读后续写之巧用比喻描写情绪导学案 高三下学期英语作文复习专项

读后续写之巧用比喻描写情绪2.情绪句式二：情绪名词+washover/takeholdof/overwhelmsblike...Happinesswashedoverhimlikewarmsunshine.幸福就像温暖的阳光一样笼罩着他。Angertookholdofhimlikeawildbeast.他愤怒得像一头野兽。3.情绪句式三：as+情绪形容词+as+意象ashappyasaclamathightide像涨潮时的蛤蜊一样高兴asnervousasacatonhotbricks紧张得像热锅上的蚂蚁aspaleasasheet苍白如纸astoughasoldboots很强壮；坚韧不拔asslyasafox狡猾得像只狐狸asbusyasbees忙得不可开交asblindasabat有眼无珠；视力不佳ascheerfulasalark兴高采烈ascrossasabear脾气很坏；怒气冲冲asdeepasawell高深莫测；难以捉摸assillyasagoose像鹅一样愚蠢；蠢极了asfastasahare像野兔一样快；动如脱兔asquietasasheep静如绵羊asbrightasdaylight亮如白昼asbraveasalion像狮子一样勇敢asradiantasroses像玫瑰一样容光焕发asplayfulasakitten像小猫一样顽皮asgoodasgold规规矩矩；表现好ashungryasahunter非常饥饿asgentleasabreeze宛若微风般轻柔Onthelastdayofschool,hedashedoutoftheschoolgatefeelingashappyasaclamathightide.在上学的最后一天，他冲出学校大门，感觉像涨潮时的蛤蜊一样高兴。Atthesightofthesnake,herfaceturnedaspaleasasheet.一看到那条蛇，她的脸色就变得苍白如纸。语篇微演练Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Peacewashedoveruslikeagentlebreeze.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallyascoolaswarriors.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyouDon’tgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.Afterawhile,UnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意:1．续写词数应为150左右:2．请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.

➢参考范文Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.DadandIfounditwassocutethatwedecidedtochaseit.Afterawhile,wewerecompletelylostintheforest.Iwasasnervousasacatonhotbricks.“Wemaynotbeabletomakeitbacktothefarmhouseintimeforsupper,”Ithoughttomyself.Afteraseriesoffruitlessattemptstofindawayout,wefelttired,ashungryasahunter.Fallingintosadness,Iburiedmycrestfallenfaceinarmslikeadeflatedballoon.Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wegotstuckintheforest.Andanunexpectedshoweraddedtoourdifficultyinfindingawayhome.Despairtookholdofmelikeaninvisiblehand.Butmyfather