河南省2024八年级英语下册Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame单元主题写作课件新版人教新目标版

Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame?单元主题写作一、话题分析本单元以“叙事”为话题,围绕这一话题,用生动的语言和准确的表达真实地再现事件的场景。二、写作方法“5W1H”法写“叙事”类记叙文“5W1H”指的是:时间(when)、地点(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)和感受(how)。首先交代清楚事件发生的时间、地点、人物;然后详细地讲述事件的经过;最后介绍事件的感受。三、素材积累(一)写“叙事”类记叙文的常用词汇:begin//tired//recently//makeone’sway//when//while//insilence//stopdoing//as...asonecould//atthattime(二)写“叙事”类记叙文的常用句型:开头句1.Peopleoftenrememberwhattheyweredoingwhensomethingimportanthappened.2.Iclearlyrememberthatithappenedonarainyday.中间句1.IwassoafraidandnervousthatIdidn’tknowwhattodo.2.WhenIwokeupthenextday,thesunwasrisingandtheflowerswereblooming.结尾句1.WhatapleasantdayIhave!I’llkeepthebeautifulmemoryofthatday.2.ItissuchavaluableexperiencethatIrememberittilltoday.3.Whathappenedonthatdaygivesmealifelonglesson.I’llneverforgetit.(三)名言警句Memoriesarethoseofthepastbutcannotgoback.回忆是回不到过去的记忆。(四)句子升格1.Igotthereat8,andIsawsomeofmyclassmateswerehelpingwiththehousework.(升格为时间状语从句)→WhenIgotthereat8,someofmyclassmateswerehelpingwiththehousework.2.Weweretiredbuthappyonthatday.(升格补充为复合句)→Weweretiredbuthappyonthatdaybecausetheactivitybroughteveryoneofusmuchcloser.四、写作任务上周日,你班同学集体去养老院帮助老人。同学们为老人们做了很多事情。请你写一篇80词左右的英语短文,再现当时热闹、温馨的情景。【写作模板】事件背景(4W)When/Where/Who/Why:LastSunday,allthestudentsinourclasswenttothenursinghometohelptheold.事件过程(1W)What:workingroups/dosomewashing/singfortheold事件感受(1H)How:tiredbuthappy/theactivitybroughteachofus

muchcloser【高分作文】____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LastSunday,allthestudentsinourclasswenttothenursinghometohelptheold.Wegotthereat8andsoondecidedtoworkingroups.Somedidsomewashingforthem.Andsomecleanedtheirroomsandsweptthefloors.Atthesametime,someofusweresingingfortheold.Wedidmanythingsfortheoldpeoplethewholemorning.______________________________________________________________