不可思议的同伴Dion(选手)和Gobi(小狗)的旅程讲义高三英语下学期作文复习专项

不可思议的同伴Dion(选手)和Gobi(小狗)的旅程第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Paragraph1:Dionwashavingarunningrace.Thisracewouldstretchinsixstagesoversevendaysandcoveralmost155miles.Gobi,alittleshedoghappenedtojoinhim.Itwastheirthirdday.Paragraph2:Theskywasclear,theweatherwaswarm:thegroundwasfirmbeneathGobi'sfeet.Fromtimetotime,Dionwouldlookoveratherandsmile.Thewarmthofthatsmilewasevenbrighterthanthesunbeatingdownonthem,butinagoodway.ItfilledGobiup.Paragraph3:Astheyprogressed,abroadriverpoppedintotheirsight,lyingrightinfront.Dionhadnoideahowdeepitwas,buttheracemarkersledrightacross,sohehadtoassumehe'dbeabletomakeitacrossaswell.Paragraph4:ccItwassurprisinglycoldconsideringhowwarmthedaywas,andhesankdownuptohiswaist,butthatwasit.Atleasttheriverbedseemedsolid.Hecouldmakehiswayacross;hejusthadtogoslowly.Onewrongstepandhe'dgetpletelywet.Plus,hecouldhurthimselfsincehecouldn'tseewherehewasputtinghisfeet.Thiswasgoingtotakeawhile.Paragraph5:Gobiwatchedasthemanjumpedintothewater.Shewaggedhertail,buthedidn'tlookherway.Hewasclearlybusyconcentrating.Shesatdownjustbeforethewaterandwatched.Surely,hewouldturnaroundandnoticethatshewasn'twithhim.Butseveralminutespassed,andhegotfartherandfartheraway.Finally,Gobicouldn'ttakeitanylonger.Shebegananxiouslyrunningupanddowntheriverbank.Wasthemangoingtoleaveher?Paragraph6:Atthesoundofherbark,Dionstopped.Healwaysmadeapointoffacingforward,alwaysforward,duringarace.Butthistimehedidglanceback.Gobiwassittingattheriver'sedge,barkingfiercely.Therewasnowaythelittledogcouldcrossthatonherown.Thesedays,he'dfedher,givenherwater,andnamedher.Hehadtoadmitthathelikedhavingherwithhim.Sheliftedhisspirits.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Rightnow,listeningtoherbarkingasheleftherbehindnearlybrokehisheart.Paragraph2:ThisbecametougherforDiontocrossthebroadriver.不可思议的同伴：Dion(选手)和Gobi(小狗)的旅程"——续写（24浙南名校好题分享）一、故事大意Paragraph1:DionandGobi'sencounterduringarunningrace(迪昂和戈比在一场长跑比赛中的相遇)Paragraph2:ThebondbetweenDionandGobigrowsstrongerduringtherace(比赛中迪昂和戈比之间的羁绊加深)Paragraph3:Dionfacesachallengewitharivercrossing(迪昂面对过河的挑战)Paragraph4:Dionnavigatesthroughtherivercautiously(迪昂小心翼翼地穿过河流)Paragraph5:Gobiworriesaboutbeingleftbehind(戈比担心被抛下的情绪)Paragraph6:DionacknowledgeshisfondnessforGobiasapanion(迪昂意识到他对戈比作为伙伴的喜爱)二、原文信息支架人物：角色性格协同Dion:ThesentencesdescribingDionintheabovetext1.Dionwashavingarunningrace.2.Thisracewouldstretchinsixstagesoversevendaysandcoveralmost155miles.3.Itwastheirthirdday.4.Fromtimetotime,Dionwouldlookoveratherandsmile.5.Takingadeepbreath,hetookacarefulstepintothewater.6.Atthesoundofherbark,Dionstopped.7.Thesedays,he’dfedher,givenherwater,andnamedher.8.Hehadtoadmitthathelikedhavingherwithhim.综上信息归纳：虽然比赛很累，但相处让Dion不会丢下她。Gobi:ThesentencesdescribingGobiintheabovetext1.Gobi,alittleshedog,happenedtojoinhim.2.ThewarmthofDion’ssmilefilledGobiup.3.Gobiwatchedasthemanjumpedintothewater.4.Shesatdownjustbeforethewaterandwatched.5.Finally,Gobicouldn'ttakeitanylonger.6.Shebegananxiouslyrunningupanddowntheriverbank.7.Therewasnowaythelittledogcouldcrossthatonherown.8.Sheliftedhisspirits.综上信息归纳：Gobi因Dion而开心，因为Dion的离开而焦虑，可自己无法穿越宽阔的河流，所以，故事的后续一定是不离不弃，共同渡河。原文描述性信息支架：预判故事结尾1.Fromtimetotime,Dionwouldlookoveratherandsmile.渡河后，用facetoface，smilinghappily结尾。2.Shebegananxiouslyrunningupanddowntheriverbank.过河后，从小狗的角度收尾，那就是Gobi不再焦虑，开心的在河岸上跑来跑去。原文语言支架：语言协同无灵主语：Thewarmthofthatsmilewasevenbrighterthanthesunbeatingdownonthem,butinagoodway.ItfilledGobiup.非谓语：Takingadeepbreath,hetookacarefulstepintothewater.三联动：Thesedays,he’dfedher,givenherwater,andnamedher.并列句：Onewrongstepandhe’dgetpletelywet.从句：（部分）Plus,hecouldhurthimselfsincehecouldn'tseewherehewasputtinghisfeet.三、段落首句情节预判Rightnow,listeningtoherbarkingasheleftherbehindnearlybrokehisheart.（核心是共情，返回带上小狗）游回岸上（Dion心理+动作；Gobi心理+动作）——带上小狗（她的行动；Dion的语言+动作）——准备就绪继续下河（基于二段首句toughertocrossthebroadriver可得出过渡句是下河准备）ThisbecametougherforDiontocrossthebroadriver.（核心是如何渡河，和过河后的描写）在河中（Dion的动作；小狗Gobi动作）——上岸（Dion的动作，Gobi的动作）——故事收尾（基于原文信息支架）四、微场景训练——Dion带着小狗Gobi在河中游泳的描写_______________________________(抱着忠诚的伙伴戈壁),Dionsteppedintothecoolwater,keepingGobiclosetohim.HisstrongstepsandGobi’ssteadypresencecreatedagracefuldancethroughthegentlecurrents.Everymoveshowcasedtheirbond—therunner’sdeterminedswimming,Gobi’strustingsnuggleagainsthim.Thewatershonearoundthemastheymovedforwardtogether,withGobi_________________(增加了额外的重量)tochallengethem.However,theirunityfueledtheirprogress.______________________(一到达河对面),asenseofacplishmentembracedthem.Therunner,slightlyoutofbreathbutvictorious,emergedfromthewaterwithGobistillinhisarms.____________________(戈壁拖着她的尾巴),hereyesmirroringasharedvictory.参考答案：Holdinghisloyalpanion,Gobi,inhisarms,Dionsteppedintothecoolwater,keepingGobiclosetohim.HisstrongstepsandGobi'ssteadypresencecreatedagracefuldancethroughthegentlecurrents.Everymoveshowcasedtheirbond—therunner’sdeterminedswimming,Gobi’strustingsnuggleagainsthim.Thewatershonearoundthemastheymovedforwardtogether,withGobiaddingalittleextraweighttochallengethem.However,theirunityfueledtheirprogress.Uponreachingtheoppositeside,asenseofacplishmentembracedthem.Therunner,slightlyoutofbreathbutvictorious,emergedfromthewaterwithGobistillinhisarms.Gobiwaggedhertail,hereyesmirroringasharedvictory.下水文：Paragraph1:Rightnow,listeningtoGobi'sdesperatebarkingasheleftherbehindnearlybrokeDion’sheart.TheheartwrenchingbarkingtoreDion’sheartapart,hequicklyturnedback,andsoonmadehiswaybacktotheriver’sedge,whereGobianxiouslyawaitedhisreturn.Asheapproached,Gobi'seyesbrightenedwithhope,hertailwaggingvigorously.Dionscoopedherupintohisarms,showeringherwithaffectionatewords.Withnewfoundstrength,Dionsetofftowardstheriveronceagain,determinedtofindawayforbothofthemtooveretheobstacletogether.Paragraph2:CrossingthebroadriverbecameaneventougherchallengewithGobiinhisarms.Dioncarefullysteppedintothecoldwater,strugglingtomaintainhisbalanceasGobinestledherselfinhisarms,acutelyawareofthedangerthatsurroundedthem.Slowlyandcautiously,Dionnavigatedtheunpredictableriverbed,ensuringeachstepwassolid.Together,theymovedahead,stepbystep.Finally,theyreachedtheoppositebank.Gentlyplacedontheground,GobiboundedaroundDion,wagginghertailincelebration.Helaughedandscoopedherupagain,plantingakissonherfurryhead.官方范文Onepossibleversion:Rightnow,listeningtoherbarkingasheleftherbehindnearlybrokehisheart.“Oh,fine!”Diondeclaredatlast.Turningcarefully,hestartedtomakehiswayback.Thesecondshesawhimturnaround,Gobiwasonherfeet,tailwagging