定语从句复习之在写作中的应用课件高考英语作文复习专项

高考复习专项UsingAttributiveClause

inWriting写作中的定语从句应用📕Teachingaims经过本课学习，学生能够：1.通过思维导图构建定语从句知识体系2.通过具体语境中的句子、段落，观察、操练关系代词和关系副词的应用3.通过翻译练习，熟练应用定语从句4.通过写作练习，提升学生的写作能力LeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingListenandfillintheblanks听歌填词LeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingListenandfillintheblanks听歌填词IfyoucouldseethatI’mtheonewhounderstandsyouShe’sgoingoffaboutsomethingthat

yousaidI’mlisteningtothekindofmusic不填

shedoesn’tlikeAndI’monthebleachers,dreamingaboutthedaywhenyouwakeup...

LeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingListenandfillintheblanks听歌填词IfyoucouldseethatI’mtheonewhounderstandsyou,...She’sgoingoffaboutsomethingthat

yousaid.I’monthebleachers,dreamingaboutthedaywhenyouwakeup...ThisisthereasonwhyIlikeTaylorSwift.Taylorrerecordedthissong,whichinspiredmealot.Asisknowntoall,TaylorSwiftisatalentedsinger.

Can“who”beomitted省略?Can“that”bereplacedby“which”?Can“as”bereplacedby“which”?Can“which”bereplacedby“that”?=onwhich=forwhichLeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwriting🖊定义⚖句式结构🏹分类定语从句💡🔍特殊用法在复合句中，修饰/限定名词或代词（先行词）的从句先行词+关系词+从句限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句💡Mind-mapLeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwriting🏹分类定语从句💡🔍特殊用法限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句关系代词关系副词指人指物时间原因地点who,that,aswho,that,as,whomwhose主语定语宾语which,that,aswhich,that,aswhose主语定语宾语状语状语状语whenwherewhy不用that,whyas,which可以指代一整句话Leadinrevisionpracticetranslationwriting🖊定义⚖句式结构🏹分类定语从句💡🔍特殊用法关系副词介词选定抽象地点名词只用that不用which只用which不用that省略用法名词/代词/数词+of+which/whom/whose介词+which一看搭配二看句意case,situation,point,stage,job,position,activity,condition,scene,spot代、高、序、双、疑、特①非限制性定语从句②介词之后①限制性定从·关系代词作宾语②theway(that/inwhich)IamastudentfromJiangxiprovince,______has5nationalnaturereserves,46nationalforestparks,4WorldHeritageSitesand4worldGeologicalParks,andnurtures养育everypreciousspeciesfortheearth.whichLeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingTask1

在划线处填入相应的关系词Thereason______IwanttointroduceJiangxiprovinceisthatitisoneofthemostbeautifulprovincesinChina.

Icanwellremembertherewasatime______ablueskyandthegreentreeshavekeptmespellbound(adj.入迷的)whywhenLeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingOver2,400riversconverge汇聚toformthePoyangLake________providesahabitatfor98%oftheworld’swhitecranes.which/thatLeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingJustlikethelandscapeinChinesepainting,

Wuyuan

,knownasoneofthemostbeautifulvillagesintheworld,attractsmanypeople________liketoembracethenature.

that/whoLeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingJinggangshanwasthecradleoftheRedRevolution,with_______wearefamilar.What’smore,therearemanyfriendlylocalpeople,with_______Icouldgetalongwell.whichwhomLeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingJingdezhenisabeautifulplace,

__________

porcelain(n.瓷器)canhaveitssoul,becauseitconnectsthepastwiththefutureandlinksChinawiththeworld.Jingdezhenisabeautifulplace,________connectsthepastwithfutureandlinksChinawiththeworld.

where/inwhichwhichLeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingLeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingTask2把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句

例1.Jiangxiisabeautifulplace.Itiscoveredbythickforests.Jiangxiisabeautifulplace，itiscoveredbythickforests.1、分清主句与从句；2、确定先行词（相同的人或物）；3、分析先行词在从句中担当的成分；4、确定关系词；注意：从句放在所修饰名词后面Jiangxiisabeautifulplace，_______________________________-whichiscoveredbythickforests.LeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingTask2把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句

例2.I’dliketovisitPoyanglake.Itisknownasthelargestfreshwaterlake.I’dliketovisitPoyanglake,________________________________whichisknownasthelargestfreshwaterlake.LeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingTask2把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句

Eachyear,Jinggangshanreceivesalargenumberofstudents,_________________________________whoaredeeplymovedbyJianggangshanspirit.例3.Eachyear,Jinggangshanreceivesalargenumberofstudents.ThestudentsaredeeplymovedbyJianggangshanspirit.LeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingTask2把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句

例4.IwasborninJiangxiprovince.

I

havelived

here

formanyyears.IwasborninJiangxiprovince,_______________________whereI

havelivedformanyyears.LeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingTask2把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句

Iwillneverforgetthatspring,_______________________when/inwhichI

paidavisittoWuyuan.例5.Iwillneverforgetthatspring.

InthatsummerIpaidavisittoWuyuan.LeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingTask2把下列每组题中的简单句合并为一个含有定从的复合句

Jingdezhenisfamousfortheblueandwhiteporcelain,_________________________________whosestorycandatebacktoYuanDynasty.

例6.Jingdezhenisfamousfortheblueandwhiteporcelain.ItsstorycandatebaketoYuanDynasty.Leadinrevisionpractice

translationwritingTask3Translatethesentencesbyusingattributiveclauses用定语从句翻译句子Jiangxiisabeautifulplacewhich/thatiscoveredbythickforests.1.江西是一个美丽的地方，它被茂密的(thick/dense)森林覆盖。Leadinrevisionpractice

translationwritingTask3Translatethesentencesbyusingattributiveclauses用定语从句翻译句子2.这就是我出生的地方。Thisistheplacewhere/inwhichIwasborn.Leadinrevisionpractice

translationwritingTask3Translatethesentencesbyusingattributiveclauses用定语从句翻译句子3.我不会忘记那些我们在婺源画画的日子。IwillneverforgetthosedayswhenwepaintinWuyuan.

高考书面表达中的定从：Leadinrevisionpractice

translationwritingTask3Translatethesentencesbyusingattributiveclauses用定语从句翻译句子（2023全国乙卷）ThatwasthefirsttimeIwatchedalivemusicalperformance_____________________（它深深地触动了我）（2022年新高考I卷）"TalkandTalk"isanEnglishprogram_______________________________________________________（它给学生们提供了不同种类的话题从而开阔他们的视野）

（2021年甲卷）Ourschoolisgoingtoholdaclassmeeting____________________________________________（班会的主题和中国传统文化有关）(2020山东卷读后续写)HedidnotforgetthehelpofMeredith’sfamily,andhealsodidallhecould(do)tohelpthose__________________.（需要帮助的人）whichtouchedmedeeply.whichprovidesstudentswithavarietyoftopicstobroadentheirhorizons.whosetopicisrelatedtoChinesetraditionalcustoms.whoareinneedPart5writing定语从句·篇章练习LeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingTask4Useattributiveclausestowriteanarticle用定语从句写作文江西是一个绿树环绕的美丽的省份。这里是我生活和学习了许多年的地方。江西吸引了很多国内外的人他们被江西的自然风光（naturalscenery）和历史古迹（historicalsites）触动。作为江西的学子我感到很自豪。我永远不会忘记我在江西学习的时光。注意：尽量使用定语从句。Jiangxiisabeautifulprovince______________________.Thisistheplace_______________________formanyyears.Moreimportantly,Jiangxiattractsmanypeoplehomeandabroad,_________________________IamastudentfromJiangxi,________________.Iwillneverforgetthewonderfuldays_________________

Task5Interactiveassessment学生互评环节1.giveascore评分2.writesimpleremarks写出简短的评语3.showyourcomposition展示作品4.selectthebestauthorandthebestassessor评选最佳作者和最佳评卷者Leadinrevisionpracticetranslationwriting

Task5定语从句在写作中运用的评价（WritingAssessment）(共10分）评价内容AssessmentItems成绩scores所有要点齐全（5分）allinformationincluded

定语从句运用正确（先行词、关系词、结构）（4分)usingattributiveclausescorrectly

书写漂亮，卷面整洁（1分)goodhandwriting总分totalscores评语：________________

评卷者：________LeadinrevisionpracticetranslationwritingLeadinrevisionpracticetransla