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IfacedatightbudgetwhenIwasnine.OnNovember1st,IusedupmostofthemoneyIsaved.WithasmallamountofpocketmoneyleftbeforeChristmasIdidn’thaveenoughtobuypresentsforthefamily.

Iwasseriouslyconsideringgoingtomydadandaskingforanadvanceonthenextyear’spocketmoney,soIcouldatleastbuygiftsformyfamilymembers.Butthen,oneevening,Iwassittinginmyroomreadingadvertisementsinthebackofamagazine.Severalgreeting-cardcompaniesweretellingushowpeoplecouldmakemoneybysellingtheircardsandstationery（文具）.Normally,Iwouldhavepassedrightovertheads,butthistimemysituationwassodifficultthatIfeltIhadnothingtolose.Theadthatattractedmemostwasonebyawell-knowngreeting-cardcompanyinmynation,whoseproductswereofhighquality.Withmyparents’help,Icontactedthecompany,althoughtheypreferredadultsorolderkidstoadvertisetheirproducts.Aftermysincererequest,theyagreedtogiveme,anine-year-oldboy,achance.

Mysalesmaterialsarrivedwithintheweek.Ihadexpectedsomethingsmallandneat,butthepackagelookedlikeadinosaur’sshoebox;itwasclosetothreefeetlongandnearlyafootwide,fullofstuff.Therewasathickbinder（活页夹）containingacompleteselectionofthecardsandsomewritingpaper,whichIwouldbesellingforaround$3perbox.

Althoughmyparentssupportedmytrytomakemoneybymyself,theyhadlittleconfidenceinmysuccess;afterall,insteadofanoutgoingkid,Iwassomewhatshy.However,Iwasdeterminedtohaveatrytochallengemyself.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para1Wastingnotime,Isetoffandknockedondoorsinmyneighborhood.Para2Eventually,Iearnedover$20,alargesumofmoneyfora9-year-oldkidin1954.I.ReadingforbasicinformationCharacters:

I,my

parents,myneighbors

Time:BeforeChristmasPlace:

IntheneighborhoodPersonality:(shy/determined/independent)

原文：Afterall,insteadofanoutgoingkid,Iwassomewhatshy.However,Iwasdeterminedtohaveatrytochallengemyself.Conflict：

Inanefforttoearnmoney,Ihadtosellcardsandstationerybymyself.情节构建---回扣原文Para.5Althoughmyparentssupportedmytrytomakemoneybymyself,theyhadlittleconfidencein

mysuccess;afterall,insteadofanoutgoingkid,Iwassomewhatshy.However,Iwasdeterminedtohaveatrytochallenge.Theme：自我成长（突破自我）II.Workouttheplotline

Para.1Wastingnotime,Isetoffandknockedondoorsinmyneighborhood.衔接句HowdidIfeelandwhatdidIdotosellthecards?过渡句Howdidmyneighborreact?衔接句Howwasmysellinggoinglater?Para.2Eventually,learnedover$20,alargesumofmoneyfora9-year-oldkidin1954.衔接句WhatdidIdowiththemoney?过渡句Howdidthisexperienceaffectmylife?Theme

WhatdidIlearnfromthisexperience?III.微场景紧张卖货我的心怦怦直跳，手心直冒汗，我深吸一口气，鼓起勇气介绍自己，推销产品。(独立主格)Myheartpoundingandmypalmssweating,Itookadeepbreathandgatheredmycouragetointroducemyselfandpromotetheproducts.2.怀着忐忑的心情，我向大家介绍了贺卡的质量，并分享了我卖东西的故事。（介词短语）Withbutterfliesinmystomach,IexplainedthequalityofthegreetingcardsandsharedthestoryofwhyIstartedthisventure（冒险）.

顾客反应（如何列举不同顾客的反应）1.起初，邻居们看到一个卖贺卡的小男孩都很惊讶。有些人犹豫不决，但还是有几位好心人决定支持我，买了几盒。Initially,myneighborsweresurprisedtoseeayoungboysellinggreetingcards.Somewerehesitant,butafewkind-heartedsoulsdecidedtosupportmeandboughtafewboxes.2.出乎我意料的是，一些邻居婉言谢绝了我，而另一些邻居则热情地欢迎我。有些人甚至赞扬我的创业精神，鼓励我继续下去。

Tomysurprise,someneighborspolitelydeclined,while

otherswelcomedmewarmly.Someevenpraisedmyentrepreneurialspirit企业家精神andencouragedmetokeepgoing.取得进步1.随着我挨家挨户地推销，邻里间很快就传开了这个卖优质贺卡的小男孩。我的销售额开始上升，很快我就发现自己的顾客络绎不绝。（介词短语）AsIwentfromdoortodoor,wordspreadquicklyintheneighborhoodabouttheyoungboywiththequalitygreetingcards.Mysalesstartedtopickup,andsoonIfoundmyselfwithasteadystreamofcustomers.

2.接下来的几个小时见证了我信心的增长和销售的顺利。令我惊讶的是，最初每盒3美元的收入逐渐增加了。(无灵主语句）Thefollowinghourswitnessedmygrowingconfidenceandsmoothsale.Muchtomyamazement,theinitial$3perboxgraduallyaddedup.

送父母礼物1.我兴奋地用这笔钱给父母买了圣诞礼物。（副词前置）圣诞节早上，当他们拆开礼物时，脸上洋溢着喜悦。(无灵主语句）他们被我挣钱给他们买礼物所付出的心思和努力深深感动了。他们的快乐和感激让我充满了成就感和自豪。（介词短语）Excitedly,IusedthemoneytobuyChristmasgiftsformyparents.OnChristmasmorning,astheyunwrappedthepresents,theirfaceslitupwithjoy.TheyweredeeplytouchedbythethoughtandeffortIhadputintoearningthemoneytobuythemgifts.Theirhappinessandgratitudefilledmewithasenseofaccomplishmentandpride.自我改变邻居们的支持不仅缓解了我的经济压力，还帮助我克服了害羞的天性(倒装句)。他们的鼓励对增强我的信心和信念至关重要。Notonly

didmyneighbors’supporteasemyfinancialstrainbutitalsohelpedmeovercomemyshynature.Theirencouragementwasvitalinboostingmyconfidenceandbeliefinmyself.主题升华1.这是一个难忘的圣诞节，它让我明白，只要有勇气和毅力，即使是一个害羞的九岁孩子也能取得成就。（强调句）ItwasamemorableChristmasthattaughtme,withcourageandperseverance,evenashynine-year-oldcouldachieveachievements.

2.回想这段经历，我明白了一个道理：无论最初的挑战看起来多么艰巨，勇气和决心都能带来意想不到的机遇和成功。(非谓语+同位语从句)这次经历是我人生的一个转折点，给我上了宝贵的一课，让我在今后的岁月里受益匪浅。(非谓语+定从）Reflectingontheexperience,Ilearne