬上我的车),____________________(击打)onthesunroofwithhisfists,____________________________________(但无济于事).ThensuddenlyI_____________________(瞥见)apairofhighheelsthatIwasgoingtowearatwork.WithallmystrengthI____________________(砸)theheelintothesunroof.Itfinallybroke.Joe___________________________________(支撑住他自己)andpulledmeoutofmycartodryland.“I’msorry!I’msosorry!I___________________________________(本不该走)theshortcut.”IsobbedasJoepattedonmyback.“It’sok.Youaresafenow.”Isuddenlyrealizeditwashisbraveryandconcernformethatmadehimagoodhusband.▌朗读与积累Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofa

truck.