书面表达（核心考点）（教师版）

【专题25】书面表达（核心考点精讲精练）2024届九年级英语暑假精品课暨中考大一轮复习一遍过要点概览要点概览◆书面表达之叙事描写类叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式，以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要内容的文体：人物类书面表达主要通过刻画人物性格，塑造人物形象，反映生活，表现主题，模版如下：叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构，模版如下：ItwasabusyandtireddaybutIwasveryhappy总结旅行感受ItwasabusyandtireddaybutIwasveryhappy总结旅行感受满分技巧、满分技巧这一类的书面表达动词现率最高，且富于变化，用得最多的是动词的过去时态，各种时态为辅。合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时，如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格，那么就要用过去时。写好这类书面表达要注意以下几点:1.头绪分明，脉络清楚写好书面表达，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个＂W＂和一个＂H＂来展开，分别是why,what,when,where,who及how。2.突出中心，详略得当在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。3.用活语言，准确生动记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类的语言既要准确、生动，又要表视力强，这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。要点概览要点概览◆书面表达之观点看法类题型要求考点分析书面表达旨在测试学生的英语综合能力。中考的书面表达是一种指导性写作。试题对写作的目的、对象、体裁及字数都有明确的规定。考生应能：（1）准确使用语法和词汇；（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。近年来中考书面表达以图画和提纲作文为主，要求考生根据所给的要点和图画以及提示词，发挥想象，完成一篇80词左右的英语作文。在近几年的中考写作中，表达观点类文章的比重越来越大，出题形式也多种多样，有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等多种类型，但文章实际上都是议论文，有时是夹叙夹议类文章。预计2022继续采用这种方式。满分技巧满分技巧一般来说，观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰，它除了考查考生的英文基础，还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成，在修辞中称为"启、承、转、合"。"启"就是开头，"承"就是承接，"转"是转折，"合"是综合或总结。1.用于表示"启"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first,firstofall,atfirst,inthefirstplace,firstly,tobeginwith,tostartwith,recently,now,atpresent,inrecentyears,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,lately等。2.用于表示"承"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有second,inaddition,besides,then,moreover,what’smore,what’sworse,forexample,certainly,obviously,inotherwords,still,atthesametime,nodoubt等。3.用于表示"转"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but,however,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,otherwise,while,despite,inspiteof等。4.总之，要做好书面表达，需要大家把握以下几个原则：细读提示，抓要点：选择句型，准表达；确定线索，巧组合；适当发挥，保完整；规范书写，争高分；细查全文，除笔误。真题回眸真题回眸1．（2023·安徽·统考中考真题）假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。注意：1．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；3．词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：poster（n.海报）；design（v.&n.设计）MyExperienceofMakingaPosterLastweek,Imadeaposterofthegreatchangesinmyhometown.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyExperienceofMakingaPosterLastweek,Imadeaposterofthegreatchangesinmyhometown.Thepurposeofmakingitistoshowtherapiddevelopmentofmyhometowninrecentyears.Firstly,Iaskedmygrandparentsabouttheirpastlivingconditions.Then,Ifoundsomeoldphotosonlinetoparethepastandpresentofmyhometown.Finally,IsortedtheinformationthatIhadlearnedanddesignedaposterwithrelevantpicturesattached.Thisexperiencehelpsmeknowbetteraboutmyhometown.Withitsdevelopment,peoplehaveledbetterlivesandtheenvironmenthasbeenimproved.Iamveryhappytoseethesechanges.Asamemberofthistown,Iwillcontributemyowneffortstoitsdevelopment.2．（2022·安徽·统考中考真题）假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下：1.风趣幽默，深受喜爱；2.团队合作，历险克难；3.追逐梦想，永不言弃。注意：1.词数80～100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overe（v.克服）DearMike,SinceyouwanttoreadChineseclassicworks,I’dliketoremendJourneytotheWesttoyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHui【答案】例文DearMike,SinceyouwanttoreadChineseclassicworks,I’dliketoremendJourneytotheWesttoyou.ThebookJourneytotheWestwaswrittenbyWuCheng’enduringtheMingdynasty.IttellsastoryabouttheTangmonkXuanzangandhisthreedisciples.Thebookishumorousandwellreceived.Inthebook,thefourmaincharactersshowteamworkastheyovercamenumerousdifficulties.Finally,theyattainedthetrueBuddhistscriptures.Thisstorytellsustochaseourdreamsandnevergiveup.Youareboundtoenjoyyourselfwhilereadingthenovelandyoucansharewithmeyouropinionswheneveryoulike.Yours,LiHui3．（2021·安徽·统考中考真题）假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：1.事情经过；2.个人感悟。注意：1.词数80~100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：pocketmoney(n.零花钱);meaningful(adj.有意义的)OnceIWasPraised___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OnepossibleversionOnceIWasPraisedOnceIwaspraisedbecauseIdidsomethingmeaningfulwithmypocketmoney.Oneday,Ihappenedtoknowsomestudentsinaschoolwerehungryforknowledgebuttheydidn’thaveenoughbooks.Idecidedtooffermyhelp.WithallthepocketmoneyIsaved,Iboughtsomebooksonline,andgavethemawaytotheschool.Myparentswereveryhappyandpraisedmewhentheyheardaboutit.TheysaidIdidameaningfulthing.Ibelievethateverylittlebithelps.IwillcontinuetodowhatIcantohelpothers.随堂演练随堂演练1．（2023·安徽亳州·统考二模）回首三年初中时光，我们遇到过许多难忘的事。假定你是李华，你所在学校公众号的英语习作栏目正在开展“我的成长故事”征文活动，请以“AnUnforgettable(难忘的)Thing”为题，写一篇英语作文投稿。要点如下：1.难忘的事是什么？2.你从这件事中得到了什么启发？注意：1.词数80~100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。AnUnforgettableThingTherearemanyunforgettablethingsinmymiddleschoollife.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableThingTherearemanyunforgettablethingsinmymiddleschoollife.Ialsohavesome.ButonethingisthemostunforgettableexperienceIhave.IrememberedthatIhadabadcoldlastyear.Becauseofthebadcold,Icouldn’tgotoschoolandhadtostayathome.Whentheschoolfinished,mybestfriendcalledmethathewouldarriveatmyhomesoonandtaughtmetheclass.Itwastoolate,soItoldhimnottoehere.Buthesaidnothingandstoppedcalling.Lateron,hearrivedatmyhomeandtaughtmeaboutthelessonsandhomework.Whenhewenthome,theskywasdark.Iaskedhimtohavedinnerhere.Butherefusedandwentaway.IfoundthatmytearwasgettingdownandIwasthankfulforhishelp.Fromthenon,Ithinkheismytruefriend.AndIwillofferhelptothosewhoneedhelp.2．（2023·安徽合肥·统考二模）假定你是李辉。你的英国笔友Mike来信询问你校特色课程的开设情况。请结合以下要点，给他写一封电子邮件。1.学校特色课程；2.你参加的一门课程；3.你的收获感悟。注意：1.词数80—100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMike.I’mgladtohearfromyou.Inyourletter,youaskedaboutthespecialcoursesinmyschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHui【答案】OnepossibleversionDearMike,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Inyourletter,youaskedaboutthespecialcoursesinmyschool.Letmeintroducethemtoyou.Inordertohelpstudentsdevelopinanallroundway,ourschoolhasofferedvariousspecialcourseswhichmainlyincludesports,labourandtraditionalculture.Studentscanchoosetheonesthattheyareinterestedin.I’mcrazyaboutChinesetraditionalculturesoIchosethetraditionalopera.OurteacherhastaughtushowtosingHuangmeioperabeautifully.MysingingskillsareimprovedalotandIdreamthatIhaveachancetoperformitonstageoneday.LearningHuangmeioperahasmademeknowChineseoperasmoredeeply.Inmyopinion,thecolorfulspecialcourseshaveenrichedourstudylife,whichdefinitelyhelpusgrowbetter.Whataboutthespecialcoursesinyourschool?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHui3．（2023·安徽合肥·统考二模）假如你是李辉，你们学校英语俱乐部将开展主题为“团队精神”的演讲比赛。请结合具体事例围绕以下一至两个要点写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：1.彼此理解；2.相互合作；3.甘于奉献；4.目标一致。注意：1.词数80~100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；4.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。ThespiritsofteamworkLadiesandgentlemen,IamLiHui.It’smyhonourtostandheresharingmyspeech.Mytopictodayis_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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Teamworkisveryimportantinourstudyandwork.Sometimes,inourworkorlearningtasks,onepersoncannotindependentlypletethetasks.Theyneedothers’help.Theyhavethesamegoalandworkhardtogether,thentheywillfinishthetaskssuccessfully.Forexample,whenwe’rehavingabasketballgame,dependingononeplayerisnotenoughtowin.Onlywhenallplayersworktogethercantheywinthegame.Teamworknotonlyimprovesfriendshipamongteammates,butalsoimprovestheunderstandingandtrustbetweenthem.Therefore,teamworkisakeytosuccess.Thanksforyourlistening!巩固精进巩固精进【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearMr.White,I’mwritingtoaskyouforhelp.Tomakeourschoollifecolorful,wemakeposterstocallonnewmemberstojoinallkindsofschoolclubs.Recently,ourDanceClubneedsnewmembers.However,Ihavetroubledesigninganattractiveposter.I’veheardthatyouareexperiencedindesigning,soI’dlikeyoutohelpmecreatetheposter.Ifyouarewillingtogivemeahand,I’lletoyourofficeatyourconvenience.Iwouldappreciateitifyouwouldhelpme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：根据写作提示给外籍老师写一封邮件，可适当增添细节以使行文连贯，表述完整。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山，表明写作目的是寻求帮助及求助理由；第二步，介绍对方的优势，进一步寻求帮助；第三步，书写结语，表达感谢及期待对方的回复。[亮点词汇]①asksbforhelp向某人寻求帮助②havetroubledoingsth在做某事上有困难③givesbahand帮助某人[高分句型]①Tomakeourschoollifecolorful,wemakeposterstocallonnewmemberstojoinallkindsofschoolclubs.（动词不定式作目的状语）②Ifyouarewillingtogivemeahand,I’lletoyourofficeatyourconvenience.（if引导的条件状语从句）【答案】例文：ShouldTeenagersBeAllowedtoHaveParttimeJobs?Afterthehighschoolentranceexam,manystudentschoosetohaveparttimejobswithoutbeingpaidtospendtheirholiday.Forthem,doingparttimejobsallowsthemtoimprovetheirabilities.However,someparentsdisagreebecauseitisawasteoftimetohaveparttimejobs.Besides,itcouldbedangerousifyouarenotcarefulenough.

Inmyopinion,itisagoodleadforstudentstohaveunpaidparttimejobs.Havingparttimejobsallowsustohavenewlifeexperiencesandlearnmoreaboutsociety.Inaddition,wecanmakenewfriendsbymeetingmorepeople.What’smore,byworkingwecangetmoreknowledgebesidestextbooks.Itisagreatwaytobroadenourhorizons.Ofcourse,therearebadsidesofhavingparttimejobs.Butifyouarecarefulandsmartenough,Ibelievethataparttimejobwillbeavaluableexperienceandadventureinyourlife.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“Shouldteenagersbeallowedtodoparttimejobs?”为题，谈谈你对该问题的看法，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时主要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己的看法，主要是兼职工作的好处；第三段总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,Jim【答案】例文：DearLiHua,Howareyoudoingthesedays?Iamwritingtoconveymygratitudeforyourkindhelpandcareduringmystayinyourcountry,withoutwhichIwouldn’thaveenjoyeditsomuch.Guidedbyyou,IhadachancetovisitsomeplacesofinterestinChinaandexperiencesuchuniquecultureaswellasbeautifulscenery.Thankstoyourgeneroushelp,IdobelievethatIhaveabetterunderstandingofyourcountryandculture.What’smore,IlearnedsomeChinesesongswithyourhelp.IwillbemorethanpleasedifIhavetheopportunitytorepayyourkindness.Iwillshowyouaroundmycountry.Lookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,Jim【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中的关键信息，写感谢信感谢李华的帮助并邀请他到自己的国家。[写作步骤]第一步，点明写信的目的是表示感谢；第二步，回忆自己的收获；第三步，邀请对方到自己的国家。[亮点词汇]①placesofinterest名胜古迹②thanksto多亏了[高分句型]①Iamwritingtoconveymygratitudeforyourkindhelpandcareduringmystayinyourcountry,withoutwhichIwouldn’thaveenjoyeditsomuch.（“介词+which”引导定语从句）②IwillbemorethanpleasedifIhavetheopportunitytorepayyourkindness.（if引导的条件状语从句）【答案】OnepossibleversionWehavelearnedEnglishinourmiddleschoolforthreeyears.Duringthesethreeyears,I’vegotalot.NowI’dliketogivesomesuggestionsonlearningEnglish.InEnglishclass,weshouldlistentotheteachercarefullyandtakenoteswhennecessary.TrytoanswerquestionsinEnglish.Weshouldtakepartinallkindsofactivities,likelistening,speaking,reading,writing,havingdiscussionsandplayinggames.Weneedtoworkingroupswithourclassmatestohelpeachotherandlearnfromeachother.It’sveryimportanttobeconfident.SpeakEnglishloudlyinfrontoftheclassandneverbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Inthisway,Ithinkwecanmakemuchprogress.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作提示已经给出，学习英语的建议是本文的写作重点，需要细化，且可以适当补充。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍上课如何做；第二步，介绍如何保持自信等。[亮点词汇]①takenotes记笔记②takepartin参加③beafraidof害怕④makemistakes犯错[高分句型]①TrytoanswerquestionsinEnglish.（祈使句）②It’sveryimportanttobeconfident.（It固定句型）一、电子邮件1．你校舞蹈社团正在设计一份新学年招募新成员的海报。假如你是李华，是社团中的一员。请你写一封邮件请外籍教师怀特先生帮助设计。内容要点：1.求助理由；2.希望得到指导；3.感谢帮助。注意：1.词数80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。参考词汇：poster(n.海报)DearMr.White,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua二、话题作文2．中考过后，很多同学想利用假期干些无酬劳(unpaidparttimejob)的兼职来锻炼自己，可是一些家长却持反对态度。他们认为打工既耽误时间，又不安全。请你以“Shouldteenagersbeallowedtodoparttimejobs?”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。注意：1.词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.不得透露学校，姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。ShouldTeenagersBeAllowedtoHaveParttimeJobs?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________三、书信作文3．假如你是Jim。前段时间你的朋友李华一直在帮助你学习中文歌和了解中华文化。现在你已经回国，请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括：1.表达感激之情；2.回忆各种收获；3.发出邀请。注意：1.必须包含所有要点，词数80100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。DearLiHua,Howareyoudoingthesedays?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________四、讲稿4．学校即将开展毕业班英语演讲比赛。请你以“SuggestionsonLearningEnglish”为题写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你对于英语学习的一些建议。要点：●上课认真听讲，记笔记；●课堂上多参与讨论等活动；●英语学习中保持自信，不害怕犯错等。注意：1.词数80～100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。WehavelearnedEnglishinourmiddleschoolforthreeyears.Duringthesethreeyears,I’vegotalot.NowI’dliketogivesomesuggestionsonlearningEnglish.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inthisway,Ithinkwecanmakemuchprogress.五、材