写作Lesson7道歉信答案

Lesson7道歉信课前检测一.简答1.写信表达歉意，告知7月份无法一同前往云南旅游。2.解释原因，由于脚部受伤，需要住院治疗，不宜远行，建议推迟到8月份，腿伤好之后再去。3.再次表达歉意，盼望理解。二.翻译1.IamwritingtoexpressmydeepestapologyfornotbeingabletokeepyoupanytoYunnan.2.Theinjuryofmylegmakesitinconvenientformetowalkaroundfreely.3.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.课中讲解一．掌握谋篇布局思路道歉信框架结构第一段：写信目的—表达歉意不能（赴约、参加活动等）第二段：内容要点—解释具体的原因，提出补救措施第三段：盼望理解—再次表达歉意，盼对方理解二．能够正确遣词造句1.开头【思路句】我写信是为了向你道歉，我不能和你一起去书店了。【遣词】apologize;beableto;togetherwithsb.【句型】Iamwritingtoapologizetoyouthat...【造句】IamwritingtoapologizetoyouthatIwon’tbeabletogotothebookstoretogetherwithyou.【升级】中文：我写信是为了向你表达我深深的歉意，我本周末不能陪你一起去书店了。英文：IamwritingtoexpressmydeepestapologytoyouthatIwon’tbeabletokeepyoupanytothebookstorethisweekend.【过关检测】1.填空IamwritingtoapologizetoyouthatIwon’tbeabletokeepyoupanytothebookstorethisweekend.2.翻译句子IamwritingtoexpressmydeepestapologytoyouthatIwon’tbeabletokeepyoupanytotheWestLakenextweekend.2.正文（1）【思路句】原因是我弟弟腿摔断了，我要照顾他。【遣词】reason;breakone’sleg;lookafter【造句】ThereasonisthatmyyoungerbrotherbrokehislegandIhavetolookafterhim.【升级1】中文：原因是我弟弟几天前腿摔断了,而我爸妈又出差了，我有义务要照顾他。本周六下午我要带他去医院做复查腿伤，这正好与我们的计划冲突了。句型：Thereasonisthat…and….It’smydutyto….andthisisagainst…英文：Thereasonisthatmyyoungerbrotherbrokehislegtheotherdayandmyparentsareonabusinesstripnow.It’smydutytolookafterhim.ThisSaturdayafternoonIwilltakehimtothehospitaltoexaminehislegandthisisagainstourplan.【升级2】中文：原因是我弟弟几天前腿摔断了,而我爸妈又出差了，我有义务要照顾他。本周六下午我要带他去医院复查腿伤以便进一步治疗，这正好与我们的计划冲突了。句型：Thereasonisthat…and….It’smydutyto….Iwill…,whichconflictswith….英文：Thereasonisthatmyyoungerbrotherbrokehislegtheotherdayandmyparentsareonabusinesstripnow.It’smydutytoattendtohim.ThisSaturdayafternoonIwilltakehimtothehospitaltohavehislegexaminedforfurthertreatment,whichconflictswithourplan.（2）【思路句】我们可以推迟到周日早上吗？我们可以早点出发，这样我们就有更多的时间来读选书籍。【遣词】putoff【造句】ShallweputitofftillthisSundaymorning？Wecangoearliersothatwewillhavemoretimetoreadandchoosebooks.【升级1】中文：我们可以推迟到周日早上吗？如果你方便的话，我们可以早点出发，这样我们就有更多的时间来读选书籍。句型：Wecan…sothat…ifitisconvenientforyou.英文：ShallweputitofftillthisSundaymorning？Wecansetoutearliersothatwewillhaveplentyoftimetoreadandselectbooks,ifitisconvenientforyou.【升级2】中文：我们可以推迟到周日早上吗？如果你方便的话，我们可以早点出发，这样我们就有更多的时间来读选书籍。如果这个时间不合适，请告诉我你什么时候有空，我明天之后都有时间。句型：Ifnot,pleaseletmeknow….Iwillbeavailable…英文：ShallweputitofftillthisSundaymorning？Wecansetoutearliersothatwewillhaveplentyoftimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifnot,pleaseletmeknowyourpreferredtime.Iwillbeavailableaftertomorrow.【过关检测】1.填空Thereasonisthatmyyoungerbrotherbrokehislegtheotherdayandmyparentsareonabusinesstripnow.It’smydutytoattendtohim.2.句子转换ThisSaturdayafternoonIwilltakehimtothehospitaltohavehislegexamined,whichconflictswithourtravelplan.3.翻译句子ShallweputitofftillthisSundaymorning？Wecansetoutearliersothatwewillhaveplentyoftimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifnot,pleaseletmeknowyourpreferredtime.Iwillbeavailableaftertomorrow.3.结尾【思路句】我希望你可以接受我的道歉。【遣词】acceptone’sapology【句型】Ihopeyoucan…【造句】Ihopeyoucanacceptmyapology.【升级】中文：我真诚地希望你可以接受我的道歉并且理解我。盼回复！英文：Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandme.Iappreciateyourearlyreply.【过关检测】1.填空Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapology.2.句子转换Iappreciateyourearlyreply.3.翻译句子Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply./Yourearlyreplywouldbegreatlyappreciated./Iappreciateyourearlyreply.三．能够正确使用语篇衔接词1.范文【基础版范文】DearBob,IamwritingtoapologizetoyouthatIwon’tbeabletogotothebookstoretogetherwithyouthisweekend.Thereasonisthatmyyoungerbrotherbrokehislegtheotherdayandmyparentsareonabusinesstripnow.Soit’smydutytolookafterhim.ThisSaturdayafternoonIwilltakehimtothehospitaltoexaminehislegandthisisagainstourplan.ShallweputitofftillthisSundaymorning？Wecangoearliersothatwewillhavemoretimetoreadandchoosebooks.Anyway,Ihopeyoucanacceptmyapology.Yours,LiHua【升级版范文】DearBob,IamwritingtoexpressmydeepestapologytoyouthatIwon’tbeabletokeepyoupanytothebookstorethisweekend.Thereasonisthatmyyoungerbrotherbrokehislegtheotherdayandmyparentsareonabusinesstripnow.Therefore,it’smydutytoattendtohim.AndthisSaturdayafternoonIwilltakehimtothehospitaltohavehislegexaminedforfurthertreatment,whichconflictswithourplan.ShallweputitofftillthisSundaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwewillhaveplentyoftimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifnot,pleaseletmeknowyourpreferredtime.Iwillbeavailableaftertomorrow.Anyway,Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandme.Iappreciateyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua课后练习补救练习一.补全句子1.expressmydeepestapology;keepyoupany

2.brokehisleg;onabusinesstrip;It’smydutyto;examine;against3.setout;plentyof;select;available二.翻译1.IamwritingtoapologizetoyouthatIwon’tbeabletokeepyoupanytothebookstore.2.ThisSaturdayafternoonIwilltakehimtothehospitaltohavehislegexaminedforfurthertreatment,whichconflictswithourplan.3.Wecansetoutearliersothatwewillhaveplentyoftimetoreadandselectbooks.巩固练习1.填空IamwritingtoexpressmydeepestapologytoyouthatIwon’tbeabletokeepyoupanytothebookstorethisweekend.Thereasonisthatmyyoungerbrotherbrokehislegtheotherdayandmyparentsareonabusinesstripnow.Therefore,it’smydutytoattendtohim.ThisSaturdayafternoonIwilltakehimtothehospitaltohavehislegexaminedforfurthertreatment,whichconflictswithourplan.ShallweputitofftillthisSundaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwewillhaveplentyoftimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifnot,pleaseletmeknowyourpreferredtime.Iwillbeavailableaftertomorrow.Anyway,Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandme.Iappreciateyourearlyreply.2.完成作文（1）写出中文思路●写信表示歉意，不能陪你去北京了●解释原因（拓展一个自己遇到的状况），另外约一个时间（给出一个提议）●希望对方接受自己的歉意并理解自己（2）根据中文思路，完成篇章写作。IamwritingthislettertoexpressmydeepestapologytoyouthatIwon’tbeabletokeepyoupanytoBeijingnextweekend.Thereasonisthatmyyoungerbrotherbrokehislegandnowisstayinginhospitalwhilemyparentsareonabusinesstrip.Therefore,itismydutytoattendtohimuntilmyparentsreturn,whichconflictswithourtravelplan.Andtimepermitting,IwouldliketomakeanotherdatetoofferyouabreathtakingtouraroundBeijing.Ifyouhavea