牛津译林版9A-Unit4-Growing-up-task11市公开课一等奖省赛课微课金奖课件

Unit4GrowingupTaskThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemost1/11Leadin

...istheperson

whohasinfluenced...2/11AgeJobinalocalfactoryPersonality

Examples1._____ourTVtoafamily2._________orphans(孤儿)3._____moneytosomeoneinneed4.______bloodandbloodcells5.__________donatehisbody

myideasWhenIwasyoung,_______________.Now,Irealizethat_______________Myfatherinhisf_____kindandhelpful

iftiesPre-writing

give

care

for

give

donate

decide

to

Icouldn'tunderstand

hehasaheartfulloflove

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3/111.Whohasinfluencedthewritermost?2.Whatisherfatherlike?3.Whathasherfatherdonesince1990?4.Whatsurprisedthewriter?5.Whatdoesthewriterthinkofherfather?Pre-writinghaveaheartfullofloveTv/careforchildren/givemoneyto…Bereadytohelpanyonedonatebloodandbloodcellsdecidetodonatehisbodyformedicalresearchafterhisdeath4/11Pre-writing:Usefulexpressions...isthepersonwhohasinfluencedmemost...isinhistwenties/thirties/fortiesYouwillnotfindanythingunusualabouthimuntil......hasalwaysbeenkind/helpful/...Tomysurprise,...WhenIwasalittlegirl/boy,Icouldnotunderstand...NowIrealizethat…5/11假如你是Sandy,你学校正在举行写作比赛，主题是“Thepersonwhohasimpressedmemost",字数100个字左右。内容以下：While-writing:

Myuncle四十多岁，在当地医院工作

工作细心对待病人有耐心使我诧异是，他已经决定...

乐于助人关爱一些失独老人6/11MyUncleIntroduction

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age,jobPersonalitiesExamplesMyideas7/11评分标准满分得分内容、信息全方面、完成任务5分语言（句子结构、语法、用词）5分行文连贯、逻辑3分（字数、大小写、标点等）2分总分15分While-writing:

Criteria8/11Post-writing:SampleThepersonwhohasinfluencedmemostismyuncle.Youwillnotfindanythingunusualuntilyoulearnmore.Asadoctor,heisbothkindandpatientwithpatients.Besides,heissocarefulthathehasnevermadeanymistakes.Hesays:"Asadoctor,Wecan'tbetoocareful."What'smore,hecaresfortheoldwhohavelosttheironlychildren.Tomysurprise,myunclehasdecidedtodonatenotonlyallhismoneybutalsohisbodyafterhisdeath.Howbraveandkind-heartedhisis!Allinall,Ihavebeenimoressedbymyuncle.Irealizethatheisamanhasaheartfulloflove.9/11H