专题08 书面表达 （解析版）

专题08书面表达Writing1（2024·天津河东·一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green一直保持联系，她对你们学校每年举办一次的“英语艺术节”非常感兴趣。近日她来信询问去年的“英语艺术节”活动情况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。(1)活动时间：去年年底，为期一个月；(2)活动内容及意义；(3)对活动的感受；(4)感谢Mrs.Green多年来的关心和帮助，邀请她再来天津。注意：(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：英语艺术节EnglishArtsFestivalDearMrs.Green.I’msogladtohearfromyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours.LiJin【答案】DearMrs.Green,I’msogladtohearfromyou.KnowingthatyouwanttolearnsomethingaboutourEnglishArtsFestivalheldlastyear,I’dbegladtotellyousomedetailsasfollows.Asyouknow,theEnglishArtsFestivalisheldonceayear.Intheendoflastyear,itwasheldasscheduleandlastedforamonth,whichwasagreatsuccess.Therewereagreatmanyofactivitiescoveringmusic,dance,drama,filmandvisualarts.Allthestudentsandteachersparticipatedinit.Itnotonlybroughtgreaterartisticenjoymenttous,butalsoincreaseourinterestofart.Ithinkitwasexcellentandmademelearnmoreaboutarts.ThankyouforhavingcaredandhelpedmealottheseyearsanddohopeyoucouldcometoTianjinagain.Bestwishes.Yours,LiJin【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mrs.Green回信介绍去年的“英语艺术节”活动情况。【详解】1.词汇积累想要：wanttodo→feellikedoing举行：hold→host高兴的：glad→delighted参加：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Therewereagreatmanyofactivitiescoveringmusic,dance,drama,filmandvisualarts.拓展句：Therewereagreatmanyofactivities,whichcoveredmusic,dance,drama,filmandvisualarts.【点睛】[高分句型1]KnowingthatyouwanttolearnsomethingaboutourEnglishArtsFestivalheldlastyear,I’dbegladtotellyousomedetailsasfollows.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Intheendoflastyear,itwasheldasscheduleandlastedforamonth,whichwasagreatsucceed.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)Writing2（2024·天津河西·一模）假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，在元宵节来临之际，英国姊妹校师生来校访问，希望了解中国传统节日。请根据以下提示，写一篇发言稿。内容要点：1.表示欢迎：2.介绍元宵节（至少包括两点）；3.邀请他们参加元宵节活动。注意：1.词数不少于100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：元宵节TheLanternFestival________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Goodmorning,dearfriends.IamLiJin,ChairmanoftheStudentUnionofChenguanghighschool.Onbehalfofourschool,I’mheretoextendourwarmestwelcometoyouall.SincetheLanternFestivalisaroundthecorner,I’dliketotakethisopportunitytotalkaboutthisimportantfestival.TheLanternFestivalfallsonthe15thdayofthelstlunarmonth.Duringthefestival,lanternsofvariousshapesandsizesarehunginthestreetsand“Guessinglanternriddles”isaninterestingpartofthefestival.Peoplealsoenjoyeatingyuanxiao,whichhelpstounitetheirfamiliesinajoyfulatmosphereduringthefestival.Meanwhile,thereareperformancessuchasdragondancesandliondances,attractinglotsofvisitors.Recently,therehasbeenaLanternShowintheWaterPark.We’llinviteyoutoenjoyittonight.Wishyouhaveagoodtime.Thankyouforlistening.【导语】本篇是应用文写作。在元宵节来临之际，英国姊妹校师生来校访问，希望了解中国传统节日，要求考生一篇发言稿欢迎他们，并向他们介绍元宵节，邀请他们参加元宵节活动。【详解】1.词汇积累表示：extend→express机会：opportunity→chance各种各样的：various→kindsof重要的：important→significant2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Meanwhile,thereareperformancessuchasdragondancesandliondances,attractinglotsofvisitors.拓展句：Meanwhile,performancessuchasdragondancesandliondancestakeplace,whichattractalargenumberofvisitors.【点睛】[高分句型1]SincetheLanternFestivalisaroundthecorner,I’dliketotakethisopportunitytotalkaboutthisimportantfestival.(as引导的原因状语从句)[高分句型2]Peoplealsoenjoyeatingyuanxiao,whichhelpstounitetheirfamiliesinajoyfulatmosphereduringthefestival.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)Writing3（2024·天津河北·一模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。在世界地球日即将到来之际，你校与英国友好校将在线举办“绿动校园，青春飞扬”的主题摄影展，以此来记录校园环保活动中的精彩瞬间。现组委会向同学们征集照片，你打算参加此项活动。请按照以下提示用英语给组委会写一封信来推荐你的照片：（1）描述照片的内容；（2）说明选择该照片的理由；（3）表达对该照片入选的愿望。参考词汇：绿动校园，青春飞扬GreenCampus,FlyingYouth注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【答案】DearSir/Madam,IamLiJin,astudentfromChenguangHighSchool.WiththeWorldEarthDayapproaching,Iamthrilledtoparticipateinthe“GreenCampus,FlyingYouth”photographyexhibitiontobeheldonlinebyourschoolandourBritishsisterschool.Iwouldliketosubmitaphotothatfeaturesagroupofstudentsplantingtreeswithenthusiasmonasunnyafternoon.Ichoosethisphotobecauseitcapturestheessenceofourcampus’environmentalprotectioneffortsandcaterstothethemeof“GreenCampus,FlyingYouth”.Isincerelyhopethatmyphotowillbeselectedfortheexhibition.Itwouldbeanhonortohavemyworkdisplayedwiththeotheroutstandingentriesandtocontributetotheglobaleffortofpromotingenvironmentalawareness.Thankyouforconsideringmysubmission.Yours,LiJin【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给组委会写一封信来推荐照片，描述照片的内容，说明选择该照片的理由，表达对该照片入选的愿望。【详解】1.词汇积累兴奋的：thrilled→excited参加：participatein→takepartin提交：submit→handin对……做贡献：contributeto→makecontributionsto2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Ichoosethisphotobecauseitcapturestheessenceofourcampus’environmentalprotectioneffortsandcaterstothethemeof“GreenCampus,FlyingYouth”.拓展句：ThereasonwhyIchoosethisphotoisthatitcapturestheessenceofourcampus’environmentalprotectioneffortsandcaterstothethemeof“GreenCampus,FlyingYouth”.【点睛】【高分句型1】WiththeWorldEarthDayapproaching,Iamthrilledtoparticipateinthe“GreenCampus,FlyingYouth”photographyexhibitiontobeheldonlinebyourschoolandourBritishsisterschool.(使用了With复合结构、不定式作状语)【高分句型2】Itwouldbeanhonortohavemyworkdisplayedwiththeotheroutstandingentriesandtocontributetotheglobaleffortofpromotingenvironmentalawareness.(使用了It作形式主语且不定式作真正主语的句型、havesth.done结构)Writing4（2024·天津和平·一模）假设你是李津。你的英国朋友Chris在中文班学习中文，他犹豫是否参加下周中文班举办的中文演讲大赛。比赛要求每位选手从“塞翁失马焉知非福（ablessinginmisfortune）”和“揠苗助长（Topulluptheseedingstohelpthemgrow）”这两个成语中任选一个完成一篇演讲。Chris特写信向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件，要点如下。1．鼓励他积极参与：2．提供帮助（如解释成语的意义，举一些事例，你给予的演讲建议等）3．表达美好的祝愿。注意：(1)词数不少100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearChris,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【答案】DearChris,HearingthatyouareconsideringparticipatinginaChinesespeechcontestnextweek,Ithinkyoushouldactivelyengageinit.AndIamwritingtoencourageyoutogetpreparedandgoforit!Regardingthetopicofthespeech,theidiom“ablessinginmisfortune”meansthatsometimeswelosesomething,butwemaygetbetterreturnsinotheraspects,whileanotheronemeanssometimessimplybeingeagerforsuccesswillonlymakethingsworse.Butasforthespeech,Idosuggestyousharesomeexamplesorpersonalexperiences,whichcanshowyourunderstandingofthelanguageandalsoyourlifehereinChina.Inaddition,payattentiontoyourpronunciation,andtrytomakeyourspeechclearandunderstandable.WhatIstronglyrecommendistoshareyourpersonaljourney,orsimilarexpressionsinyourculture,whichwillnotonlymakeyourspeechmoreauthentic,butwillalsoarousetheinterestofyouraudience.Finally,Isincerelywishyougoodresultsinthecompetit