05 开放作文之说明介绍类（解析版）-【高分·技能】2024年中考英语写作常考题型全面突破

05开放作文之说明介绍类近三年考情分析近三年考情分析年份地区话题命题形式2023年湖南张家界介绍首届湖南省旅游发展大会的吉祥物之一“鲵宝宝”开放作文湖北荆州向外国朋友介绍荆州开放作文浙江嘉兴介绍“元宵节”或“端午节”开放作文2022年浙江湖州介绍以“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”为主题的环保作品展开放作文湖北荆州介绍你参加课外活动的情况开放作文2021年四川乐山介绍学校开展的研学活动开放作文北京推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由开放作文写作方法指导写作方法指导1、认真审题把握信息。经过审题，我们要知道，这篇文章要写几个要点？用哪些词语句型？用哪种时态，语态比较好？并且要注意使用哪些过渡词或者是过渡句。2、明确主题，列提纲。我们在列提纲的时候，要认真的思考题目要求，理清脉络，思路清晰，把握文章所需要的全部要点。3、组织语言。大家在写文章的时候一定要注意，要用自己熟悉的英语词汇和句型，对于没有把握的句子或者单词，我们要灵活，可以变一种说法。同时要注意句式要多样，简单句和复合句结合使用。句子和句子之间要使用过渡词，段落与段落之间要使用恰当的过渡句，一定要用英语思维。4、认真检查。我们要检查语法是否正确，还有标点符号，单词拼写是否正确。写作模板写作模板（开头）Nowadays,_______(引出要说明的事物或现象)isbecomingmoreandmorepopular/important/common/serious.Itmeansthat_______(简单介绍其定义或特征).（中间）Thereareseveralaspects/reasons/effects/suggestionsabout_______(要说明的事物或现象).①Firstofall,_______(描述第一个方面或原因或影响或建议).②Secondly,_______(描述第二个方面或原因或影响或建议).③Thirdly,_______(描述第三个方面或原因或影响或建议).④Besides,_______(描述其他方面或原因或影响或建议).（结尾）Inconclusion,_______(总结全文或提出自己的看法或建议).常用表达常用表达【词汇】1.neighbor/border(vt.)毗邻；环绕2.belocated/situatedin坐落在3.serveas…充当/用作……4.highly-developed高度发达的5.officiallanguage官方语言6.thethirdlargestcity第三大城市7.intheintersectionof在……的交叉处8.onitseastlies…东边有……9.berich/abundantin盛产【句型】1.Itcoversanareaof7.6millionsquarekilometers.2.Ithasasmallpopulationofover10million.3.Canberra,thecapitalofAustralia,isabeautifulcity.4.TheOperaHouseiswellknownthroughouttheworld.5.Chinahasapopulationofover1.4billion.中国有十四亿多人口。6.Chinahasaverylonghistoryofover5,000years.中国有五千多年的悠久历史。7.Theareaofthisschoolis6,000squaremeters.这个学校占地面积有6000平方米。8.YibinisanimportanttransportationcenterofSichuanProvince,withhigh-speedrail,expressways,waterwaysandairlinesconvenientlyavailabletothecity.宜宾是四川省重要的交通枢纽，高铁、高速公路、水路和航空交通都十分便利。9.Everyyearthepicturesquesceneryattractslotsofvisitorsfromhomeandabroad.每年这如画的风景吸引了国内外很多游客。10.Itisveryconvenientforyoutocometoourcity.\Thebestwaytoexperience…istotakeabustour.\Ittakes…(time)totakeabusfrom…to…\.…isonlyafewbusstopsfromdowntown.\.…iswithineasyreach.中考真题精讲中考真题精讲（2023·湖南张家界·统考中考真题）假如你是张家界某青少年宣讲团的李娟，国外友人Peter对首届湖南省旅游发展大会的吉祥物之一“鲵宝宝”很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息提示给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍“鲵宝宝”。写作要点：NameNiBaobaoAppearance(外貌)roundface,bigeyes…Xilankapuscarf(西兰卡普围巾)…Meaning(象征意义)befriendly…sayhito…protecttheanimal………写作要求：1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名；2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；3.不少于60词(文章开头及结尾均已给出，不计入总词数)。参考词汇：鲵宝宝NiBaobao吉祥物mascot大鲵giantsalamanderDearPeter,I’mhappytohearfromyou.It’smyhonortointroducethemascottoyou.Infact,themascotwasdesignedfromtheprotectedanimalinZhangjiajie,giantsalamander.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouinZhangjiajie.Let’sexperienceTujiacultureandenjoythebeautifulscenery.Yourstruly,LiJuan【答案】参考范文：DearPeter,I’mhappytohearfromyou.It’smyhonortointroducethemascottoyou.Infact,themascotwasdesignedfromtheprotectedanimalinZhangjiajie,giantsalamander.WecallitNiBaobao.Ithasaroundsmilingfacewithbigeyes.Andithasasmallnoseandasmallmouth.Inmyopinion,itisalittlefatbutcute.What’smore,itwearsaXilankaupuscarfwhichstandsforTujiaculture.Look,itiswavingitslittlehandsandsayinghitoyou.Itisfriendly,isn’tit?Besides,doyouknowwhywecallitBaobao?AsfarasIcansee,itaimstoprotecttheanimal.IfyoucometoZhangJiajie,youcan’tmissit.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyouinZhangjiajie.Let’sexperienceTujiacultureandenjoythebeautifulscenery.Yourstruly,LiJuan【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍“鲵宝宝”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，引出对“鲵宝宝”的介绍；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“名字、外貌、象征意义”几个方面重点介绍；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①Inmyopinion在我看来②What’smore而且③standsfor代表④lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①What’smore,itwearsaXilankaupuscarfwhichstandsforTujiaculture.（which引导的定语从句）②IfyoucometoZhangJiajie,youcan’tmissit.（if引导的条件状语从句）（2023·湖北荆州·统考中考真题）假如你是荆州旅游形象大使，你将怎样用英语向外国朋友推介荆州呢？请根据以下要点，来试一试吧！要点：1.位置：湖北境内，长江之滨；2.历史：悠久的历史，楚文化(ChuCulture)……3.景点：荆州博物馆，古城墙……4.美食：荆州鱼糕(fishcake)……5.补充一两点与荆州有关的信息。要求：1.文章必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；2.不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息；3.不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Ladiesandgentlemen!I’mveryhonoredtointroduceJingzhouAncientCityhere._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________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Thanksforlistening!【答案】例文Ladiesandgentlemen!I’mveryhonoredtointroduceJingzhouAncientCityhere.JingzhouliesinthecentralpartofHubeiProvince,bythesideoftheYangtzeRiver.Ithasalargepopulationandthepeoplehereareveryfriendly.Theskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Jingzhouisanancientcitywithalonghistory.TheChuCultureisfamousallovertheworld.Therearemanyplacesofinterest.YoucanwalkalongtheancientwallandvisitJingzhouMuseum.Therearealsomanykindsofdeliciousfood,suchasJingzhoufishcakeandriceballs.Today,theoldcityhasbecomeyoung.Thetransportationisbecomingquickerandeasier.AbeautifulYangtzeRiverBridge,likeadragon,isovertheYangtzeRiver.That’sagoodchanceforJingzhoutodevelopbetterandbetter.Inaword,welcometomybeautifulhometown—Jingzhou!Thanksforlistening!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，文章开头已给；第二步，具体介绍荆州古城的基本信息，包括位置、历史、景点、美食和现在的发展情况；第三步，结尾呼吁大家来荆州古城游玩。[亮点词汇]①bythesideof在……的旁边②placesofinterest名胜古迹③allovertheworld全世界[高分句型]①Thetransportationisbecomingquickerandeasier.（形容词作表语；形容词比较级）②That’sagoodchanceforJingzhoutodevelopbetterandbetter.（动词不定式作定语）（2023·浙江嘉兴·统考中考真题）在学校“探寻中华传统文化”英语综合实践活动中，你班对“元宵节”和“端午节”两个中国传统节日开展了小课题研究，经过探究与实践，你们收集了一些信息与资料(见下表)，假设你是李华，请选择其中一个节日，用英语写一篇短文，在英语拓展课上代表小组就你们的研究成果以及下阶段计划进行交流。Project:ExploringtheChineseCultureandCustomsResearchSubjecttheLanternFestivaltheDragonBoatFestivalMethods(Howwedidit)•watchalanternshow•…•visitalocalmuseum•…Information(Whatwe’velearned)History•about2,000years•about2,000yearsTime•the15thdayofthefirstlunarmonth•the5thdayofthefifthlunarmonthCelebrations•riddle(谜语)games•…•boatraces•…Food•riddle(谜语)games•zongzi………ANewPlan(Whatwe’lldo)……注意：(1)短文必须包含表中你所选节日的所有信息，并适当发挥。(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。(3)词数：80~100，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dearclassmates,I’mveryhappytoshareourresearchwithyou.Thesubjectwe’vechosenis________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】Possibleversions:Version1Dearclassmates,I’mveryhappytoshareourresearchwithyou.Thesubjectwe’vechosenistheLanternFestival.We’vecollectedmuchinformationaboutthefestivalbydoingsomereadinginthelibraryandwatchingalanternshow.TheLanternFestivalhasahistoryofabout2,000years.It’scelebratedonthe15thdayofthefirstlunarmonth.Peoplegettogethertoenjoycolourfullanternsandplayriddlegames.Smallgiftsareusuallyofferedwhentheygetrightanswers.It’satraditiontoeattangyuanonthisspecialday.Asforthenextstep,wewillfocusondesigninglanternsandmakingEnglishriddles.Thiswillhelpusunderstandthemeaningofthefestivalbetter.That’sall.Thankyou!Version2Dearclassmates,I’mveryhappytoshareourresearchwithyou.Thesubjectwe’vechosenistheDragonBoatFestival.Todotheresearch,wesearchedforinformationonlineandvisitedalocalmuseumaboutcultureandcustoms.We’velearnedalotaboutthefestival.Withahistoryofabout2,000years,theDragonBoatFestivalfallsonthe5thdayofthefifthlunarmonth.Peopleusuallycelebrateitbywatchingboatraces.ZongziisthemosttraditionalfoodthatiseatentohonourthegreatpoetQuYuan.Next,weplantolearnhowtomakezongzi,andproduceanEnglishvideotomakethefestivalknownbymorepeoplearoundtheworld.That’sall.Thankyou!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，并适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，从“元宵节”和“端午节”中选择一个节日叙述；第二步，根据表格提示具体阐述你们的研究成果。第三步，介绍下阶段计划。[亮点词汇]①asfor至于②focuson专注于③helpsbdosth帮助某人做某事[高分句型]Smallgiftsareusuallyofferedwhentheygetrightanswers.（when引导的时间状语从句）（2022·浙江湖州·中考真题）假如你是李雷，上周参观了以“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息，写一篇短文，在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。WhatwereonshowWhattheyaremadeof/fromWhatyouthink➢clothes➢chairs➢modelplanes➢…➢wastepaper➢plasticbottles➢usedwoodandglass➢…➢creative➢save…➢…注意：（1）短文须介绍至少两项展品，可适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；（3）词数：80—100。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。Hello,everyone!I’dliketotellyousomethingabouttheshow“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Possibleversion:Hello,everyone!I’dliketotellyousomethingabouttheshow“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”.Anumberofcreativeworkswereonshow,includingclothesmadefromwastepaperandmodelplanesmadeofusedwoodandglass.Anotherfascinatingworkisachairthatismadeofplasticbottles.Theyaregluedtogetherandpaintedindifferentcolors.Iwasmostinterestedinabackpackforcomputers.Itismadeoutofapairofoldjeans!Withthezipperofjeansonthetop,twopocketsontwosides,thebackpacklooksbothusefulandfashionable.Itevenhasalogo!Ifeltamazedathowwastecouldbeputtosuchgooduse.Itreallyhelpstosaveenergyandbuildagreenerfuture.【解析】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍“变废为宝”的环保作品展的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.

写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。（2022·湖北荆州·中考真题）

“双减”政策（double-reductionpolicy）实施后，你们学校开展了丰富多彩的课外活动。假设你是李华，请给你的美国笔友Tom写一封信，谈谈你参加课外活动的情况。内容包括：1.介绍你们学校开展的课外活动；2.叙述你的一次课外活动经历；3.说说你的体会。要求：1.语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。文中不得出现真实的学校名称和人名；2.词数：80词左右（书信开头已给出,不计入总词数）。DearTom,How’sitgoing?Letmetellyousomethingaboutourafter-schoolactivities.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourfriend,LiHua【答案】例文DearTom,How’sitgoing?Letmetellyousomethingaboutourafter-schoolactivities.Thereareover20students’clubsinourschool.Thereareartclubs,basketballclubs,calligraphyclubs,etc.Iaminthebasketballandchessclubs.WeoftenhaveabasketballmatchonFriday.Lastweek,ourbasketballmatchwasreallyexciting.Alltheplayerstriedtheirbesttoscore.Finally,wewonthegameonlybyonepoint,butwewerequitehappy.Theactivitiesnotonlybuildupmybodyandmindbutalsoprovideaperfectplatformandrichchoicesformyfuturedevelopment.Besides,theyalsofreemefromtheheavyworkofstudy.Yourfriend,LiHua【解析】1.题干解读：在“双减”政策下，学校的课外活动日益丰富。要求给美国笔友Tom写一封信，内容包括：1.介绍开展的活动；2.叙述一次活动经历；3.说说体会。2.写作指导：本文应使用第一人称进行写作。文章第一部分描述学校开展的活动，应使用一般现在时。第二部分应使用一般过去时来描述曾经的某次活动经历。第三部分的体会应使用一般现在时。需要注意的是，第一部分描述的活动类型应尽可能丰富，体现词汇的多样性。在第二部分在描述活动经历的过程中应使用恰当的形容词和副词。（2021·四川乐山市·中考真题）研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动,深受学生的喜爱。为此,请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。内容包括:1.学习采茶、手工制作,休验生活；2.观察动、植物,亲近自然；3.参观名胜古迹、博物馆,了解历史文化；4.观看有意义的影视,感受国家变化。注意:1.词数80词左右；开头已给出,不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。4.参考词汇:meaningfuladj.有意义的Thestudytripisakindofschooleducationwhichisheldoutsideandpopularwithstudents.Ourschoolhasalsoheldmanystudytrips.Herearemyexperiences.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thestudytripisakindofschooleducationwhichisheldoutsideandpopularwithstudents.Ourschoolhasalsoheldmanystudytrips.Herearemyexperiences.Firstly,wewenttopickteainpersonandmadethingsbyhandtoexperiencelife.Secondly,wegotclosetonatureandIlearntmoreknowledgebywatchingmanyplantsandanimals.Then,afterwevisitedmuseumsaswellasplacesofinterest,weunderstoodChinesehistoryandculturemoredeeply.Finally,wesawsomemeaningfulmoviesandfeltthegreatchangesofourcountry.Inmyopinion,thestudytripisveryhelpfulforusandwewillbeabletohavemorechancestotakepartinthesekindsofactivities.【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点，写出自己学校的游学经历，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

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写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。（2021·北京中考真题）北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市，这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等，都有文化的印记。假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推送，现就“CulturalSymbolsofBeijing(北京文化标志)”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留言，推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。提示词语：show,traditional,love,treasure,important提示问题：Inyouropinion,what’stheculturalsymbolofBeijing?Pleasedescribeit.Whydoyouthinkitcanbeasymbol?I’mLiHua,fromClassI,Grade9.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyideacanbetaken.Thanks!【答案】I’mLiHua.fromClassI,Grade9.IbelievethatJingjuisaculturalsymbolofBeijing.Jingjutellstime-honoredstoriesthroughsingingandmovements,showinguswhatlifewaslikeinthepast.Theperformersareinbeautifulclothesandwithcolorfulfaces.Jingjuisatraditionalartformlovedbypeopleofallages.Besides,asanationaltreasure,itplaysanimportantroleinChineseculture.That’swhyIthinkJingjucanbeaculturalsymbolofBeijing.Ihopemyideacanbetaken.Thanks!【详解】1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍北京文化标志，根据提示介绍什么是北京的文化标志，并叙述原因。注意理由合理，内容符合客观事实。2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。可使用宾语从句和非谓语动词，为文章增色，上下文多使用连词或副词，使行文流畅。名校模拟题提升练名校模拟题提升练（2022上·浙江衢州·九年级校考期末）BBC纪录片WildChina正在拍摄有关中国大好河山的纪录片，现需要向全社会征集相关素材。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语文章，向该栏目推荐你的家乡。要点：1.家乡的地理位置；2.值得一游的景点；3.让你印象深刻的变化；4.你对家乡的感受。注意：（1）短文须包含以上要点，可适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；（3）词数：90-110。参考词汇：recommend

vt.推荐，介绍；impressive

adj.给人印象深刻的；sightspot景点；beworthdoing…

是值得……。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文InthemiddleofZhejiangliesthepeacefulcityofZhuji.Itismyhometown.Theairhereisalwaysmoist.Peopleherelivesaslowlife.MyhometownisnotonlyknownasthehometownofXishi,oneoftheFourBeautiesofancientChina,butalsofamousforWuxieWaterfalls.Ithasattractedmanytouristsandisworthvisiting.Inthepastfewyears,Zhujihasbecomedifferentfromwhatitusedtobelike.Manychangeshavebeentakenplace.Moretallbuildingsandshoppingmallshavebeenbuilt.Peoplearelivingahappierandmoreconvenientlife.Ilovemyhometownandlookforwardtoitsbetterfuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，描写家乡的地理位置；第二步，描写家乡的景点；第三步，描写家乡的变化和对家乡的感受。[亮点词汇]①beknownas以……而闻名②takeplace发生③lookforwardto期盼[高分句型]①Inthepastfewyears,Zhujihasbecomedifferentfromwhatitusedtobelike.（what引导的宾语从句）（2023上·北京东城·九年级汇文中学校联考期中）中国传统节日，是中华民族悠久历史文化的重要组成部分，不仅清晰地记录着中华民族丰富而多彩的社会生活文化内容，也积淀着博大精深的历史文化内涵。假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流分享活动，征集大家对于节日的感想。请你用英语给公众号写一篇文稿介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日，包括节日的时间、庆祝方式，以及这个节日对你的意义。提示词语：enjoy,traditionalfood,gettogether,wish提示问题：●Whenisthefestival?●Howdoyouusuallycelebratethefestival?●Whatdoesthefestivalmeantoyou?I’mLiHuafromClass1,Grade9.TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I’mLiHuafromClass1,Grade9.TherearemanytraditionalfestivalsinChina.IliketheSpringFestivalbest.Nowletmeintroduceittoyou.TheSpringFestivalisapopularholidayinourcountry.ItfallsinJanuaryorFebruary.It’sChineseNewYearandalsothebiggestdayofayear.Ourfamilygettogether.Wehaveabigdinnerinmygrandparents’home.Ialwayseatalotofdeliciousfood,especiallydumplings,whichareakindoftraditionalfood.Weoftenstayuplatetowelcomethenewyear,hopingwewillhaveabrightnewstart.It’sveryexcitingformetogetredpocketsfrommygrandparents.Iusuallygoshoppingwithmyparents.Webuysomeniceclothesforourselves.WeoftenwatchTVathomeandsometimesreadbooks.Sometimes,wegreetotherrelativesonthephoneandwisheachothergoodluckforthenewyear.TheSpringFestivalisthemostimportantforusChinesebecauseit’sthebeginningofanewyear.I’malwayshappyduringtheSpringFestival.【详解】[总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章应该包括三个要点（时间、庆祝方式、意义），可适当增加细节，使内容充实；行文以第一人称和第三人称书写，注意谓语动词的变化；文章开头已经给出，注意内容衔接；使用适当的连接词，使文章流畅。［写作步骤］第一步，介绍你最喜欢的节日，引出话题；第二步，陈述你最喜欢的传统节日时间、庆祝方式等；第三步，节日的意义以及你的感受。［亮点词汇］①goshopping去购物②stayuplate熬夜［高分句型］①It’sveryexcitingformetogetredpocketsfrommygrandparents.（it作形式主语）②TheSpringFestivalisthemostimportantforusChinesebecauseit’sthebeginningofanewyear.（because引导原因状语从句）（2022上·天津红桥·九年级统考阶段练习）假设某报社正在征集介绍天津的稿件。根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿。春季第五大道theFiveMajorAvenues街道漫步；赏花拍照。夏季水上公园WaterPark体验水上运动，如划皮划艇。秋季蓟州JiZhou爬长城；看红叶。冬季天塔TianjinTVTower在天塔湖滑冰；在空中餐厅享用美食。补充介绍一个你喜欢的地方并说说理由或在这个地方可以做什么。注意：不要重复表格中已出现的地方。参考词汇：gokayaking划皮划艇要求：(1)词数：80—100个。(2)短文的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Tianjinismyhometown.Visitorscomehereeveryyear.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Tianjinismyhometown.Visitorscomehereeveryyear.Theycandolotsofthingshere.Inspringyoucanenjoyflowers,takephotosandwalkalongthestreetsattheFiveMajorAvenues.Whensummercomes,youcangotoWaterParktoexperiencewatersports,suchasgoingkayaking.Asfortheautumn,youcanseeredleaves.Ifyoulike,youcanenjoythemwhenyouvisittheGreatWallinJiZhou.Itiscoldinwinter.Butyoucanalsodooutdooractivities.ManypeopleskateonthelakeofTianjinTVTower.Atsametime,youcanenjoyamealintheskyrestaurant.Forme,IliketheCultureStreetmostbecauseIcanexperiencethetraditionandcultureofTianjin.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是说明文，是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]①第一步，介绍天津是自己的家乡，并说出每年有许多游客来；②第二步，根据表格介绍一年四季可以去的地方和做的活动；③第三部，说说自己最喜欢的地方以及理由。[亮点词汇]①walkalong沿着……走②watersports水上运动③asfor至于④dooutdooractivities做户外活动⑤skyrestaurant天空餐厅[高分句型]①Whensummercomes,youcangotoWaterParktoexperiencewatersports,suchasgoingkayaking.(when引导的时间状语从句)②Ifyoulike,youcanenjoythemwhenyouvisittheGreatWallinJiZhou.(if引导的条件状语从句)③IliketheCultureStreetmostbecauseIcanexperiencethetraditionandcultureofTianjin.(because引导的原因状语从句)（2022上·山东东营·九年级校考期末）新学期，教育部出台“新政”，规定义务教育阶段学校需要个落实课后延时服务。假如你是乐乐，你的叔叔想了解学校最近推行的“课后服务（after-schoolservices）”情况，请你根据下面提示内容给他回一封邮件。要点：1、自愿决定是否选择延时服务；2、开展多种俱乐部，如篮球俱乐部；3、这项服务给学生带来的好处。要求：1、80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。3、适当发挥，使行文连贯，条理清楚。4、标点正确，书面整洁。DearUncle,Ithasbeenalongtimesincewemetlasttime.Howiseverythinggoing?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Howdoyoulikeit?Canyougivesomeadviceaboutafter-schoolservices?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou!Yours,Lele【答案】Apossibleversion：DearUncle,Ithasbeenalongtimesincewemetlasttime.Howiseverythinggoing?Theafter-schoolservicesarepopularinourschool.Firstofall,wehavetherighttodecidewhetherornottotakepartintheservice.Nest,theschoolsetupmanyclubsforus,suchasthebasketballclubanddancingclub.Takingpartinclubscanhelpusenjoyourschoollivesanddevelopourhobbies.Inmyopinion,after-schoolservicescanbegoodforourstudaswellasourschoollife.Theycannotonlyexploresomethingdifferentatschoolbesidesstudyingknowledgebutalsohelpraiseourinterestsandhobbies