读后续写专题之脱困类学案高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写专题之脱困类（人与自然）遇险脱困使读后续写中非常重要的一类故事，它主要涉及在人与社会主题语境下，出现火灾、洪水、溺水、迷路等紧急情况。从最初遇险的惊慌害怕，绝望无助，到想办法救援，到最后获救的宽慰和感激，涉及到一系列的表达。一、情节构建第一步：描写环境的恶劣和内心的不安、绝望或恐惧的情绪；第二步：转机出现，描线所见+所闻+所感；第三步：脱离险境和个人情绪描写（感恩+高兴）+主旨升华。提示：续写段落情节要充分利用提示句和上文的内容书写，尽量回扣原文；续写内容要巧妙运用副词、形容词来加强场景感，使文章生动、优美。语料输入关于“恐惧”“紧张”情感的精彩描写beseizedwithpanic___________________beseizedbyfear_______________________inpanic______________________________interror______________________________afloodoffearwellsupinsomebody_____________________________________ataloss_______________________________不知所措_______________________感到害怕_______________________害怕地_________________________恐惧地_________________________充满了恐惧____________________________________________________关于烘托恐惧的环境描写astormynight_________________________beburiedinsnow______________________unbearablycold_______________________thenightsettledin_____________________thestormisatitsheight_________________深埋在雪中____________________________暴风雨之夜____________________________夜幕降临______________________________难以忍受的冷__________________________深埋在雪中____________________________关于恐惧的表象描写heartbeatviolently_____________________takeadeepbreath_____________________eassomethingofasurprise______________________________________bechokedbyfear______________________faceturnspale________________________jumptoone’sfeet_____________________struggletoone’sfeet__________________深吸一口气____________________________有点惊讶______________________________因害怕而哽咽__________________________一跃而起______________________________脸色变白______________________________挣扎着站起来__________________________心跳得很厉害__________________________关于如释重负的表达muchtoone’srelief_____________________sighwithrelief_________________________giveagaspofrelief___________________Itwasagreatloadoffmymind.______________________________________________Weallheavedasighofrelief.________________________________________________Agreatsenseofrelieffloodedoverhim.________________________________________Hearingthegoodnews,TomandIsighedingreatrelief,grinningmerrilyateachother.听到这个好消息，汤姆和我如释重负地叹了口气，愉快地咧着嘴笑。关于感激、感恩的表达Toucheddeeply,weexpressedsinceregratitudeandwavedthemgoodbye.______________________________________________________________________________Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.______________________________________________________________________________Ilookedather,tearsofloveandgratitudewellingupinmyeyes.______________________________________________________________________________Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords.______________________________________________________________________________关于结局的描写MybrotherandIharvestedameaningfulexplorationandreallyabrandnewweekend.我和哥哥收获了一次有意义的探索，这真是一个全新的周末。Finally,wewentoutoftheforestthattrappedus.Whatanunforgettableexperience!Itturnsoutthatthere’salwaysawayoutofanydifficultsituationaslongaswestaycalm.最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊。事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法脱离困境。Itwasthisuniqueexperiencethatmademeunderstandwhateverdifficultywearefacedwith,weshouldn’tloseheart.正是这种独特的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不应失去信心。OnlythendidIrealizethatactionscancurefearandbraverycanconquerdifficulties.直到那时，我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧，勇敢可以战胜困难。Thispainfuladventureteachesmenottodespaireveninthedarkesthour.这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望，因为黑夜之后就是黎明。Asuddenwarmthandhappinesshitmelikeagentlebreezewipingmyface.AndIknewitwasthegraceofkindness.一股温暖和快乐突然向我袭来，就如同清风拂面一般。我突然意识到这就是善良的魅力，Neverhadwefallenintosuchadangerousdilemma.Delightedandrelieved,weembracedeachothertightly,withtears