2024深圳二模应用文写作训练

2024深圳二模应用文写作训练第一步学会审题谋篇写作类型时态人称写作要点1.首段：2．主体：3．结尾：建议信一般现在时为主；第一人称为主表达感谢描述调查结果；提出个人建议及理由。再次表达感谢及对庆祝的期待之情。相关词汇短语1)调查：__________________________2)英语戏剧节：__________________________3)热衷于/喜欢：__________________________4)户外聚会：__________________________5)从……中休息：__________________________6)令人难忘的：__________________________v./n.survey;v.investigate,n.investigationEnglishDramaFestivalbekeenon;beenthusiasticabout;befondof;favour;preferoutdoorgatheringtakeabreakfromunforgettable;memorable第二步写准基本句1．感谢您信任我，让我调查同学们最喜欢的庆祝英语戏剧节的活动。2．根据我的调查，88%的人热衷于周末出游，59%的人喜欢看英语电影，32%的人喜欢美食派对。Thankyoufortrustingmetosurveyourclassmates’preferredactivitiesforcelebratingoursuccessattheEnglishDramaFestival.Accordingtomysurvey,88percentofpeoplearekeenonweekendgetaways,59percentprefertowatchEnglishmovie,and32percentarefondoffoodparties.第二步写准基本句3．我建议我们在城市公园组织一次户外聚会，在那里我们可以带上各种各样的食物和饮料来分享。4．这样的郊游对我们来说是完美的，可以让我们从日常学习中休息一下，加强友谊，让我们的成功更令人难忘。Iwouldrecommend/suggestthatweorganizeanoutdoorgatheringatthecitypark,wherewecanbringalongvariousfoodsanddrinkstoshare.Suchanoutingisperfectforustotakeabreakfromstudyroutines,strengthenfriendshipandmakeoursuccessmorememorable/unforgettable.第二步写准基本句5.再次感谢您的支持和考虑我的建议!期待我们激动人心的庆祝活动!

Thankyouonceagainforyoursupportandforconsideringmysuggestion!Lookingforwardtoourexcitingcelebration!第三步创设新亮点6．使用while及followedby改写句子2。（另一种表达方式：从调查上看，周末出游和英语电影之夜分别被88%和59%的人喜欢，还有32%的人喜欢分享食物和饮料。（被动语态；with复合结构）BasedonthesurveyIconducted,88%ofusareenthusiasticabout

aweekendouting,while59%favouranEnglishmovienight,followedby32%whopreferafoodparty.Fromthesurvey,outingsonweekendsandEnglishmovienightsarefavoredby88%and59%ofusrespectively,with32%keenonsharingfoodanddrinks.第三步创设新亮点7．在句3前加入目的状语“为了满足不同的兴趣”Tomeet/satisfy/catertothevaried/diverseinterests,Iwouldrecommendweorganizeanoutdoorgatheringatthecitypark,wherewecanbringalongvariousfoodsanddrinkstoshare.Mypreferenceisinlinewiththemajority,soIsuggestahikingtripalongthenearbygreenway,whichhaslivelyplantsandstunningviews.另一种建议：我的偏好和大多数人一样，所以我建议沿着附近的绿道徒步旅行，那里有生机勃勃的植物和令人惊叹的景色。第四步衔接成美篇DearJames,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.WearegratefulforyourenthusiasmincelebratingourclasswinningthefirstprizeattheEnglishDramaFestival.Yoursupportmeansalottous!BasedonthesurveyIconducted,88%ofusareenthusiasticaboutaweekendouting,while59%favouranEnglishmovienight,followedby32%whopreferafoodparty.Mypreferenceisinlinewiththemajority,soIsuggestahikingtripalongthenearbygreenway,whichhaslivelyplantsandstunningviews.Suchanoutingisperfectforustotakeabreakfromstudyroutines,strengthenfriendshipandmakeoursuccessmorememorable.Thanksagainforyourthoughtfulgesture.Lookingforwardtoourexcitingcelebration!（122词）第四步衔接成美篇DearJames,Thankyoufortrustingmetosurveyourclassmates’preferredactivitiesforcelebratingoursuccessattheEnglishDramaFestival.Herearetheresultsandmypersonalopinion.Fromthesurvey,outingsonweekendsandEnglishmovienightsarefavoredby88%and59%ofusrespectively,with32%keenonsharingfoodanddrinks.Tomeetthevariedinterests,Iwouldrecommendweorganizeanoutdoorgatheringatthecitypark,wherewecanbringalongvariousfoodsanddrinkstoshare.Ibelieveth