雅思大作文段内扩展及首尾段

TASK2purpose：essay/dissertation考查提出解决方案的能力；举例说明观点的能力；对比证据和意见的能力等1精选课件ppt…Rubric:(I6P31)(fact+)opinion+question+instructionYoushouldspendabout40minutesonthistask:2精选课件ppt.Writeaboutthefollowingtopic:Today,thehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.3精选课件ppt.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.Writeatleast250words.4精选课件ppt大作文准备天龙八“步”熟读剑5，剑6范文，理解评分标准题型；每种题型对应的结构题材归类素材提纲（落实细节）思维高频短语建立精彩句库（换写，仿写，扩写）每2天一篇；模考；5精选课件pptQuestiontypes：IAgreeorDisagree?(+Aor-A)--I6P31（见上）

opinion+(+Aor-A)--I3P52fact+opinion+(+Aor-A)6精选课件pptWhenacountrydevelopsitstechnology,thetraditionalskillsandwaysoflifedieout.Itispointlesstotryandkeepthemalive.Towhatextent(/howfar)doyouagreeordisagree(withthisopinion)?7精选课件pptIIAdvantagesVsDisadvantages(+Aor-A)

I5P53Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.advantagesanddisadvantages8精选课件pptIIIDiscussBothViews(AorB)I6P53Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.Discussbothviews；youropinion9精选课件pptIVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.Whichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P9910精选课件pptVProblem+Reasons+Solutions(PRS)I4P101Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauseofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?11精选课件ppt评分标准三大要素：内容，结构，语言读雅思大作文范文学习写作的内容，结构，文章行文和逻辑。12精选课件ppt写作内容及结构：IAgreeorDisagree?(+Aor-A)Today,thehighsalesofpopularconsumergoodsreflectthepowerofadvertisingandnottherealneedsofthesocietyinwhichtheyaresold.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?13精选课件pptPara1开头指出现象/事实;restatetherubric（换词，换句型，换种说法）；字数：30-40w；

14精选课件pptPara2&3正文：四种写法一边倒：--完全同意(在开头段提出观点表同意；para2R1；para3R2；…)--完全不同意（在开头段提出观点表不同意；para2R1；para3R2；…）不完全同意或不同意15精选课件ppt--para2同意的部分；R1，2；para3不同意的部分R1,2--para2基本赞同；R1，2…;para3inwhatcases题中观点站不住脚Para4结尾总结以上观点字数：30-40w16精选课件pptIIAdvantagesVsDisadvantages

(+Aor-A)Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidetodothis.17精选课件pptPara1开头：指出现象/事实restatetherubric（换词，换句型，换种说法）；Para2advantages(2-3个)Para3disadvantages(2-3个)18精选课件pptPara4结论：“我”的观点。偏向advantages或disadvantages；理由（2个）；字数：50w；注意：结论部分，无论是倾向优点还是缺点，都不要重复正文部分的语句。对策：（如：偏向优点）1.总结第二段的观点，由specific到general；2.重复第二段观点，但要用重述法。赞成的一边适当多写一些内容。19精选课件pptIIIDiscussBothViews(AorB)I6P164Successfulsportsprofessionalscanearnagreatdealmoremoneythanpeopleinotherimportantprofessions.Somepeoplethinkthisisfullyjustifiedwhileothersthinkitisunfair.DiscussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinionI6P5320精选课件ppt开头Para1摆现象；restatetherubric；

21精选课件ppt正文：有倾向性；Para2A，简单陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。Para3B(理由2-3个)注：倾向A写法正好相反22精选课件ppt无倾向性Para2A，简单陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。Para3B，简单陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。结论Para4“我”的观点。标明倾向性AorB，或者保持中立并提出自己独特的观点。23精选课件pptIVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.Whichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P99范文：I5P16924精选课件pptIVComparisonandcontrast(AorB)Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.Whichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence?I5P99范文：I5P16925精选课件pptPara1开头restatetherubric；指出fact(s)说明有哪些可能的选择；Para2为什么A，B…是可能的选择，Para3“我”的选择(oneofA，B…，ornoneofthesebutanotherone)；R1，2…Para4结论概括para2和para3的观点。26精选课件pptVProblem+Reasons+Solutions(PRS)Inmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecauseofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?I4P10127精选课件pptPara1开头指出problem；restatetherubric；Para2R1,2...Para3S1,2…Para4结论概括para2和para3的观点。Note：S和R要一一对应。28精选课件ppt衔接，逻辑性1.foranessayasawhole:topicsentence(thesisstatement)2.foreachparagraph:topicsentence3.段落间,段内都要注意衔接。标明并列，递进，转折等主要关系。学习1篇范文，体会内容，结构及连接手段29精选课件ppt观点前置----段内扩展：30精选课件ppt原因Example1:

Therearemorejobopportunitiesreadilyavailableinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.31精选课件pptTheeconomicconditionsinthebigcitiesaregenerallybetterthanthoseinthesmalltowns,which,inreturn,attractsmoreinvestmentfromcommercialcorporationsandcompanies.

32精选课件pptTherefore,comparedtomostsmalltowns,therearealwaysmoremodernandinternationalcompanieswhichcanoffercityresidentsnumerousjobopportunities.33精选课件pptExample2:Bigcitiescanprovidecityresidentswithmoreeducationopportunities.34精选课件pptEducationinstitutionsarealwaysbuiltintheareawithabigpopulationwiththeintentionofservingandeducatingpeople.35精选课件pptTherefore,comparedwithsmalltowns,bigcitiesalwayshavemoreschools,collegesanduniversitieswhichcanoffermanyeducationalopportunitiesforbothchildrenandadults.

36精选课件ppt原因---展开的常用句型

because…forthesimplereasonthat…Thereasonisthat…

无须过渡词37精选课件ppt拟无Example1Themostobviouslyimportantcharacteristicofairplanetravelisthehighspeedinvolved.

38精选课件pptIttookweekstocrosstheAtlanticorPacificoceansinsideaship.Todaywiththeadventofairplanesinourlives,thosesametripscanbecompletedinamatterofhours.

39精选课件pptAhundredyearsago,whenwedidn’thavetheflightsinthesky,andwhentherewereonlyships,theonlytransportationfacilityacrosstheocean,aninternationaljourneywasexhaustingandtime-wasting.40精选课件pptExample2Eatingatrestaurantcansavealotoftime.41精选课件pptWecanhardlyimaginethesituationwithoutrestaurantsinourlives.Livingunderthehigh-pressureandfast-pacedlivingstyle,peoplehavefoundtheyneedrestaurantwhentheydon’thaveenoughtimetoenjoytheirowncooking.42精选课件pptWithoutrestaurantsandtheservicesofferedbythem,peoplewillhavetospendlongtimegoingtogroceriesandcookingbythemselves.43精选课件ppt常用句型Without…Ifwedon’thave…inourlives,…Wecannotimaginethesituationwithout…44精选课件pptOnehundredyearsagowhenwedidn’thave…inourlives,…Thingswouldbecompletelydifferentwithout…inourlives.45精选课件ppt方面展开Example1Comparedwithsmalltowns,therearemoreconvenientlivingconditionsinbigcities.46精选课件pptInthebigcities,thereareconvenientshoppingcentersforpeopletobuydailynecessities；publictransportationsystemcantransfercityresidentsfromoneplacetoanothereasily;inentertainingplacescitizensgetfunandenjoylife;andeventherearemoretheaterstoshowthelatestmovies…47精选课件pptExample2Doyouagreeordisagree?Azoohasnousefulpurpose.(disagree)48精选课件pptByobservingandstudyingthebehaviorsandhabitsofanimalsinthezoo,wecanlearnthebasicrulesofsurvivingandlivingintheworld.

49精选课件pptAmonkeyhastofighttowinwhenhedecidestobealeaderofthegroup;birdsshowtheirbeautifulplumeandvoiceiftheywanttoattracttheirpartners;andalltheanimals,iftheywantalifefreeofworries,responsibilities,andpressure,havetosacrificetheirfreedom.

50精选课件ppt常用句型Thisreasoncanbereflectedinthefollowingaspects.Wecanseethisineveryaspectof…First,second,inaddition,moreover,also…Severalfactsseveralaspects51精选课件ppt数据：Example1Therearemorejobopportunitiesreadilyavailableinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.52精选课件pptAccordingtothesurveyconductedbyTessessData,astatisticorganization,80%commercialandindustrialcorporationsandcompanies,includingbothdomesticcompaniesandinternationalcompaniesarelocatedinthebigcities,whichoffermorethan80%workingpositionsforthosewhoareworkingandlivinginthecities.53精选课件ppt常用句型Accordingtoarecentsurvey,…

Thelatestsurveysshowthat…

Aninvestigationshowsthat…Asurveywascarriedouton…,theresultsofwhichweresurprising.Accordingtoaninvestigation,…Arecentsurveyrevealedthat…54精选课件ppt举例Example1Somepeopleprefertoliveinasmalltown.Othersprefertoliveinabigcity.

55精选课件pptForexample,therearefarmoresupermarkets,buslines,theatersinParisthaninLestie,averysmalltowninnorthFrance.OnaveragepeopleinPariscangototheatereveryweektoenjoythelatestmovieswhereasthoseinLestiehavetotakehoursoftraintogotothecitytheatersforamovie.Generally,peopleinPariscanenjoymuchbettershoppingenvironmentthanthoseinLestie.56精选课件pptExample2Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Technologyhasmadetheworldabetterplacetolive.Disagree57精选课件pptOneexampleinpointisInternet,oneofthemostpervasivemoderntechnologyinourlives,whichhasmadeourworldevenmorecomplicatedandisolated.58精选课件pptWiththeadventofInternetinourlives,mostyoungpeoplehavealreadymovedtheirlivestothecyberworld.Theystudy,work,chat,evengameonline.Peoplelosttheirpreviouswayofgaming,fromwhichtheycanenjoythefunofcooperatingandcommunicating.

59精选课件pptAlso,theyareawayfromthetraditionalwayofliving,fromwhichtheycanenjoythebasicandsimplelivesofhumanbeings.60精选课件ppt常用句型Insteadofimprovingourwayofliving,Internethasmadetheworldamorecomplicatedandisolatedplacetolivein.

61精选课件pptTheexamplethatcansupportmyideais….Theexampleof…cansupportmyidea.…isagoodexamplewhichcansupportmyidea.62精选课件pptTosupportmyidea,thereisonegoodexample.Agoodexampleinpointis…Agoodexampleis…Totake…asanexample.Themostobviousexampleofthisreasonis…Forexample,…Forinstance,…

63精选课件ppt对比：Somepeopleprefertoworkforalargecompany.Othersprefertoworkorasmallcompany.64精选课件pptEmployeesinthebigcompaniescanalwaysownmorechancestoacquiremoreknowledgeandexperience.Inbigcompanies,professionalsandexpertsemployedcanoffermoreexpertiseandskills,whichyoucanhardlyfindinasmallcompanywhichcanbarelyaffordtoemployanexpert,orwherethereisnoneedtohaveexpertsatall.65精选课件pptInbigcompanies,professionalsandexpertsemployedcanoffermoreexpertiseandskills,whichyoucanhardlyfindinasmallcompanywhichcanbarelyaffordtoemployanexpert,orwherethereisnoneedtohaveexpertsatall.66精选课件ppt常用句型However,but,incontrastontheotherhand67精选课件ppt开头段68精选课件pptIntroduction----背景引入

Inthefuture,studentsmayhavethechoiceofstudyingathomebyusingtechnologysuchascomputersortelevisionorofstudyingattraditionalschools.69精选课件pptWeliveinaworldinwhichtechnologygivesusmanyopportunitiestoimproveeveryaspectofourlives,includingarts,sciences,politics,andeducation(时代特征).Oneofmostobviousimpactwhichthetechnologyhasoneducationisthatithaschangedtraditionalstudying-in-classlearningpattern(走向主题).70精选课件pptNowwegetchancetostudyathomebyusingtechnologysuchascomputerortelevision(论述主题).Thisnewlearningpattern,whichIstronglyrecommendtoeveryone,willbenefitusalot.71精选课件pptIntroduction----对方让步

Manypeoplehaveacloserelationshipwiththeirpets.Thesepeopletreattheirbirds,cats,orotheranimalsasmembersoftheirfamily.72精选课件pptFormanykids,familypetsarenotjustanimalskeptforamusementorcompanionship;thefamilypetsaretreatedastheirbestfriendsandcompanionswhonotonlyprovideunconditionallove,butalsoteachthemaboutfriendship,73精选课件pptresponsibility,loyalty,andempathy.Theylovetotreatthemastheirfamilymembersandprefertokeepthemintheirrooms.(对方观点)74精选课件pptHowever，theyfailtorealizethatpetsarestillanimals,whichmay,firstly,makeseriousinjurytokidsaroundthem;inaddition,therearealwaysvariousbacteriaanddiseasesbearing.Therefore,Idon’tthinkit’sagoodideatotreatthepetsasfamilymembers.(我方观点)75精选课件ppt观点驳斥句型Peopleseemtofailtotakeintoaccountthefactthatuniversityalsobringstudentsvaluableknowledgeineveryfield..76精选课件pptHowever,thisopinionisnowbeingquestionedbymoreandmorecityresidents,whocomplainthatthemigrantshavebroughtmanyseriousproblemslikecrimeandprostitution77精选课件pptIntroduction----主题重述

Insomecountries,teenagershavejobswhiletheyarestillstudents.Agree？78精选课件pptTheschooldebateovercollegestudents’takingapart-timejobcanalwaysarousewidespreadinterests.Thosewhoobjecttoitarguethatstudentsshouldnotspendtheirprecioustimeinthisway.Peoplewho79精选课件pptadvocateit,ontheotherhand,claimthatbytakingamajor-relatedpart-timejob,studentscanfurtherimprovetheiracademicstudies.转述主题+理由AsfarasIamconcerned,Ibelievethatparttimejobswillbringstudentsbenefits.我方观点80精选课件ppt理论重述句型It

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problemthat…hascausedwidepublicconcern81精选课件pptIntroduction----概念展开Neighborsarethepeoplewholivenearus.Inyouropinion,whatarethequalitiesofagoodneighbor?

82精选课件pptNeighborsarethenearestpeopletousinthedarkesthoursofthenight.Theyaretheoneswholiveclosesttous,soclosethatthereisperhapsnomorethanacementedwallbetweenus.概念展开83精选课件pptBeingagoodneighborisadutythateveryoneshouldfulfillandapersonhasmanyresponsibilitiestowardshisneighbors;therefore,oneshouldalwaysbeagoodneighborsothatheisalsotreatedinthesamemannerwhenheisneeded.进入主题84精选课件ppt事实引入句型Accordingtoarecentsurvey,fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.

Thelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.

Thedeathrateofnew-bornbabiesinthatregion,theresultsofwhichweresurprising.85精选课件pptAninvestigationshowsthatfemaleworkerstendtohaveafavorableattitudetowardretirement.Asurveywascarriedoutonthe…86精选课件pptIntroduction----多种引用方式的叠加使用

Agreeordisagree?Televisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfriendsandfamily.87精选课件pptTV,oneofthemostpervasivemoderntechnologies,whichhasenteredpeople’slivesseveraldecadesago,hasgreatimpactonbothourlife-styleandourthought.概念介绍88精选课件pptAccordingtoarecentsurveyconductedbyStatisticsBureauofGuangdongProvince,astatisticorganizationinChina,teenagersaveragelyspend14hourswatchingtelevisioneachweekbutonlysixhourswiththeirfamilymembersinChina.数据切入89精选课件pptIamintotalagreementwiththeclaimthatTVhasbroughtanunfavorableinfluenceontherelationshipbetweenthemandtheirfamilymembers.观点+过渡90精选课件ppt原因引入句型Myreasonsarelistedbelow:Therearenumerousreasonsfor…,butIwouldonlyexploreafewofthembelow:Thereareseveralreasonsandagreementstosupportmyidea.Here,Iintendtoexplaincoupleofreasons.91精选课件pptiagreewith…forthefollowingreasons:myargumentsarelistedasfollows.Iwilltrytoprovemypointbythefollowingideas.themostimportantreasonwhyIagreewiththeabovestatementisthatIbelieve…92精选课件pptintroduction---Position:AsfarasIamconcerned...

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with…Itendtobelievethat…Ialwaysholdastrongpositive/negativeattitudetoward…93精选课件ppt…,whichIstronglyrecommendtoeveryoneMostofpeople,includingme,cannotagreewiththeopinionthat…Istronglyrecommendthat…94精选课件pptPosition---下文压缩句:Example1:LivinginthebigcitiesisabetterchoiceThereasonwhyIprefertoliveinthebigcitiesisthattherearemorejobopportunities,educationopportunitiesandbetterlivingconditionsinthebigcitiesthaninthesmalltowns.95精选课件pptExample2:EatingintherestaurantsisabetterchoiceIprefertoeatatrestaurantsbecauseitsavesmealotoftime,offersavarietyoffoodchoiceandbeautifulfoodgarni