2024届高考英语复习概要写作话题训练3人和环境 课件

【概要写作话题训练3】

人和环境人与环境主题语境:人与环境关键词:mountain

语篇类型:事物介绍短文词数:332语篇难度:★★★建议时间:23mns阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要Towering,grand,andbeautifulMountainsaresomeofthemostbeautifulstructuresofnature.Furthermoretheyarethesourceofrecreationandresources,withsnow-coveredsidesprovidingskislopesforenthusiasts,andmineralsinabundanceforthosebraveenoughtoexploretheirstonysides.Incertainareasoftheworldtheyarealsoasourceofuniqueagriculture,providingamplespaceforthoseproductsthatgrowbestontheirslopesInternationalMountainDayisyouropportunitytoheadoutandappreciatetheseuniquelandforms,andalltheyhavetooffer.ThedaywasestablishedinDecemberof2003.TheUnitedNationsGeneralAssemblycreatedthisdaytohelpbringawarenesstoallofthethingswerelyonmountainsfor,andtoencouragetheinternationalcommunitytoorganizeeventsatalllevelsonthedaytohighlighttheimportanceofmountaindevelopment.Everyyearthereisadifferentthemeforthedayrelatedtomountaindevelopmentandawarenessthethemefor2015was:Promotingmountainproductsforbetterlivelihoods".theaimofthedaywastoraiseawarenessofthechallengesfacedbymountaincommunitiesandtheimportanceofimprovingthelivelihoodsofthoselivinginmountaincommunities.ThankfullytheInternationalCenterforIntegratedMountainDevelopment(ICIMOD)isactingtohelpsolvetheproblemsfacedbypeoplelivingintheseareasoftheworld.Itwilltalktolocalsandexplainthedevelopmentsofastrongecosystemandhowitwillimprovethepeople'swell-being,water,environment,andoveralllivelihoodsSodoyouthinkyouwouldliketohelp?Afewideastothinkaboutaremountain-themedworkshops,bookfairs,pressreleasesoranythingelseyoucancomeupwithAnyandeverycontributioniswelcomed.Ifyouworkataschooloruniversityalecturebasedonthisthemewouldbeagreatwaytodrawawareness————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————语言点津国际山地综合开发中心(CMOD)是在尼泊尔和联合国教科文组织的倡导下于1983年成立的,1984年9月正式开始运作。它是世界上唯一致力于研究、保护、综合发展兴都库什——喜马拉雅山地自然和生物资源、改善山地居民生活条件的机构。中心设在尼泊尔的帕坦市。文章来源本文选自英文网站,原文题目为“nternationalMountainDay”《国际山会日》,作者为LARAIBHAMEED。语篇解读本文介绍了国际山岳日的来历,2015年国际山岳日的主题以及为了帮助山区发展,人们可以采取的行动。难句解读原文：ThankfullytheInternationalCenterforIntegratedMountainDevelopment(ICIMOD)isactingtohelpsolvetheproblemsfacedbypeoplelivingintheseareasoftheworld译文:庆幸的是,国际山地综合发展中心(CMOD)正在采取行动来帮助世界上生活在这些地区的人们解决他们所面临的问题。分析:这是一个简单句,句子中的不定式短语作状语表示目的;faced与后面的内容构成过去分词短语,用作定语修饰theproblems;现在分词短语livingintheseareasoftheworld是people的定语笔前点睛★审题分析①审要求:概要写作;②审人称、时态:以第三人称、一般现在时为主;③审要点:山区特点;成立时间;成立目的;2015年主题;如何响应主题。★思路点拨本篇概要写作的关键在于找准要点,然后以概括性的语言整合信息。比如原文第一段内容比较长,但只是说明山区是一个资源宝库,从而引出国际山岳日这一话题。因此该段可用InternationalMountainDayisagoodreminderforpeopletoappreciatemountainsnaturalresourcesandproducts来概括。在整合概括的基础上,写作时还要能够使用恰当的衔接词和过渡语把看似散乱的信息连接起来,使全文成为一个有机的整体.思路点拨本篇概要写作的关键在于找准要点,然后以概括性的语言整合信息。比如原文第一段内容比较长,但只是说明山区是一个资源宝库,从而引出国际山岳日这一话题。因此该段可用InternationalMountainDayisagoodreminderforpeopletoappreciatemountainsnaturalresourcesandproducts来概括。在整合概括的基础上,写作时还要能够使用恰当的衔接词和过渡语把看似散乱的信息连接起来,使全文成为一个有机的整体高分范文InternationalMountainDay,agoodreminderforpeopletoappreciatemountainsnaturalresourcesandproducts,wasfirstcelebratedin2003.(要点1)Itwasaimedatarousingpeople‘sawarenessofmountainsandtheirdevelopment.(要点2)Thethemeforthedayvarieseveryyear.Thedaywascelebratedin2015withthethemePromotingmountainproductsforbetterlivelihoods“(要点3),towhichICIMODhastakenactiontorespond.(要点4)Individualscanalsomaketheirowncontributionstothepeoplelivingthere.(要点5)(74words)★高级语块重要短语beaimedatdoingsth.目的是做某事arousesb.sawareness引起某人的注意takeaction采取行动makecontributionsto对…做出贡献★高级句型Thedaywascelebratedin2015withthethemePromotingmountainproductsforbetterlivelihoods",towhichiCiModhastakenactiontorespond(towhich引导定语从句修饰thetheme)2.Individualscanalsomaketheirowncontributionstothepeoplelivingthere(现在分词短语livingthere作定语)高级语块精彩点评1本文涵盖了原文中关于国际山岳日的全部要点,概括全面准确2使用了有效的连接手段,如过渡句Thethemeforthedayvarieseveryyear.等。全文语义连贯,表达流畅自然3.文章使用了较多的语法结构,如定语从句、现在分词作定语等,且使用准确4.完全使用自己的语言,无照抄原文的现象。语境演练Whatiseco-fashionEco-fashionisaboutmakingclothesthatconsiderstheenvironment,thehealthofconsumersandtheworkingconditionsofpeopleinthefashionindustry.阅读短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要Acloserlookatthefashionindustrypointsoutmanyproblemsthatarecommonpracticesinthecreationofourfashionsfromthefieldtothefactory.Firstly,theproductionoftextilespollutetheenvironmentheavilyCotton-plantingusespesticides;sheep-farmingandwool-cleaningbringaboutglobalwarming.Secondly,everystageofclothingproductionconsumesagreatdealofenergyandsomealsoinvolvechemicalswhichobviouslydoharmtothesurroundings.Inaddition,thereisalotofwasteproducedintheprocess,especiallyintheformofpollutedwater.Thirdly,growingpurchasingpowerandourshoppinghabitsfurtherworsenthebadeffects.WearenowbuyingclothesinincreasingquantitiesandwearealsoquicktothrowawayclothesthathavebeenwornonlyacoupleoftimesThen,howtosolvetheproblem?Toalargedegree,itisthefashionproducersthatreallyhavethepowerandtheresponsibilitytoshapeourfuture.Thereareagreatmanywaystheseproducerscanreducetheirecologicalfootprint,fromswitchingtogreenenergyandreducingenergyuse,throughselectingsustainablematerialsandchoosinglocalsuppliers,torecyclingandminimizingwasteOntheotherhandasconsumerswecanallplayourpartbyselectingenvironmentallyfriendlyclothingandreducingclothingbuyingThereissomeconcernthateco-friendlyfashionsarejustatrendthatwewilleventuallygrowtiredofbutwecanmakesurethatdoesn'thappen.Nowmanypeoplearebeginningtoshopfororganicfoodproductsbecausethebenefitsofeatingfoodfreeofchemicalsareimmediate.Theyrelatedirectlytoourpersonalhealth.Infact,choosingeco-fashioncanalsodogoodtoourpersonalhealth,thoughitismostlydonebywayofkeepingthehealthoftheplanet.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________高分范文Eco-fashionconcernstheenvironmentconsumers'healthandpeople'sworkingconditionswhenmakingclothes.【高分句型】(生态时尚的定义Variousproblemsariseintraditionalfashionproduction,