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读后续写“得到帮助”类范文6篇

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Earlyin1999,ourfamilyhadtodriveseveralhundredmilestoBillings,Montana,tovisit

ahospitalizedfamilymember.Duringthevisit,accommodation,andhavinggivenmostofour

availablecashtohelpourrelativesoutwithexpenses,wehadverylittlemoneywithuswhen

welefttoreturnhome.ItwasgettingdarkwhenwedroveoutofBillings.

Atfirst,wedidn'tnoticethatourheadlightsweredimming（变暗），andthatwasprobably

whywemissedtheexitfortheinterstate（州际公路Readinghome.About40mileslater,we

begantoseethatnothingalongthehighwaywasfamiliartous.In35moremiles,wesawan

exittoatownthatwasn'tanywherenearwhereweweresupposedtobe.

Witheightmilestothenextexit,webegantorealizetheheadlightsweredangerouslydim.

Thecarbegantomakeaseriesofshortexplosivesounds,whichmadeusfeelextremely

worried.Ihadtoturnoffthelightstokeepitrunning.Atthefootoftheexitslope,therewasa

smallpostofficeinfrontofus.Thecarstoppedrunningcompletelyaswepulledintothe

parkinglot.

Isoondeterminedthattherewassomethingwrongwiththealternator（发电机）.Itwas

7:00intheeveningandwewereinRosebud,Montana,whichwasatinytownwithnoservices.

Tomakethingsworse,theheavysnowwasfalling.Weneededtofindourfamilyasafeplaceto

spendthecoldnightandfindanalternatortolixthecarthenextmorning.Hopelessly,we

couldn'tseeanyotherbuildingsaroundus,andtherestofthetownwasnearlyamileaway.

Evenifwewalkedthere,weknewthattherewasprobablynohotelorautopartsstore.

Justthen,astoppedtocheckthemailbeforegoinghome.

Unexpectedly,shecamebackthenextmorning!

范文：

Justthen,awomanstoppedtocheckthemailbeforegoinghome.

•Noticingastrangefamilylookinganxiousandhelpless,sheapproachedusandaskedif

therewasanythingshecoulddo.Uponlearningaboutoursituation,sheimmediately

offeredtohelpus（withouthesitation）.

•Shetoldustherewasasmallhotelafewmilesaway,andevengaveusaridetheresince

ourcarcouldn'trun.Thehotelwaswarmandsafe,whichwasexactlywhatweneededin

suchachillynight.

令Wordsfailedtoconveyhowgratefulwewere.Wewavedgoodbyetotheangel-like

lady,assumingthatwastheendofthestory.

Unexpectedly,shecamebackthenextmorning!

令Itturnedoutthattheladyhadspenttheentirenightmakingcallsandsearchingforan

alternatorforourcar.Againstallodds,shemanagedtofindoneinaneighboringtownand

drovetofetchit.

•Informedthatwecouldhitontheroadagain,wewereoverwhelmedwithgratitudefor

herkindnessandwillingnessaswellasthetroubleshetooktohelpcompletestrangers

inneed.

•Goldensunlight,floodinginthroughthecarwindows,warmedusandremindedus

goodnessdoesexistintheworld.

最终自测：

Justthen,awomanstoppedtocheckthemailbeforegoinghome.

令注意到一个陌生的家庭看起来焦虑和无助，她走近我们，问她能做什么。在得知我们

的情况后，她立即主动提出帮我们（毫不犹豫地）。

令她告诉我们几英里外有一家小旅馆，因为我们的车行驶不了，她甚至把我们送到那。

旅馆既温暖又安全，这正是我们在如此寒冷的夜晚所需要的。

令言语无法表达我们的感激。我们向这位天使般的女士挥手告别，以为这就是故事的结

尾。

Unexpectedly,shecamebackthenextmorning!

令原来，这位女士花了一整夜的时间打电话，为我们的车找一个交流发电机。尽管困难

重重，她设法在邻近的城镇找到了一个，并开车去取它。

令得知我们可以再次上路了，我们充满了对她的感激，因为她的善良和愿意帮助，以及

不辞辛苦地帮助有需要的陌生人。

令金色的阳光，从车窗里涌进来，温暖着我们，提醒着我们，世界上确实存在着善良。

Onedayanelderlypostmanknockedonthedoorofahouseandaskediftherewasanyone

totaketheletter,Assoonashesaidthis,alittlegirFsvoiceechoed（回口向）frominside,buteven

after5minutesnoonecameout.

"Cananyonehelpyoutaketheletter?Ihavetogotomanymoreplaces."thepostmansaid

again."Uncle,ifyouareinahurry,pleaseputtheletterunderthedoor.Itwilltakememore

time."thegirlreplied.

"No,itisaregisteredletter.Someone'ssignatureisneeded."thepostmanyelled.

Another10minutespassed,andthere*snoresponse.Thepostmangotabitcrossaboutthe

delay,andhewasabouttoshoutwhenthedooropened.Hewasshockedtoseeinfrontofhim

wasalittlegirlwithnolegs.Speechless,hegavetheletterquietly,tookhersignatureandleft.

Thatdayhegothername,Sally.

Sallyoftenlivedalone.Hermotherdiedatanearlyageandherfatherusedtowork

faraway.Amaid（女7［卜）wasinvitedtostaywithherinthemorningandeveningexcepttheday.

Inamonthortwo,mailsweredeliveredregularly,andtheirinteractionandattachmentgrew.

Sallynoticedthatthepostmanusedtocomebarefoot.Rainyseasoncame.Onedaywhenthe

postmanleftherhome,hisfootprintswereleftonwetsoil.Sallystruggledoutwithapaperand

putitonprintandtookdownthepictureofhisfeet.Sheaskedhermaidtogetshoesofthatsize

andkepttheminabox.

Diwali（排灯节）wasaroundthecorner.DuringDiwali,thepostmanusedtodelivermails

andgotDiwaligiftsfromthepeoplewhogotmails.ButwhenhethoughtaboutSally,hestarted

thinkingthatheshouldn'tmeetthegirlempty-handedduringthefestival.Aftermuchthoughthe

boughtsomechocolateforthelittlegirl.Thenextday,hewenttothelittlegirl'shouseand

knocked.

Pl:Sallyopenedthedoor,theoldpostmanhandedherabagofchocolate

P2:Arrivinghome,thepostmanopenedthebox.

范文：

WTze几Sallyopenedthedoor,theoldpostmanhandedherabagofchocolate.

•Withherheartthumpingwiththrill,Sallyreachedoutforthesweetpresentand

acceptedit.Havingexpressedherheartfeltthankstothepostman,shebeggedhimto

waitamoment.

•Tenminuteshavingpassed,thelittlegirlmanagedtocomeintothetheoldman'ssight

withaboxwrappedinbrownpaperinherhands.

“Thisismygiftforyou.Don'tunwrapituntilyougethome.^saidSallywithabiggrin.”

Azrivi/ghome,thepostmanopenedthebox.

•Tohisunboundedastonishment,insidewasapairofshoesofhissize,withacard

attachedtoit,reading"Iamappreciativeofyourcompany.Don'twalkbarefootinrainy

seasonanymore.^^

•Scarcelyhadheseenthiswhenhistearsbrimmedover,withamixtureofthankfulness

andcontentmentoverwhelminghim.Neverinhislifehadhereceivedsucha

heartwarmingpresent.

Havingmadearesolution,heputontheshoesatonce,trottedtowardsthelittlegirFs

houseandknockedatthedooragain.a4Littleangel,letmebeyourlegs."LookingSally

straightintheeye,hepromised.

最终自测：

Sallyopenedthedoor,theoldpostmanhandedherabagofchocolate.

令莎莉激动得心怦怦直跳，她伸手去拿那份甜蜜的礼物并收下了。她向邮差表达了衷心

的感谢后，请求他再等一会。

令十分钟过去了，小女孩手里拿着一个用牛皮纸包着的盒子，好不容易进入了老人的视

线。

令“这是我送给你的礼物。回家后再打开。”莎莉咧着嘴笑着说。

Azrivi/ghome,thepostmanopenedthebox.

令让他大为吃惊的是，里面是一双是他尺寸的鞋子，上面还附了一张卡片，上面写着：

“我很感激你的陪伴。别再在雨季光脚走路了。”

令他一看到这个礼物，就热泪盈眶，既感激又满足。他一生中从未收到过如此温暖人心

的礼物。

令他下了决心，立刻穿上鞋子，快步走向小女孩的家，又敲响了房门。“小天使，让我

做你的腿吧。”他直视着莎莉的眼睛，承诺道。

第二篇

Duringthispastyear,I'vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethings

happened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn'tbotheredtohelp.

Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.

Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(TJ),andofferedmoney.Nothing.

RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefather

boundedout.

Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.Heconveyed

throughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneed

somethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw（锯子）fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabig

logonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.

Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron.No

worries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtire

iron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.

Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashour

hands.Itriedtoputa$20billinthemanshand,buthewouldn'ttakeit,soinsteadIwentupto

thetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.

Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommy

andDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.

ParaP:W/ze-Iwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.

Para2:A—e/theyleft、/gotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.

范文：

Para1:When/wasabouttos处goodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.

•Allofasudden,adeafeningsoundfrommyemptystomachburstout.Squeezingoutan

exhaustedsmile,IrepliedthatIhadn't.

•Atthismoment,thisfriendlyfamilyinvitedmetoenjoyasimplelunchwithhospitality,

whichtriggeredawarmcurrentwellingupinmyheart.Thenthegirlhandedmea

home-madesandwich,whichwoulddefinitelybringmebacktolife.

Afterwolfingdownthefood,Iwasabouttosaygoodbyeagainwhenthegirlpresseda

paperbagintomyhand,andthenshejumpedintothetruck,wavingmegoodbye.

Para2:A力4theyleft,IgotintoJeepandopenedthepaperbag.

•Lyinginthebagwasa$20bill,whichIhadofferedinreturnfortheirhelpandafolded

note.Unfoldingthenote,Isawthewordsleftforme“Thanksforyourtimeandfunbeing

withmyfamily!,9

•Arippleofwarmthmixedwithhappinessranthroughmymind.Thewordsandexperience

servedasthegentleandbrightmorningsunlight,meltingtheiceinmyheart.

Seeingthetruckdisappearingfromsight,Ifeltthedistrustinhumanityvanishwithout

trace.Ifsaforeign,completestrangerfamilythatassistedmeinregainingthetrustinthe

glowinghumannature—helpingothersinneed.

最终自测：

Para]:WhenIabouttos逆"goodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.

令突然间，我的空腹发出了震耳欲聋的声音。挤出一个精疲力尽的微笑，我回答说没有

O

令这时，这友好的一家人好客地邀请我吃一顿简单的午餐。那使我心里涌起一股暖流。

然后女孩递给我一个自家做的三明治，这让我活了过来。

令狼吞虎咽地吃完食物后，我正要再次说再见，女孩把一个纸袋塞到我手里，接着她跳

上卡车，向我挥手告别。

Para2:Afterthewleft,I攵otintoJeepcmdopenedthepaperbag.

令躺在袋子里是一张20美元的钞票，是我因为回报他们的帮助而给的那张，还有张折起

来的纸条。打开纸条，我看到了留给我的话：“谢谢你跟我们一家人一起度过的快乐

时光！”

令一股温暖和幸福的涟漪掠过我的脑海。这些文字和这次经历就像柔和明亮的晨光，融

化了我心中的冰。

令看到卡车从视线中消失，我感到对人类的不信任消失得无影无踪。正是一个完全的陌

生人家庭，帮我重新信任了光辉人性一帮助其他有需要的人。

第四篇

OverthesummerImovedfromTexastoMissouri.Thiswasmysecondyearofhigh

school,butmyfirstyearofschoolinMissouri.Iwasreallynervousaboutstartinganewschool

andhavingpeoplelikeme.IdecidedthatIwouldbemuchhappierinanewschoolifImade

friendsthatwereso-called“popular”.Gettinginwiththerightgroupofpeoplewouldmakemy

lifeawholelotbetter.Iboughtanewoutfitsothefirstdaywouldbeperfect.

Onthefirstdayofschool,scared,yeteagertobeginmynewlife,Iwalkedupthestairs.

Myfirstclasswasgeometry,butwherewasthat?Iwasstandinginthehalllookingconfused,

whenashort,blondgirlwearingglassescameupandasked,"Areyounew?Youlooklost.Do

youwantmetohelpyoufindyourclass?MynameisDiane.Whafsyours?”Eventhoughshe

seemedabitstrange,definitelynotthekindofpersonIwantedtobeassociatedwith,Idecided

toanswerheranyway.Iwas,afterall,lost.

Afterexchangingnames,Ifollowedherupthestairsanddownahallwayontheright.

Whenwereachedmyroomshesaid,“Well,hereyouare.Itwasnicemeetingyou.IhopeIsee

youagainandyourdaygoesallright.^^

Isaidaquickthank-youandwavedgood-bye.Onceinsidetheclassroom,Isawonebig

groupofpeoplehuddledaroundsomeonewhoseemedtobetellingsomesortofstory.Iwalked

overandgotcloseenoughtooverhear.Alleyesweregluedtotheguyinthemiddleofthecircle.

Idecidedthatthisguywaspopular.

Afewminuteslatertheteachertoldeveryonetogofindaseatandgetreadyfortheclass.I

managedtogetonerightnexttotheguy.Isaid,“Hi,mynameisAprilandI'mnewher已“He

saidcoldly,"Hi,I'mJohnny.^^Thatclassdraggedonandon.Finally,thebellrang.Iturnedto

himandaskedJTmnotsurewheremynextclassis,couldyouhelpmefindit?”Helookedat

meandthensaidaquickno,turnedbacktohisfriends,andwalkedoutoftheclassroom.

Poral:Astheywe%walkingout,Iheardtheywerealllaughingatme

Para2:Before/wasreadytogohome,/heardafamiliarjoicecallingmyname.

范文：

Paral:Astheywerewalkingout,/heardtheywerealllaughingatme.

•Theirshrilllaughingaboutmyoutfitandmyaccentmademeblushwithshame.Seized

byasenseofembarrassment,Icoulddonothingbutsitthere,keepingmybody

frozenandholdingbackmytears.

•Unabletofigureoutwhytheylaughedatme,Icouldn'thelpdoubtingwhethermy

presencewasacompletelymistakeoradisturbancetoothers.

•Allmyhopeofbeginninganewschoollifewithlovelyfriendshipvanishedlikea

bubble.Withlowerheadandheavylegs,Igrabbedmybagandinchedmywaytoward

theschoolgate.

ParaIwasreadytogohome,Iheardafamiliarvoicecalling"yname.

•ItwasDiane.Likearayofsunshine,thebigsmileonherfacesweptawaymygloom.

InformedthatIwaslostagain,sheheldmyhandsandcomfortedmeinagentlevoice,

“Theseteachingbuildingsreallylookalike,right?Followme.”

•Arippleofwarmthspreadingthroughmyheart,embarrassmentandfrustration

werereplacedwithpurejoyandthankfulness.

•ItwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedhowwrongIwastoonlybefriendswithpopular

people.MaybeIshouldn'tdecidewhetherapersonisworthbeingmyfriendbytheir

reputation,butbywhotheyare.

最终自测：

Astheywe忆walkingout,/heardtheywerealllaughingatme.

令他们对我的外套和我的口音发出的刺耳嘲笑让我脸红羞愧。被一种尴尬的感觉所控制

住了，我只能坐在那里，身体动不了，强忍泪水。

令我不明白他们为什么嘲笑我，我不禁怀疑我的存在是一个完全的错误还是对别人的干

扰。

令我对以美好的友谊开始新的学校生活的所有希望都像泡沫一样破灭了。我垂着头，

步履沉重，抓起书包，一寸寸地向学校门口挪去。

Before/wasreadytogohome,/heardafamiliaraoicecallingmyname.

令是Dianeo她脸上的灿烂笑容，就像一缕阳光，驱散了我的忧郁。得知我又迷路了，

她握着我的手，用温柔的声音安慰我：“这些教学楼看起来真的很像，对吗？跟我来。”

令一股温暖的涟漪掠过我的心头，尴尬和沮丧被喜悦和感激所取代。

令就在那一刻，我意识到我只和受欢迎做朋友是多么的错误。也许我不应该根据一个人

的声誉来决定他是否值得做我的朋友，而应该根据他是个什么样的人。

第五篇

Iwasabrokeuniversitystudent.Ishouldhavebeengoingtouniversityonascholarship

becauseIcamefromalow-incomefamily,butalast-minute£100-a-yearpayriseformymum

pushedmyfamilyoverthethreshold（门槛）fbrwhatdefined"low-income“andIwassuddenly

nolongerqualifiedfor£15,000ayearinscholarshipmoney.ThisnewscameafterI'dbeen

acceptedbytheuniversityandsignedthelease（租约）formyaccommodation.

Despitemyfamilynotbeinglabelledlow-incomeanymore,Istillwouldn'treceiveany

financialsupportfrommyfamilyasalltheincomewenttowardtakingcareofmydisabled

brotherandpayingtheirownbills.Itwouldbetight,butbecauseIhadsavingsfrommy

part-timejob,Idecidedtogotouniversityanyway.Afterpayingmyrent,Ihad£10.20aweek

foreverythingelseincludingfood,toiletries,andschoolsupplies.

AsIwasinanewcity,Ireallywantedtomakefriends,whichwasdifficultwhenmostof

thesocialactivitieswereexpensive.Therefore,Ijumpedatthechancetodoarelativelycheap

coffeeshoptripwithmyroommateswhowerepleasanttome.

Ihad£20withmetogetacheapcupofcoffeeandmyfoodshoppingforafewweeks.So

Iheadedforthecoffeeshop.Whilepaying,Ipulledoutthenoteandahandfulofchangeand

realizedIcouldpaywithoutbreakingthenote,soIputitbackinmypocket.Itwasn'tuntilI

arrivedatthesupermarketthatIrealizedthenotewasgone.WhatshouldIdo?Iwasdesperate

asitwastheequivalent（相等物）oftwoweeksofmoney.Myroommateshelpedmelookfor

thenote.However,itwasinvain.Finally,Iwenttoschoolempty-handed.

Zsafinalattempt,/messagedthecoffkeshopkFacebookpageaskingifthey'dseenit.

Isaid,“Oh…Thisisn'tmine;狙"notewasanoldone.”

范文：

Asafinalattempt,Imessagedthecoffeeshop'sFacebookpageaskingifthey'dseenit.

•Leastexpectingareplyfromthem,Iloggedoffwithenormousfrustrationandcontinuous

self-blame.HowIwishedIwascarefulenoughsothatthenotewouldnotslipoutwithout

mynotice.

•However,fiveminutes,analertfromFacebookbrokeoffmynegativethoughts."Yes,we

indeedfounda20-dollarnote.Pleasecomebyassoonaspossible!^^

•Theabovewordsfromthecoffeeshopinstantlyfueledmewithenergy.Withouthesitation,

Itrottedbackwitharapturousheart.

•HardlyhadIenteredtheshopwhenasweet-lookingbaristahandedmea20-dollarnote

andaskedtentatively,66Sir,isityours?^^

Isaid,"Oh,…Thisisn'tmine;notewasanoldNOTT?one.”

•Beamingamostradiantsmile,thebaristaexplainedgentlythatthisnotewasfrommy

mostkind-heartedroommates,who,afterwitnessingmydespairanddevastation,would

liketoextendahelpinghand.

•Hearingthis,Ifeltasurgeofwarmthswellingupinmyheartandmyeyeswereinstantly

moistenedwithgratefultears.

•Yes,lifemightbehardformeinanewcity,butwiththeunreservedgenerosityand

unwaveringsupportfrommyroommate,IknewIcouldpullthroughanydifficultyandrise

toanychallenge.

•Indeed,lifeisnotabedofroses,butlovefrommyroommatesmaketheworldgoaround.

Plus,Iamboundtopayforwardtheirkindnessbyhelpingmoreneedypeoplelikeme.

最终自测：

“safinalattempt,/messagedthecoffeeshop'sFacebookpageaskingifthev'dseenit.

令不期待他们的回复，我带着极大的气馁和持续的自责离线了。我多么希望自己足够小

心，这样那张字条就不会未经我的注意就滑落了。

令然而，五分钟后，脸书上的一个提醒音打破了我的负面想法。“是的，我们确实发现

了一张20美元的钞票。请尽快来！”

令咖啡店的话立刻让我充满了活力。我毫不犹豫地带着一颗欣喜若狂的心小跑着回去。

令我刚进商店，一个可爱的咖啡师就递给我一张20美元的钞票，试探地问：“先生，是

你的吗？”

Isaid,"Oh,...Thisisn'tmine;mynotewasanoldwornone.,f

令面露灿烂的微笑，咖啡师温柔地解释说，这张纸币来自我最善良的室友，他们在目睹了

我的绝望和崩坏后，想伸出援助之手。

令听到这话，我感到一阵暖流在心中涌起，我的眼睛立刻被感激的泪水湿润了。

令是的，在一个新的城市，生活对我来说可能很困难，但有了室友的毫无保留的慷慨和

坚定的支持，我知道我可以度过任何难关，迎接任何挑战。

令的确，生活并不是玫瑰的床，而是室友的爱让世界运转。另外，我一定会通过帮助更

多像我这样的需要帮助的人来回报他们的善意。

第八篇

Walkingacrosscampuswitheverypairofeyesonyoucanbeembarrassing,especially

whenyou're13yearsold.Ilookedaroundmeindesperatesearchofafriendlyface,asmile,

anything.Iwasquitedisappointed,tosaytheleast.AndI,inturn,feltsomewhatfoolish,

walkingacrosscampuswithafalsesmileonmyface.Iwassimplyattemptingtofollowthe

advicemymotherhadgivenmeyearsbefore:whenthingsgetawkward,smile.Nomatter

whereyouareasmilewillalwaysbeunderstood.Asmileisuniversal.Atthatverymoment,

however,Ifeltmymother'sadvicedidn'twork.

Ontopofitall,mymindwasracingwithquestionsandconcernstypicalofany13-year

oldonthefirstdayofschool:wherewouldIsitatlunch?WhowouldItalkto?Nottomention

howwouldImakefriendswhenIdidn'tevenspeakthelanguage?Myheartbeatquickenedand

Ifeltnervous.Still,Ididmybesttomaintaincalmsoasnottoletmyguarddownandrevealto

othersjusthowscaredItrulywas.

Whentheteacherintroducedmetotheclassasthe"'Americangirl”,10setsofhands

immediatelyshotup.Somestudentshadquestions,andothersw