读后续写-阳光下重生讲义-2024届高三英语下学期作文复习专项

读后续写：阳光下重生续写原文及解析续写原文（温州三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Haveyoueverbeensodepressedthatyoucan'tsleep?Youalsocan'teat.Youcan'tread.YouhavenofriendstocallupandnothingisgoodonTV.Soyousigh,pressyourfacedownharderintoyourpillow,andshedafewtears.Thiswasmylifetwoyearsago.Ihadjustturned14butalreadyfoundlifeastruggle.AsIlayinmybedoneSaturday,Mompeeked(瞄)intomyroomtomakeherregular"IsEmilystillalive"check.IknewthatifIspentmoretimelikethis,shewouldbegindustingme.AftersuggestingafewthingsformetodothatIimmediatelyrejected,Mommadehermove,“Emily!Getdressed!I'mtakingthedogoutforawalk,andyou'recomingwithme!""Why?"Iprotested."Becauseit'llmakeyoufeelbetter.”Thethoughtofmovingwasunbearable.Ifeltasifallofmybodypartswereweigheddownbytonsofbricks.Icouldn'trememberthelasttimeIhadgoneoutside.SomehowIfoundthestrengthtosliponapairofjeansandablacksweatshirt.Momwaswaitingatthedoor,leashinhandanddogatherside.Then,westeppedoutside.ItwasawarmMarchdayandithadbeenalongtimesincethewarmthofthesunhadtouchedmycheeks.Momledthedogandmedownsomedirtpaths,throughabigfieldandreachedHalseyPond.Butthesignsofspringhadyettoappearandthescenewasrathercolorlessthroughouttheentirejourney.“I'mtired!It'sboring,Mom!Whencanwegohome?""Notyet,"she'dsay.Momstoppedtosayhitoeveryjogger,dogwalker,runner,andbicyclistwhopassedus.Sometimesshewouldgetintoaconversation.Theywouldtalkaboutweather,dogs,andallsmalltalktopics.Sheseemedhappy,andwasliterallyglowing(容光焕发).Afterwalkingforwhatseemedanage,Momfinallysaiditwastimetogoback.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.原文解析Haveyoueverbeensodepressedthatyoucan’tsleep?Youalsocan’teat.Youcan’tread.YouhavenofriendstocallupandnothingisgoodonTV.Soyousigh,pressyourfacedownharderintoyourpillow,andshedafewtears.**主要矛盾：心情emo到失去生机，在床上网抑云。Thiswasmylifetwoyearsago.Ihadjustturned14butalreadyfoundlifeastruggle.AsIlayinmybedoneSaturday,Mompeeked(瞄)intomyroomtomakeherregular“IsEmilystillalive”check.IknewthatifIspentmoretimelikethis,shewouldbegindustingme.AftersuggestingafewthingsformetodothatIimmediatelyrejected,Mommadehermove,“Emily!Getdressed!I’mtakingthedogoutforawalk,andyou’recomingwithme!”“Why?”Iprotested.“Becauseit’llmakeyoufeelbetter.”**背景补充：14岁的学生，已然对生活失去兴趣。主要矛盾解决方法：妈妈带我出门遛狗可协同点：续写段落我有所好转之后，妈妈不再是“IsEmilystillalive”check，而可以安心地专注于自己的事情，同时也为我的好转而欣喜。Thethoughtofmovingwasunbearable.Ifeltasifallofmybodypartswereweigheddownbytonsofbricks.Icouldn’trememberthelasttimeIhadgoneoutside.SomehowIfoundthestrengthtosliponapairofjeansandablacksweatshirt.Momwaswaitingatthedoor,leash(狗绳)inhandanddogatherside.**可协同点：后文要写到我主动出去遛狗，可以复现此处leashinhand,dogatherside的动作。Then,westeppedoutside.ItwasawarmMarchdayandithadbeenalongtimesincethewarmthofthesunhadtouchedmycheeks.Momledthedogandmedownsomedirtpaths,throughabigfieldandreachedHalseyPond.Butthesignsofspringhadyettoappearandthescenewasrathercolorlessthroughouttheentirejourney.**欲扬先抑：环境暂未摆脱冬天的阴翳，与后文温暖的人与人的互动形成对比。“I’mtired!It’sboring,Mom!Whencanwegohome?”“Notyet,”she’dsay.Momstoppedtosayhitoeveryjogger,dogwalker,runner,andbicyclistwhopassedus.Sometimesshewouldgetintoaconversation.Theywouldtalkaboutweather,dogs,andallsmalltalktopics.Sheseemedhappy,andwasliterallyglowing(容光焕发).Afterwalkingforwhatseemedlikeanage,Momfinallysaiditwastimetogoback.**可协同点：后文可复现此处与人交流、smalltalk的场景。注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.情节1:

具体如何有所好转。情节2:Weekday在学校的生活（与第二段段首句AnewSaturday做好时间上的衔接与过渡。）

Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.情节3:

妈妈的回应情节4:

遛狗的经历+感悟总结参考范文WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.Themonotonyofmypreviousdayswasinterruptedbythesimpleactofwalking.Thefreshairandthegentleexercisehadstirredsomethingwithinme.Ifeltaslightshiftinmymood.Theworldoutside,whichIhadforgotteninmyisolation,hadremindedmethattherewasmoretolifethanthefourwallsofmyroom.Irealizedthatmymom'sinsistenceonthewalkwasnotjustaboutphysicalactivity,butawaytoreconnectwiththeworldaroundme.AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.Thistime,itwasmyidea.Iwaseagertostepoutintothesunlightagain,tofeelthewarmthonmyskinandthebreezeinmyhair.AsIwalked,IbegantonoticethesubtlechangesinnaturethatIhadmissedbefore.Budswereformingontrees,andtheoncebarrengroundwasstartingtoshowsignsofnewlife.Thewalkwasn'tjustaphysicaljourney.Witheachstep,Ifeltalittlemorealive,alittlelesstrappedbymyownthoughts.Thedog'sjoyfulpresencealsoaddedtotheexperience.参考范文：ChatGPT版本WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.AsIsatonmybed,reflectingonthewalkwithmymomandthedog,Irealizedthatsomethinghadshiftedinsideme.Theheavinessthathadengulfedmybodyseemedtohavelightened,replacedbyafaintglimmerofhope.Forthefirsttimeinalongwhile,Ifeltasmallsparkofcuriosityabouttheworldoutsidemybedroom.Inspiredbymymom'sinfectioushappiness,Idecidedtoventureoutonmyown.Istartedbyopeningthecurtainsandallowingthesunlighttofloodmyroom.Itfeltlikeasmallvictory,asteptowardsembracinglifeagain.IpickedupabookthatIhadabandonedmonthsagoandbegantoread.Thewordsonthepages,oncemeaninglessanddull,nowtransportedmetodifferentworlds,ignitingmyimagination.AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.Surprisedbymyrequest,sheagreed,asmilespreadingacrossherface.Withtheleashinmyhandandthedogexcitedlytrottingbesideme,Iembarkedonasoloadventure.Westrolledthroughthefamiliarpaths,butthistime,Inoticedthesubtlechanges.Springhadarrived,andvibrantcolorsburstforthfromthepreviouslycolorlesslandscape.Thecherryblossomsbloomed,sprinklingdelicatepetalsontheground,andthesoftbreezecarriedthesweetscentofflowers.AsIcontinuedwalking,Igreetedthejoggers,dogwalkers,runners,andcyclistsjustasmymomhaddonebefore.Engaginginbriefconversations,Idiscoveredthattheseencounters,howeverfleeting,couldbrightensomeone'sdayandcreateconnections.Thesimpleactofsayinghelloandsharingafewwordsbroughtasenseofwarmthandbelonging.BythetimeIreturnedhome,myspiritswerelifted,andanewfoundsenseofpurposecoursedthroughmyveins.Theworldoutsidewasnolongerdaunting;itheldendlesspossibilitiesandexperienceswaitingtobediscovered.Irealizedthateventhesmalleststepstowardsengagementandconnectioncouldhaveaprofoundimpactonmywell-being.Thatdaymarkedthebeginningofmyjourneytowardshealingandself-discovery.当我回到家时，一种新的感觉似乎被唤醒了。当我坐在床上，回想着与妈妈和狗狗一起散步的情景时，我意识到我的内心发生了变化。笼罩着我身体的沉重似乎减轻了，取而代之的是一丝微弱的希望。很长一段时间以来，我第一次对卧室外的世界产生了一丝好奇。受到妈妈那种富有感染力的快乐的鼓舞，我决定自己去冒险。我拉开窗帘，让阳光照进房间。这感觉就像一个小小的胜利，朝着再次拥抱生活迈出了一步。我拿起一本我几个月前丢弃的书，开始读起来。书页上的文字，曾经毫无意义，枯燥乏味，现在却把我带到了不同的世界，点燃了我的想象力。一个新的星期六，我问妈妈我能不能带狗出去。她被我的请求吓了一跳，同意了，脸上绽开了笑容。我手里拿着皮带，狗在我身边兴奋地小跑着，我开始了自己的冒险之旅。我们在熟悉的小路上漫步，但这一次，我注意到了细微的变化。春天来了，生机勃勃的色彩从先前毫无生气的景色中迸发出来。樱花开了，娇嫩的花瓣洒在地上，柔和的微风带着花香。我一边继续走，一边向慢跑者、遛狗者、跑步者和骑自行车的人打招呼，就像我妈妈以前做的那样。通过简短的交谈，我发现这些相遇，无论多么短暂，都可以照亮一个人的一天，并建立联系。简单的打招呼和分享几句话就能带来温暖和归属感。当我回到家时，我的精神振奋起来，一种新的使命感在我的血管里流淌。外面的世界不再令人生畏;它有无限的可能性和经验等待被发现。我意识到，即使是朝着参与和联系迈出的最小的一步，也会对我的幸福产生深远的影响。那一天标志着我疗伤和自我发现之旅的开始。参考范文：简单版WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.Inolongerfeltthecrushingweightofdespair,andtherewasastrangelightnesstomysteps.Atdinner,Ievenmanage