2022年甲卷作文《保护海洋》写作学案-2023届高考英语二轮复习

话题写作环境保护和人类生

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（2022年全国甲卷）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英

语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。

内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

OurOceans,OurResponsibility

June8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorld

OceansDay.

写作过程：

Stepl:审题——摘取内容要素

K解题思路（写前四审”

1.审题材：2.审时态：

3.审人称：___________________

4.审要点：（1）.（2）.

Step2:确立谋篇布局

1.第一段：续写，世界海洋日的目的，宗旨是什么？

2.第二段：海洋的重要性是什么?（firstofall,besides...）

保护海洋的倡议（tobeginwith,国际组织、政府该做

什么？inaddition,我们个人可以做什么?）

3.第三段：呼吁大家一起行动起来。

Tipi:倡议书常用句式

1.Thereisaneedforustotakemeasuresto...

2.Inordertomake/create...,Icalloneveryonetopayattentionto...

3.Allthesehavesoundedanalarmtohumanbeings,soitishightimethat

wejoined/shouldjoineffortsto...

4.Itisurgentthatsomestrongmeasuresshouldbeadoptedtosolvethe

problem.

5.Wecansaveourplanetthroughmanyways,suchas...

6.Evenasmallactionismeaningfulto...

7.Pleasejoinusintheactionofprotecting...

8.1amcertainthatremarkableresultswillbeachievedinthisrespect.

9.Let'sjoinourhandsinfightingagainst...andmakeourplanetabetter

placetolivein.

10.Itisbelievedthatyourcontributioncanmakeadifference.

Tip2:提取重点短语并翻译：

1.生态：2.海洋保护：

3.可持续发展：___________________

4.提高.的意识:

5的重要性:6.采取行

动:______________

7.倡议某人做某事:8.制定政策/法律：

9.抓住每个机会:________________________

10.低碳生活方式：_______________________

Tip3：段落句子翻译

1.海洋对我们人类的生存和发展非常重要。(beofgreat

importanceto)

2.现今，世界各地的海洋环境正受到严重的污染。(sufferfrom)

3.海洋生物的生存受到威胁。(threaten)

4.现在到了我们采取措施并号召更多的人参与保护海洋的时候。

(Itishightimethat...)

5.让我们一起行动起来。只有这样，我们的地球才会变得越来越

好。(onlyinthisway,can...部分倒装句)

Howtopolishyourwriting

1.检查时态、语态、单词拼写、标点符号是否有错误。

2.句子的时态，主谓，代词要做到一致；

句子谓语要完整；有没有双谓语或者没有谓语

习惯用法，固定搭配要正确；

冠词，形容词，副词及连词要得当；

有没有合适的被动语态。

3.根据内容要点改写句子、合并句子、用非谓语动词改写句子、

用高级替代词、用高级句式润色文章、运用适当的过渡词加强逻

辑等。

Class：Name：

OurOceans,OurResponsibility

June8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorld

OceansDay.

Answers:

1.ecology2.oceanprotection

3.sustainabledevelopment4.raise/enhanceone's

awarenessof...

5.Thesignificanceof...6.takeaction/steps/

measurestodo

7.appeal/callonsb.todosth.8.makepolicies/

regulations/laws

9.seizeeverychance/opportunity10.low-carbonlifestyle

translation

1.Oceanisofgreatimportancetohumans9livingand

development.

2.Nowadays,theMarineenvironmentaroundtheworldisbeine

seriouslypolluted.(sufferingfromterriblepollution)

3.ThesurvivalofMarinelifeisthreatened.

4.Itishightimethatwetookmeasuresandcalledonmorepeople

totakepartinprotectingtheocean.

5.Let'stakeactiontogether.Onlyinthiswaycanourearth

becomebetterandbetter.

X

OurOceans,OurResponsibility

June8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorld

OceansDay.Itisadaytoraisepeople'sawarenessofprotectingthe

oceanswhicharevitaltohumanbeings.

Coveringabout71%oftheEarth'ssurface,theoceanscan

regulatetheclimateandmakeitlivableforhumans.Inaddition,the

oceansproduceoverhalfoftheworld'soxygenandarehometoa

largevarietyofsealife.Theoceansaresoimportantthatweshould

protectthemforourfuturegenerations.Asstudents,wecantakepart

bydoingsmallthings,suchascollectinggarbageontheseashoreor

avoidingpouringwastewaterintotheoceans.

Byworkingtogether,wecanprotectandrestoreourprecious

oceans.(108字)

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OurOceans,OurResponsibility

June8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorld

OceansDay.Obviously,itattachesgreatimportancetoocean

protection.

Theoceansaretoourhumanbeingswhatwateristofish.Not

onlydoesitprovideuswithabundantresources,butitalsoplaysarole

inmaintainingthebalanceofourecosystem.（海洋的重要性）

Unfortunately,asoureconomyadvances,recentyearshaveseen

theoceansbeingpolluted.（转折和过度）Therefore,itishightime

thatwetookmeasurestoprotecttheoceans.Countriesshouldteamup

withoneanothertoworkoutpracticalplansregardingocean

protection.Individualsshouldenhanceawarenessofoceanprotection.

（保护海洋的倡议）

Itismyfirmbeliefthatonlywithjoinedeffortscanwe

haveabettertomorrow.（倒装句）

（106字）

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OurOceans,OurResponsibility

June8thwasofficiallynamedbytheUNin2009asWorld

OceansDay.Itwassetuptoraiseawarenessofprotectingthe

oceans,whichplayacrucialpartinglobalecosystem.

Withouttheoceans,nolivingthingswouldsurvive,humans

included.Asseniorstudents,wecanprotectoceansinourownway.

First,tryeverymeanstofightagainstglobalwarming,whichhas

becomeagreatthreattoseacreatures.Seco