读后续写 高山救援：赖利的归家之路 讲义 高三下学期打靶卷英语试题

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。OnApril8,MikeKrugman,74,hadlethisdogRileyoutforapredinnerwalkonhis36-acreproperty.Krugmangotitskibble(狗粮)ready,waitingforit.SometimesRileylikedtogodowntothebarnandbarkedatthehorses.WhenKrugmanwenttothebarnandcouldn’tfindthedog,hebecameconcernedanddecidedtotakearidearoundthepropertyonhisATV.Thefive-footfencethatsurroundshispropertywasburiedinsnow,leavingKrugmantowonderwhetherRileyclimbedonthesnowandwalkedoverthetopofthefence.TherewasanotherpossibilityKrugmanwasworriedabout.KrugmanthoughtthatmaybeRileyhadgonelookingforRose,hiswife,whohaddiedofaheartconditioninJanuary.SheandRiley,whowouldsleeponherpilloweverynight,wereextremelyclose.“ThenwhenRosepassedaway,ithidbehindthebedforseveraldays,”Krugmansaid.“Youcouldtellitreallymissedher.”AfterRileywentmissing,Krugmanbegantolookforit.HetriedtofindRiley’stracksinthesnowbutfailed.ZachHackett,onMay14,wasup12,000feethikingonamountaininColoradowhenhethoughtheheardafaintyipfromadog.Ashewalkedthroughaclearing,hesawit:ablackandwhiteShetlandsheepdog,visiblyshiveringbehindsomefallenpinetrees.“Heybuddy,”hecalledout,thenwhistled,“Comehere!Doyouwantatreat?”Thedogletoutapitifulgroanwithpain,gettingstuckundertangled(乱糟糟的)branches.Hewasalittlestartled,becausedogsshouldn’thavebeenuptheresohigh.Hackettrealizedthedogwastooweaktomove.Itwasfreezingcold.Thedoglookedlikeitwasneardeath.Hackettbelievedwhathe’dheardwasthedog’slastcryforhelp,andthatifhehadn’tcomealongthedogwouldhavediedthere.Hetriedtocall911forhelpbuttherewasnosignal.Heknewhewasgoingtohavetocarryhimdownthemountain.注意：1.

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请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Hetookactionimmediately.____________________________________________________________________Hackettdialedthetelephonenumberonthetagaroundthedog’sneck.____________________________________________________________文章梗概：这篇文章讲述了迈克·克鲁格曼的狗赖利在散步时失踪，经过一个月的寻找，最终被科罗拉多州的登山者扎克·哈克特在12000英尺的高山上发现。赖利当时被困在树枝下，身体极度虚弱。哈克特没有犹豫，决定将赖利带下山，并成功通过狗牌上的电话号码联系到了克鲁格曼，告知他赖利还活着，并将安全地将它带回家。这是一个关于意外救援、人与动物之间深厚情感以及不放弃希望的温馨故事。伏笔以及在续写中的回应：第一段：伏笔设置-哈克特的救援行动伏笔：赖利的失踪

-描述克鲁格曼对赖利失踪的担忧，以及他对妻子的怀念，暗示赖利可能因思念而离开。伏笔：高山上的意外发现

-哈克特在高山上意外发现赖利，这个地点与赖利平时的活动范围不符，为故事增加了神秘性。伏笔：赖利的虚弱状态

-赖利被发现时身体极度虚弱，这为哈克特的救援行动设置了紧迫性。伏笔：哈克特的决断

-哈克特决定救助赖利并带它下山，这个行动展示了他的善良和责任感。伏笔：电话联系的尝试

-哈克特尝试联系克鲁格曼，这个行动是故事中一个关键的转折点。第二段：回应伏笔-与克鲁格曼的联系及后续回应：电话接通

-哈克特成功与克鲁格曼取得联系，回应了之前尝试联系的伏笔。回应：情感的释放

-克鲁格曼对赖利被找到的消息感到极大的安慰和感激，回应了他对妻子和狗的深情。回应：救援行动的确认

-哈克特向克鲁格曼确认了他的救援行动，展现了他的承诺和决心。回应：赖利的归途

-描述哈克特带着赖利下山的过程，回应了赖利的虚弱状态和救援的紧迫性。回应：团圆的希望

-强调赖利即将与克鲁格曼团圆的希望，回应了故事开始时的失踪和担忧。续写要点：第一段：哈克特的救援行动紧急评估

-哈克特迅速评估了赖利的状况，确定它需要立即救助。安抚与保护

-他用温和的声音安抚赖利，并用外套为它保暖，以减轻它的颤抖。解救行动

-哈克特小心翼翼地将赖利从树枝中解救出来，并用背包制作了一个简易的担架。艰难下山

-描述哈克特如何克服高山上的艰难地形，一步步将赖利安全地带往山下。心灵连接

-强调在这一过程中，哈克特与赖利之间建立起的特殊联系。第二段：与克鲁格曼的联系及后续电话联系

-哈克特拨打狗牌上的电话号码，与焦急等待的克鲁格曼取得联系。情感交流

-描述克鲁格曼听到赖利被找到的消息时的情感爆发，以及他对哈克特的感激之情。承诺与责任

-哈克特向克鲁格曼承诺将安全地将赖利带回家，展现了他的责任感。归途与希望

-描述哈克特带着赖利下山的途中，心中充满了希望和期待。团圆的期待

-强调这次救援不仅仅是救助了一只狗，更是为一个家庭带来了重聚的可能。【Onepossibleversion】Hetookactionimmediately.

Carefullyliftingthedogintohisarms,Hackettfeltitsbonesthroughitsthinfur.Thedogwhinedsoftly,butdidn'tresist.Hackettbeganthearduousjourneydownthemountain.Everystepwasdeliberate,mindfuloftherockygroundandthedog’sfragilestate.Hespokesoothinglytothedog,hopinghisvoicewouldprovidesomecomfort.Hourslater,theyfinallyarrivedatananimalhospitalwhereRileyreceivedimmediatetreatment.Hackettstayedbyitssideandnoticedatagpeekingoutofthefur.Hackettdialedthetelephonenumberonthetagaroundthedog’sneck.

Awearyvoiceanswered.Onthephone,HacketttoldthemanhefoundaShetlandsheepdogindistressupinthemountains.Thetagofthedoghadthetelephonenumberonit.ThemanontheotherendgaspedinamazementandaskedforHackett’slocation.ThenitwasnotlongbeforeMikeKrugman,overwhelmedwithgratitude,wasreunitedwithRiley.

“Mr.Hackett,you’vebroughtbackapartofourfamily.”Krugman’svoicechoked.Rileybarkedhappily,hiseyesbrightoncemore,readytoreturnhomeandcontinuehiswalksaroundtheproperty,thistimeunderKrugman’swatchfuleye.

下水文1Hetookactionimmediately.Carefully,Hackettapproachedthedog,speakingsoftlytokeepitcalm.Heremovedhisjacketandwrappedtheshiveringcreature,tryingtosharehiswarmth.Withgreatcare,hedisentangledthedogfromthebranches,takingextracautionnottocausefurtherdistress.Hethengentlyliftedthedog,feelingitsfrailbodyagainsthischest.Thejourneydownthemountainwastreacherous,butHackettwasdetermined.Hefoundasteadyrhythm,stepbystep,makinghiswaythroughthedifficultterrain,allthewhilereassuringthedogthathelpwasontheway.Hackettdialedthetelephonenumberonthetagaroundthedog’sneck.ItwasMikeKrugman,whohadbeensearchingforRileyforoveramonth."I'vefoundyourdog,"Hackettsaid,hisvoicefilledwithrelief."He'salivebutweak.I'mbringinghimdownfromthemountainnow."Theconnectioncrackledwithstatic,butthejoyandgratitudeinKrugman'svoicewereunmistakable.Astheyexchangedinformation,HackettpromisedtogetRileytosafety.Witheachstepclosertothebase,thebondbetweenmananddoggrewstronger,atestamenttotheresilienceoflifeandthekindnessofstrangers.下水文2Hetookactionimmediately.Withthedog'swell-beingattheforefrontofhismind,Hackettswiftlyassessedthesituation.Heknewthateveryminutecountedinsuchharshconditions.Removinghisbackpack,hefashionedamakeshiftslingtosecurethedog,ensuringitwouldbeascomfortableaspossibleonthedescent.Hespokesoothingwords,tryingtoinstillasenseofcalminthefrightenedanimal.Ashebeganhiscarefultrekdownthemountain,Hackett'sthoughtswereoccupiedwiththe