2024届高考英语二轮复习续写题目及范文合集目录 讲义

TCEE续写话题分类（16类）

主题01坚持不懈/勇敢追梦

主题02获得自信

第一类：与自我主题03克服恐惧

主题04选择诚实

主题05学会合作/不再自私

主题06传递善意

主题07爱的表达

主题08爱的和解

第二类：与他人

主题09见义勇为

主题10认知改观

主题11分享趣事

主题12动物救人

主题13人救动物

第三类：与自然主题14兽口逃生

主题15家有萌宠

主题16险境求生

这个合集为我在2023年秋学期任教高一时带学生练习的题目及课件，因为只有10篇，所以未包含

全部上面我列出的全部主题。但是10篇练习下来，大部分学生的表达已经非常非常好了，所以大家

放心用吧〜

PS：上课时我是要求学生把PPT上的表格全部记到笔记本上，并利用早读时间全部背诵且默写的〜

下面的序号就是根据这个合集的序号来的。

01读后续写练习：丢戒指后续

Paulaisa55-year-oldwomanlivinginNewJersey.Shelivesahappylifewithoutconcernforfinancialor

socialproblemsandsheconstantlyshareslaughswithherfamilyandfriends.Abouttenyearsago,herhusband

Michaelgaveheragoldringwithadiamondinitontheir20thweddinganniversary.Shecherisheditvery

muchandworeiteveryday.

Havingbeenmarriedforalmost30years,Paulahadeverythingsetforherself,andknewthatherlifein

NewJerseywasathrillingone.Oneday,Paulawasinthebathroomcleaningeverythingup,fromthesinkto

thefloor.Shewantedtokeepherhousecleanandbeautiful.AssoonasPaulafinishedwashingthebathtub,she

movedontothepartshefearedmost：thetoilet.Wantingtogetitoutoftheway,shequicklycleanedthe

insideofthetoiletwithabrush,andflushed（［中走）thesoapaway.Afterfinishing,shefelttherewassomething

wrong,butshecouldn'tthinkofwhatitwas.

Paula'sheartskippedabeatwhenshenoticedthatherleftringfingerfeltabitlighter.Sheslowlylooked

downatherringfinger,hopingthathertreasuredanniversarygiftwasstillonit.Shewasfrightenedtoseethat

itwaslost.Shedidn'tnoticethatsheflusheditdownthetoilet.

Paulasaid,“Imusthaveflusheditdown.Ithadbeenalittlebigonmyfinger,becauseitwaswintertime

andmyhandsweresmaller.Ifeltsobadaboutit.Sadandembarrassed.,,

Shecouldn'tbelievethatshejustletthousandsofdollarsgodownthedrain（下水道），literally.She

searchedthebathroomandeventhehouse,hopingthatshejustdroppeditsomewhereandforgotaboutit.

Sheeventookapartthetoiletandsearchedtheinsidepipeswithaflashlight,butinvain.Paulahadnoidea

howtoexplainthistoherhusband.Tobuythering,Michaelworkedextrahardbeforetheanniversary,soto

tellhimthebadnewswasunimaginableforPaula.

Paral：Shesoftlyknockedonthedoortotheirbedroom.

Para2：Afterfinishingherexplanation,PaulawipedawayhertearsandwaitedforMichaeltosaysomething.

Paral.

（l）Michael立刻开了门。（2）走进房间，Paula低着头，垂下眼睛，避免和他有任何眼神接触，她心里越

来越有负罪感。（3）看到Paula的失望，丈夫关切地问她发生了什么事。（4）Michael的体贴加重了她

的内疚。（5）Paula鼓起勇气告诉Michael,她不小心把戒指冲下马桶了。（6）在解释的过程中，悔恨

的泪水充满了她的眼睛。

（1）Michaelansweredthedoorimmediately.（2）Steppingintotheroom,Paulahungdownherheadwith

hereyesdroppingtoavoidmakinganyeyecontact,growingguiltcreepingintohisheart.（3）Perceiving

Paula'sdisappointment,thehusbandaskedherwhathadhappenedwithconcern,（4）MichaeVsthoughtfulness

addedtoherguilt.（5）PaulapluckedupcourageandtoldMichaelthatsheflushedtheringdownthetoiletby

accident.（6）Overthecourseofexplanation,tearsofregretfilledhereyes.

Para2.

（l）Michael听了Paula的话，走到她跟前，轻轻地拍了拍她的背。（2）Michael对她的错误的反应使Paula

大吃一惊。》）她抬起头，茫然地皱着眉头直视着迈克尔的眼睛。（4）觉察到Paula的困惑，Michael微

笑着安慰他的妻子说:“戒指只是我们爱情的象征。最重要的是我们的爱永远存在。”（5）Paula感动得说

不出话来，她伸出手紧紧地拥抱了Michael。

（1）HavingheardPaula'swords,Michaelwalkedovertoherandpattedhergentlyontheback,（2）Theway

MichaelrespondedtohermistakeastonishedPaula.（3）SheraisedherheadtolookdirectlyintoMichaeVs

eyeswithaconfusedfrown.（4）SensingPaula*sconfusion,Michaelsmiledandcomfortedhiswife,"Thering

isjustareminderofourlove.Whatcountsmostisthatourloveexistsforever."（5）Touchedbeyondwords,

PaulareachedouttoembraceMichaeltightly.

02续写练习：母亲的疤痕

Raju'sfamilywasthesmallestfamilyonthecoastallineofKanyakumari.Rajuwas10yearsold.Hewas

tall,darkandhandsomeandhadalotofdreams.Hehadalwaysdreamtoflivinginacity.Hewasalwayshis

dad'scharm,ashewasnotquitehappytospendtimewithhismom.Allhecouldrememberabouthismom

washerscars,redandwhitescarsonherface,neckandhands.Healwaysfeltunpleasanttoseehismom'sface.

Butwhathedidnotknowwasthathismomscratchedherbeautytosavehimfromafirewhenhewasone

yearold.Notwantingtoburdenhimwithit,R.aju*sparentskeptitasecret.

HismomKamalausedtodrophimtoschoolandpickhimupeveryday.Hefeltawkwardtoseehismom

withthatscarredfacestandinginfrontoftheschoolgate.Ashewaslaughingandchattingwithhisfellow

schoolmates,allofthembecamesilentandstartedstaringatthegate.So,Rajuturnedtowardsthegatewitha

lotofcuriosity.Hefrozewhenseeinghismom,facecoveredwithapieceofcloth.Rajufeltashamedand

rushedoutoftheschoolwithlotsofanger.

Withdayspassingby,Rajustartedtodislikehismommore.Hedidnotliketogetpickedupordropped

byhismom.Hefeltthatshewasuglyandsoabnormal.Ashegrewold,hestoppedgoingoutwithhertothe

marketoranywhereoutside.Kamalatriedherbesttomakehersonhappy,gothimeverythingthathewanted

andgavehimhisspace.Sheunderstoodwhathersonwasgoingthroughandfeltpityforherselfandsadforher

son,asshewashelpless.

WhenRajuturned15,hewassenttoacityhighschool67kilometersawayfromhiscoastalvillage.The

verythoughtofnotbeingwithhisuglymothermadehimveryhappy.

Threeyearslater,thencameRaju*sgraduationceremony.Hisparentsdidn'twanttobeabsentfromsuch

animportantoccasion,sotheymanagedtobetherewithoutinformingRaju.

Paral：Rajuwasshockedwhenseeinghisparentsarriveattheceremonyhall.

Para2：Hesitatingforamoment,Raj3sfathertoldhimeverythingthathappenedmanyyearsago.

【范文】

走到他们面前，拉朱勉强笑了笑，跟父亲打了个招呼，完全不理睬母亲，她的脸上又蒙上了一块

布。然而，当拉朱听到一些学生好奇地议论他母亲的脸时，他感到既尴尬又愤怒。“你毁了我的毕业

典礼!”拉朱咬着牙，愤怒地看了他母亲一眼。拉朱怒不可遏，一把抓住妈妈的胳膊，使劲地推她，想

把她赶出大厅。他的妈妈努力站着不动，[低着头，努力忍住眼泪][用手捂着脸啜泣着]。

Havingwalkeduptothem,Rajumanagedasmile/fbrcedastrainedsmileandgreetedhisfather,totally

ignoringhismother,whosefacewascoveredwithapieceofclothagain.However,whenRajuheardsome

studentswhisperingabouthismother'sfacewithcuriosity,amixtureofembarrassmentandanger

overwhelmedhim."Youhaveruinedmygraduationceremony!saidRaju,bitinghisteethandgivinghis

motherafuriouslook.Boilingwithrage,Rajuseizedhismum'sarmandpushedherhard,attemptingtodrive

heroutofthehall.Strugglingtostandstill,hismum[hungdownherhead,endeavoringtoholdback

tears][sobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands].

听到这个意外的事实，拉朱惊呆了，说不出话来。当伤害母亲的场景浮现在他的脑海中，氐yu对

自己之前的行为感到非常后悔，内疚的泪水充满了他的眼睛。他伸出双手，小心而温柔地抚摸着妈妈

脸上的伤疤，一遍又一遍地低声说着“对不起”。他几乎无法想象母亲因为他而在身体上和精神上承受

了多大的痛苦。妈妈抬起头，直视着儿子的眼睛，慢慢露出了宽慰的微笑。看着妈妈的脸，拉朱终于

意识到妈妈为他做出的牺牲，扑进了妈妈的怀抱。

Uponhearingtheunexpectedfact,Rajuwasnumbwithshock,utterlyspeechless.Withscenesofhurting

hismumemerginginhismind,soregretfulabouthispreviousbehaviourwasRajuthattearsofguiltfilledhis

eyes.HereachedouthishandstotouchthosescarsonMum'sfacecautiouslyandtenderly,murmuring“sorry'

againandagain.Hecouldhardlyimaginetheamountofpainhismotherhadgonethroughphysicallyand

mentallyowingtohim.Mumraisedherhead,lookedstraightintoherson'seyesandslowlyshowedarelieved

smile.Gazingatmum'sface,Rajueventuallyrealizedthesacrificeshemadeforhimandthrewhimselfinto

mum'sarms.

03续写题目：女儿离家又回家

Lilywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadjusthadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandhad

runangrilyoutofthehouse.Shecouldn'thelpcryingwhenshethoughtofthescoldingfromhermother.

Havingwanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,shefeltahungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.However,

thiswasnotpossibleforher,sinceshehadnomoney.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,watchingthe

middle-agedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.Withnomoneyinhand,shesighedanddecidedtoleave.The

sellerbehindthestandnoticedtheyounggirlandasked,“Hey,girl,doyouwanttohavesomenoodles?”"Oh,

yes...butIdon'thavemoneyonme…shereplied.

“That'snothing.I'lltreatyoutoday,“saidtheman.44Comein."Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,

whosesmellwassoappetizing.Lilythankedthemanandstartedtogobbleup（3良吞虎咽）thedeliciousfood

withsilenttearsrunningdownhercheeks."Whatisit?”askedthemankindly,"'Nothing.Iwasjustmovedby

yourkindness!saidLilyasshewipedawayhertears."Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlof

noodles,whilemymotherdrovemeoutofthehouse.Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomeanandcruel!

Lilyadded.

Hearingthewords,thesellersmiledkindlyandwhispered,"Girl,doyoureallythinksso?Ionlygaveyou

abowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.

Canyoucountthenumberoftimesthatshehascookedforyou?Haveyouexpressedyourthankstoher?”

Lilysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock,rememberinghermother'sfamiliarfaceandweathered

hands."WhydidInotthinkofthat?”shethoughttoherself."Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeel

grateful,butIhaveneverthankedmymumforwhatshehasdoneforme.”

Atthatmoment,Lilyknewthatassoonasshearrivedhome,shewouldgivehermotheranapologyfor

herterriblerudeness.

Paral：Approachingthedoorway,Lilytookadeepbreath.

Para2：Hermothercamebackhome,whichcalledhermindback.

Approachingthedoorway,Lilytookadeepbreath.

准备好面对妈妈，莉莉鼓起勇气敲了敲门。然而，没有人回答。由于把钥匙忘在家里，莉莉别无

选择，只好坐在房前。随着与母亲争吵的场景浮现在她的脑海中，莉莉对自己的粗鲁感到非常后悔,

她感到一种强烈的内疚和不安。“我不应该那样做。如果没有妈妈的奉献和爱护，我不会有这么幸福

的生活。”一个内心的声音提醒她。

ReadytofaceuptoMom,Lilypluckedupcourageandknockedatthedoor.Nevertheless,noone

answered.Havingleftthekeyathome,Lilyhadnoalternativebuttositinfrontofthehouse.Withscenesof

quarrelingwithhermotheremerginginhermind,soregretfulaboutherterriblerudenesswasLilythatshefelt

anoverwhelmingsenseofguiltmixedwithuneasiness,<4Ishouldn'tactinthatway.Butformom'sdevotion

andcare,Iwouldn'thavehadsuchahappylife.,,aninnervoiceremindedher.

Hermothercamebackhome,whichcalledhermindback.

一看到妈妈熟悉的身影，莉莉就站起来向她走过去。“你去哪儿了?”我一直在找你!妈妈惊呼道，

她仍然上气不接下气，但在看到自己心爱的女儿后，她松了一口气。妈妈疲惫的表情使莉莉更加内疚。

莉莉忍不住扑到妈妈的怀里痛哭起来，对自己之前的行为表示真诚的歉意，对妈妈为自己所做的一切

表示感谢。听了这话，妈妈温柔地抚摸着莉莉的头发，脸上绽开了灿烂的笑容。

Uponcatchingsightofthefamiliarfigureofmom,Lilyrosetoherfeetandwalkedovertoher,"'Where

didyougo?Fvebeenlookingforyou!”exclaimedmom,whowerestilloutofbreath,butletoutasighof

reliefafterseeingherbeloveddaughter.Mom'slookofexhaustionaddedtoLily'sguilt.Lilycouldn'thelp

throwingherselfintohermother'sarmsandsobbingbitterly,expressinghersincereapologyforherprevious

behaviourandgreatgratitudeforeverythingmomhavedoneforher.Hearingthesewords,momstroked

Lily'shairtenderly,withherfaceexpandingwithabigsmile.

04续写题目：狗狗救掉坑主人

TherewasalittleboynamedJohnson,wholivedwithhisfatherintheirattractivelittlecottage1neara

forest.Theydidn'thavemuchbutwerecontentwith2thelittletheyhad.Everydayafterhecamehome

fromschool,Johnsonwouldaccompanyhisfatherto3theforesttocollectfirewood.

Oneday,whenJohnsonwasintheforestcollectingwood,hecameacross4apuppy（幼犬）which

seemedtobeallalone.Johnsonlookedhereandthere5forhisownerbutinvain6.Sohepickedhimup,put

himunderhisshirtandcarriedhimhome.Havingreachedhome,hesaidtohisfather,“Dad,Ifoundalittle

puppyaloneintheforest!Canwekeephim,please?”FeelingJohnson^happiness,hisfathercouldn'tdecide

whethertokeepthepuppyornotatthetime.Hetoldhim,“Oh,Johnson,that'sthecutestpuppyFveever

seen!Butwedon'thavemuch.Whatwillwedoabouthisfoodandsleepingarrangement7??,Johnsonreplied,

“It'sOK.Filgivehimhalfofmymealsandlethimsleepwithmeinmybedroom.,,Hearingthis,Johnson's

fatherjustnodded.Johnsonwaswildwithjoy8,andhenamedthepuppyRigo.

Fromthatdayonwards9,JohnsonandRigobecamethebestfriends.RigofollowedJohnsonwherever

hewent.WhenJohnsonwenttoschool,Rigowouldpatientlywaitoutsidetheclassroomtilltheclassesended.

Atnight,RigosleptnexttoJohnsononhistinybedanddreamedsweetdreams.

Ononeparticularday10,Rigowassick,unabletofollowJohnsonsohestayedathome.Thatdayit

rainedheavily,andtheroadseverywhereturnedslippery（湿滑的）.Onhiswayhome,Johnsonwastryingto

reachhomeassoonaspossibleasheimaginedRigowaitingforhimandkeepinghimwarm.Unfortunately,

Johnsonmissedseeing11aholeatthesideoftheroadandfelldownthehole12!Hecriedforhelp13,

hopingtobeheardbypassers-by14.Butduetotheloudthunderingandnoiseoftheheavyrain,noone

heardhim.

Paragraph1：Johnsonwastrappedin15thehole,notknowingwhetherhecouldberescued.

Paragraph2：Rigobarkedandranaroundtheholeanxiously.

续写题目：狗狗救掉坑主人【范文】

【版本1】

Paragraph1：Johnsonwastrappedinthehole,notknowingwhetherhecouldberescued.

（1）他下定决心要爬出洞，鼓足力气站起来，却发现自己受了伤，伤口上流着血。（2）在家里,Johnson

的父亲踱来踱去，担忧儿子的安全。（3）几分钟后，他的父亲决定出门寻找约翰逊的踪迹。（4）看

到父亲准备离开，Rig。叫着，猛烈地摇着尾巴，似乎表达了加入搜索的渴望。（5）一路上，Rigo

低着头四处嗅。随着离洞的距离越来越近，狗显然闻到了熟悉的东西。

（l）Determinedtocrawloutofthehole,hegatheredstrengthtorisetohisfeet,onlytofindhegotinjured

andthattherewasatrickleofbloodfromthewound.（2）Athome,Johnson'sfatherpacedupanddown,

concernedabouthisson'ssafety.（3）Minuteslater,hisfatherdecidedtoheadoutforJohnson^trace.（4）Upon

seeingfatherreadytoleave,Rigobarkedandwaggeditstailfiercely,seemingtoexpressitseagernesstojoin

thesearch.（5）Alongtheway,Rigohungdownitsheadtosniffaround.Withthedistancefromthehole

gettingcloser,thedogapparentlysmelledsomethingfamiliar.

Paragraph2：Rigobarkedandranaroundtheholeanxiously.

（l）Rig。在洞外的吠叫引起了Johnson的注意。他抬起头，看见了那条狗，心里一阵激动。（2）“Rigo,

Rigo,我在这里！叫爸爸来救我「'Johnson用尽全力呼喊道。（3）爸爸听到这里的声音，立刻赶到这

个地点，把Johnson从洞里救了出来，Johnson的牙齿冷的直打颤。（4）Johnson无法抑制自己的喜

悦和兴奋，扑进爸爸的怀里，然后温柔地抚摸着Rig。的皮毛，喃喃地说:“Rig。救了我。”（5）爸爸

拍了拍Rig。的头，轻声说:“你们是彼此的英雄。是你的善良救了你。”

（l）Rigo,sbarkoutsidetheholecalledJohnson,sattention.Helookedupandcaughtsightofthedog,

feelingasurgeofthrillrunthroughhim.（2）4tRigo,Rigo,Iamhere!FetchDadtorescueme!”Johnson

shoutedwithallhismight.（3）Hearingthesoundhere,DadreachedthespotatonceandhelpedJohnsonoutof

thehole,whoseteethwaschatteringwithcold.（4）Unabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement,Johnsonthrew

himselfintoDad'sarmsandthenstrokedRigo'sfurtenderly,murmuring,“Rigosavedme??.（5）Dadpatted

Rigo'shead,sayinginasofttone,"You'reeachother'sheroes.Itisyourkindnessthatsavedyou.”

续写题目：狗狗救掉坑主人【范文】

【版本2】

Paral：（1）他下定决心要爬出洞，用尽力气站起来，却发现自己受了伤，伤口上流着血。（2）在家

里，Rig。用后腿支撑起整个身体，盯着门，似乎在等待Johnson的到来。（3）几分钟后，突然，Rigo

冲出小屋，朝黑暗奔去。（4）一路上，Rig。低着头四处嗅。随着离洞的距离越来越近，狗显然闻到

了熟悉的东西。

（l）Determinedtocrawloutofthehole,hegatheredstrengthtorisetohisfeet,onlytofindhegotinjured

andthattherewasatrickleofbloodfromthewound.（2）Athome,Rigoraiseditswholebodyonitshindlegs,

staringatthedoor,seemingtoawaitthearrivalofJohnson.（3）Minuteslater,therecameanotherdownpour.

Allofasudden,Rigodashedoutofthecottage,headingtowardsthedark,（4）Alongtheway,Rigohung

downitsheadtosniffaround.Withthedistancefromtheholegettingcloser,thedogapparentlysmelled

somethingfamiliar.

Para2：（l）Rigo在洞外的吠叫引起了Johnson的注意。他抬起头，看见了那条狗，心里一阵激动。（2）

“Rigo,Rigo,我在这里！叫爸爸来救我!”Johnson用尽全力呼喊道。（3）Johnson听到Rigo的脚步

声渐渐消失了。（4）随着时间的流逝，约翰逊浑身发抖，感觉自己快要崩溃了。（5）幸运的是，爸

爸终于赶到了现场。Rig。成功了！（6）在爸爸的帮助下，Johnson一从洞里出来，无法抑制自己的喜

悦和兴奋，他就扑到爸爸的怀里，然后温柔地抚摸着里戈的皮毛，喃喃地说产里戈救了我。”（7）爸

爸拍了拍Rig。的头，轻声说:“你们是彼此的英雄。是你的善良救了你。”

（l）Rigo,sbarkoutsidetheholecalledJohnson,sattention.Helookedupandcaughtsightofthedog,

feelingasurgeofthrillrunthroughhim.（2）4tRigo,Rigo,Iamhere!FetchDadtorescueme!”Johnson

shoutedwithallhismight.（3JohnsonheardthesoundofRigo'sfootstepsgraduallydieaway,（4）Withtime

tickingby,Johnsonwasshiveringallover,feelinghimselfonthevergeofbreakingdown.（5）Fortunately,Dad

reachedthesceneeventually.Rigomadeit!（6）WiththeassistanceofDad,upongettingoutofthehole,

unabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement,JohnsonthrewhimselfintoDad'sarmsandthenstrokedRigo'sfur

tenderly,murmuring,“Rigosavedme”.（7）DadpattedRigo'shead,sayinginasofttone,"You'reeachother's

heroes.Itisyourkindnessthatsavedyou.”

05续写：打破窗户后续

Ihavealreadyforgottenthenameofanoldladywhowasacustomeronmypaper-deliveryroutewhenI

wasatwelve-year-oldboy.YetitseemslikejustyesterdaythatshetaughtmealessoninforgivenessthatIcan

onlyhopetopassontosomeoneelsesomeday.

OnamindlessSaturdayafternoon,afriendandIwerethrowingrocksontotheroofoftheoldlady's

house.Wejustwantedtoobservehowtherockschangedtomissiles（导弹）astheyrolledtotheroofsedge

andshotoutintoheryard.

Ifoundmyselfaperfectlysmoothrockandsentitforaride.Thestonewastoosmooth,however,soit

slippedfrommyhandasIletitgoandheadedstraightforasmallwindowontheoldlady'sbackdoor.Atthe

soundofbrokenglass,wetookofffromtheoldlady'syardfasterthananyofourmissilesflewoffherroof.

Iwastoomuchscared!However,afewdayslater,whenIwassurethatIhadn'tbeendiscovered,Istarted

tofeelguilty.ShestillgreetedmewithasmileeachdaywhenIgaveherthepaper,butIwasnolongerableto

actcomfortableinherpresence.

ImadeupmymindthatIwouldsavemypaperdeliverymoney,andinthreeweeksIhadthetendollars

thatIthoughtwouldcoverthecostofherwindow.

Paral：Iputthemoneyinanenvelopewithaletterinit.

Para2：Thenextday,afterreceivingthepaper,shethankedmeandsaid,441havesomethingforyou.”

范文

Iputthemoneyinanenvelopewithaletterinit.

在信中，我对打碎她的窗户表示诚挚的歉意，并希望十美元可以支付修理费用。在信的最后，我

签了我的名字。由于不知道她对这封信的反应如何，我没有立即前往老太太的家。相反，我一直等到

夜幕降临。我蹑手蹑脚走到她家，小心翼翼地把信放在她家门前，然后离开了。虽然寄出这封信后我

的负罪感减轻了一点，但那天晚上我辗转反侧，不知道她会不会原谅我。

IntheletterIexpressedmysincereapologyforbreakingherwindowandmywishthattendollarscould

coverrepairbill.Andattheendoftheletter,Isignedmyname.Unsureaboutthewaysherespondedtothe

letter,Ididn'tmakemywaytotheoldlady'shouseimmediately.Instead,Iwaiteduntilthedarknessfell.

Havingtiptoedtoherhome,Iputtheletterinfrontofherdoorwithgreatcautionandleft.Thoughmysense

ofguiltwasrelievedalittleaftersendingtheletter,Ikepttossingandturningthatnight,wonderingwhether

shewouldforgivemeornot.

Thenextday,afterreceivingthepaper,shethankedmeandsaid,441havesomethingforyou.”

她把手伸进口袋，拿出一个信封。这是我昨晚留在她家门前的东西!我惊讶极了，呆呆地望着信封，

说不出话来。她看出了我的困惑，就轻轻地拍了拍我的背，回了我一个神秘的微笑。在送报纸的时候，

我撕开了那封信。里面有十美元和一张便条，上面写着:“我很高兴你选择了诚实和正直。态度比金钱

更重要。”感激的泪水充满了我的眼睛，我永远珍惜这10美元，作为我自己的错误和关于宽恕的教训

的提醒。

Shereachedintoherpocketandtookanenvelope.ItwaswhatIleftinfrontofherhouselastnight!So

astonishedwasIthatIgazedattheenvelope,utterlyspeechless.Sensingmyconfusion,shepattedmegentlyon

thebackandrepliedtomewithamysterioussmile.AsIproceededtodelivernewspapers,Itoreopenthe

envelope.Insidewastendollarsandashortnotewhichread'Tmdelightedthatyouchoosehonestyand

integrity.Yourattitudecountsmorethanmoney.,,Tearsofgratitudefillingmyeyes,Iwouldalwaystreasure

the10dollarsasareminderofmymistakeandalessonaboutforgiveness.

06续写：我父亲的儿子

MyFather'sSon

It'shardbeinganastronaut's(宇航员)son.Ioftenwonderhowmyfathereverhadasonlikeme.Imean

he'ssospecialandsogoodateverythinghedoes.ButI'mjustanaverageeleven-year-oldkid.

NowadaysIdreamaboutbeingafamouswriter,butIusedtodreamaboutdoingsomethingbigto

impressmyfatherandmakehimproudofme—somethinglikesavingachildfromaburningbuildingor

drivingarobberawayfromanoldlady.

Iwasdaydreaminginschoolonemorning(whichIdooften).Iwasdaydreamingaboutbeingsomekind

ofherowhenmyfriendEllenremindedmeofmyEnglishteachefsannouncementaboutaFather'sDayessay

contest.

“IhopewehaveawinnerrighthereinmyEnglishclass,"shesaid."Therearethreeprizesforeachof

you.”

WhenIgothome,Ikissedmymomquickly.ThenIwentupstairstomyroomandsatdownwithapen

andapadofpaper.IstartedtothinkaboutwhatIwouldwrite.

HowdidIseemyfather?Hmm.

Isawhimteachingmehowtouseabatandhowtothrowabaseball.

IrememberedhowhehuggedmeforhourswhenmydogSpottywashitandkilledbyacar.

AndIrememberedhowhesatandtriedtoexplaindeathtomewhenGrandpaBobdied.

ThesewerethethingsIwasgoingtowriteaboutmydad.Tome,hewasn'tjustaworld-famous

astronaut.Hewasmydad.

Iwroteaboutallthesememoriesandputtheminmyessay.Ihandeditinthenextdayandwassurprised

tofindoutthatthewinningessayswouldbereadinthehallonThursdaynight.Alltheparentsandstudents

wereinvited.

MyparentsandIwenttoschoolThursdaynight.Oneofourneighborssaid,“Ibetyou'llwinthecontest,

David.Ibetyouwrotewhatit'sliketobethesonofanastronaut,andyou5retheonlyoneintownwhocould

writeaboutthat.”

Paral：Ishruggedandthenthefirstprizewinner—Ellenwasannounced.

Para2：Thesecondprizewinnerwasannouncednext—Itwasme.

看到我的朋友走向舞台，我勉强挤出了一个微笑，感到既沮丧又失望。AUen获得第一名并不奇

怪，因为她的写作能力和对她父亲的生动描绘。文章的内容是她父亲作为一名警察的奉献精神，以及

他逮捕罪犯时的几次危险情况。她刚读完这篇文章，全场观众就站起来鼓掌。我转向父亲，从他的眼

睛里感觉到他对我朋友的钦佩，这是我渴望已久的。要是舞台上的是我就好了！

Seeingmyfriendheadingtowardsthestage,Imanagedasmile,feelingamixtureoffrustrationand

disappointment.ItcamenosurprisethatEllenwonthefirstprize,owingtohercompetenceinwritingand

vividdescriptionofherfather.Nosoonerhadshefinishedreadingheressay,whosecontentwasabouther

fathersdedicationasapoliceandseveralriskysituationsheencounteredwhenarrestingcriminals,thanthe

wholeaudiencestoodupandclapped.Iturnedtomyfatherandsensed