Unit3Task课件牛津译林版英语九年级下册3

Brainstorming:Whatisyouridealrobotlike?

workingability…batteriesqualityPre-writing:WhatisDaniel’sidealrobotlike?

Danielwantstohavearobotlikethis.First,heexpectshisrobot’sbatteriestolast__________.Second,Hethinkshisrobotshouldwork_____________.Next,hewantshisrobothelphimwith____________.Finally,hethinkshisrobotshouldbechecked___________.2months24hoursadayhomeworkevery6monthssatisfied?notsatisfied?Pre-writing:

Predict

twomonths24hoursadaytohelpmewithhomeworkeverysixmonths123456Part1(paras1-2):feelingsPart3(para6):purpose/requestHowtowriteacomplaintletterCoherent结构连贯不松散twomonths24hoursadaytohelpmewithhomeworkeverysixmonthsbatteriesworkingabilityqualityqualityworkingabilitybatteriescanlastfor____weekatmostcanlastforatleast____monthsexpectation1isvery____needinstructions_________isnotupto______work____hoursadayhelphimwithhomeworkshouldbecheckedevery______months22461allthetimestandardlazyNow,Danie’srobotcan/is…Asaresult,heexpectsitcan…expectation2expectation1Coherent结构连贯不松散Concrete内容具体不空泛

twomonths24hoursadaytohelpmewithhomeworkeverysixmonthspassivevoice(1)Howeverthisrobotisverylazy.Ineedtogiveitinstructionsallthetime.(2)HoweverthisrobotissolazythatIneedtogiveitinstructionsallthetime.

Whichoneisbetter?brief&directCoherent结构连贯不松散Concrete内容具体不空泛

Concise语言精炼无赘余notsatisfiedunhappydon’tknowregretatmostatleastCirclewordsandphrasestoshowstrongfeelingsadj.v.prep.adv.Ithinkarobotshouldwork24hoursaday,andIwantmyrobottohelpmewithhomework.However,thisrobotisverylazy.2.Thequalityofthisrobotisnotuptostandardeither.FeeltheconnectingwordsfullofexpectationfullofdisappointmentfullofangerCoherent结构连贯不松散Concrete内容具体不空泛

Concise语言精炼无赘余Communicative语气适合强交际DearSir/Madam.I’m…(notsatisfiedwith/madat/disappointedabout…)therobotIbought.First,I’munhappywith…/itishopedthat…/Ithinkitshouldhelpmewith…however,….Iexpectyoucanimprove…Second,Thereisanotherproblemeither!...Ifyoucould…,I’llfeel…/Istronglyinsist…YoursfaithfullyYournamecomplaint4Itcatchesavirussoeasilyandalwaysgoeswrong.complaint5ItissobigthatIcan’ttakeitoutsideeveryday.ShowtimePost-writing:Whichonewillyouchoose?

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