2024届高三英语一轮复习：读后续写练习写作讲义素材

读后续写练习写作

试题呈现：

Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmy

caroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenused

inmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.itwasa

hummingbird（蜂鸟）,desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs（蛛网）

andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.

Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.The

brokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtook

heroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.

WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithher

brighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,

shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolong

andwastootired?Ortoothirsty?

AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawater

bottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyfly

away.

Hovering（悬停工sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,

thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflew

quicklyoutofsight.

Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthe

window.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecar

whenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrom

persontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletouta

squeakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“She

musthavecometosaygood-bye.”

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Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

范文1:

Afewweekslater,Iwentbacktothefarm.Asmycarnearedit,mythoughts

driftedbacktothemomentwhenIhadrescuedthetinypoorcreature-thehummingbird

fromthespider'sweb.Icouldn'thelphurryingbacktothedesertedhousewhereit

accidentallyflewinandwastrapped,helplessanddesperate.Itwasagreatcomfortthatthe

originalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Leavingthehouse,Icouldn'thelpbut

wonderhowitwasgettingonnow.Haditmanagedtofinditswaybackhome,orwasitstill

outtheresomewhere,strugglingtosurvive?Thesequestionsweighedheavilyonmymind

asIunwillinglymademywaytomycar.

Iwasabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Aflashofmovementcaught

myattention.ItmustbeHER!Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringinthe

air,itstinywingsbeatingrapidlyasitsurveyedthescene.Itseemedalmostasifthebird

waswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,

unspokengratitude.Icouldn'thelpbutfeelasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightof

thissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswe

sharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.

范文2：

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Mycarpulledintothetrackleadingtothe

milkinghouseandbrakedinfrontofthewindow,whichapparentlyhadbeenfixed.WhenI

wasenjoyingtherefreshingscentofgrassalongtheblueberry-linedpath,myfriendcame

alongandwesharedaboutthebusyfleetingdays.Thenhementionedthatthehummingbird

paidregularvisitstothefarm,whichwouldhoveraroundforalongtimebeforeflying

away,"'Shewouldcometoday,Isuppose.0addedthehostinamockingandexpectantvoice.

Anticipationinstantlytriggered,IwaitedforherappearanceasIhaddinner,chatted,and

tookawalk,butshedidn'tcome.Myheartseemedtobehollowedout,andIthoughtto

myselfjokingly,r,AmIwaitingforahummingbird?0

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Thereshewasbesidemy

car!Withgreatecstasy,Imovedcloser.Uponseeingmeapproaching,shetookwing,circled

aroundmeforawhile,thendiveddownandlandedonmyhand.Justlikebefore,thistiny

creaturelookedstraightintomyeyesandchantedacheeringsongasiftocelebrateour

“reunion”.Perhapsshehadbeenwaitinghereforsuchalongtimejustto“reunite“withme!

SowasI!Immersedinthemerryget-together,Icouldn'thelpticklinghercutelittlehead

andcuppedhertomyheart.Withatabonthephone,thehostfrozethiscozymomentfor

me,whichwouldalwaysremindmeofthismiracleencounterandthatwecanlivein

harmonywithdifferentspeciesaslongasweshowsomesympathyandrespect.

范文3：

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Asmycarneareditmythoughtsdrifted

backtothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider'sweb.Irushedback

tothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwas

nowheretobefound.Leavingthehouse,Icouldn'thelpwonderinghowitwasgettingon

now.Haditmanagedtofinditswaybackhome,orwasitstillouttheresomewhere

strugglingtosurvive?

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Aflashofmovementcaught

myattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.Itseemed

thatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysome

deep,unspokengratitude.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundand

gratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasI

climbedintomycaranddroveaway.

范文4：

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.WhenIhappenedtopassthemilkinghouse,

Idecidedtocheckoutthewindowthere.Tomyrelief,thebrokenwindowhadalreadybeen

fixed.Yet,thesightofthesceneimmediatelyremindedmeofthehummingbird.Wherewas

thehummingbird?Wassheingoodshape?Hopingshewouldn'tgetherselfintoanother

stickysituationanymore!Thoughtslikethesejustkeptfloodinginonme.Tobehonest,I

wassoeagertomeetheragain,eventhoughIknewitwaslikeamissionimpossibletofind

suchatinyhummingbirdinsuchabigworld.Withamixtureofreliefanddisillusionment,I

pacedmywaytowardsmycarfordeparture.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Sheswoopeddowntomy

eyelevel,hoveringrealclosetome,gazingatmewithhersparklingeyes.Thensheemitted

asqueakysoundasifshehadrealizedthatitwasIwhohadrescuedherfromthesticky

spider-webs.Hey!Littlehummer,it'syou!”SoexhilaratedwasIthatIcouldn'thelp

exclaiming.Watchingherflappingwingsrapidlyandmakingthehummingsound,Icouldn't

helpbutreachoutmyhand,unexpectedly,thistime,shestoppedhoveringbutperchedon

mycuppedhand,withnocautionatall.Myheartlurched,thenasurgeofwarmcurrent

floodedintomyheart.Forthefirsttimeinmylife,Istartedtobelievetherereallyexisteda

spiritualbondbetweenwehumanbeingsandotheranimalsintheworld.

范文5：

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Aftergreetingmyoldfriendandchatting

withhimforminutes,Ibegantogoforawalkonthefarm.Ihangedalonealongthe

blackberry-linedpath,breathingthefreshairandremarkablesceneryalongside.Suddenly,

Isawtheoldmilkinghouseagain.Despitetheweatheredwalls,anewshiningglasswindow

caughtmyattention,remindingmeofthehummingbirdthathadbeensaved.Ireflectedon

thecreaturehoveringinfrontofmeandnotwillingtoflyoff.HowIwishedtoseeheragain!

Butsearchingforawhile,itturnedouttobeinvain.Disappointed,Ithoughtofsaying

goodbyetomyfriend.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Flyingupanddown,she

hoveredandswirled.Icouldn'thelplaughingandcalledhergently.Withuncontrollable

excitement,Iwatchedherslowlylandingonmypalm.Shelookedagaindirectlyintomy

eyesandletoutsomesqueakycalls.ThoughIcouldn'tunderstandwhatshemeant,Icould

tellfromhervoicethatshewasalsohappytoseemeagain.Ifedhersomefoodandgazedat

heruntilshevanishedfrommysight,reluctantbutsatisfied.Sunlightdroppeddown

throughthecarwindowasIdrovebackhome.Bathedinthesun,Ithoughtwhata

miraculousfriendshipIhadowned.

范文6：

Afewweekslater,Iwentbacktothefarm.AfewweekshadpassedsinceIhad

stumbleduponthehummingbird,trappedandhelplessintheabandonedhouse.AsI

returnedtothefarm,mythoughtswerefloodedwithmemoriesofthatday-thewaythe

birdhadlookedatmewithsuchgratitude,itstinybodytremblinginmyhandsasIcarefully

freeditfromthespider'sweb.Icouldn'tshakethefeelingthatthehummingbirdandIhad

formedsomekindofbond,andIwasdrivenbyasenseofcuriosityasIapproachedthe

house,wonderingifthelittlebirdwasstillaroundandifithadmanagedtofindanewand

securehome.

Iwasabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Hearingafaintbuzzing

sound,Iinstantlyturnedtoseethefamiliarhummingbirdhoveringgracefullyintheair.It

seemedasifthebirdwastryingtocapturemyattention,itsbeadyeyessettlingonmine.I

feltasenseofaweandpridewashingoverme.Miraculously,Icouldfeelitsgratitudeto

meforsavingitslife.HowcouldIbelievethatthislittlecreaturehadrememberedmeand

soughtmeouttobitfarewell?Itwasatrulyheartwarmingmomentandonethatwould

nevervanish.

范文7：

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Strollinguptheblueberry-linedpathtoward

thefarm,Icouldnothelpbutrecallthehummingbirdincidentofmylastvisit.Didshemake

itsafelybacktohernest?WouldIbeblessedenoughtohaveanothermagicalencounter

withher?Intentionallyornot,Ipassedthemilking-house,whereIfoundthebroken

windowperfectlyrepaired.Itwasarelieftoknowthatnootherpoorcreaturewouldbe

trappedinside.Duringthecookout,Iaskedmyhostsifthehummingbirdhadreturned.

Theyshruggedtheirshoulders,leavingmealittledisappointed.Withthesettingofthesun,

myexplorationsonthefarmweredrawingtoaclose.

Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.ThemomentIopenedthe

cardoor,Iheardafamiliarsqueakingcall.Itwasthehummingbirdhoveringbeforeme!

Amazedbeyondwords,Iremainedtongue-tiedforagoodwhile.Meantimethedearlittle

birdkepthovering,movingnearerandnearer,untilshewaswithinafewinchesofmyface.

Gracefullybuzzing,shelookedmestraightintheeyeagain,asiftryingtoconveysomething.

Aftercirclingaroundme,thebeautifulhummingbirddisappearedintothesunset.My

friendsandIweredumbfounded,unabletoexplainwhathadhappened.Butonethingwas

forsure-thislittlebirdmadealastingimpressiononmethatwillwarmmyheartforyears

tocomeandremindmethatevenasmallactofkindnesscanmakeahugediff