2024八年级英语下册Unit3AnimalsAreOurFriends写作能力提升练课件新版冀教版

写作能力提升练UNIT3AnimalsAreOurFriends单词：pet,gentle,loyal,brave,protect,kill,hunt,feed,forest,environment短语：indanger,cutdown,thenumberof…,inbalance,foodchain,loseone’shome,lookafter句型：1.Animalsareimportantinthefoodchain.2.Weshouldthinkofanimalsasfriends.3.Weshoulddoourbesttoprotectanimals.环顾四周，你会发现许多人拥有自己的宠物，请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文来谈一谈养宠物的好处。可适当发挥。80词左右。提示：1.Toimproveyourself.(lookafter;makefriends)2.Developagoodrelationshipwithfamilymembers.(talkabout)［审题指导］1.体裁：议论文2.人称：第三人称为主3.时态：以一般现在时为主［思路构建］开篇点题Nowmanypeoplehaveoneortwopets.分层介绍养宠物的好处Childrenwhohavepetsarebetteratsharingandlookingafterothers.Keepingpetswillimprovetherelationshipbetweenthefamilymembers.Ifyouhaveapet,you’llmakefriendsmoreeasily.Keepingapetcanmakeusfeellesslonely.总结Inaword,it’sfuntohave

apet.种树的重要性Treesareimportanttopeople.Treescangivefoodtopeopleandanimals.Theycanmaketheaircleaner.Theycanmaketheearthmorebeautiful.Treescanprotectthesoil.［范文赏析］Nowmanypeoplehaveoneortwopets.Keepingapetcanmakeusfeellesslonely.It’salwaysgentleandloyal.Andifyouhaveapet,you’llmakefriendsmoreeasily.Becausepetsareoftenregardedasfriends.Childrenwhohavepetsarebetteratsharingandlookingafterothers.Theycanlearnsomethingwhentheytakecareofpets.Andfamilymemberscantalkabouttheirpetstogether.Keepingpetswillimprovetherelationshipbetweenthefamilymembers.Inaword,it’sfuntohaveapet.Doyouwantone?点评：1.要点齐全。养宠物的四点好处都有所描述。2.过渡自然。and,if,because等连词的运用使文章衔接自然，文笔流畅，语句丰满。许多人把宠物视为家庭中的一员，它们不仅陪伴我们度过了美好的时光，有时还会带给我们惊喜。请以“ASpecialFamilyMember”为题，根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文，描述一下你家里的宠物。80词左右。提示：1.What’syourpet?2.Whathappenedbetweenyouandyourpet?ASpecialFamilyMember____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ASpecialFamilyMemberThereisaspecialmemberinmyfamily—alovelydognamedBen.Ithaslivedwithusforthreeyears,andweallloveit.LastweekendmyparentstookmeandBentoapark.Atnoon,whenmyparentswerebusygettingreadyforthepicnic,Iwalkedtoariver,andBenfollowedmehappily.IfellintotheriverwhenIwastryingtopicka________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________flower.Benbarkedandjumpedintothewateratonce.WhenmyparentsheardBenbarking,theyr