考研英语21写作大作

WritingHelen2024/7/521写作基本语法（1）被动客观表达原则,例：Asisseenfromthepicture,AsisdepictedinthepictureItisvividlydepictedinthepicturethat…Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…Itisbelievedthat…（2）无缩写原则I’dliketo—Iwouldliketocan’t—cannotisn’t—isnot2.1替换词突破2.1.1常用词tothebestofmyknowledge,Ihold…important:imperativeItisimperativethat…(should)…(建议)(3)show:unfoldItisunfoldedthat…(寓意)2.1.2例举

…,suchas…2024/7/5Writing32短文写作词句选择2短文写作词句选择2.2写作功能句型2.2.1描述图画（1）个体群体化原则1两幅图片Some,like+图中人物

inthepicture,dosth,whileothers,like+图中人物inthedrawing,dosth.一幅图片2024/7/5Writing42短文写作词句选择2.2写作功能句型2.2.1描述图画（1）个体群体化原则2写作公式Thosewho…dosth.Thosewho

triedeverymeanstoavoidtheirdutyoflookingaftertheireldersshouldbearinmind

thattheyaremuchindebtedtotheirparentsfortheirbirthandgrowth.2024/7/5Writing52.2写作功能句型2.2.1描述图画（2）双重否定原则写作公式Thispicturerevealsanot-uncommon

phenomenonof+n./that+从句…2005Thispicturerevealsanot-uncommonphenomenonofhoweldersaretreated

bytheirgrown-upchildreninsomeofthefamiliesinChina.2024/7/5Writing2短文写作词句选择2.2写作功能句型2.2.1描述图画（3）强调原则写作公式

It

is…thatmakesitadj.to

dosth..2002

Itis

lovethatmakesitpossibletoovercomealldifficulties.2008

Itis

teamworkthatmakesitpossibleforthemtogoanywheretheywantto.2024/7/5Writing2短文写作词句选择2.2写作功能句型2.2.1描述图画（4）广泛化原则1写作公式

Ithasbeenuniversallyacknowledgedthat…thatanyonewhowantsto…shouldpossess.众所周知，…….是想要做……的人必须具备的。2008

Ithasbeenuniversallyacknowledgedthat

theabilityofteamworkisthemostessentialqualificationthatanyonewhowantstoachievesuccessshouldpossess.2024/7/5Writing82短文写作词句选择2.2写作功能句型2.2.1描述图画（5）广泛化原则2写作公式写作公式Of

allthechangesthathavetakenplacein…during…,perhapsthemostfar-reachinghasbeentheinexorabledecline/sharpincreasein….Of

allthe…，….isthemost/thebest.2009Of

allthechangesthathavetakenplaceinthecommunicationmeans

duringthepasthalfacentury,perhapsthemostfar-reachinghasbeentheinexorabledeclineinface-to-faceintercourse.2024/7/5Writing92短文写作词句选择（2）广泛化原则2010Of

allthechangesthathavetakenplaceininternationalculture

duringthepasthalfacentury,perhapsthemostfar-reachinghasbeenthesharpincreaseincultureblending.2024/7/5102008OfallthechangesthathavetakenplaceinEnglish-languagenewspapers

duringthepastquarter-century,perhapsthemostfar-reachinghasbeentheinexorabledeclineinthescopeandseriousnessoftheirartscoverage.2.2写作功能句型2.2.2阐述寓意（1）动词名词化原则1写作公式

Therealimplication/meaning/indication

oftheauthor/picture(s)isthat…2003

Therealimplication

oftheauthoristhateveryonehastomeetdifficultiesintheirlifeexperience,sowehavetomakeadequatepreparationsforthem.2024/7/5Writing122短文写作词句选择Theauthorimpliesthat….2.2写作功能句型2.2.2阐述寓意（1）动词名词化原则2写作公式公式Itisbeyondimaginationthat…2003Wecan’timagineasocietyfullofadultshavingtheabilitylikeseven-year-oldchildren.

Itisbeyondimaginationthat

asocietyisfullofadults….2024/7/5Writing132短文写作词句选择3短文写作思路形成3.1有图作文思路形成三段安排等边六边形结构——三段论2024/7/5Writing14首段3-4句中间段5-6句尾段3-4句3.1图画描述段三至四句(50-55词)：第一句对画面简单概括且配有同位成分；第二三句描述画面内容（两幅图每幅图一句，一幅图找两个因素各一句）；第四句将图画下方中文翻译为英语（如果有）Thisisaninterestingandthought-provokingpicturewhichdepicts/describes…Thepictureshocksusbeyonddescriptioninthatitdepicts/describes…2024/7/5Writing153短文写作思路形成3.2寓意说明段+原因分析段（1）五至六句(80-90词)：第一句说明寓意(承上启下)；第二句说明原因如下；第三四句一个原因及扩展；第五六句一个原因及扩展。具体化——切忌以理说理。（2）常见原因——法律法规不完善、教育体制不健全、个人意识较薄弱(选一，原创一)2024/7/5Writing163短文写作思路形成常见原因Thelackofseriouspunishmentaccordingtothelawsandregulationsisthecorereasonof…,whichprovidesthechancesforpeopletodothemisdeeds/wrongdoings.People’sawarenessisnotthatstrongin…,whichisdecisivetothephenomenon.Thedistorted/insufficient/inadequateeducationmayleadtothepervasivenessof…2024/7/5Writing173.2寓意说明段+原因分析段（1）五至六句(80-90词)：第一句说明寓意(承上启下)；第二句说明原因如下；第三四句一个原因及扩展；第五六句一个原因及扩展。具体化——切忌以理说理。（2）常见原因——法律法规不完善、教育体制不健全、个人意识较薄弱(选一，原创一)（3）扩展方式——举例论证、数据论证、借用常识、引用权威、结果推导2024/7/5Writing183短文写作思路形成（1）举例论证Forexample,forinstance,take…forexample,…providesanillustration.（2）数据论证Asisshowninthestatisticsofarecentsurveylaunchedbyanon-profitinstitution,theincrease/declineof…issoprominentthattheresultscausedbyitmaybeconcludedasfollows.Thenationalstatisticson…indicate…原因扩展方式(3)借用常识Asisknowntoeveryone,….Itisofeveryone’scommonsensethat….(4)引用权威Asaninfluentialpersonputsit,“…”.…(原因),whichechoesafamousperson’sremark,“…”.(5)结果推导Hence,theresultscausedbyitmaybeconcludedasfollows.原因扩展方式3.2寓意说明+原因分析段原因分析常用过渡句：Thefollowingreasonsmayberesponsibleforthemeaningdeducedabove.Therearetwomainreasonsaccountingforthesymbolicmeaning.Themainreasonforthephenomenonisthat….Anothermajorreasonisthat…Itismainlybecause….Itispartlydecidedbythefactthat…2024/7/5Writing213.3寓意说明+举例说明举例说明常用过渡句：

Abundantofexampleswoulddemonstratethephenomenon,whilethefollowingone,Isuppose,wouldsuffice.Hereisanexample.Take…foranexample/instance.

…providesuswithagreatexample.2024/7/5Writing223.4建议措施段三至四句(50-55词)：第一句过渡词(accordingly,asismentionedabove插入)引出重复论点；第二句改善建议(消极意义)或提升方式(积极意义)；第三句表明期待结果。改善建议常用表达方式：Itishightimethat…(did)…Itisimperativefor…that…(should)…(3)提升方式常用表达方式：Asenhancingthesenseof

…,wewouldbenefitmorefrom…

2024/7/5Writing232.5建议措施段(4)表明期待结果常用表达方式：Onlyinthisway/bydoingthiscanweboth…andembraceabrightertomorrow.2024/7/5Writing242006年范文Asisvividlydepictedinthephotosabove,amanwritesBeckham’snameonhisface,andtheotherspends300YuanmakingaBeckham’shairstyle.Undoubtedly,thephotoshavesubtlyreflectedthesocialphenomenonthatidolworshipisprevalentamongtheyouthnowadays.Beckhamrepresentstheimageofsportherowhosehandsomeappearanceandunparalleledfootballskillsarepassionatelyadoredbyallthesportsfans.Likewise,severalteenagegirlswontheirfameovernightinThe2005SuperGirlContestinChina,whichprovokednationwidenoisydebatesonthevalueandharmofadmiringtheseidols.Generallyspeaking,youngpeopleareinclinedtoadorethepeoplewhoexcelinappearance,intelligenceortalent.

Inmyopinion,idolworship,thethought-provokingsocialphenomenon,isadouble-edgedswordwhichcandeeplyinfluencethegrowthofyoungpeople.Ifwesimplyworshiptheidolsbyimitatingtheirhairstylesorpursuingfashionsunreasonably,theobsessionwillcertainlywasteusagreatdealofmoneyortime,endangeringtheefficiencyofourwork.Onthecontrary,wewillleadapositiveandfruitfullifeifweendeavortoimproveourselvesbybridgingthegapbetweenourmodelsandus.Therefore,thelatterattitudeshouldbeadoptedtodirectourwayoflife.

Asisdepictedinthepicture,acar,withabeerbottleonit,issteeringbyadrunkdriver